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Author: [bertmacklinsbrother = BMB] My Wife Jennifer

Started by bertmacklinsbrother, December 28, 2014, 11:31:03 PM

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Tikka1910

You've developed some totally hot things that you rarely find in other stories. Take your time . You have a knack for bringing the facts to their head. I also love when Jennifer's boyfriend gets sweeter and puts on his apron. Perhaps the more 'feminine' behavior of the husband can be developed as Jennifer could continue to grow, eat, smell heavy sweat, grow hair and more. I don't know what manly element you haven't developed? If you are writing another feminox story, maybe you could think of a young, growing teenage girl as your hero. If not, can you give us a little preview of your next story please? Good luck and thank you very much.

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jcboyd

If you are a little hungry for more from BMB's world - you can always check on Losing a Battle to Chemicals Over Moderation - a BMB-approved side story in his universe.  Privileged that BMB let me run with Brian and Amy for these 2 snapshots.

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Tikka1910

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If you are a little hungry for more from BMB's world - you can always check on Losing a Battle to Chemicals Over Moderation - a BMB-approved side story in his universe.  Privileged that BMB let me run with Brian and Amy for these 2 snapshots.

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yes, yes your story is also great. I had already read it. I took the opportunity to reread it. You could write other chapters, with BMB's consent of course. For example during the holidays I can imagine that Jen took advantage of her little husband on the beach 😁. Or the smell of Jen's underarms after work.

hairylover321

Reread the story once again af am excited to hear you may be expanding on it. Everything you post is gold and look forward to where this story may lead. As always, you rock my friend.

Tikka1910

Hello. I re-read your story on Deviantart. The story is well reworked with nice additions. I expected the result with impatience. And I hope you book a new episode with Jennifer even bigger and more confident.