+Notable Author: [rageking] Stories~collected

[rageking]

Stories in this collection:

Tales of the Muscle Kingdom

Kerri Strug: World's Strongest Gymnast




here i will post the story about a muscular female paladin on a quest to save Muscle Kingdom.

Main Heroine- Alundra Lightsteel. 5'6 150lbs Long black hair grey eyes, ripped and muscular frame.

any requests as to what you want to see in it

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[Jeremy Lightning]

I'd love to see things concerning her toughness, if a huge warrior or orc hits her in the face, can she shake it off and then hit him, causing much more damage on him than he did on her. I'd also love to see her outperforming much bigger, more experienced males in any and all contests that involve physical attributes like strength, speed, agility, stamina and smarts as well. No matter what, I like the idea of a female warrior being the best of all the ranks of army, so I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this. k+!

[jmtocali]

What if the nemesis is another powerful muscled evil woman?

[taktak]

A sorceress or evil crone who lusts for power and uses her Magic and/or ancient mythical artifacts to transform herself into an Evil Amazonian Goddess?

[Jeremy Lightning]

That's not a bad end game strategy, it'd be like Red Sonja or Conan the Destroyer, they have some baddies to fight through before getting to the main evil villain or villainess, I'd definitely like to see one of the main henchmen be some sort of huge ogre or orc, something that's huge, has huge muscles and is as strong as he looks, but she still manages to overcome him.

[rageking]

great suggestions so far. a sorceress is a nice idea, she could be like a evil and buffed up version of the sorceress of greyskull from he-man. and a female nemesis as strong and muscular as the heroine sounds awesome. a huge ogre wou;d be the perfecr bodyguard for the evil sorceress

potential villianesses

Maloria Ironabs - evil knightess and superstron rival of Alundra Lightsteel

Ankara Magequads evil muscle sorceress

Imperia Conquest- evil muscle empress

[rageking]

Is the hero especially buff or is it commonplace for women to be very strong?  Will there be muscle growth or "leveling up"?

I like your ideas, please go on!

she starts out a little buff and gains more muscle as the story progresses. there will be lots of muscle growth

in the first chapter we will meet Alundra in the process of completing her training at the paladin academy. various tests of strength and endurance wrestling and muscle growth action and comedy.

[rageking]

I am, totally. Looking forward to seeing Alundra kick some butt! k+ in advance!

shes going to kick lots of butts  [and maybe get her butt kicked a few times]

[MaxMuscle]

i'm really excited about this idea as well!  i've always wanted to see and read a fantasy story about a muscled up female warrior fight others, but be able to be funny at the same time.

@ max muscle, glad to hear you are excited about this project, it is y first attempt at a story like this. i posted a few fbb wrestling stories already, but i wanted to try my hand at something of this magnitude. i'm working on ideas for it right now. add suggestions as to what you want to see in it our are welcome.

[El_Roy_1999]

Will there be a sidekick, female or male?

there will be both a male and female sidekick, haven't decided on their names or backstories yet

[taktak]

The tiny male comedic relief who's only impressive quality is his inhuman member and the adoring female sidekick who dreams of becoming just like her mentor but always fails to measure up. Maybe our hero here actual tries to get ride of her 'sidekicks' on several occasions but always finds herself having to rescue them.

I wonder if she might have had a 'hero' of her own during her younger days? Maybe a dashing older knight or paladin that she dreamed impressing with her battle prowess?

[MaxMuscle]

@ rageking:   of course!  have you thought about how the story will procede and what kind of a world this will be?  i have some experience writing FMG stories, and some good questions to start writing the story and to build the world are to ask some basic questions:

are both males and females are both vastly more muscular than normal? or only the females?  if so what is the relationship like?

how and why are they built like that and why would an evil sorceress or empress want to take it over?

what training techniques do they use to get huge, and is there such a thing as too much or too big?

Just wanted to throw some ideas like that.  Also i do like taktak's idea of having one or two smaller sidekicks, rogues perhaps, to add to the comic relief. 

