Author: [MUSCLEBOUND] Vampire 1-2-3

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Vampire
by MUSCLEBOUND


A cold wind was blowing off the East River adding to the general eeriness of
the bleak moonless night. A woman was unfortunate enough to be caught by two
skinny and thoughly ugly young men out looking for a woman they could molest.
The remoteness of the warehouses prevented the woman's screams from alerting
her plight to anyone who could help.

One of the men was pulling down his trousers while the other restrained the
terrified woman when the words "Leave her alone" echoed from the river.
Turning around both men spied a beautiful female face looking at them from the
river. The face was absolutely beautiful with deep brown eyes and jet black
long hair. Almost at once the head started to move closer to the shore and
soon started to rise above the waters of the East River.

Both men were shocked as immense muscle clad shoulders as wide as a car rose
out of the water. This woman processed the largest muscles the males had ever
witnessed on a human being. Huge power packed shoulders quivered and grew ever
taller, monstrous breasts created a pressure bulge on the surface of the water
which then exploded with spray as they burst out of the river. Water droplets
glistened on the mighty bulging torso of the woman as she walked slowly to
higher ground. Muscles pulsed and flexed with power as the female rose still
higher and higher. Now 6 foot 8 inches high and still growing the woman's
heavy breathing seemed to suck the very air out of the puny male's lungs.
Massive arms the size of tree trunks rippled with incredible power. The ground
shook as the huge female reared up to her full height of 9 feet and her bone
crushing 800 pound weight seemed to rattle the whole city.

The puny males took a step backwards as the behemoth of female muscularity
shook the ground as she pressed into a steel handrail. The steel buckled and
groaned as it gave way to incredible power and with a report of cannon fire
snapped as its tensile strength failed against such overwhelming muscle power.

Completely entranced the three much smaller humans watched as the musclebound
female opened her mouth to reveal two razor sharp fangs; the monster was a
giant vampire!

The female had come to feed on the succulent blood of the three humans and
saliva dripped off the mighty teeth of the vampire. With an almighty bellow
the vampire flexed her inhuman torso and two huge mountains of bicep muscle
erupted to an impossible size. At least 40 inches of bicep power pumped the
night air as the two males took off as fast as their legs would carry them.
The monster vampire took one almighty leap into the air and dropped with an
explosive thud in front of them blasting them to the ground in a shower of
smashed concrete. Sinking her sharp fingernails into the back of a puny male
the female monster tightened her grip snapping ribs as she encircled the poor
man's spine with her mighty hand.

Carrying the screaming male as if he was a rag doll the vampire walked over to
the other male and with one hand punched through his torso shattering the rip
cage and lifting him to her mouth. Long sharp fangs pieced his soft neck to
the horror of the rag doll male in her other hand. Sweet sucking sounds filled
the immediate area as the giant drained the life blood out of the powerless
male. Throwing the consumed carcass on the ground the Queen Vampire licked the
dripping blood off her lips before plunging into her next meal.

Tearing apart the mortal's neck the monster vampire hungrily consumed the
sweet nectar spraying it over a wide area. The defeated pathetic remains
dropped as in worshipping the all powerful female as she played with the blood
dripping down her vast breasts.

The towering mountain of muscle smiled as she felt the light touch of the
female running her hand over her powerful abdominals. Looking down the vampire
saw the excited face of the human female, sexual arousal showed prominently in
her adoring look.

Speaking sensually the female said "Give me power and strength, mighty Queen".

The vampire looked down and without speaking lifted the smaller human female
and proceeded to kiss her in a most passionate way. Preceding to the neck the
razor sharp teeth penetrated the skin sucking out the female's blood and
replacing it with her own much more potent nectar.

Suddenly a voice was heard "Get back you monster, leave that poor woman
alone!"

The Queen Vampire looked up into the barrel of a pistol aimed at her by a
security guard. Licking her lips the vampire could only see another meal and
started walking towards the tensed guard.

The male ordered "Stop or I will fire".

The muscle monster ignored the insignificant male's command and continued to
walk towards him. A flash of light appeared, to be followed seconds later by a
loud bang and the "thuck" of a useless bullet bouncing off the vampire's
impenetrable skin. The trembling guard fired two more bullets and watched
helplessly as they flattened against her armour plated chest.

Babbling like a demented fool the guard realised that his weaponry was as much
use as a feather and he was helpless against this being of a superior enhanced
female sex.

The vampire lifted him with one hand and turned to pick up her sired female
and then proceed to walk down the road with a human under each arm, shaking
the road with every step.

Walking to a substantial brick building the vampire struck the wall with her
foot blasting an entrance in a cloud of dust and smashed brickwork. Smiling at
the destruction her super powered muscles could achieve the giant female
pushed through the hole crushing bricks to powder with impunity. Once in the
building the vampire slammed her bare foot into the concrete floor cracking
the material and shaking the whole block. Dust from the fragile building
dropped on the female as her pounding weakened the structural integrity of the
building. The cracks in the concrete grew larger and soon collapsed and the
vampire dropped down into a black abyss.

Powerful legs supporting incredible weight slammed into the trackwork of the
main subway into Metro City. Walking away from the rubble the vampire
proceeded down the tunnel until she came to a section in the wall of the
tunnel. Digging her fingers into cracks the vampire lifted out a ten ton
section of concrete like it was paper and walked in through the entrance.
Turning the superior female pulled the concrete back into place to hide the
entrance.

Walking into a disused subway tunnel the security guard observes that the
monster has transformed the tunnel into her lair and is complete with
furnishings and lighting. The tunnel has also been secured with giant concrete
blocks cut from the walls outside her lair with only her finger nails and was
used to block the humans from getting into her world.

The Queen Vampire gently laid her female guest onto a very large bed and
watched intently as the girl started to transform. Fingering her moistening
pussy the sexily excited giant uttered "Grow baby, get big and powerful, and
get strong for me".

The guard has free rein of her world as he cannot escape. Spying a large steel
pike the male picks up the weapon and charges the vampire from behind. The
impact brings a smile to her face as her tough hide causes the steel spike to
bounce off and knock the puny male off his feet.

Babbling uncontrollably the male screams "You fucking bitch, what you going to
do to me?"

Smiling the vampire says "Why my yummy little man you are food".

The female starts to grow and her clothing rips as her muscles enlarge and
strengthen. Thick slabs of huge muscle tear apart her dress as her body grows
to a monstrous size. Big powerful shoulders widen to fill the entire bed, her
arms thicken to huge trunks of

power packed biceps and triceps. Big solid mounds tear open her blouse as her
breasts expand to an enormous size.

The female vampires have over 1000 times the muscle fibres compared to humans
producing giant muscular mass and each fibre is thousands of times stronger
resulting strength over one million times greater than humans.

