Rian -- The Gymnast Unleashed -- [reaper0002000] [nsfw] [gore]

[seldom]

Great work, and I don't mind the wait. Loving the brutal direction this is going in.

[seldom]

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[muscleboy007]

Absolutely loving this story, the gory the better, keep it going!

[JackKovan]

Reaper said next week would culminate in the end of this chapter of Rian.
But that's what he said last week, so I prodded him to give me something. Like, anything to keep the ball rolling.
Well, here it is!
JK

(cont'd)

Now 18, the first meet Rian competed on the male side was not a competition but a demonstration of absolute and total superiority. The muscular young beast redefined the limits of human potential, racking scores well above her older male counterparts. Watching from the stands, her emasculating performance was all anyone, especially the female gymnasts, could talk about was how completely dominant this incredibly jacked teen was, and how those awesome muscles overpowered the men.  Even though most of the women would not consider themselves lesbians, it was as if Rian was the naturally accepted exception to their longings.

Thus, those ungodly 18 year-old muscles were not limited to overpowering just men. Although she competed against -- well, more like obliterated -- males, Rian used the women's locker room to change and shower... and also fuck the living daylights out of everyone inside.

Elite athletes, including women, were no strangers to the elevated libido associated with their superb constitution, but like her superhuman physical abilities would suggest, Rian was altogether another animal. The teen was in another league, another planet, hell, another plane of existence. She wasn't just thirsty or horny, she was insatiable. And when it came to Rian, it wasn't a surprise that the female gymnasts reciprocated; awe or even envy became a lust so powerful they couldn't get enough of her. Her carefree mane of hair, perfectly symmetric face framed an adorable nose and huge eyes that anyone could get lost in, a gray as deep as a stormy sea. And then there was her body, which made any Mr. Olympia look like a malformed runt. No girlfriend or boyfriend could ever hope to approach or let alone equal Rian's godlike level of sheer physical perfection. The muscles on every inch of her, literally everywhere...

The 18 year-old musclebeast was so sexually capable, she could take several girls to orgasm simultaneously using various parts of her incomparable, devastating young body while she herself could ascend and then plateau repeatedly -- for hours..! Utterly tireless, she fucked a dozen gymnasts into ecstatic senselessness and then would continue to rape them well after their consciousness had surrendered to relentless pleasure. Completely spent, not one of the girls would have been able to walk straight afterwards, let alone perform gymnastics. So to keep her stable in working order, Rian deliberately withheld herself despite their desperate pleadings for her touch until after each competition, using her scorching sexuality as incentive. And leaving judges and coaches bewildered as to why these gymnasts suddenly turned in fantastic performances and amazing scores across the board. After which point an orgy would usually explode at the end of the meet that would have made even the ancient Romans blush.

But there was one caveat -- Rian tolerated no dissent to her dominance. As the nude beast, muscles bulging brimming over with strength, herself said smugly to the entire locker room as it swooned for her "Submit...or die." Anyone who thought they had a chance to oppose her usually didn't last more than a bone or two casually snapped like a twig to wake them to the reality of what they were next to Rian, a toy next to a god. But a god which could give pleasure beyond their wildest imagination, as long they knew their place in the natural order of things. With her utter superiority, Rian owned the female locker room, turning it into a temple of pleasure, of worship to a god of muscle. The male locker would also worship that same god, but given the male ego, it would resemble less temple, and more butcher shop.

(to be cont'd)

[Jeremy Lightning]

Awesome stuff, once again, incredible description of muscle and strength, and a feminine virility so to speak, able to leave multiple girls and women, all of them highly elite athletes in their own right, in smiling sex comas with her sexual skills and abilities. But yeah, I would venture to guess that if she also fucked guys, she would leave their locker room much more bloody, since they wouldn't be able to give up control as easily. Maybe we'll find out next time. I look forward to it. k+!

[JackKovan]

(cont'd)

In an emptied gymnasium hours later,  Rian waited to collect her dues from winning the bet...she'd more than doubled any male score with her enormous power. The judges had gotten off with only a mere taste of the teenager's unholy appetite for dominance; now it was time for the 18 year-old girlbeast to relish the main course! The jacked musclegirl glanced towards the male locker room impatiently but no one emerged.

