#FANfiction: *FILM/TV* Live-Action Characters Muscled-Up~collected

[hatour]

Chapter XII – Humiliation

That's the third time in five minutes she's grown, Naomi says inwardly, referring to Eris as she sat there on her knees observing the goddess with a watchful eye – a bruised one at that. She's obscene.

Naomi and Leia sit next to one another on their knees, chained by their legs and arms. Bekka and Lana stand behind them, ogling their defeated, bruised opponents. Bekka stands with her armour appearing more like a pile of rags now than an actual suit of armour, and Lana stands with her Mandalorian T-shaped visor mask on.

"Obscene?" Eris rises from her throne. It's more like a disintegrating pile of plasteel than an actual throne now. She's already had it replaced six times with thicker variations, each one falling to the same waned state. So what's the point in trying for a seventh time? "There's nothing 'obscene' about me. I'm a living embodiment of power. Which is all your doing. If I'm obscene, it's because you made me that way."

The massive woman now stands between Naomi and Leia, her muscles twitching lively as if they have a will of their own. Each gentle breath the blonde takes makes her prodigious chest push forward, its respective muscles groaning audibly in tandem, before the gentler exhale makes them reside. She then diverts her attention to Leia, who grits her teeth in anger.

"I see you've bagged a bonus prize... Lana." Eris says with a knowing grin. All this time, she knew Lana was behind the mask, not Boba. "I commend you for it."

"How did you-" Lana begins, but she stops herself short. She knows she should've suspected something like this would've happened eventually.

"I know all kinds of things," Eris chuckles. She gestures for Lana to turn her attention towards one of the High Guard behind her. "For instance, I know Nyla over there will grow within the next few minutes, surpassing Sarin across from her."

Nyla blushes. She knows she's already a big woman, especially for being a new addition to the clone ranks, but she's bigger still than the rest of the women in her contingent. In spite of this, to be even bigger causes the girl's heart to race.

"But then there's Nalah to her immediate right," Eris continues, "who will grow twice as big in-"

But before Eris can continue, Nalah begins to shudder, and in tandem with it, her armour begins to twist and contort audibly as her muscles expand underneath. Within mere moments, the girl's abdominal armour is shredded, and her abs are seen pushing forwards, her arms, legs, chest... everything else doing the same, eager to catch up. Her calves burst through her boots, audibly swelling outwards like balloons. She doesn't care, but drool slithers down Nalah's lips and neck now, completely overcome with an insurmountable degree of pleasure from her growth.

Eventually the growth stops, and Nalah's the biggest in her contingent of troopers, who gasp in awe, reaching to her flexed bicep with their hands eagerly. They take hold of every inch of Nalah's arm possible, to get to grips with – literally – the trooper's fresh increase in size and power.

"Well, now," Eris chuckles.

Lana groans. "That's nice and all, but really... I don't care." She struts round Naomi, lightly kicking her in the chest. Naomi only felt the blow because her pain from Bekka's own blows still sting. "I want my money."

Taking the hint, Eris clicks her fingers and a bag of Credits falls from the ceiling. "Your payment."

Lana drops to her knees and rummages through the bag greedily. But something's off.

"This is only five thousand Credits," she reacts. "We agreed on three hundred thousand if we get the job done, which we did, whether Bekka does a better job than I or not. Which again, did happen."

"The thing is," Eris begins, grinning coyly, her traps pulsing and audibly flexing in accordance, "you're a bounty hunter. All you care about is money." She now stands merely an inch or two from the raven-haired Mandalorian, her pecs level with Lana's eyes. "And when I'm through both Naomi and her Jedi associate here, there won't be any bounty hunters. Sooner or later, it'll just be me and my ever-growing army of worshippers."

Lana struggles as Bekka grips her from behind, forcing her to the ground on her knees, and puts her into a headlock. "Let go of me, you-" she says, but the more she struggles, the harder and larger Bekka's bicep swells under her chin.

"Oh, and I may have forgotten to mention Bekka's growth too," Eris chuckles.

The massive woman kneels down on one knee next to Naomi. The thickness of her thigh alone is equal to Naomi's waist. Speaking of her thigh, Eris tilts her head back slightly as she wills it larger, forcing it to press against the armour of a High Guard trooper.

