Changing Times

[Flymagic]

Will there be an update ? Coz I want to see what happens with his arrogant little sister

[Flymagic]

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[mecenas1984]

please!!! when will you finish this story!...

[Jaguar]

Wonderofworld, please come back.  Damien deserves to have his story told!

You are going great!

[Jaguar]

One thing I liked about Wonderofworld's story is the he started at age 14.  Yes, that means leaving sex totally out of it (until the characters are 18+), but starting at 14 means starting when a person is still vulnerable and developing.

It is really tough making a FMG coming of age story starting at age 18.

[bullen77]

Great story! Altough it would be nice if our small hero met a nice girl 😀

[jeffbeans]

This is a fantastic story, please continue!

[Danny pawn]

 Great story, really hoping to see it continue!

[Wonderofworld]

Hey guys, I have been too busy lately for stories but now looking to set aside some time each week for story making. Looking to carry this one on, anyone have any ideas they would like to see in the next chapter?

[tapion]

Yeah! I would like to see some hard workouts. Especially biceps. And pecs would be cool. He watched his sister doing hard workouts

[blackhawkdown]

I'm glad you're choosing to continue this. I need to go back and reread this to refresh my memory

[ope009]

I really love this story! Glad you're continuing this.

[Danny pawn]

Really hope you continue with the mother and she continues to get super thick like a massive offseason bodybuilder. She should show off her strength next to some guy who's extremely skinny and frail in front of her son and other!

[Guit03]

 

[Jaguar]

Hi Wonderofworld, I'm so glad you're going to be able to find time to add to this story.

This is one of my top 3 favorite stories on the past 5 years!

You asked for suggestions.  But I don't like to influence an author who is doing such an outstandingly wonderful job.  But anyways, here are some thoughts that you might want to consider, if they fit in with what you have planned.

1. I'm thinking that female enhancement includes not just physical training, but mental training too.  Maybe at first it is just a difference in test results at school.  Maybe harder tests for girls.  Maybe separate classes.

Boys should not be able to do girls' homework.

(Maybe boys start to flunk and girls start to skip grades.  But in this version of the story, everything seems to happen in one or two years, but if you do a more spread out version in future, which you should do, you could have that.)

2. As a side effect of female enhancement, perhaps girls should be able to figure out video games so fast, that with a few weeks practice they can routinely defeat the boys at them, defeat the boys at the video games the boys spend all their free time month-after-month year-after-year playing.  Higher intelligence, and faster reaction times?  (Better hearing and vision???)

3. I'd like to see a few more descriptions of bodies and clothes.  I'm big on detailed descriptions, the details make it real.  You don't need to go overboard, but it might be more impressive to describe how built and beautiful one of the weaker uglier girls is than the most athletic and beautiful.

4. You have comparisons with the sister who is 3 years younger, which is excellent.  You could also have comparisons with girls at school who were one or two years younger.


5.  Take your time.  "The story is the journey, and when the journey is over, we will all which it was longer."  Try to think of more anecdotes you can insert that illustrate ALL aspects of the growing difference between the boys and girls.

Of course, authoring a longer story means a lot more effort by the author.  Just know that each and everyone one of us readers really really appreciates the work you do on this and the time it takes.  (We readers greatly appreciate the work and the time of ALL the authors here!)

You're doing an excellent job.  Please write what you are driven to write, and what the characters drive you to write about them.  You are the author; you are the god of the world you create.

This is a really wonderful universe you've created, Wonderofworld.  You could, if you want, create different versions of this story.  Different households, different schools (elementary, junior high, high school, college), maybe even different industries.

In another version, maybe give more details of the transition phase, where girls and women are slowly catching up to men over two years or so, the exciting time when neither men nor women know for sure what is next, when men still think they have a chance, and women are not yet confident that they'll defeat men (although girls will have the benefit of knowing what training is in store for them). 

To me the transition phase is the most interesting, because the boys and men still don't know what is coming, they still try, they haven't given up.  Once the plot is firmly past the transition phase it quickly gets to domination, and then where do you go from there?  Maybe writing a story of women scientists, soldiers and captains of industry, where the men stay home and clean house?

To do everything I've suggested you'd probably have to quit you day job.  LOL.  But anyways, take a look, consider doing some of it, and remember you are the author so you are the boss.

Great stuff!!!  Keep writing !!!!

[Jaguar]

I really do love this story!