The inferior male cannot believe his eyes as each movement of the giant's
body, no matter how insignificant causes the muscles to flex, ripple and
pulse. A single curl of the arm flexes a bicep so large that it is equal in
diameter to his waist. The vast shoulder girth is over twice the width of the
male's puny frame and capped with extraordinary powerful muscles. The
vampire's body is much taller and wider than the standard door frame and to
enter a building she simply bursts through the wall as no material including
thick reinforced concrete is strong enough to stop her.

The big vampire inserts the security guard's gun into her wet pussy and pulls
the trigger to fire the remaining ammunition. Screams of pleasure echo around
the room as the impotent bullets tickle her indestructible flesh as their
flight path is stopped and their structure flattened. Reaching orgasm the
vampire's powerful pussy muscles contract and a loud "Scrunch" is heard as the
gun is crushed to mangled scrap.

Still on a sexual high the vampire desired the smell and taste of blood from a
crushed body and decided to kill the human now instead of waiting for a later
treat.

continued

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Backing the terrified male into a corner the female scooped the little man up
and sank her teeth into his neck. Her body wracked with pleasure the vampire
sucked the blood

out of the human savouring every last drop as it swirled around her mouth and
ran down her throat. The vampire's potent juices flowed out of cavities in her
fangs and replaced the blood in his body. The juices do not turn males into
vampires; instead they allow the Queen to read and control the mind of the
human and allow the puncture wounds in the neck to heal quickly to avoid
detection. As the vampire can control the male's thought process it also
allows him to continue to feel fear and pain, this is to allow the female much
enhanced pleasure as she dominates and eventually destroys him.

Looking down at the shaking weakling the vampire bellowed "Lay on the bed, you
puny little man. I am going to rape you".

The male with fear in his eyes obeys without question and is straddled by the
huge vampire who is careful not to crush his insignificant little body under
her enormous weight.

Tearing off his uniform like it was made from paper the vampire commands a
stiff cock and in seconds a reasonable penis stands erect. Lowering her
dripping pussy the monster engulfs his proud manhood. Bones crack in his
unfortunate body as the sexual heat rises in the vampire causing her to pound
heavily upon him. Tendons stretch and tear as her mighty grip pulls the arms
from his sockets. Unleashing more strength the vampire breaks bones all over
his body. In complete sexual abandonment the female sinks her fingers into his
chest breaking open the rib cage to the hysterical screams of the mortal.
Snapping off useless pieces of rib the vampire rips the heart out

of the smashed ribcage as she approaches orgasm. Lifting the defunct organ the
giant female squashes the heart spraying out the blood and greedily swallowing
what hits her mouth. Spraying blood splatters all over her body dripping down
her sweet glistening muscles, running down her cheeks and over her big boobs.
Screaming in orgasmic pleasure, mighty cunt muscles clamp tightly together
crushing the male's penis out of existence. Lifting her shapely buttocks the
vampire tears the penis off the male's dying body.

Just as the female relaxed her powerful muscles to release the pathetic
crushed remains of the male's potency a voice is heard from behind her
"Mistress, I am sorry I did not know you had returned. Please forgive me".

A small frail man appears in her line of vision and the vampire reads his
thoughts which range from extreme fear that he has angered her to revulsion at
the sight of the destroyed body of the male. Suggestively licking the tasty
blood off her hands, the vampire smiles at the thought of killing this animal
for displeasing her. and the fact that she can cause so much fear in an
inferior life form.

Commanding, she says "Sponge bath my body little man and when you are finished
my little baby girl is growing, she needs food, and you must sacrifice
yourself for the future of the dominant female sex".

Standing up the huge vampire towers over the weak little man who only rises to
a height of bottom of her awesome breasts and by shoulder width less than half
her mighty body.

The dominant female sits in the vast pool which the male slave fills with
boiling hot water which causes yelps of pain as he dips the sponge into the
water. Cascading water runs off her immense sexy muscles which glisten with
water droplets.

Looking at male's puny body the muscle goddess says "I love being so powerful
and strong. Look at what I can do little man".

Picking up a block of titanium steel the vampire sinks her fangs into the
steel to sharpen them without any resistance. Taking a bite the superior
female crushes the ultra hard steel like candy which she spits at the male
slave puncturing his abdomen

with a roar of laughter. Lifting the little man up by his torso the vampire
carries him over to her awakening playmate who greedily eyes off her intended
meal.

The Queen vampire says "Here lover I have a present for you". Appling pressure
the Queen proceeds to crush the male ribcage producing erotic sounds of
cracking bone and squishing organs. Blood burst forth which the sired vampire
greedily swallows. Tearing the body apart both females rampage through the
internal organs tearing open anything containing blood and hungrily licking
the sprayed blood off each other's bodies.

While the females engage in intense sexual activity the other male slaves
clean up the remains of the slain 'inferiors. Both vampires enjoy displaying
their awesome bodies, unbelievable sexual endurance and strength to the
inferiors. The slightest movement of their bodies flexed and quivered their
immensely powerful and dense muscles.

After hours of intense lovemaking the giant females disentangled their
powerful bodies and for the first time started to chat.

The Queen introduced herself "My name is Diana and I come from another world.
I am an immortal and indestructible vampire. Unlike the weak vampire specimens
found on this world I am unaffected by daylight and nothing can penetrate my
skin, especially silly wooden stakes, bombs or bullets and not holy water or
crosses. You are as strong and invulnerable as me and the first in a race of
super powered females which will conquer and enslave the 'inferiors' or male
population of this planet".

The sired vampire spoke up "I am Nikki and I cannot thank you enough for
making me so powerful. I can't believe my body; it's so strong and huge. I
feel power surging through my body. This steel you have to sharpen your teeth
is so soft in my hands, it feels like putty".

Diana thought about Nikki's growing body and strength and said "Are you hungry
it must time for you to feed again?"

Nikki answered "I do feel hungry and I know just the person I want to feed on.
My best friend Deanna gets belted up by her father; sorry I should say
'inferior'. I want to give her power".

Smiling Diana responded "Lead on, I want to see you enjoy yourself and I will
destroy the inferior'.

Just after sunrise the front door started to creak and to the sound of wood
splitting two blood engorged stiff nipples penetrated its inadequate
structure. Almost straight away the door bulged inwards and cracked as two
massive breasts pushed their way through the broken timber. The sounds of
cracking and rending brickwork are heard as the wall collapsed as Nikki pushed
her giant body through the tiny door frame. Floor boards broke under the
vampire's extreme body weight. Smashing and shaking the house with every step
Nikki was showered in plaster dust the ceiling cracked as the wooden house
frames broke and dislodged under the severe shaking they received.

Screaming like a madman Ronald Brown grabbed his Magnum pistol and raced into
the hallway to be greeted by the terrifying sight of a giant musclebound woman
with Nikki's Carter's face.

Unable to comprehend what was happening the 'inferior' fired his high powered
pistol at Nikki's face and body only to see the bullets harmlessly deflect
away. Just then the brick fireplace exploded in a blast of flying bricks as
Diana smashed through the broken rubble of the weak structure crushing it to
dust.