"But today's not the day when bounty hunting ends. No." Eris gazes down at Naomi. "Today's the day when I show who the real goddess is between me and Naomi."

Eris stares at Naomi's lips for a moment.

"But first." She plants a kiss on Naomi, causing the unsuspecting admiral to grow larger. The tiled flooring cracks beneath her knees, creating fissures large enough to fit a whole finger through. Leia watches as Naomi's bruises and cuts heal up, eventually making the woman's face appear completely unscathed.

Eventually, Naomi is double her size, making her strong enough to pull apart the chain round her arms, and for those round her ankles to literally explode into tiny fragments of plasteel. The whole experience is euphoric for Naomi, but a question soon formulates in her mind.

"Why?" she asks.

"Simple," Eris smirks. Naomi may be bigger now, but Eris is still the biggest. "I want to show you that, even with a willing boost in size and strength given by me, I'll still beat you, wipe the floor with you."

She turns to Bekka, who now has Lana's head compressed between her bare, gargantuan thighs. Bekka tenses them, making them grow a few inches larger without barely any effort.

"Is it ready?" Eris asks Bekka."

"Of course," she answers.

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"So what's your opinion of my latest creation?" Eris asks Naomi, her arms outstretched to direct the admiral's towards the metal monstrosity that laid before her. "It has no name, but to be honest, I don't think it even requires one. So long as it does its job..."

Situated in front of Naomi and Leia is a massive hydraulic press, no doubt designed for a single purpose: to let Eris work out and boast her likely limitless strength and dominance.

The hydraulic press whirs loudly, filling Naomi's and Leia's ears with its mechanical droning. At over 90 feet wide, it dwarfs Eris, Naomi, Leia, and Bekka combined. Regardless, everybody knows it's likely not going to stand a chance against Eris.

"It's designed to have no limit in regards to how much resistance can be applied to lifting, using magnets built into it" Eris explains, walking up to the handles on the sides of the press. "That in turn means one thing: a constant rigorous workout every time."

Standing close by, Bekka watches as Nalah presses several buttons on the press' accompanying command console. She sets the weight at a little over 6 million pounds – a weight heavy enough for both Eris and Naomi to lift.

Wasting no time, Eris begins to lift the press with ease. Despite the absurd weight that's applied, she lifts it like she's carrying an empty, weightless bag.

Even within the fact she never feels the weight, or any strain on her body, Eris can still feel her body swell like a balloon. Her already obscene largeness audibly grows to the point where the equally large shadow over Naomi and Leia expands past them, and encompasses Lana.

She looks in horror, but deep down feels strangely aroused by the twitching muscles and veiny pecs Eris nonchalantly flexes even while still pressing. Her mind tells her to look away from the expanding inhuman monstrosity who is Eris, but her eyes compel her to gaze devotedly at her.

The growing sound increases in volume in tandem with the growth itself. All Naomi, Leia, and Lana hear are the hisses of the press, Eris grunts of pleasure, and her growth. Eventually though, the sound of growth overshadows all the rest.

Nalah adjusts the resistance on the press, bringing the weight up by another 20 million. Even then Eris doesn't feel it. She just grins knowingly, firing out more reps with the press in the meantime.

Eris doesn't say anything. Not because she's lost for words, but rather because she doesn't need to. Her body speaks for her, as it has for the last month.

All around her, Naomi watches as the High Guard themselves begin to grow larger. It's as if Eris own growth triggers loyal subjects into do so in tandem with her, as one. Synchronised muscle growth. Boots, armour plating, helmets... They all explode into smithereens as the High Guard expand, doubling, then tripling their size.

Lana is lucky Bekka had released her grip on her before the synchronised growth started. Else, she would've been a decapitated mess by now from an otherwise likely thigh scissoring.

Despite her own growth continuing, Nalah managed to up the press' resistance, bringing the total weight up to a little over 30 million pounds.

However, the control panel then suddenly beeped, and the press' resistance was increased once again seemingly at its own will. But Leia knew the truth, felt it in fact. It was a powerful feeling, something that made her feel giddy.

"You can feel it, can't you?" Eris asked with a knowing grin. The press' weight still felt impossibly weight for the woman. Even at its now-current weight of over 80 million pounds, she pressed it over her head like it was nothing. "It's unimaginably powerful."

