A Hero's Journey

[spoonmaster]

I hear you Jeremy.  I certainly didn't get out to write this much backstory and set up  it just kind of happened.  And I'm in too deep to stop now.  But don't worry.  It's going to be a slow build up  but Jamie is going to be every bit the powerhouse you expect.  I promise!

[spoonmaster]

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[nickolai]

So, I guess I was expecting a different story, because of the way the first two chapters were written, that the third and fourth chapter were like a completely different story to me. I guess I wasn't looking for anything deep, I was looking for the standard spoonmaster tropes of woman who is incredibly beautiful and is also insanely strong, fast and athletic. Does that mean I have hated the last two chapters, no, but I am looking forward to seeing Jamie get back to her best physically, mentally, and emotionally. I guess this last chapter was a step in the right direction, though, so whatever happens next, I will be here for it. k+!

Yeah ... I don't think character development and beautiful women with phenomenal muscular development performing belief defying physical feats are mutually exclusive in stories.  Circes Cup stories are a testament to that.

[Jeremy Lightning]

Over a month since the last chapter of this story, I sure hope we get more soon! k+!

[heidegger]

What happened? Is the story over?