Deanna raced out of her bedroom her faced scarred with bruises she had
accumulated from regular beatings.

Open mouthed Deanna stared as Nikki smiled showing her long sharp fangs
dipping with man destroying vampire nectar.

Speaking, Nikki said "Deanna my friend, I have come for you, look at me, see
how powerful I have become. Join me in a new world".

Deanna raced towards Nikki and tried to embrace her but she was three feet
shorter than Nikki and her arms could not embrace Nikki's mighty torso.

Lifting her friend into the air the massive vampire sank her mighty fangs into
Deanna's neck and started to suck the rich blood into her mouth.

Ronald screamed "You're not taking my daughter you fucking monster!" and fired
his gun into Deanna's back.

Deanna slumped but it was already too late, powerful vampire juice was already
flowing out of Nikki's fangs and rapidly flowing through Deanna consuming her
old body and replacing it with a much more powerful one.

Ronald yelped with pain as Diana sank her sharp teeth into his neck and then
felt the blood being sucked out of his body. Diana had walked up behind the
inferior and had bent down to be level with his tiny body. Slurping Ronald's
life force out of his body Diana replaced it with her own juices making Ronald
her own little toy.

Diana yelled out "Look at the inferior, he looks like a silly toy soldier".

Ronald no longer in control of his of his will was marching up and down while
Nikki cradled Deanna in her massive arms.

Diana flexed her massive upper body and huge power packed muscles exploded in
size while she screamed a primal bellow which collapsed the remains of the
house around her. Ronald marched his absurd march outside to the amusement of
the pair of giant vampires.

Nikki noticed the red Ferrari sitting in the driveway, Ronald's pride and joy.
Knowing that the destruction of the car would destroy the inferior's soul
Nikki gestured Diana to destroy the car.

The giant vampire view the car with contempt, it was so fragile, so easily
mangled by her powerful muscles. Speaking with scorn Diana said "Is this
pathetic metal thing really used by the inferiors to move about. I could run
faster and with more endurance than this machine".

Diana lifted the front wheels off the ground with one finger and spat "This
metal thing is so light, I must look inside to see my makes it go".

Diana used some muscle power when releasing the vehicle and the car slammed
back down on the driveway breaking the windscreen, blowing the front tyres and
bending the chassis.

Faking a shocked look Diana purred "My I do not know my own strength. Poor
little machine. I must hug it to make it better".

By now screams were heard from shocked people coming out to see what the
commotion is all about. The two naked giants have severely frightened the
people. Several men have produced rifles and hand guns and are firing at the
two monstrous women. Both women ignore the powerless bullets bouncing off
their thick skins, Nikki tends to the development of her friend and Diana once
again picks up the front of the car and to the sound of creaking and tearing
metal proceeds to hug the front of the car reducing it to mangled steel.

While Diana is having fun with the car Nikki is starting to feel hungry again
and walks through the fence smashing it to pieces to stand alongside a
two-storey brick house. Punching the wall with her fist the vampire reduces
the structure to a pile of broken bricks and twisted steel frames. Walking
through the wreckage Nikki drags the dying body of a male up to her dripping
fangs and tears open his neck. Horrified bystanders watch as the male turns
grey as the life blood is sucked into the monster's mouth. Throwing the
consumed carcass on the ground Nikki sees a group of humans and with a mighty
jump lands amongst them smashing bone and body. Rearing up from the crushed
and broken humans Nikki tears open the ribcage of one unfortunate male and
tears out his heart to feast on the blood. Screaming the humans flee in all
directions.

Diana tears open the bent remains of the car and pulls out the V-8 engine
which she then proceeds to crush between her hands. The engine block creaks
under tremendous power and breaks forcing the cylinder head to fly off
followed by the pistons which are ejected as the block is reduced to rubble.
Throwing the defeated remains of the engine on the driveway Diana smiles as
she notices the anguished face of Ronald as he is forced to watch the
destruction of his pride and joy. The big female folds the chassis of the car
like paper and proceeds to roll it into ball as stricken metal protests with
shrieks and groans. Soon all that is left is a ball of twisted steel.

At this time Deanna has completely transformed into a powerful vampire and is
flexing her ungodly muscles. The girl can feel the power surging through her
body as she scans the arriving SWAT team and TV news crew for an opening meal.
Striding forward her ultra-powerful leg muscles are transmitting their power
to the street which sees the road crack under her feet and the pounding is
shaking the buildings and rocking the cars.

Quickly before the TV crew can react Deanna sinks her fangs into the neck of a
beautiful female reporter sucking out her blood and replacing it with her own
juices. Turning the vampire smiles at the shaking camera man, showing him the
blood dripping off her teeth and plunges into his neck. While Deanna is
feeding on the camera man turning his body grey, she can feel something
tickling her back as high-velocity armour piecing bullets bounce off her skin.
No success is gained when the police squad change to explosive head bullets
which prove to be just as useless.

Deanna picks up the TV car and crushes it to scrap above her head and then
flings it into the SWAT team scattering their broken bodies in all directions.

Tearing open the body of a police officer Deanna flings the heart to Nikki who
quickly squeezes the blood out, lapping up the rich nectar in front of a
horrified crowd of police.

Systematically the three monstrous vampires attacked and defeated over one
hundred police officers; the survivors were herded into a group awaiting the
transformation of Trista, the former TV reporter. Burning police cars and
wrecked houses was all that was left of the neighbourhood. The surviving
civilians were evacuated and the first army units arrived to dig in and it was
hoped destroy the enemy.

The females were in a playful mood and after Trista feed on four of the police
officers the remaining police were slaughtered by Diana, Nikki and Deanna for
the sheer fun it. Sexually excited the three giants engage in love making as
Ronald is forced to watch his daughter now elevated to a life form far above
himself turn lesbian. Males are now food, slaves and objects to be raped and
destroyed no longer their equals.

To be continued

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VAMPIRE 2
By Musclebound

Anxiously the army officers using powerful binoculars scanned for movement
amid the wrecked street. A house collapsed into debris as an immense figure
burst through the flimsy brickwork. The General gulped the figure was huge,
far larger than the largest male bodybuilder on mega doses of steroids.
Titanic muscles pulsed and flexed as the giant female strode towards them, the
ground shook and the guns and tanks rocked with every step.

The General ordered fire and every gun belched flame and smoke, the blast
pressure took the breath away from the soldiers as round after round was
fired. Shell after shell exploded harmlessly against the monstrous black
headed female.

Walking to the nearest tank Diana lifted the sixty ton armoured fighting
vehicle above her head and threw it at the line of field guns skittling them
like ninepins. Lifting another tank the frightened soldiers could hear the
shrieking of buckling metal as the vampire crushed the tank into a blood
dripping ball. Putting the crushed ball in her mouth the massive vampire bit
into the steel with her giant fangs, sucking out the blood of the dead crew.