What's she feeling?" Naomi asked Leia. She could feel it too, but not as grand a scale as either Leia, Eris, or even the High Guard for that matter. To Naomi, it merely felt like a shiver down her spine.

"The Force! I can feel it..." Eris shuddered as her body escalated in power, surged in strength. "''... See it!"

They were words of a delirious, power-hungry woman either, for Eris really could see the Force as a physical entity; small blue and white dots floated in the air.

Eris released the press and held her hand out, her palms skyward. Then, with little to no emotion, she watched as the particles of the Force gathered together into a ball, and floated above the palm of her hand.

"I really am a goddess now" she said. "There's no denying it, is there?" The Force-ball pulsed, causing her meaty forearms to flex and veins to pop.

All Leia and Naomi could do was nod. It was beyond the point where disagreeing with Eris was even considered bold.

"I think it's time we did a bit of flexing, don't you?" Eris suggested.

A rumbling sound emanated as she immediately went into a most muscular pose. Her arms alone were as wide as Naomi's entire body three times over! Even so, a slight flex goaded them even bigger, covered in a sickening layer of veinage.

A calf flex was next. Being completely naked and barely caring about that fact, Eris chuckled at the fact her flexed calves pressed against Naomi's face, forcing the captive woman to kiss it.

Leia noticed a single massive vein travel from Eris' wrist to her trap, pulsing violently as she flexed her left bicep, bigger than anything they could comprehend.

A lay spread followed. Eris' lats were wider than both wings of a TIE fighter combined, unflexed. Her muscles rumbled, tensed to their extremities and forcefully pushed harder thus making the woman appear even more obscene, less human.

In an unexplainable haze, Lana looked on mesmerised by Eris' powerful display of sheer dominance. Leia could sense that, but couldn't do anything.

Behind them, the High Guard was growing again for a second time, exploring the muscular crevices of each other's bodies.

There really was nothing neither Naomi, Leia, or Lana could do but watch and listen.

[hatour]

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Chapter 13 - One with the Force

Leia felt dizzy. Still chained and held captive, she had no choice but to look at the abhorrent being who was Eris. Leia's were shut tightly, and she tried to block out the groans of pleasure that emanated from Eris as she felt her power swell astronomically, once again. It had already reached an absurd level, but she willed for more, and it came.

Leia's dizziness was Eris' doing. She stared intently into the fledgling Jedi's eyes, which was powerful enough on its own to suck the Force from her very being, and used that drained essence to fuel herself, take her to even higher degrees of power.

Naomi was close by. Likewise, she was still chained. She watched as Leia clenched her teeth down, fighting the urge, the need to scream. Eris was too powerful; never in her life had Leia known draining the Force from an individual was possible, let alone so painful.

"All your power, Skywalker, is now mine," Eris chuckled. Her body twitched violently, overcome with the flood of power she drained from Leia. "And I can't thank you enough for it."

The High Guard chuckled, behind Naomi, Leia, and Lana. Among the lot of them, their sheer massiveness filled the room, flexing on their own accord, veins dancing and throbbing. They didn't care for their evident nakedness. It wasn't as if anybody could do anything about it, but Eris. They felt their strength surge in tandem with Eris' own.

Leia finally gave in and screamed. It was music to Eris' and the High Guard's ears. The Force was leaving her, and she couldn't do anything about it, except feel it seep from her.

Nalah pranced around the ever-weakening Jedi, and knelt down next to her. "How does it feel, being... weak?" The other members of the High Guard chuckled. Nalah teasing was cruel, but cruelty was what they excelled in. "I can't imagine it being as fun as our increase in power." She extended her arm out to Leia, and flexed it right in her face.

The limb was beyond human comprehension. The flex was held for a moment, long enough for Naomi to notice it grow an inch or two.

"This is madness," she barked, but her words were ignored.

"This is power," Eris responded. She felt the Force was almost drained from Leia completely, but she needed more. "Something you know nothing about."

Tear ran down Leia's cheeks now. She could barely take it. She wanted it to stop, but it would only do so when Eris was finished.

"You always spoke of wanting to bring the Empire back from its vulnerable state. You found something that would finally do that, but you became too conscious of what could happen to you in the process." Eris licked her lips. She could literally taste the Force now. It was bland and boring, just like Naomi and Leia. "Sacrifices have to be made for the greater good. That's a lesson in life you failed."