[MaxMuscle]

Good points, MaxMuscle, btw, where can I find your stories?

I am GrandMasterLucilious on *****.  you'll find my stories there!

[El_Roy_1999]

By the way: will there be typical fantasy creatures?  Elves, dwarves, orcs and goblins, dragons and trolls?

yes there certainly will be

[rageking]

Tales of the Muscle Kingdom
by rageking

Chapter 1 Training Day

Part 1

   "Alundra Lightsteel, please step into the training ring."

   "Yes, Sir," The young muscular female paladin said as she stepped over the circle of rocks that formed the training ring. She approached the center of the circle and glared at her foe, her training partner, Elgar. Alundra wiped the sweat from her brow and wiped it on her low cut tunic. She crouched down and held out her hands.

   Elgar pulled off his tunic and tossed it to the outside of the circle, he raised his arms at his side, flexing his pecs and biceps. "If you want to become a full pledged paladin, you have to defeat me. Either that, or wait another whole year." He cast her a cocky smile and patted his muscular stomach.

   Alundra scowled at her foe, she grinned and turned her back to Elgar, flexing her biceps. "Why should I lose to you, when today I become a paladin." She spun around and sucked in her breath, showing off her chiseled abs. A grin spread across her face as Elgar took a step back.

   "Not bad, are those muscles just for show." Elgar walked up to Alundra, his chin brushed the top of her head. "Short stuff."

   Alundra shook her head, she was used to the jabs about her height, standing only five foot six, while most of the other paladins passed the six foot mark. She brushed a long strand of brown hair from over her eyes. "I'll guess you'll have to find out, if you're ready, big guy."

   "Begin." The paladin referee shouted and stepped out of the circle.

   Elgar lunged.

   Alundra sidestepped the oncoming paladin, she slammed her left elbow into the small of his back. Elgar grunted and spun around, he reached out his hands, lunging at his shorter foe. Alundra leaped forward and slammed her right arm across Elgar's chest, knocking her opponent onto his back. She stood over Elgar, leaning over his face. "Are you going to take a nap."

    "Not a chance." Elgar clutched Alundra's ankles and wrestled her to the hard dirt. He was straddling her, knees on either side of her waist, her grabbed her wrists and pinned them to her side. "If you lose, you have to kiss me."

   Alundra yanked her arms free, and landed a vicious right hook to Elgar's chin. She shoved him onto his back. Before he could react, Alundra was sitting on his chest, she leaned in and whispered in his ear. "Fair enough, but what if I win?"

   "Whatever you want." Elgar grinned and sat up, knocking Alundra onto her side. He rolled Alundra onto her stomach, wrenching her arms behind her back.

   Alundra forced her arms free with a grunt and slid out from beneath Elgar's bulky frame. She jumped to her feet, and bashed Elgar in his chin with a left jab. She stepped back and shoved the bare heel of her right foot into Elgar's barrel chest. "I can see you're not going to make this easy."

   Elgar rolled to his knees and slammed a fist into Alundra's midsection, Alundra doubled over clutching her abs. Rising to his feet, Elgar's right hand gripped her by the throat, he lifted her off her feet, and placed his left hand on her back. Elgar smiled as he slammed Alundra down onto her shoulders and back.

   Alundra grunted as she slammed down onto the ground, a wave of pain surged through her body. She would have to move quicker if she wanted to win, she crawled on her hands and knees towards the edge of the stone circle. Looking over her shoulder, she saw Elgar step back, surveying his handiwork. Alundra pushed herself to her feet, her knees trembling as she approached Elgar. "You haven't won, yet."

   Elgar folded his arms across his chest and grinned. "I will, and then you'll have to kiss me. This is the most fun I've had in a long time." He stepped forward and grabbed Alundra's hair and yanked her to her feet.