As the horrified soldiers watched the sickening show the other vampires fell
upon them crushing and smashing frail bodies with huge powerful muscles,
tearing flesh and draining the sweet life juice.

As quickly as they came the vampires disappeared taking with them the
remaining soldiers. The prisoners were taken back to the underground lair and
chained to the walls.

Trista asked Diana "Why have we come back here? We destroyed the inferiors. We
could have conquered the whole city".

Diana sensually rubbed Trista's monstrous bicep "Don't worry Trista, we are
going to have some fun with these silly creatures and then attack again".

Deanna towered over the tiny pathetic figured of the inferior who was once her
father. Flexing her upper body Deanna's muscles erupted in mind numbing size,
huge golden coloured tissues of ultimate strength ballooning to impossible
dimensions. Standing a good three feet taller than her father and weighing
more than 640 pounds heavier Deanna picked up the tiny human and sat him on
her shoulder. Flexing her massive bicep Deanna squashed her father between her
deltoid and her traps. Releasing her arm at her father's screams the giant
vampire dropped the human to the floor with a sickening bang.

Nikki is looking at herself in the mirror while trying to run a tap measure
round her unbelievable chest. "Damm the tape isn't long enough to get round my
big titties and lat muscles. Taking my height and weight, my body weight index
is 100!!! If I was human a reading 29 would be considered obese."

Diana came up and ran a willing hand over Nikki's mile-wide back "Don't worry
baby that 100 is all super powered man-breaking muscle".

Nikki flexes her biceps muscles and they expand to a mighty 40 inches of
incredible power. Placing the torso in her arm Nikki is delighted to hear ribs
crack and pop as she flexes her mighty arm. Her huge back seems to keep
expanding as she spreads her lats, muscles pulse with almighty power as she
flexes and pumps her back.

The other vampires have chained up the humans in a variety of torture devices
designed to destroy human bodies in the most painful ways.

Diana standing proud with her hands on her hips said "Watch this girl, there's
something I have been dying to show you".

The other vampires watched as Diana's clit started to grow. A giant appendage
started to protrude with a huge purple cock head at the end. Giant testicles
the size of footballs dropped behind the thick penis. All watching gasped at
the sight and Ronald went berserk at the sight of a female developing male
reproduction organs.

Charging at the threatening object Ronald slashed at it with a knife but the
tough skin wasn't even scratched. The bread knife and Ronald's hand looked
insignificant against the three inch thick flaccid penis.

Trista wraps thick titanium straps around her arm and watches as it helplessly
snaps as she flexes her bicep.

Walking over to a chained prisoner Diana menacingly swung the three foot long
cock scaring the human as she approached.

With an evil smile and thoughts Diana watched as her cock started to grow.
Standing five feet from the screaming prisoner both watched as the cock
expanded and lifted to become an erect monster six feet long and ten inches
thick. The giant penis punctured the torso of the human and drilled through
the thick concrete wall. Crushing the concrete to dust Diana turned tearing
open the wall with her giant prong.

"My baby needs some exercise" the giant vampire cooed as she sat on the lounge
and started to rub her humongous cock.

Lost in her own pleasurable world Diana worked the big prick for all it was
worth and erupted a stream of cum at another unfortunate prisoner blasting his
body and the concrete into thousands of pieces. The powerful cum blast blew a
giant hole in the concrete wall drilling through ten feet and washing a subway
train down the tunnel to be smashed into oblivion in a sea of sweet smelling
vampire juice.

Standing up the giant prick hung as a tremendous symbol of potency between
Diana's legs. Within seconds it was getting hard again this time the big
vampire rammed her equally big cock up the arse of an unwilling human
splitting bone and tissue, tearing the human apart.

Unsatisfied Diana turned to Deanna who looked upon the giant prick with greedy
lust. Ramming the big cock up Deanna's stretched pussy Dianna pumped her with
powerful thrusts. Concrete cracked and dust filtered down from the ceiling as
the two powerful females shook the room as they screamed in sexual delight.
Soon Diana came and the huge blast of cum hit Deanna's G- spot causing her to
scream with pleasure as a torrent of semen poured out of her pussy.

The sweet smelling cum sloshed as a torrent down the drain sweeping all before
it as it roared to the storm water outlet and boiled the river.

All stood open mouthed as the giant penis and testicles shrank and retracted
back into the clit of Diana's pussy.

Trista gasped "My god how is it possible?"

Smiling Diana said "When my and your cock grows it covers our pussies as we
switch to the male role. As you can plainly see we don't need men at all to
function. To get you cock to appear just think about that big hard cock and it
will grow".

Soon all of the other vampires are sporting huge unthinkable hard ons and one
by one destroy all of the remaining humans except for Ronald who has the
humiliating task of licking the broken human remains off his daughter's
throbbing cock.

"That's it daddy lick my big powerful cock. Oh daddy you missed some cum. Lick
my cum daddy" Commanded Deanna.

Humiliated beyond belief Ronald licked the sweet tasting cum off his
daughter's unnatural giant prong. Deanna sighed and her massive flaccid cock
throbbed and a trickle of cum dribbled from the head.

"Oh daddy I've been a naughty girl, look some more little girl juice as come
out. Lick up daddy".

Screaming with madness overtaking his mind Ronald said "No I not drinking my
grotesque daughter's semen. You are a girl, NOT A MAN!! You can't replace men.
What role will we have"?

With an evil smile Deanna answered "Poor daddy we don't need men. I will take
care of you daddy".

Walking in front of her father Deanna's giant cock started to grow and in
seconds had lifted her father off the floor. Ronald's legs were forced apart
as he had to straddle the immense ten inch thick girth of the massive penis.

Deanna lifted her father by his legs and then pulled him onto her huge cock
head tearing him apart as his small ass hole was unable to accommodate her.
The other vampires screamed delight as the immense cock smashed and tore open
tissue and bone on its unstoppable passage through his body. Trista started
licking the huge man-destroying prong tasting the fresh human blood and
thoughly exciting Deanna. Giant balls unleashed their contents and a torrent
of cum tore apart what was left of Ronald. The blast of cum tore open the
ceiling smashing up to the surface. A city skyscraper which happened to be in
the way of the blast was blown to pieces by the raging semen.

With a smile Diana said "You killed your father before the semen had a chance
to work. You see tasting our cum produces some interesting changes in humans.
If a superior female tastes it she changes into one of us, if an inferior male
takes it a vampire grows inside of him and bursts through the inferior's skin.
It's a wonderful sight to behold. And the other great news is the great
quantity of cum we produce blows the humans into the river of cum and they
can't help but swallow some, it only takes a minute amount to change a human.
Even now hundreds of females are changing and hundreds of males are being torn
apart. Now we must leave this place and take charge of the growing army of our
sisters AND CONQUER THIS WORLD!!"