It was different for Lana, however. She sat there, mesmerised by Eris' display. Lana never knew so much muscle and power being packed into a human body was even possible. Eris' bulk literally filled the width of the room now, but it still expanded, causing the walls to crack slightly.

Eris lifted her arms up into a flex, causing a literal mountain of muscle to rise. Their peaks were sharp and split, and a network of thick veins was present, threatening to burst at any moment.

I just hope she doesn't find out about the lightsaber, Leia said inwardly, her breathing shallow.

Eris released the flex almost suddenly. She heard Leia's thoughts. "And why would I not want find out about this lightsaber?" She moved up to the Jedi, all seven feet of her. "What's so special about it?"

Naomi turned to Leia in shock. She was stupid enough to mention the lightsaber in her thoughts. Why?

"Oh, what's the point?" She gave in now. There was no point in even thinking Eris could be matched, never mind beaten. She grew in strength and power constantly, everybody knew that, and she could command the Force to do almost anything. She wasn't just any goddess, now, but the Goddess. "Nobody can ever hope to come up against you, Eris. You're so powerful, mighty, and transcendent."

Eris chuckled. "I'm glad you finally see reason." She knelt down in front of Naomi. Eris was at least five times Naomi's width, but it was anybody guess just how strong she was. The hydraulic press was well past 100 million pounds now, and Eris still demanded more weight. "I'm glad you finally realise that I'm incomparable, unbeatable."

Naomi felt Eris' hand caress her cheek. It was unbelievably warm, and her skin was so smooth.

"Now. Tell me about this lightsaber," Eris commanded.

"We had hoped to have Naomi use it as a means to stop you," Leia explained. The Force was gone from her now. She could feel it. "When its blade is activated, the wielder's body grows." She paused. "Bigger than you currently, Goddess."

"Bigger than me?" Eris laughed, and raised her arms up into a flex. Bigger now than they were from her last flex, meaning they'd grown without her realising. Or did she? "And where is it now?"

Bekka approached Eris. There was only a slight marginal difference between both women, but they were still frightfully, inhumanly large. "I took it from the Skywalker girl when she was taken prisoner." She handed it over to Eris, who snatched it from her grip.

"I already have unlimited power flowing through my body," she grinned evilly. "But to have even more-"

"Is your right," Naomi said softly. She gave in to her inhibitions now. To see Eris become even more powerful was something Naomi had always planned, and now it would finally happen.

Eris ignited the lightsaber, and a blade as yellow as Tatooine's twin suns pierces the air. It hums vibrantly.

Immediately, Eris began to feel different. Her body literally bubbled and bloated larger, causing the cracks on the wall to widen. She had never felt so alive, so mighty in the past – her power now dwarfed that which she gained from the temple on Jakku.

Eris' perception and understanding of the Force itself had heighten considerably too, for she could now literally hear it pulsate. Her power was truly unmatchable now, but-

The 'saber flickered and a channel of yellow light escaped from it, piercing Eris' wrist, causing its surrounding veins to glow in return.

"What's happening?" She cried. Eris knew something was wrong. She could still feel her power reaching new, unheard of heights, but also felt odd, as if-

Eris was more like a massive overstuffed muffin by this point, her body crammed with so much muscle it was barely human now.

"There's so much... power..." she acknowledged.

Everybody in the throne room was enveloped by Eris' gargantuan ever-expanding shadow. Lana knew something was going wrong – the High Guard panicked, stepping back slowly toward the door.

"... but I want it to-" Eris stopped suddenly at the realisation of what she was about to say. "-to stop."

But it was too late. Leia and Naomi knew all the could, wanted to do was wait. And then-

Eris screamed as her hyper-shredded bulkiness evaporated into nothing by a yellow light that covered her from head to toe. There was nothing left afterward that suggested she had once existed: no ash, ripped clothing... then, as if by magic, the chains that held Naomi, Leia and Lana imprisoned unlocked and dropped to the ground with a loud clatter.

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"How did that all happen?" Lana asked as she rubbed her wrists. "The thing with the saber, I mean."

"Simple: we knew Eris would stop at nothing for more power, even if what she had already was unlimited," Leia explained.

She was still weak, but could still feel the Force was with her. It felt like the dying embers of a fire, but she knew she wouldn't need the Force now, or her lightsaber for that matter, because the galaxy was now at peace once again.