So the teen strode confidently into the male locker room herself, and ignored the exclamations of surprise by the young men chatting nearby who noticed her entry. With the commotion of their outcries, soon every eye was cast on her herculean young physique. It was constrained in a simple girl's leotard, a shimmering white that left her back and all her limbs bare. What the thin cloth did cover, it didn't so much conceal as showcase everything on her magnificent 18 year old body. The gigantic, shredded chest with both nipples looking ready to burst straight out.  The impossibly defined abdominal wall that ran like protruding bricks from the freakish overhang of her massive pecs all the way down to that bristling bulging beast of a groin. It seemed like every detail of her hulking sex was molded and visible, the overstretched material struggling and failing to contain the sheer virility of the almighty  monster within.

When she had their attention, Rian smirked. "You made a bet, and you lost," the ubermuscled girl said flatly, "You all could have fucked me, but now I get to fuck you." She chuckled dangerously and then snarled "Now lick every inch of me clean in fucking worship." But all the men did was... nothing. They simply stared. At their lack of action, Rian smiled in anticipation, already knowing what she would have to do to collect on the bet and savoring the thought of the impending violence. She would not afford them the mercy she'd shown to the female gymnasts.

"Okay..." she breathed sordidly and licked her lips. The teenbeast seized the frame of the heavy duty lockers closest to her and pulled, her  insane muscles exploding to freakish size and definition as thick bolts and anchors snapped like trinkets. The unstoppable young hulk tore an entire section of lockers right of the wall in a screech of tortured steel, with the next section also bending out helplessly, barely clinging to the wall studs. Now scared, the few gymnasts nearby scrambled away from the imminent destruction and towards the rear of the room. Growling, Rian hoisted the section that she held overhead, her giant shoulders looking like growing veiny pumpkins, as she then pumped out rep after sexy rep of inhuman overhead presses, her immense musclepower mauling the connections to the point that they too gave up the ghost. A whole row of lockers was now separated from the wall, mangled, looking like a derailed train. The jacked 18 year-old girlfreak flung the entire massive wreck into the locker room entryway with such unimaginable strength that in a godawful shriek and clatter, the ruined pile was deeply and brutally  embedded into the entrance itself. Sealing it completely...the only way in. Or out.

Standing in front of the demolished metal blockade , Rian surveyed the shock and terror on the faces of the male gymnasts, who were now huddled away from her. The 18 year-old girlgod drank in the fear like it was a fine wine, savoring it, relishing it. Wanting more. Her growing arousal made her already obscene young  muscles inflate like steel balloons and even the ultra stretchy leotard couldn't keep up. The shiny material splintered at the collar, giving way to a veiny, striated hellscape of monstrous unsurpassable young brawn.

"Oh yeah..." Rian grinned at the leotard's failure to contain her. The musclefreak grabbed two handfuls of her leotard at the split over her monolithic chest and with a widening devilish grin, slowly ripped the material apart, demonstratively tearing off the top like it was made of Kleenex. The 18  year-old girlhulk again displayed her matchless hulking teenbeef proudly barechested to her defeated competition. She had destroyed them in the competition as easily as the rings. As the lockers behind her. Although powerfully muscled adult males in their own right, they were hopelessly emasculated by the sheer barechsted muscularity of the now topless 18 year-old girlgod with the godbod. Rian's awesome muscles were as large as any of these older males, but on a much smaller younger female frame, they appeared positively gigantic. Not to mention those hulking young muscles were visibly far harder with freakish shreds and more gnarly peaks...and unbeknownst to them, much denser -- to the degree that this 18 year-old girl well outweighed even the largest 25 year-old male there.

Rian went into a melodramatic back double biceps pose to arrogantly show off, which made the assembled gymnasts jaws drop in shock at the incomprehensible assembly of unreal young muscles she conceitedly displayed on that ungodly flared back. Her ass was a spectacle of striations so deeply hewn that it was completely shredded into unearthly gluteal ridges across its entire surface, from notched crack to notched haunches. Rian's ass was so obviously was harder than any of the male gymnasts' chests, they couldn't help but be envious even in their reluctance to acknowledge her absolute superiority.

She faced them again, a topless 18 year-old animal pumped up to inhuman extremes, and glowered "My nipples are waiting, pussies," flexing one monstrous pec after another, her young sex nubs erecting and hardening in anticipation as they flicked, commanding their adulation. A god expecting her due.

(to be cont'd)

[Jeremy Lightning]

I personally would've been the first in line to worship this young Goddess as she deserves, but then again, I guess I do have a special type, which Rian definitely is. But it would be less about arousal and more about the fear that not obeying this magnificent young Goddess would piss her off and she would maim or even kill me.  I might die anyway, but at least I would get the chance to feel those awesome, diamond hard muscles and feel a little of her power before I do. Anyway, I look forward to more, k+!