Nikki looked down at her massive purpled-headed cock still exposed and
lovingly caressed it causing the big penis to grow to such an extent that it
smashed the wooden furniture and concrete wall into a cloud of dust. With her
hands on her hips Nikki flexed her awesome body and then kissed Diana "Thanks
so much for giving me so much power, these muscles and this massive cock are
so fantastic and so deadly and powerful".

Diana sank her strong fingers into the concrete ceiling and using her bulging
bicep muscles lifted her head and with a crash smashed through the ceiling. On
the surface the road bulged and cracked and then burst open as a beautiful
head and massive shoulders broke through the feeble road surface. People
screamed in panic as the huge nine foot tall mountain of muscle rose up as
stood majestically in the centre of the street. Cars wrapped themselves around
her massive legs when they were unable to stop crashing in to her. Diana
smiled; already there were dozens of vampires rampaging through the human
population. The streets were awash with semen, thousands of gallons of cum
stuck to city buildings, dipping onto screaming humans. The torrent had
flooded the street to a depth of 3 inches. Cars splashed the cum over
pedestrians involuntarily filling them with the life of power or destruction.

Meanwhile the other vampires broke through the soft road material and sloshed
through the oozing semen.

Meanwhile Nikki with her monster cock still erect turned to break through the
wall instead of the ceiling. The indestructible cock smashed through the
concrete closely followed by the giant body of the female vampire. Nikki
smashed into a subway tunnel and was hit by a train. Nikki impaled the train
with her cock and lifted it off the tracks smashing it into the roof just with
the incredible power of her prodigious weapon. Smashing through the wreckage
the vampire looked for food. Finding a male trapped behind steel beams Nikki
twisted the beams out of the way and pulled him up to face her. Ripping off
his cloths Nikki disdainfully measured his tiny one inch thick penis against
her mighty three inch soft cock.

Knowing how to excite a man Nikki managed to produce a tiny five inch long
specimen on the human. Scornfully looking at the small penis the huge vampire
flexed her incredible arms and said as her cock grew plunging into and
destroying the small human cock "Is that little sausage supposed to be a cock?
Look it isn't even big and strong enough to stop a little girly dick from
playing with it"

The mighty symbol of girl power smashed the little penis to pulp and continued
and impaled the human on its thick shaft. At the same time Nikki plunged into
the male's neck tearing out the throat and slurping up the sweet blood.
Standing up and crushing the dried up husk Nikki ploughed further into the
train bending and buckling steel as she came. Licking the dribbling blood off
her chin the vampire spied several trapped females and with a smile started to
masturbate. While she stroked her cock Nikki grabbed a nearby male passenger
and sank her mighty fangs into his neck sucking out the life of the human.
Reaching ejaculation Nikki aimed her cock above the females and the torrent
tore away the remains of the carriage washing it down the tunnel. The surge of
cum rolled back from the tunnel walls submerging the female passengers and
giving them untold power.

Trista tore open the side of a bus and started feeding and slashing human
bodies and splattering the interior with blood and flesh. Bursting through the
other side the blonde beauty queen picked up a car crunching and buckling the
metal in an awesome display of muscle power.

Deanna exposes her giant limp cock and balls much to the horror of the humans
watching. Sitting down on a car Deanna's huge football-size testicles crush
the roof and she settles on the car. Moving her legs and arms the vampire
tears open the vehicle pushing the buckled steel to either side. Deanna starts
to stroke her cock watching the horrified faces as it grows, thickening,
bigger, bigger and bigger. The humans are transfixed by the sheer size of her
mighty cock. Some of the males are jealous of such a mighty weapon but soon
run for dear life when Deanna erupts and blows down the entire city block.
Building collapse into shattered rubble and are swept away by the torrent.
After blowing a million gallons of cum Deanna's cock goes limp for twenty
seconds and then starts to expand again ready for more pleasurable
masturbation. After losing herself in an incredible sexual high Deanna's blows
again demolishing the block on the other side of the street.

The rust of semen enters the lake in Central Park hissing and boiling as it
comes into contact with the water which evaporates leaving a lake of deadly
cum. Thousands of humans have been infected by the semen. Women by the
thousands grow into huge muscle bound vampires turning on the surviving males
and killing them. The males tasting the deadly cum find their stomachs
expanding as a female vampire grows inside of them. As the female grows to
full size she bursts out of his body tearing him apart.

As the vampire army rampages through Metro City killing the male population
Diana walks to the hill overlooking the giant reservoir. Giant cock proud in
front of her she starts to stroke her awesome weapon. Reaching orgasm Dianna's
giant balls pump out a million gallons of cum which is fired into the
reservoir evaporating the fresh water in a froth of hissing steam. Ejaculation
after ejaculation boils off the water leaving 300 million gallons of semen to
flow through the pipes to every house in the city infecting every person who
comes into contact with it. With mighty testicles manufacturing still more
semen Diana walks back into the city to feed.

Meeting up with Nikki who is eating the heart of a dying police officer with
the blood spraying in all directions Diana says "Yummy, any more for me?"

With blood trickling onto her giant breasts Nikki gestures to two males lying
on the side of the road, their legs torn off to prevent their escape.

Diana crushes the skull of a male between her mighty biceps savouring the
brain tissue spattering over her body. With a crack the giant female tears
open the ribcage the rips out the heart. Lifting the heart Diana squeezes the
blood out which trickles into her mouth. Finding an intact male Diana severs
an artery with her fingernails and sucks on the squirting blood.

Across the river from Metro City Island General Fieldman speaks to the
President "Its awful Mr. President the entire city population has been
exterminated or changed into those hideous creatures".

Shaken the President says "Is it true these female creatures have a cock?"

"Yes Mr. President, they are enormous and they can shoot millions of gallons
of semen which I believe enhances females and destroys males. What's more
these female blood suckers are super strong and we can't kill them, the
bullets just bounce off them".

"Well General you are just going to have use bigger bullets".

Just then a panicking messenger races in "Mr. President those creatures, their
semen has found its way into the water supply. IT'S COMING OUT OF THE TAPS!!"

Horrified the President shouts "Shut the water supply down, NOW!!!"

Looking at a message the General says "It's too late Mr. President, hundreds
have been infected. It says here when the tap is turned on the semen comes out
with such force that it blows off the tap and floods the house with spray and
then engulfs everything"

Near to panic the President issues orders "Evacuate everybody to the other
side of the Eastern Mountains and issue water proof suits we must stop this
fucking goo from getting near us".

Spying the towering "Statue of Justice" on 'Freedom Island' Diana said to her
army of super women "This is my world now, there will be no justice or freedom
only slavery and a future of FEMDOM. Let the fun begin".

To be continued.

[jos73]

Vampire 3
by MUSCLEBOUND


Standing across from "Freedom Island" Dianna looked at the giant statue and
flexed her mighty upper body muscles and strode into the water. Swimming
across Metro City Harbour the huge Amazon ploughed through the water. On
reaching the other her majestic great bulk of muscle flexed and quivered with
power as she stepped ashore to be greeted with bullets as the guards on the
island fired their ineffective little popguns.