"So, we simply fooled her into thinking the saber she took would give her more power," she added.

"But it did the exact opposite," Naomi smiled.

Lana reminisced for a moment on her first and hopefully last encounter against Naomi. She was still bruised and had a few broken bones.

"What will you do now?" Leia asked. "I imagine you won't be getting paid anytime soon."

Lana didn't know herself would she do next. Go back to being a bounty hunter, maybe? Settle down? Do something else? She had so many options laid out for her, but- The image of Eris, as big and powerful as she was, was still imprinted in Lana's eyes, the cacophony of sounds that was Eris' expanding muscles still playing in Lana's ears. What would she do?

"I'll probably start by hunting down the remaining High Guard," she answered. "Well, as best I can."

"Sounds like a plan." Leia turned to Naomi. She appeared to have shrunken down somewhat. "What about yourself? The Empire is no more, and I doubt you're willing to try again at rebuilding it."

Naomi smirked. "Well, I was wondering..."

What would Naomi do?

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Star Wars: Seduction of the Force

The battle raged on. The Sith were in civil war again, threatening to tear apart the galaxy. The Jedi were content to watch as their evil counterparts destroyed one another. "It's on their turf," said Master Skywalker. "We won't involve ourselves unless it erupts, which I have word that it won't", he continued. He was teaching a Advanced Force 101 course at the Jedi Academy when the issue arose during the lecture. This was due to a Padawan's strong feelings in the Force which she tried to control, but these tremers were strong. She shot her hand up and Luke responded wih a nod. The young young girl said: "Master, the Sith are at war. I feel pain, darkness, suffering. Should we get involved?"

The wise Master sighed, but answered her concern. "It's on their turf," said Master Skywalker. "We won't involve ourselves unless it erupts, which I have word that it won't", he continued. He hated repeating himself. "How do you know?", echoed a brash and cocky student named Brent. Luke had heard of him and couldn't wait to bring him to Earth. "Challenge a master Jedi, do you young one?", spoke Master Yoda from the Nether World of the Force. Brent was stunned, as was Luke as he appeared "Have but a short time I do, so this warning I give. The threat of which the young madien speaks. Real it is. Strong it is. Be like The Old Council must you not. Destroy the Sith, we must."

Luke immediately went to his chambers to commune after the dismissal of the lecture. Obi-wan communed with his former appentice, echoing Master Yoda's words. "Luke, you must confront this threat if the Order is to survive. She is a sick and twisted woman who commands the Force subtely, but with great power. For now, she hides in the shadows of the war. Soon, she shall be known. But by then it may be too late..."
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The Sith were fighting tooth and nail. The death toll was unspeakable. Men and women screamed as lightning struck and lightsabers cut like butter through flesh and bone, as well as steel. As usual, the war started with a rise to powet. Yet, a woman wearing all black, was causing the most destruction, tearing limb from limb with massive waves of Force power, frying any and all in her way.

She would just pull a random warrior or two towards her and make a Force bomb out of them, using the metal on or in their bodies as conducters for lightning, then using either Force crush or pull to detonate. For variety, she would implae another through the eyes using her other hand, since she could control both her unlockable dual sabers with one hand. She Laughed as she heard the screams of death around her. "All will know Mistress Domina. For I shall reign forever." As she said this, she cackled with laughter again.
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As blood rained, the old Sith died like a vapor. Only young Sith (18-30) and women stood. Some were wounded, but they healed. How, do you ask? Mistress Domina created this war. Using her dark body, 6'2 220lb muscled 20 yr. old frame, she ozed sexines, even in a Sith robe. Her green eyes pierced through even her Master's soul. She seduced the leader of the Sith in his chambers and was caught by her Master, who in his lust filled rage attacked his Master, which ignighted this current war. (Note: There are children in both Orders. However, none were harmed. None will be harmed. Everyone under 18 was evacuated via a deal with Jedi Master Skywalker.)

Mistress Domina became enraged and betrayed her Master killing him with Force ejaculation, which made him cum till his heart burst. The leader of the Sith waas killed by her brute strength. She quickly kicked his saber from his hand and smashed his skull with a quick fist through it.

