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Reconnecting

Started by The First One, November 23, 2021, 01:29:20 PM

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The First One

Paul had been masturbating to the latest pics on the Sorority's Facebook page when he got the message from Gina.  "Long time no see," it read.  Wanna reconnect?  I've got a surprise I think you'll enjoy ;)

Gina and Paul had both been geeks in school.  Both of them were short, skinny, and not particularly athletic.  They had bonded over their shared love of science and superhero comics, and had even gone on a few awkward dates before graduating and heading off to separate universities in separate states. 

Paul agreed to meet and catch up at a coffee shop near his apartment complex.  He got there an hour early.  Not long after that he heard a loud whoosh from outside the building, followed by someone else walking in.  One look at the newcomer and Paul completely forgot why he was here.  The woman who walked in was unmistakably a member of the Sorority.  Well, technically she was only recognizable as someone who had been exposed to the Goddessmaker, but given that it was closely guarded by the Sorority and the best security systems they could buy/make on Themescyra, it was safe to assume she was a new member.  Which was still odd, Paul thought, because every previous new recruit had been announced in a massive press conference, and he couldn't remember anything about this woman.  Like all of the world's first genuine superpowered heroines, this woman was unnaturally huge.  At eight feet tall and as wide as a city bus, it took some maneuvering for her to get through the door, and every inch of her frame was bulging with colossal, rock-hard, Hulk-shaming muscles.  Her pecs were larger than her breasts, despite the latter being big enough for the biggest normal person on the planet to curl up and fit into the space occupied by one.  Her neck was gone, swallowed up by gigantic sloping traps that lead to shoulders almost the size of her pecs.  Paul doubted she could turn her head very far, but her enhanced senses and intelligence more than made up for that.  Her biceps, even disregarding the rest of her arms, were the size of smartcars while relaxed, and her twelve-pack abs were each basketball-sized.  Her legs were packed with more muscle each than both of her gigantic arms.  Her feet and hands were slightly disproportionately large, but still feminine.  Her lush raven hair trailed on the ground a couple feet behind her.  And her face was impossibly, indescribably beautiful, but still recognizable as... "Gina?" "Yup," said the hulking superwoman, in a deeper, rich, melodic voice, "And obviously we have a lot of catching up to do.


The First One

"What happened to you?" Gina chuckled.  She was sitting on the floor across from him, because no chair in the building could hold her and she was tall enough that the lack of one didn't particularly matter.  "What does it look like?  I joined the Sorority."  "But they always have a big press conference when someone joins, why-" "I wanted to surprise you, so I asked them to hold off on that." "What was the transformation like?"  "I was hoping you'd ask."

Wookey


jhunter

Interesting start. Good lick with more writing.

Jaguar

Excellent start, good writing, good descriptions. 

I look forward to reading more!  This is a very promising start.
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