Bellowing an animalistic roar Dianna flexed her biceps which erupted to
gigantic size while little bullets bounced off her body. Running at speed too
fast for a human to escape Diana was onto one of the guards before he could
react. Grabbing the toy pistol the vampire punctured the weapon with her
powerful fangs. Using her smaller teeth Diana tore apart the flimsy steel gun
as she tore off the head of the stunned guard.

Dropping the useless head Diana sucked on the pumping arteries savouring the
blood as it squirted into her mouth. Applying pressure the body cracked and
popped as Diana crushed the former upper human torso into bag of broken bones.

Nikki sidled up and licked the splashed human blood off Diana's cheeks while
disdainfully crushing the human head under her toes.

"Oh Diana you don't know what if feels like to run your toes through human
brain" cried Nikki as she ground the skull beneath her feet. Nikki lifted her
foot and let Diana lick the brain tissue and crushed skull off her toes, pussy
juice running down her leg.

Looking at the remaining guards firing at her Nikki reached down and pulled
the three inch water main out of the ground. The steel pipe protested as it
was bent and twisted by powerful muscles. Soon the huge female has pulled
about 50 feet of pipe of the ground and as twisted it into a dense ball which
she threw at the feet of the guards blowing them to eternity.

Looking up at the towing male figure of 'Justice' Diana said "I wonder if he
would like a giant cock in his mouth or up his arse".

"Oh Darling, blow in his mouth and see if he can handle your load" Gestured
Nikki and she licked Diana's monstrously powerful arms.

"Ok one big fat cock in his mouth. But I doubt he will handle me when I cum"
Smiled Dianna just before her powerful legs propelled her 500 feet into the
air.

Grabbing hold of the giant's face the Queen Vampire dug her finger nails into
the soft steel'

"Ok Big fella, get ready for one almighty big cock and balls" Thought Diana as
she lifted her big flaccid penis.

The cock started to grow and it easily smashed open the two inch thick steel
plates. The big prong expanded buckling the steel as its girth thickened. Soon
the plate split apart with a sickening crack as it was unable to hold back the
big cock which simply got bigger and bigger.

Thrusting her hips forward Diana rammed her big power tool into 'Justice's'
steel plated mouth causing the statue to shake as in fear.

"Comon take my big powerful cock, take my big baby" Laughed Diana as her
unstoppable cock shaved off particles of steel and caused cracks to appear all
over the statue.

Nikki and Deanna wet themselves with sexual excitement as they watched pieces
fall off the statue as Diana power humped the quivering structure.

Trista sucked Nikki's pussy with her sensual tongue as Diana erupted and burst
the 'Statue of Justice' in an almighty explosion of vampire cum.

Huge pieces of torn steel were sent flying over Metro City mixed with a
million gallons of semen. One quarter of the statue remained intact and it
toppled over with a sickening screech to land in a sea of vampire cum.

The island flooded under cum infecting the boatload of marines which
unfortunately landed at the same time. Sliding and slipping into the goo the
marines screamed with fright as the liquid stuck to every part of them. The
cum stuck to their faces and ran down their cheeks and into their mouths
despite their attempts to stop it, there was just too much of the stuff. The
slightest attempt to wipe it off resulted in the liquid changing its viscosity
and splashing very easily.

Screaming in agony the males bulged obscenely as the superior life form grew
inside of them. After ten minutes of terrible pain the males split open in an
explosion of blood and tissue releasing fully grown female vampires. The newly
created female vampires feasted on the blood of their hosts.

Looking back at the ruined city the super women could see that only a quarter
of the city buildings were still standing and of those most were shattered
ruins. The Metro City Island was saturated with vampire semen. The white
liquid clung to the buildings while on the streets it flowed like a river and
poured out of the stormwater pipes and into the harbour. The boiling clouds of
steam from the harbour wafted across the wrecked city.

Disturbing their satisfied viewing of their conquered city the vampires turned
to see a flight of aircraft approaching. Already white vapour trails betrayed
the launch of deadly air-to-ground missiles. The explosions engulfed the women
in dust and fire as Deanna settled back with her own powerful weapon. Rubbing
her rapidly expanding cock Deanna felt waves of pleasure course through her
body as she rubbed her saliva over her hugely engorged cock.

The flight roared over the strutting vampires releasing their load of bombs
which were as ineffective as the missiles. Reaching orgasm Deanna screamed in
delight as her mighty cock throbbed shooting a stream of cum at the tight
formation rapidly increasing the distance from Freedom Island. The stream of
cum disintegrated the entire flight and then fell with devastating results
over a vast area of the suburbs. The sticky goo fell over twenty square miles
inundating house after house. The flood smashed windows broke down doors,
smashed roofs and flooded every thing imaginable. Thousands of humans caught
indoors were saturated as it flowed in through smashed windows, broke open the
ceilings showering every room and found its way effortlessly into their
mouths.

The other vampires applauded Deanna on her stunning victory while Trista
lovingly licked the trickling semen on Deanna's pulsating prong.

Thousands and thousands of super developed female vampires followed Diana
across the river to the western shore where they gather to listen to Diana
outline her plans.

"Sisters! Today we start our conquest of this planet. We take this world
through our brute strength and the fact we are the superior female sex. Males
are history on this world only fit to be destroyed by us. Their inferior genes
are totally destroyed while our superior female genes are given incredible
power and strength. A male cannot be powerful like us their genetic makeup as
no enhancing qualities. You have witnessed our incredible power, come with me
and enslave the world".

A rousing cheer greeting Diana as she walked to the head of the line to lead
her army from the riverbank to the national capital on the other side of the
Eastern Mountains.

As the army marched towards the mountains all of the ground was contaminated
to male human life forms. The vampire's inexhaustible sex drive saw thousand
of millions of gallons of semen saturate the ground penetrating miles
underground infecting the soil and poisoning the water for ever after. The
semen simply remained in its deadly form and never changed. The white goo
oozed from the soil and if walked upon splashed with considerable energy to
cling to the person walking over it.

The army made its stand on the lower slopes of the mountain setting up
thousands of field guns and tanks with another line of guns and tanks further
up the mountain and the sowing millions of land mines throughout the killing
ground in front of them. This display of power represented the bulk of the
army with only a 5% reserve remaining to defend the capital.

The army of vampires advanced across the minefield exploding the mines as they
came. High explosive and shrapnel mines were as effective as a bursting
balloon. After exhausting the minefield an exasperated General Fieldmen
ordered the field guns to open fire on the invincible women. Shot after shot
simply exploded harmlessly against their tough hides. The gunners worked like
madmen and soon the paint blistered on the red hot gun barrels. The vampires
were only yards from the lower line of guns when they charged at full speed.
The huge females crushed, buckled and twisted the guns to useless scrap and
tore open the humans feasting on their blood. Such was the rampage was the
hillside turned red under the spray of blood and body parts.

