Author: [bertmacklinsbrother = BMB] My Wife Jennifer

[phil123]

Very good story ! Want to read what happens to Amy (and the life change of Brian).
Wonderful. Please write more.

[phil123]

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[bertmacklinsbrother]

Thanks everyone for the great responses!  As busy as the summer is, I'm still happy to be able to find time to make additions to the story.  The comments mean a lot!

[lizarking]

ya I hope you take my advice. the growth part of this story is what makes it so unique and exciting and that you got away from that to have people talking for whole chapters while we're missing lots of the growth process and sex that goes with it makes no sense to me. it's your story but that's my opinion. this had the potential to be the best fmg story ever.

[lizarking]

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[hairylover321]

Hey, lizarking, I tried to respond to your PM but your inbox was full. Let me know when you make room and I'll try again.

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[fardomonkey]

ya I hope you take my advice. the growth part of this story is what makes it so unique and exciting and that you got away from that to have people talking for whole chapters while we're missing lots of the growth process and sex that goes with it makes no sense to me. it's your story but that's my opinion. this had the potential to be the best fmg story ever.

How about giving the dude creative freedom to take the story where he wants?

I'm all for character development and depth.  Those qualities are far and few between in this genre.

[lizarking]

ya I hope you take my advice. the growth part of this story is what makes it so unique and exciting and that you got away from that to have people talking for whole chapters while we're missing lots of the growth process and sex that goes with it makes no sense to me. it's your story but that's my opinion. this had the potential to be the best fmg story ever.

How about giving the dude creative freedom to take the story where he wants?

I'm all for character development and depth.  Those qualities are far and few between in this genre.

just giving my opinion.  he doesn't have to listen to anything I say.

[edinaus]

Hey,

Love the story. I''ve actually created a pdf version including images showing her growth similar to how I did the Jill Rhodes story a while back.

Would you be happy if I posted it? Completely up to you, if not ill keep it to myself.

I've kept most of the story there but removed some of the longer talking parts. I'm happy to send through to you first.

[lizarking]

Hey,

Love the story. I''ve actually created a pdf version including images showing her growth similar to how I did the Jill Rhodes story a while back.

Would you be happy if I posted it? Completely up to you, if not ill keep it to myself.

I've kept most of the story there but removed some of the longer talking parts. I'm happy to send through to you first.

post it!

[bertmacklinsbrother]

Hey,

Love the story. I''ve actually created a pdf version including images showing her growth similar to how I did the Jill Rhodes story a while back.

Would you be happy if I posted it? Completely up to you, if not ill keep it to myself.

I've kept most of the story there but removed some of the longer talking parts. I'm happy to send through to you first.

Wow, that sounds awesome.  Please, by all means, feel free to post it   And thanks for taking enough interest in the story to do that!

[phil123]

Think Jennifer just grows during the summer.

And Amy will also grow huge and changes the life of Brian.

Bert - we will wait .   pls go on 

[hairylover321]

The story hasn't ended folks. Just be patient and bert will come through.

Right on Brand. We can't forget that we all have lives outside of this forum. Even the writers of our favorite stories. I know the next chapter will be epic.

[bertmacklinsbrother]

Hey everyone.  First off, thank you for bumping the thread and keeping it alive; I'm still writing the story regardless, but it definitely helps to see readers ready for more!

Second, do not worry, the story has not "ended" and I'm still very much working on it.  BUT the summer has been, for lack of a better word, completely insane.  Which, I'm pretty sure I predicted anyways back in June.  Summers are always exceptionally busy between weddings, cabin weekends, vacations, and just generally using every ounce of free time to enjoy the outdoors and sunshine before it disappears beneath the recesses of a brutal winter.

On top of that, I've been starting a new role at my job as well as moving into a new home.  Both of those things are equally exciting and a fuck ton of work.

With all that being said, I have still been writing when I can.  Often in short spurts before work or before bed.  But the problem with that is I'm my own worst enemy and tend to be very critical of my writing when I know I only have a short amount of time to do it.  So I tend to use that time to perfect already written paragraphs before I'm ready to move onto the next one. 

All in all, I'm not trying to make excuses or make empty promises; I'm just trying to say (1) THANK YOU for continuing to show interest my kinky little story and (2) Sometimes real life doesn't give you a moment to breathe.

Thanks for being amazing and for understanding   Cheers everyone and I hope to have a real update soon!

[rigger30]

Why not tether/hotspot your phone and connect to the internet that way? Most modern phones have the option.

The problem is getting my story from my flash drive to my phone. Can't very well email it to myself without Internet. My work computer doesn't allow any memory devices to be used on it for security purposes...

No I mean, you can use the internet access on your phone and connect to it that way.

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Ah yes I see what you mean. I'll give that a shot tonight!

Also before you try to tether make sure your cell phone plan can cover that. Some phone companies tend to hit users who don't have a plan with a fine.
A good way around that is to check for tethering apps that handle the data without making it look like your using your phone as a modem.

Yep. AT&T rape you for tethering.  I agree  with  the  comments  that say don't  worry  about  the  guys putting  pressure  on  you ,  they can  write  their  own  damn stories 

[jcboyd]

Bert - Post when it's easy for you - all y'all can wait....