Her strength was thanks to her rigorious training, which included lifting 500lb barbels in 4 sets of 5, running and training with her Master. Her legs were pressing 2,000 lbs in 4 sets of 5. This was not enough for her though. She wanted to be the greatest Sith ever. Her body retained the look of a 5 star natural looking fitness athelete. One day in the mist of her training, a old female Sith Master approached her from the Netherworld: Give us our vengance on all Sith men. We will give you our power. The young maiden questioned how this would be done. The master simply touched her, sending a shudder through her body. "Do we have a deal?", the Master asked. "Yes.", the young maiden replied.
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Luke had no choice: Confront this threat or watch the Force crash into eternal unbalance. Just as he was leaving his chambers, another Jedi appeared. "Father?! I wish I had time, but.." "I was sent to you. Allow me to commune with this woman. Being both Jedi and Sith Master, I know her pain. At least some of it," the elder Skywalker spoke. "Agree with this, I do," echoed Yoda. Obi-Wan just nodded. "Give us time, it will to uncover the danger", Yoda continued. Luke nodded his head and left his chambers.
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Once she smashed the doors down Mistress Domina began her pilage of the Sith Order. She easily blocked and absorbed most of any of their Force attacks. No matter what they tried from lightning to push, as well as various hits of mind control. She literally and cunningly smiled, laughed and said "That tickles. HAAAH HA HA!!!!", when she got hit with a final shot of the Force from all the Masters. Mistress Domina then took both lightsabers in her hand, as well as all the lightsabers present from their owners, shocked them with Force lighting and rammed them up the Men's asses.

As they screamed she also force slammed them into the wall. She evened taunted them via Force mind control "You can't stop me from screwing your asses. Wait, There is one way. Worship me. Give your self to me." "No!!!!!!!!!!!", the beaten males screamed in unison. Her experssion turned iced xcold on her chocolate face, perking her raven hair. "You will bow. OR DIE!!!!!!", she screamed.

By combining Force extraction with her current attack, she began sucking the Force out of the men and transfering it to the women, causing the men to scream bloody murder,not just from pain, but humiliation. In exactly a month, Mistress Domina did what not even Skywalkers both past and present have tried to do: Destroy the Sith. In fact, She not only drained them of their power, she took their mental facalties as well, turning the young men into children and Force bombing the old ones.
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After this, Annikan Skywalker appeared. He exclaimed: "What have you done! Now the Force is out of balance. You must restore the balance." "Restore our honor!", retorted Domina. "For too long, Sith women were tortured and abused,as well as children. You even tortured a young Apprentice for your own amusment!"

"Then the Sith Masters used the Force to rape us!." She said this with such hate filled malice it struck a cord with the elder Skywalker. After hearing this, Yoda appeared. He asked "Do this not for conquest you did? But for honor?" At first, the black and well muscled beauty was shocked. She had only heard legends in regard to Master Yoda. Now she saw him! He continued: "Find a better way you should have." After this Obi-wan appeared. He echoed the same sentiments. Domina screamed, "WHERE WERE THE JEDI DURING THIS TRAVESTY?! TELL ME WHERE! OH THAT"S RIGHT! NOWHERE!" "We are sorry. Give us the chance to make it right.", Obi-wan asked. NOTHING WILL MAKE IT RIGHT! SINCE THE JEDI DID NOTHING, THEY SHALL BE NOTHING BUT A MEMORY! YOU HAVE YOURSELVES TO BLAME!
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Luke's blood ran cold when Master Yoda talked with him about Domina. "Destroyed all male Sith she has. Killed their Lords and Masters. Raped the Knights and Apprentences." "She's not human!", Luke responded.
"You must destroy her, Luke.", said Obi-wan. Sighing and shaking his head, he set out to find and destroy Domina.
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"AAARGGGGGHHHH!", screamed a stormtropper as he was being raped with a footlong double-studded dildo. "Oh shut up! It doesn't hurt THAT bad.", laughed Sith Mistress Hedi. "Thank you Mistress Domina for teaching us how to regrow their bodies. Its amazing how much pain they can tolerate.", she said. "Your welcome dear. My pleasure.", Mistress Domina responded. All of a sudden, she heard crying. "Looks like Jackie's up from his nap. My boobs hurt, so I'll feed him." Her plan was perfect: Have each mistress erase the minds of the storm troopers so they can 'marry' them, then have her erase the minds and regress the ages of the Knights and Apprentice males to a young boy, while finally taking the female Knights and Apprentices and making them the daughters of their female Masters so that the males would have a 'big sister' to admire and follow.