Screaming with rage General Fieldman ordered the second line of 5000 field
guns and tanks to open fire while the vampires responded with their own much
more potent cannons. While shells exploded around them a line of super cocks
prepared to return devastating fire. A gigantic stream of 200 000 million
gallons of cum in the first salvo swept the mountain side smashing guns and
tanks into thousands of pieces. The raging torrent roared down the mountain
sweeping trees and boulders with unstoppable power. Another salvo of 200 000
million gallons killed the remaining humans and General Fieldman screamed with
fright as the white liquid tore open his protective suit and finding its way
into his mouth, the general already bulging with superior female life growing
inside him, was washed away.

The general drowned in the sea of cum but soon his body burst open and new
life swam powerfully to the surface.

The huge sea of cum roared down over flat farming lands engulfing everything
in its path. The fertile soil became saturated with semen, rivers boiled away
and inland lakes turned white. Never again would these lakes hold water for
every time it rained the water would simply evaporate when it struck the
semen.

[jos73]

After the killing spree the vampires engage in a non stop sexual marathon for
two days flooding the entire East Coast in their non-ending supply of semen.

Brushing aside feeble opposition the vampire army smashed into the capital
'Yorktown' where on 'Broadway' Diana and Trista viewed the white marble city
buildings.

"Round up all the male humans you can find and take them to a safe place. We
need to conserve our food stocks. I'm going to smash this city to pieces".
Remarked Diana as she fingered Trista's inviting pussy.

Trista french kissed Diana and then remarked "We are going to have to start a
breeding program, at the rate we are killing them there will soon be none
left".

Diana and Nikki smashed building after building as they slowly walked down
Broadway. Dust filtered through the air and broken marble rubble littered the
streets as the two formidable females used their incredible muscles to smash
everything in their path.

Nikki stood in front of the Defence Department Headquarters, obscenely
developed muscles flexed with power as the mighty amazon pondered on how to
destroy the structure.

The big vampire looked at the thick marble pillars supporting the roof and
moved her even bigger body alongside. Embracing the pillar with bulging arms
Nikki bear-hugged the marble pillar, muscles flexed with power as the pillar
cracked. Squeezing Nikki broke the marble as easily as crushing paper and a
frightening roar and a cloud of dust the top of the broken pillar crashed down
upon the big vampire.

Shaking the dust and fragments her bulging brown muscles Nikki grabbed another
pillar breaking off a huge twenty foot section, swung it around destroying all
of the other supporting pillars and in doing so collapsed the roof and walls.

Crushing broken marble fragments under her huge feet Nikki ploughed through
the broken wreckage to watch Deanna fucking a captured male prisoner. The
prisoner screamed in pain as his bones could be heard cracking as Deanna
pounded down on his tiny body and cock.

Nikki walked over top the male and dropped her huge soft cock into his mouth
with the words "Here bitch suck on this big cock".

The big soft cock rammed into his mouth breaking his teeth and dislocating his
jaw as it started to expand. Nikki stood up as her humungous prick started to
expand tearing apart his face. Deanna reached orgasm smashing the male body to
pieces as Nikki's monstrous cock exploded his head.

Pulling her stiff cock out of the ruins of the human Nikki eyed Deanna's
dripping pussy and asked "I've got a big unsatisfied stiff rod I could stuff
into that big wet hole of yours. Want to fuck gorgeous?"

To be Continued.

Looking at that big fat juicy cock Deanna replied "Am I what! Ram that big
fucker into me. That little weeny cock of the inferior was tiny I didn't know
it was even in my pussy and when he came the ejaculation was so weak I
couldn't feel that pathetic eruption either."

Deanna gulped as the big cock slipped in 4 inches expanding her pussy, another
4 inches was pushed in stretching it a bit more. Nikki grunted and pushed in
10 inches and then both vampires screamed in delight as another 10 inches
stretched her even further. Another 15 inches filled Nikki and caused her to
scream in total abandonment. By now the big pussy could take no more cock and
it thrashed about filling every square inch, hitting the G- spot and causing
both vampires to shake as convulsions ran through them.

Nikki bellowed and erupted and the force of semen hitting Deanna's pussy
caused her to scream with pleasure. A million gallons streamed out and rolled
down the street.

Afterwards Deanna stroked Nikki's sensitive nipples and cooed "You are such a
big and powerful lover. I could feel your sperm hit me, no inferior could ever
achieve that with their little dribbles coming out of their little pea shooter
cocks".

Meanwhile Diana was masturbating her mighty cock and being lost in sexual
heaven didn't feel the bullets bouncing off her body as a squad of soldiers
fired at her.

Reaching ejaculation Diana screamed as a mighty orgasm rocked her body as her
own monstrous gun fired at the soldiers ripping apart the ones closer to her
and tearing off the special suits and drowning the others. The huge blast
smashed half the business district buildings to rubble and created ten new
vampires as the drowned male bodies exploded to release their superior female
forms growing inside them.

Trista had led her slaves to a small town and with some other vampires
constructed a prison to house them. In the town square Trista rammed her
mighty pussy down over the mouth of the Mayor smashing his jaw and caving in
his face. Holding her massive cock head over the male's horribly smash face
Trista dribbled pre-cum into his mouth. The mayor's wife and daughter faced
with the sight of incredible female power were wet with sexual excitement as
the mayor's body started to swell. The daughter started to openly masturbate
in front of the male crowd screaming for her death.

As the mayor screamed in pain the wife started to finger her daughter's
soaking pussy while kissing her passionately. One male tried to kill them for
betraying their race but was lifted by Trista before could reach them and his
body torn in two by her muscle bulging arms.

The mayor was horribly disfigured as the vampire grew inside of him and to the
sounds of tearing skin and breaking bones his wife came over and started
running her hands over his bulging stomach urging the mighty female to grow
big as her daughter was furiously working her mother's drenched pussy.

Both females orgasmed heavily as the vampire covered in blood and tissue
slowly burst the male's body apart and stood majestically. As both mortal
humans watched open mouth as the vampire flexed and admired her gigantic
muscles Trista sank her teeth into both human females giving them unbelievable
power.

The males gasped in horror as both mother and daughter grew to an incredibly
powerful and majestic 9 feet tall. The daughter's tight clothing burst apart
as soon as she started to grow but the mother's large flowing dress stretched
but did not split.

In love with her new body the mother flexed her giant biceps tearing the
sleaves and ripping the back of her dress as mighty back and shoulder muscles
flexed with power.

Both huge women were hungry and they walked up to males 3 1/2 feet shorter and
only half as wide as their own power packed bodies and sank their mighty fangs
into their necks. The other vampires cheered as both males turned grey as the
life was sucked out of them.

Standing triumphantly over the destroyed bodies both vampires flexed their
super powered muscles and licked the blood off each other's chins.

