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  • #31 by taoschild on 20 Apr 2024
  • Okay, I wasn't planning on it but I will. Thanks for the support. I'd like to offer anyone on this site a free book if they purchase the Courtesan of Whitechapel and give it a review.  If you're interested please email me at jgmuscle12 at gmail In the meantime here is a small section to tie you over while I figure out the end. I actually was going to have her end up with Mark but I've grown to dislike him so I'm not sure where I will go.
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    “I…”

    “We can just shake and feel the difference,” she said wiping her palm on the towel and then extending a hand towards him. He grasped her hand and squeezed as hard as he could before she clasped him back. A tremor ran through his arm as soon as she squeezed.  Veins popped in her forearm and striations riddled across the expansive muscles. His knees wobbled and buckled as he wrenched in pain. Promply, his knees slammed into the floor and her grip lightened. He kneeled below her looking up in awe as if worshipping the superior being in his midst. His fingers wrung with pain but he hardly noticed.

    The towel she’d wrapped about her had dropped to the floor with a soft rustle, as her body tensed. Her muscles rippled and popped revealing the sheer power etched into every inch of her form. Mark's eyes widened in awe as he looked up and finally saw the reality of her transformation.

    He was greeted by swells of rippling muscles with their sinews visible beneath the surface like hidden treasures waiting to be discovered. Veins crisscrossed her form. Beneath the taut, glistening skin, sinews writhed like titanic cables. There was sheer power etched into every inch of her body.

    “There's no need to test me, Mark,” she said, her voice filled with a quiet strength. “I don't want to hurt you. I just want you to see me again – see me like you used to see me..” Tears welled up in her eyes. “I want you to respect me, not control me. I want you to be the partner I fell in love with, the man who inspires me to be strong.”

    “I… I…” he trailed off. He saw the hurt and longing in her eyes, and a flicker of his old admiration rekindled within him. But he just couldn’t shake the feeling of emasculation.

    Sarah offered a tentative smile. “How about we work out together tomorrow? We can hold each other accountable and push each other further.”
  • #32 by Wookey on 20 Apr 2024
  • Thank you. K++ again
  • #33 by quick on 21 Apr 2024
  • Hell yeah. Honestly, this is one of the best stories on this site in a LONG time. If you dropped this from the anthology, I can't imagine how good the rest is. 
  • #34 by taoschild on 24 Apr 2024
  • Thanks Quick, I hope it will be an anthology people enjoy. Sorry about the poll guys - looks like a child wrote it because I couldn't see what I was typing but hopefully you get the point.
    She stays with Mark
    She beats up Mark
    She leaves MArk without violence and becomes a chemistry experiment for Cord
    She takes an experimental drug and she becomes enormous and her clit grows so long she and Cord can screw each other
    She becomes a mutant
  • #35 by erocha75 on 24 Apr 2024
  • Great story!! Loving it!! I will suggest she becomes a mutant and leaves Mark (nonviolently, but after further emascularing him through some feat of her now apocalyptic strength/power).
  • #36 by quick on 24 Apr 2024
  • I'd be happy with any result, but I really hope it goes nonviolent.  I just personally don't enjoy those stories all that much.  If I had to vote for just one, I would say #4.
  • #37 by crow004 on 24 Apr 2024
  • I'm really enjoying this story. If you're still looking for suggestions, I'd like her to stay with her husband. And a little violence never hurt! She seems to really like getting stronger and stronger than him and that should continue (but within believability). And I'd like to see Mark continually test his strength and muscles against her, which usually involves pain on his part. (whether he "likes" the pain or not I'll leave to your imagination). But please continue!
  • #38 by bufffuta123 on 25 Apr 2024
  • never one to deny a wholesome ending to a great muscle growth story. it would be nice to see them end this in a nice way :3
  • #39 by wowser1016 on 26 Apr 2024
  • I hate to see her just walk out without teaching him some kind of lesson. She doesn't need to be super violent but maybe put him across her knee and spank him or at least hold him down and give him a farewell lecture. Of course she could also stay with him but now she is running things. Otherwise I guess I would vote for #3. However, it's your show and I will like any ending you decide. As usual with your work this has been a good read. I really look forward to the anthology for which this wasn't good enough.  K+!
  • #40 by marc3603 on 26 Apr 2024
  • Becoming mutant and violent!!
  • #41 by GLKnight on 26 Apr 2024
  • Domination is not about violence, despite what people think.

    You CAN be kind and look scary as hell.

    I say she leaves and becomes a mutant, but in a way that she becomes a kind, protective figure of other women that want to follow in her footsteps.
  • #42 by novakard on 27 Apr 2024
  • never have been a fan of violence in these kinds of stories, which really limits what I can read and enjoy.  her repairing her relationship with Mark would be ideal, I think, even if/though he needs to earn it. like others have said, it's such a rare case in this genre of story.
  • #43 by taoschild on 29 Apr 2024
  • Looks like there aren't many votes for staying with Mark so I'll start working on an end before the poll concludes tomorrow. I'll probably go with one of the top two vote getters.
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  • #44 by erocha75 on 29 Apr 2024
  • So, for whatever reason, I could not see the original poll, which contains the more extreme option "she grows so tall n muscular that she scares people". I'd love to see that.
    As for her relationship with Mark, I'd love to see them getting back together (I recognize I mentioned earlier that she should leave him). It is just that it is hard to picture it somehow happening, as he is never nice to her during any part of the story we have available. On the other hand, this last chapter ends with her clearly stating her love for him ("wanting to be seen again"), so maybe there is a path after all. Would be nice if there was a way to make that believable, I would enjoy it more than her leaving...
  • #45 by erocha75 on 29 Apr 2024
  • * Sorry, should have written them "staying together" instead of "getting back together"...
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