Making families of these people did two things: 1. preservation and 2. start a new Order. As she fed her young 'son', it quieted him. Soon he fell fast asleep again. Another knight was rocking her two-year old brother to sleep, which wasn't easy untill she sung to him. There was a nursery, daycare, and school on the planet. There was also a padded room and torture room. (both were sound proof and you couldn't see in or out of them.)

Despite all this, Mistress Domina still lived for conquest. Her blood lust consumed the galaxy. The female armies averaged 6'2 and 225lbs of hard muscle. Having averages of 20-25-30FF didn't hurt either. Each individual woman had the power of Darth Vader times 20, coupled with exotic beauty representing every species in the galaxy. As the army moved through the universe, Domina would throw the ship she landed on one planet with into another one just for fun. (Her Ships were 3x the size of the Death star.) This was with her pinky! She would sometimes cause random warriors bodies to explode with just a touch of her finger! (I mean literally explode!) In some cases, Domina would use her enemies' body armor as a roaster to incinerate them with just a blow of her breath! Melting her opponets with little shocks of electricity was fun too. All in all, those planets that weren't destroyed or conquered soon just surrendered out right.
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Luke and the Jedi Masters felt as if Domina was two steps ahead of them. If it wasn't reports of bubbling rivers of blood, it was entire planets blown to scraps. "Find it interesting I do, that she destroys the scorge of the universe.", said Yoda as he appeared to Luke. "Yes, it is odd. She's destroying the Jabba-like planets, which are out of our jurisdiction, unfortunately.", replied Luke. "This could be one of two things: 1. Shes trying to convince you of her cause. or 2. She is secrectly buiding a new Sith Order. Either way, it doesn't bode well for the Jedi.", said Mace Windu. "Find her quickly and resolve this we must.", Yoda emphasised before they departed.

"OMG!", Luke exclaimed. "I know where she's headed. I must warn those leaders." The rulers of these planets scoffed at Master Luke's warning. "We are united against her threat Master Jedi. No one in the galaxy is that powerful. Even if she is, why can't you find he and kill her?" Everyone he contacted gave him the same response pretty much. "They have sealed they're own fate if we don't do something Master." A senior Member said this to him with concern. Luke responded: "We can't right now and its frustrating. Domina has caused too much pain and suffering to be reasoned with. We must kill her."
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After a year of blood soaked and Force-bombed planets, (Yes, I said Force Bombed planets! As in Mistress Domina takes Force Lightining, hurls it at a planet, making it in into a bomb which she detonates by throwing the planet into another! She likes making chain-reaction planetary Force Bombs as well. Multiple planets explode with just a snap of her fingers!) Mistress Domina was content with her lust for power. (at least presently) However, her dreadful power would collide with a legend only known in whispers among mortal men: The son of Skywalker!
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It seemed as if the Force guided them to a barren place. Luke knew however that appearences could be deceiving to the body, mind and spirit. His communes with the Masters of the past cleared his heart and mind for this journey. "Do what you must my son. Her blood lust knows no compassion, so have none! Her deeds have been unimaginable, yet destructive, so you must destroy her! Let her blood be the price for her deeds upon the sons of men."

As Anikan was speaking, he was interupted by a calmer, yet reflective voice of judgement: Yoda beckoned Luke to listen to him, yet chided his father also.: "Given a chance of redemption you were Skywalker. Deny her that you must not Luke. If fight she choses, then destroy her you must." The elder Skywalker sighed in resignation by saying: "Heed the master, my son. May the Force be with you." As Luke landed on the former lush planet of Dashiq (Da-sheek), he felt a presence so strong, it blew his mind. "She can't be this powerful, can she? How did she amass this great power? How did I not see this?, etc., were just some of the questions he asked himself. Yet a calm came over him that steeled his resolve. "Domina shall be no more. Even if I must be no more to do it. It shall be done."

Master Skywalker stepped on the planet,in his robe with lightsaber in hand. After landing on the planet with 10-12 Jedi Knights and Masters, he asked them to spread out in two's. Domina saw this and told her second in command to send a few soldiers to meet them. "Stand where you are Jedi!", two athletic looking women said. Light sabers were drawn and the battle commenced. Lightsabers clashed and force attacks were repelled at such speed that it was almost blinding. Masters took the brunt of the attack, while Knights took up the rear.
This battle would be a classic in Jedi and Sith lore. The opposing forces were so evenly matched that it produced a stalemate. "Enough!", screamed Dominated as she approached with the rest of her army, which numbered the thousands. Master Skywalker fortunately had reinforcements coming. Or so he thought.