The vampire newly created by the mayor's body grabbed a male from the group
and tore open his neck in a blood splattering display which excited the
mayor's daughter Brittany who licked and caressed the other's mighty muscles
while working her way up to the rivers of blood squirting out of the fellow
vampire's mouth. Soon both were dribbling blood into each other's mouth.

Both vampires turned from their blood soaked feasting to watch the mayor's
former wife Carley being treated to a power packed tongue lashing. In between
three males were sandwiched between the two giant women. Both vampires
screamed with sexual pleasure and with a hideous cracking crushed the bones of
the unfortunate males.

Near to orgasm Trista thrashed her tongue about Carley's pussy and threw her
great heavy bulk around on the ground shaking the whole town. Both giants
locked themselves together licking each other's wet pussies and rocked the
ground for miles around when they came.

Trista kissed Brittany on the lips and said "We are now the rulers of the
country and soon the whole planet. Find as many of our sisters as possible and
give them power". Scout for males, save some and kill the rest.

Back in the capital Diana blasted and smashed her way through the city
buildings. Nothing could hold back her powerful muscles. A pall of smoke hung
over the shaking city as the three vampires crushed and battered each building
shaking the others in their rampage.

Diana flexed her monstrous upper body. Muscles bulged to unbelievable
proportions, so much power, and so much strength. Her huge flexed shoulders
were as wide as a bus as she crushed living humans between her flexed biceps
as she approached the Congress Building. The awesome sight as well as the fact
that their cannon shells, bombs and flame throwers were totally useless made
the soldiers flee in blind panic.

Pounding the building with every step Diana watched with glee as the power of
her legs shook and cracked the building. In love with her impossible muscle
bound and powerful body Diana loved demonstrating her strength and domination
to the inferiors.

Walking majestically up the stairs the mighty Queen of Power punched the
flimsy white marble exploding the forecourt pillars and collapsing the front
of the building. Walking into the smashed foyer Diana dug her toes into the
hard floor vandalising the giant National Coat-of-Arms imprinted in the hard
marble. Cracking the floor with the power her mighty legs were transmitting
Diana's feet left huge sunken footprints in the floor. Watching her red
painted toes smash the floor Dian rocked the building with her power. Chunks
of marble and dust fell from the roof. Looking up at the mighty dome Diana
smiled and slammed her foot into the floor and with a mighty rumble the
building and dome collapsed in a cloud of dust.

Walking out of the ruins Diana roared in triumph, nothing could withstand her
power.

Standing in front of the Presidential Home, the 'White House' Nikki and Deanna
stared at the frail white marble building. "There it is the home of male
power. What about we find who is left inside and crush it from each end".

Buckling the steel bars like blades of grass the big females burst through the
fence activating alarms in the grass. A number of guards appeared in front of
the White House firing pistols, machine guns, rocket launches, flame throwers
and even an anti-tank gun. Every one of the anti-tank shell's ultra-hard
tungsten nose caps broke up on Nikki's even harder armour-clad abdominal
muscles. The shells were designed to drill through seven inches of face
hardened armour plate were as effective as using spit balls.

Reaching the weapons both vampires twisted the ordnance into buckled pieces of
steel. The guards were splattered over the white walls of the building.

Looking down at the tiny doorway Deanna scornfully remarked "They don't build
these doors for big strong girls like us".

Smiling Nikki spoke just before hitting the wall "Well we will just have to
make our own doorway".

Smashing the wall with a shuddering blast Nikki smashed the big marble blocks
to dust and burst into the foyer smashing a marble pillar to broken fragments
and collapsing some the upper floors.

Deanna tried to enter through the doorway which was too narrow for her
power-packed shoulders and too low for her towering frame. Bursting the wall
Deanna walked into the building crushing marble fragments to dust under her
giant feet.

Rapid firing machine guns sent streams of bullets towards both females and
deflected back as thousands of rounds bounced off them. Deadly gas was piped
into the room and was equally ineffective as the giants who seemed to thrive
on it.

Nikki walked up the giant marble staircase digging her fingers into the wall
and tore out great gouts of marble as she ascended the stairs.

Smashing through tiny doorways, bursting walls, knocking down pillars both
females collapsed the building as their destructive walk destroyed everything
in their path. Standing outside what was left of the 'South Wing' the huge
vampires faced the puny wall guarding the "Round Office" the superior muscle
bound females hit the solid wall with their fists exploding the foot thick
marble in an explosion of flying broken fragments.

Towering over the President and Vice President Deanna looked down at the tiny
inferiors with a look of dominance.

The Vice President was not tall enough to even reach Deanna's giant breasts
shouted "Get out of this historic office you filthy grotesque creatures".

Deanna completely ignored the inferior as his life was of no importance but
place her huge hand which was larger the inferior's head and pushed down. The
Vice President screamed in fright and pain. His bones could be heard to snap
and crack as Deanna pushed his body to the floor. The male body burst open
spewing blood and tissue as it was compacted into a gooey mess on the floor.

Nikki ran her toes through the pulped flesh and blood as Deanna licked the
blood off her fingers much to the horror of the President.

Screaming like a madman the President shouts "You won't take me fucking
bitches. I have a last resort".

And with that remark the President hit a button and set off a giant hydrogen
bomb buried under the city.

As the fireball and huge mushroom cloud rose over the capital, the blast
smashed the buildings which had not been crushed under awesome female
strength. Wild choking dust clouds billowed around smashed monuments to an
inferior and defeated sex. The dust blotted out the sun and in this inferno
walked three gigantic females, muscles pulsed and flex with power. The ground
shook with every step they took. Monstrous arms bulged with power as each
brushed the radioactive dust off each other's super-humanly developed bodies.
Everything had perished except these monster women who now looked at the
defeated world and smiled for they were the rulers and were truly gods.

[Jaguar]

 

This 2010 story has a lot of new ideas and old ideas done in new ways.  So it was a really good story.

But I feel it would have had more kick, more shock, that I would have enjoyed it more if it were more gradual. 

An instant death is 'usually' humane, whereas a long slow death with much anxiety and suffering is always cruel.

If 

a) The conversion of females took 28 days to complete (24 days of feeding, 4 days of hibernation), all the time with the men  having to watch powerlessly. 

b) Instead of 10" diameter instantly killing men, cocks 1" cocks that expanded in diameter to 5" over a couple of hours of thrusting . 

c) Instead of a million gallons of cum and a plague that takes a week to convert the nation, 1 gallon and a plague that takes a decade to relentlessly and slowly cover the planet.

I'm stuck wanting to write but only being able to turn out what reads like boring technical journals.

Other posters talk about the easiest way to write a story being to take an existing story and modify it extensively.  Maybe that is what I should do.

Any advise?

Not to take anything away from the original author, he has some really good ideas like I say, and he produced something really readable and deserves all the kudos he's  gotten.  But aren't the great stories, the greatest stories, are the ones more re-worked and re-told.