Artist/Author: [El_Roy_1999] Illustrations for "Rivals"

I tried to draw (or rather sketch) the progression of the characters in my story "Rivals". I am no graphic artist, but I try to learn what I can. I am grateful for feedback, comments and tips on how to improve. Also, if you like it, karma.




The story can be found here:
http://saradas.org/index.php?topic=130530.msg554655#msg554655