[JackKovan]

(cont'd)


But when no one responded in sullen resentment, Rian rolled her eyes... then suddenly moved with blinding speed, rushing  forward and seizing the heads of the nearest two gymnasts. With utterly unstoppable strength, the barechested 18 year-old musclefreak slammed their faces into her enormous granite pec slabs, easily knocking both males senseless. Rian roughly rubbed their faces into her naked, unyielding mighty chestbeef, pressing them in so brutally hard that as she flexed her pecs, the striated bulging fibers of her surging chest muscles audibly fractured facial bones and started horrifically rearranging their features...even her sexy 18year-old nipples were so hard, the erect nubs gouged bloody deep furrows into their faces as she hungrily stimulated herself to terrible effect!

"You WILL worship me," Rian glared at the stunned crowd, still brutalizing two heads with just the unreal flexes of her hulking young pecs, causing spurts and spatters of blood, "My power... My strength." She removed them from her monster chest and still gripping their heads, lifted both unconscious gymnasts clear off the ground, effortlessly suspending them overhead (in yet another casual feat of unreal strength) to show the crowd her handiwork. Shocked gasps and cries of pure horror rang out at the ghastly ruins of two butchered faces. Both men were now utterly unrecognizable, their facial features gruesomely grated off by her nipples and pectoral ridges. The sex nubs and pec striations of an 18year-old girl. But an 18 year-old girl so fucking strong, she had done that with just her bared chest muscles!! And naked NIPPLES!!! She was a god, and she wasn't done.

"Worship POWER, " Rian uttered sexily, dangerously. Vein sprawled forearms blowing up into sculpted bowling pins, her immensely strong 18year-old fingers powered into the base of each skull, causing the horrified gymnasts watching to flinch as they heard neck bones shatter audibly in her merciless grasp. Staring hard at the increasingly terrified collection of men, Rian viciously slammed both skulls into her deeply chiseled, muscled midsection. But she didn't stop there. Instead, the 18 year-old musclebeast put slow ruthless pressure on their heads against her steely gridded abdomen...with absolutely hideous, mortifying results: with a sickening wet squelches, their heads simply imploded in twin eruptions of gore. Rian slowly and fiendishly flattened two skulls against her unyielding, supremely muscled young midsection like mere eggshells, the gory contents splattering like mush onto the ground. The 18 year-old girlgod was so strong, she effortlessly made two human heads pop like pimples against the unholy blocks of her granite abs!

Barechested mankilling muscles bulging, Rian made dominating eye contact with everyone in the room, her evil smile widening as they recoiled in terror of the ungodly strength and cruelty of the monster child before them! Releasing now two headless corpses, the sexy 18 year-old monster clasped her hands behind her gorgeous head and crunched down into a truly unearthly ab pose, showing off her matchless muscular murderous midsection that was so impossibly striated, her ridged abdominal bricks looked like she had been forged out of the hardest substance imaginable.

After admiring herself, Rian exploded forward, arms outstretched, to pounce on the next two males. Wrapping up a torso in each hulking young arm, the sheer tremendous force of Rian's monster double tackle was so great, she hurtled the pile of them backwards nearly 20 feet! More gymnasts joined in, causing a massive heap of muscle as they tried to restrain the young murderous girlbeast at the bottom. But just as the the dogpile seemed to settle and the struggle appeared to be over with Rian finally overwhelmed by the sheer number of powerful men atop her....

The dogpile exploded. Male bodies flew through the air as if propelled by bombs detonating but it was simply Rian throwing nearly a thousand pounds of men off each limb like a dog would shake off water. The gorgeous musclefreak was way too strong to be subdued by any number of men! Rising to her feet, a now completely naked 18year-old girlhulk effortlessly suspended two adult males off the ground, one wrapped in each arm, as they struggled mightily to free themselves from her clutches...but the topless godbeast was so beastly strong, she easily held even these two powerful athletes as helpless as infants. The trapped men couldn't believe how hard her huge, peaked, ripped muscles were. Rian's arms were like a granite sculpture, her pumped flesh completely nonpliable and impervious to their desperate blows. Then the jacked 18 year-old girlgod started to coil her arms, and the two captive gymnasts screamed as young bulging muscles jutted outwards, surging unstoppably into their bodies.