"We are trapped Master! Pinned in the ridge!", said a knight through telepathy. Luke devised a strategy. "Domina, if you are willing to meet me. Alone. We will end this." Domina just nodded her head yes and let the reinforcements pass. "They will fight here. One on one, just as we will.", said Luke. "So it is, Master Skywalker. Now that the pleasantries are done, shall we begin?", the dark-skinned warrior asked with contempt. Luke stepped aside and extended a hand to allow her to pass, however she took it as a moment to strike. Luke calmly repelled the Force attack. "So, the legend is true! That makes your demise even sweeter Master Skywalker! For vengeance and blood!", she screamed.

The battle turned into a demonstration of Force mastery. Lightning strikes were repelled with Force absorption. Luke just smirked. "Haha, really? Did you forget who my father was? C'mon, be original. Then she produced two sabers shocked with lightning. Luke just pulled them from her hands and threw them back at her. Domina was stunned. "In case your wondering, I can absorb the Netherworld too.", Luke stated. Domina was out matched and was shaking until she heard these words: "Unleash hell." Her Sith master had empowered her with al the powers of the Sith Netherworld. Now, the battle truly began...

Luke and Domina were at a standstill. "You are strong. But you dont know too much.", Luke smirked as he stopped another attack from Domina. As hard as she tried, she couldnt even dent his power. "There must be a limit to your power.", Domina said. "There is, but you'll never reach it.", remarked Luke. Despite the increase due to the connection to the Netherworld, Luke just deflected them with ease. Then she switched to lightsabers, which just made things even more comical. Everything was blocked or dodged. "WHY CANT YOU DIE?!!!", she screamed.

"I do bleed, but you cant seem to find the veins on me.", the Jedi Master quipped as he dodged another Force Bomb. This enraged the dark mistress. Then something happend that tipped the scales. The Masters and Apprentices were being pushed back. Luke had a choice: Continue to engage Domina or save the Order. With a long sigh, he blasted Domina into a wall and left to defend his students. He only hoped hw was in time.

As Luke stood on the battle field, he saw The Order in dismay. The Force shield was weakening. Hequckly did some math and figured that soon the Order would die without his help. "My help may not be enough unfortunately." , he mused. Then he had a chilling feeling. "Domina! She lived?! Wow, did i underestimate her! Damn!", he chided himself. Then he joined her on the battlefield. "Now the Order shall perish!", screamed Domina. Both sides charged in unision to engage. All you could hear was screams of rage and pain as the Force flowed freely in each warrior as they used their strongest attacks.
Eventually, the Jedi began to lose ground. "The great Skywalker is worn and beaten! His forces are winded and worn! Let us end the scorge that is the Jedi once and for all!.", Domina gleefully annouced.

Then something amazing happened. The Sith warriors looked intothe souls of the young Jedi apprentices and saw fear, pain and confusion. Some were on the verge of tears as they saw their fate, yet remained stone faced. It was at that moment, Domina stopped and stood there. She thought of the fact that Force gifted children were taken from their homes at an early age to be trained. "Did these young warriors destroy her? Victimize her? The answer had to be no. What were these feelings? Most importantly, what would the Force feel like out of balance, much less look like?,etc." These and other questions ripped through her as she heard the silent cries of even the younglings at the Temple, praying and hoping that they wouldnt be next.

Then she gave the signal to stop. Then all of her army heard the cries and stopped the advance. "It seems i am no better than my tormentors." As she said this, she dropped to her knees and signaled Luke to kill her. "Killing you will not avenge anyone Domina. However this will end today." With that, a scream of epic proportions was heard throughout the planet as the senior Master severed the connection to the Dark Netherworld forever using a Force power called Mind Sever, which is a combo of Force Extraction and Force Mind Wipe. Luke did this with one hand on all the Sith warriors.
Finally, after Force Healing was applied to all, Cristen, (this was Domina's Jedi name) and her army followed their fellow Jedi, bathed in the Light of the Force.

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