Little Sister Is A Big Bully

[semibull]

It's called a dream. The whole story was a dream.

I realize that... And that's a giant bummer. Feels super dissapointing. Couldn't we have had a Lauren Harem? Or an actual bad end for our protag? (Didn't want that, but would have felt more satisfying and complete) This feels like a cop out...

[semibull]

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[Jeremy Lightning]

Yeah, in some ways, I almost guessed that this whole thing was a dream, Kylie was doing too many things far too quickly for a human being, building muscles and strength at such an accelerated pace, turning women straight women lesbians without any noticeable effort, her beating Superman. While fantastical things have happened in your stories before, this has been out of the ordinary in several ways. Not that I am disappointed, I had a fun journey along the way, great description of muscle and strength, as always. I appreciate you sticking it out, nearly 80 chapters of mostly high quality writing. I congratulate you on that. k+!

[Saxony Red Devil]

Y'know what, i can appreciate and understand your rationale behind this. Questionable age aside, it's still a fantastic story and took us all for a ride. Big ups man, be proud of the way it all panned out.

[Reverie]

Twilight Zone and Otter limits rolled into one.. Nice end..

[giantgirl7foot2]

Well this story was surely an emotional rollercoaster. Would have definitely enjoyed reading more of Kylie on her strongest, but the ending was just perfect, especially after those last few over the top chapters.

Once you find some well-deserved rest, I'm greatly looking forward to any new stories you might write!

 

[saldin]

I would've liked the story to continue a bit more, but I can't fault grbaclig to quit while one's ahead. Great story, interesting characters, nicely paced, amazing vocabulary, and in the end, there's still a chance for Rick to change his future. It's been a rollercoaster and I thank you for the great ride!

   

[caino]

you're a genius. stop. thank you for all of this!!!!!

[weaponzero]

The "It was all a dream" ending may seem like a cop out to some, but when you look at how absolutely over the top the story got as it progressed (even when compared to the author's other works), it was the most logical ending.  Overall, good work. And good way to end it.

[shamus0013]

The "It was all a dream" ending may seem like a cop out to some, but when you look at how absolutely over the top the story got as it progressed (even when compared to the author's other works), it was the most logical ending.  Overall, good work. And good way to end it.

Seconded. I honestly got a wry smile reading the end of the story. Say what you will, grbaclig kept me hanging on until the end. Nicely done!

[Lupus753]

Not a fan of the ending, mostly because it essentially undoes Kyrie's biggest loss. It feels like the author couldn't bear to see her actually lose.

[caino]

in my opinion: it was a dream of Rick, so in his mind it was sexy to imagine his little sister so muscular and powerful, he doesn't know it, but it is a deep desire of him!!!

[weaponzero]

 

Not a fan of the ending, mostly because it essentially undoes Kyrie's biggest loss. It feels like the author couldn't bear to see her actually lose.

Disagree.  It kind of felt like the author wanted to end the story a long time ago so they could move on to other ideas.  But readers kept demanding more.  If you look back over the course of the story, every single turn the story took from roughly its halfway point on was merely giving the outspoken majority of readers exactly what they were asking for.  No more, no less.  If anything he should have focused less on giving us what we wanted and more on following through with whatever his original plan was, even if it meant ending the story much sooner than it did

[nebulasparks]

in my opinion: it was a dream of Rick, so in his mind it was sexy to imagine his little sister so muscular and powerful, he doesn't know it, but it is a deep desire of him!!!

I think you need professional help mate.

[caino]

in my opinion: it was a dream of Rick, so in his mind it was sexy to imagine his little sister so muscular and powerful, he doesn't know it, but it is a deep desire of him!!!

I think you need professional help mate.

maybe 

[landorsimmons]

The amount of people who lack the basic reading comprehension to grasp the ending of this story is hilarious, but it also makes me feel bad for grbaclig that no one seems to get it. It's not literally a dream. It's a cyclical time loop. The point is that it's an endless "nightmare" where Kylie is forever torturing Rick with her superiority. It also implies that Kylie has some God-like power where not even time can defeat her. The whole point of the story is, and always has been, Kylie's infinite superiority, so this is the only logical conclusion without turning into a ridiculous never-ending giantess story where Kylie eventually consumes the universe.