"Worship STRENGTH," Rian intoned nastily as she viciously crushed their ribcages like straw, their entire torsos collapsing into unsurvivable inches between her wrist and deltoid, as her huge, veiny forearms and giant peaked biceps afforded no space whatsoever. By the time she had fully coiled her insanely jacked arms, the 18 year-old's horrific double biceps pose had not only largely scissored both men in half but emptied them like tubes of toothpaste, their ruptured organs forced through mouth and anus in twin fountains of steaming bloody gore. Grinning, Rian fully flexed her freak peaks to their full size, and with wet plops, the ghastly scissors was completed -- four gruesome halves of men lay strewn at her feet as she proudly displayed the pose of strength that itself had caused such unspeakable carnage -- an utterly freaky, monstrous and unmatchable double-biceps pose of ultimate and unending young dominance. Many vomited at the gory brutality, and hideous tyranny this nude muscular monster effortlessly inflicted.

Her 18 year-old biceps flexed to ungodly peaks of pure power, "Worship ME" Rian roared, and an entire roomful of strong men, terrified and quaking in fear, jumped up to frantically service the matchless godbod of this almighty 18 year-old, her fully bared young physique an anthem to muscularity beyond perfection. In unbridled terror, they humbly licked every inch of her impossible muscles and suckled her erect nipples and serviced her shockingly huge young clit in absolute subservience to Rian, an utterly brutal, unstoppable sexy 18 year-old super musclegod.

(Concluded)


Epilogue:

By the time she was done, there wasn't even a building standing. It wasn't because a gorgeous muscular godbeast had humped the supporting pillars with such lusty vigor pleasuring herself that her jacked junk crushed concrete like gypsum and shredded rebar like paper straws. No, apparently the hole in the roof had caused the entire structure to be compromised, and it had fallen onto itself, absolutely obliterating the men's locker room and the unfortunate male gymnasts inside holding a late meeting. That there wasn't a single intact body in the carnage was somewhat unexpected; the coroner's office privately discussed the opinion that it was more like a fragmentation explosive had gone off than a structural flattering. Surely it couldn't have been a gray-eyed 18 year-old musclebeast literally fucking every man to pieces because she well was beyond anything human, with muscles far too strong and a sex too horny for anyone or anything to withstand.

No, it wasn't that.

[Jeremy Lightning]

Hmm, I wonder if she was always planning on killing these guys, or if she made that decision when they didn't immediately start worshiping her? Would she have kept alive someone like me, who would've jumped at the chance to worship her body and power immediately upon being commanded? Or would she have killed me anyway, because that's who she is? I just wonder about that. Does she keep slaves, or are men beneath her and therefore she kills anyone she meets. I guess we may never know if this is truly the end. Still, it was fun to read. k+!

[JackKovan]

Let me quote Reap's reply when I asked him about the morals of his characters a while back.

"None of them have a moral compass. Because none of them are really fleshed out --even in my own head-- to be actual characters that could have such complexity. These are just sketches, scenes of description that are inhabited by the role of a supremely dominant antihero. The only exception might be Mercy, who I might have sufficiently mapped out to be, in my estimate, a real character in an actual story."

"Antiheroes have always been fascinating to me, because they're villains that aren't the antagonist, but protagonists oblivious or unburdened by a superego. Compelling because it's diametrically opposite of how I try to live or what I would aspire to. Maybe it's an outlet for the darkness. Who knows. "

This was before Rian, but I think it applies. By the way, that second paragraph was another conversation posted elsewhere about the antihero, but it seem to fit.

[ffejl]

First, great story and great character! Quite different than Mercy or Esther, yet every inch as sexy and devastating.

Quite surprised to hear Reap doesn't consider Esther fully 'mapped out' -- she sure is in my head! Hands down my favorite fictional character in the whole genre.

Please pass along my thanks and appreciation to the Reaper!

[JackKovan]

@ffejl, a "verbatim reply" from Reap:
JK

"Thanks for the kind words and support!

Even though Esther is probably my signature character, and the one I've most written about, the Monster AS WRITTEN is not deep -- straight ahead, sheer brutal dominance. Oh, there's hints of something more to her, but I've left it up to the reader to color in the details. If you've done that, I salute your imagination and am gratified you've made her yours. (But actually don't tell her she's yours, or Es would literally rip out your spleen and shove it up your... well, you know... just to prove she belongs to no one).

Let me reiterate to anyone reading that I don't do any commissions. Writing this sort of thing takes too long and gets too stressful, even with an open deadline. Nonetheless, I'm flattered by the past offers.

By the way, I'm considering posting my past stuff on my DA page. But I'm not sure if anyone would be interested..?

Best wishes,
Reap"

[Jeremy Lightning]

I, for one, would be interested.

[egad00]

I too would be highly interested in seeing Reaper post his past works on DA or wherever else he choses to share.  I would have to believe there would be quite an audience for that.

Also please pass him my thanks for this Rain story that you've shared.

[seldom]

I echo the interest.

[Prophaniti]

agree, would love to see more