   Alundra raised her knee into Elgar's groin. He staggered back with a grunt. He dropped to his knees, glaring at Alundra. Alundra stepped behind her foe, wrapping her rock hard arms around his throat. Elgar flailed his arms, gasping for air as he struggled to squirm free of her python like grip. "Am I embarrassing you." She tightened her grip, smiling as Elgar's arms drooped at his side.

   "You...win, I...give...up." Elgar struggled to get the words out.

   Alundra released the hold and shoved Elgar onto his face. The paladin referee stepped into the ring and raised her left arm over her head. Alundra rested her right hand on her hip and cast the onlooking paladin rookies a cocky smile. She crouched down by Elgar's head. "We should do this again sometime, I had fun." She leaned down and kissed Elgar on his cheek.

   "The winner, and newest paladin, Alundra Lightsteel. Good job, young lady." The referee patted Alundra on the back and walked towards a long platform setting against the west wall of the training grounds.

   Alundra chased after the referee and climbed onto the platform, she faced the crowd and took a low long bow. The referee picked up a gold medallion sitting on the podium and placed it around Alundra's neck. She waved to the other paladins, they stomped their feet and clapped for the muscular paladin beauty. "Thank you, I'm honored to call myself a full fledged paladin. Maybe now, I can get out and see the world.

   The referee nodded, "Yes, but first you need to wash off the sweat and dirt, you smell like a horse." He said pinching his nostrils closed. He turned towards the other paladins. "That goes for the rest of you, and somebody please take Elgar back to his room to recover. Move it."

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   Alundra sighed as she soaked in the washtub, her pet cat Grubb watching from the bed in her private quarters.. She grabbed a bar of soap and a rag from the small stool beside her, lathering up her firm perky breasts. The hot water soothed her aching muscles. Alundra dipped her head under the water, her silky hair plastered to the sides of her face. She leaned back and closed her eyes, reveling in the peace and quiet. "I wonder if I have time for a nap."

    The door swung open, a blonde haired man poked his head in the door way. "Congratulations, Alundra, I heard you made-" His eyes widened when he saw her naked body in the tub.

   Alundra dropped the rag, folding her arms over her chest to cover her exposed breasts. "What do you want, Claymore, I'm taking a bath." Her cheeks grew red as the man stepped into her room and plopped down onto her bed.

   "Don't you know it's rude to walk in on a lady when she's undressed." came a woman's voice from the hallway.

   Claymore shook his head. "If it bothered her, she'd ask me to leave." He patted Grubb on the head as the cat crawled into his lap.

   Claymore's twin sister, Katrina, entered the room, her long blonde hair tied in a ponytail.  She walked up to her brother and smacked the top of his head. "She's too polite to say anything to you. Don't worry, Alundra, I'll get him out of here." She grabbed Claymore by his ears and pulled him to his feet with little protest.

   "Be careful, you'll tear my ears off." Claymore brushed his sister's hands away. He rubbed his red and stinging ears.

   "What do you want?" Alundra asked a second time, when it came to the twins she found she usually had to repeat herself. She groaned and climbed out of the tub, dripping wet from head to toe, she wrapped a towel around her torso, knotting it at the top.

   "The...Paladin...Commander...wants..to..see...you." Claymore stared open mouthed at Alundra's lithe,muscular body.

   "Quit drooling." Katrina said, pushing Claymore's mouth closed.

   "Can't..help...it. Come to me, my paladin love." Claymore said, running towards Alundra, his arms outstretched, ready to embrace her.

   Alundra lunged and gripped the lovestruck rogue by his groin, stopping him dead in his tracks. "There's no need to get excited, Claymore. It's not the first time you saw me naked. Like you said, I have to see the commander. We'll talk later." She cast him a warm smile and lead him to the door, still clutching his groin. She shoved him out of the room and clasped her hands together.

   Katrina walked to the door, she stopped in the doorway and looked back at Alundra. "Shall I help you dress?"

   "No!" Alundra slammed the door shut. She shook her head and walked towards the armor tree in the corner of the room and began to change into her armor.