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This is my first attempt at a muscle story. I decided to try my hand at writing by doing a retelling of one of my favorite stories. Amazon High by Dmaynard. Here is my attempt.

I awoke to the sound of my clock, shifting my arm to slam down onto the sleep button. Mere minutes passed and the light switch flicked on to illuminate my cramped room. I rubbed my sleep filled eyes, seeing the familiar shape of my mother standing in the doorway.
"Cody, you have to be the laziest son ever..." Jasmine breathed as she strode into my tiny bedroom. The black haired woman was massive, the smallest of nighties clung to her sculpted muscular frame. She looked down upon me from a vantage point of nearly 9ft and sighed.
Jasmine stood an incredible 8'4" tall, her gigantic physique covered with acres of massive steel hard muscle. Flexing only seemed to make her body seem to swell larger as thick veins bulged beneath the surface, creating a road map across her body, the purplish-blue veins nearly hidden with Jasmine's deeply tanned skin.
    Jasmine admired herself in my mirror as she raised her arms in a massive double biceps pose. Her huge biceps swelled to a massive 50" lined with thick veins that pulsed visibly with each beat of her heart. Beside them were her almost equally massive deltoids which bulged obscenely from her broad shoulders, the huge spheres of muscle running from her biceps to the
incredibly thick muscles of her neck.
    Her neck was so muscular that it was almost four times wider than her head at the base from her insanely large traps which bulged almost to the point of touching her ears. Her lats and pecs piled together to form an incredibly thick and muscular chest that had to be at least eight feet around, but even larger with incredible and massive pair of breasts that sat perched upon the muscular shelf her pecs created. Each tit was at least three feet wide and tipped with a thick nipple which sat in the middle of some rather small but dark areolae.
    Her huge chest tapered down to a relative narrow which wasn't even half as wide as her chest which was rimmed with a thick eight pack of abdominals. From there her body flared out to her broad hips and round muscular ass with each cheek as large as my head. Absolutely vast thighs that were at least 60" around extended from her hips. Nestled in between was her muscular vagina which pulsed with a life of its own as if it were a second mouth.
"When your alarm goes off, you should get up!" my mother tore the covers from my half-awake form in a hurry. I snapped awake, my hands trying in vain to cover my monumental morning wood as my mother effortlessly lifted me from my bed.
    "17 years old and you STILL need help getting up and dressed do you?" my mother looked at me with mock pity.
    "It's ok mom, really, I can take care of myself." I struggled in her grip, but it was no use. My mom was a titanic woman, muscle bulged from her frame like rocky outcroppings, her gorgeous mane of black hair drifted over massive traps and cascaded down the wide arc of her back. It was comical to see me being held by my mother, an uncontrollable erection poking fiercely from my underpants.
    "As much as I would like to believe you, you have a long ways to go to prove that to me. Now just hold still..." Much to my continual embarrassment, Jasmine removed my night-shirt and underpants, leaving me standing stark naked against one of the sexiest women I had ever known. She smirked down at me, totally enjoying the humiliation and frustration I was experiencing.
    "My, your little soldier is up and ready this morning isn't he?" I shuddered as my mother playfully ran her finger up the length of my stiff member, flicking slightly upwards causing his throbbing erection to bobble in front of me.
"Now, let's get the basics." I watched helplessly as my mother turned her wide powerful back to me to face my dresser. She knew her body drove me crazy, they couldn't help it. The women of the world exerted not only a powerful physical presence, but an equally powerfully psychological influence. I felt a small trail of drool slide down my chin as my mother purposefully bent over her amazing physique to fish my clothes out from the drawer. It was all I could do to not reach my trembling fingers outward and touch the rippling cannonball glutes of my mother. The tight thread of her nightie ran nestled between twin globes of solid ass muscle which cascaded beautifully downwards to ripped hamstrings, and diamond hard calves.
    "Ok...underpants, socks, a new tee-shirt..." Jasmine milked the situation for all it was worth. My heart beat like mad as I watched thick inner adductor muscles flex and recede. My mother finally finished picking out my clothes and stood, taking a step backward. I nearly exploded as my cock was pushed up against her steely glutes. Whistling softly to herself Jasmine felt my erection pressing up against her ass, and while she pretended to inspect my clothing she playfully flexed her glute muscles, causing the rippling muscle mass to massage my stiff member.
    "Ok, I think we have a decent ensemble for you to wear to school today." Jasmine stepped away from me, putting my clothes onto the bed. I fought hard to not ejaculate a tremendous load as my mother began dressing me. She pulled on my tee, pulled up my underpants, taking care to stuff my erection within. She stepped me into my jeans and pulled them up noticing that I had screwed my eyes shut and was breathing heavily.
    "Cody, I want you to know, that it is ok to feel excited about Mommy's muscles ok? I expect that from you, and any male I know. I would be very concerned if you weren't..." Jasmine lifted her eyebrow thoughtfully as she went past me and began to exit the room. I leapt out after she had went downstairs and made for the bathroom at the end of the hall. I needed immediate relief that only the privacy of the bathroom would allow me. Unfortunately this was not my lucky day.
    Molly, my 15-year-old sister, stood at the sink brushing her hair. Although younger than me, she was taller than me by at least 10" and twice as muscular. Women in general had various growth spurts that they went through every few years. The spurts were spontaneous, and usually very destructive for any males that happen to be nearby. All this was the result of a revolutionary method of genetic manipulation pioneered by one Dr. Katherine Hemingway. Dr. Heningway's work of 15 years hence has forever changed the landscape of who is considered the dominant sex.
    Molly stood there, wearing only a white tank-top and blue panties that hugged
her feminine, but solid, physique. Molly stood in the mirror, the 15-year-old goddess stared at her semi-nude body with rapt attention. She towered an impressive 6'7" her blue panties nearly lost within the gargantuanly muscled thighs of her legs. Her young, stunningly pretty face framed with blonde hair that slightly curled, sat atop a thick bull neck that swept into massive craggy traps and boulder-sized shoulders.She puffed her chest out proudly, thick slabs of chiseled chest muscle rushing to stack upon themselves made her tits temptingly jut outwards. Her iron muscled stomach was covered in golden armor plates, her lats were so big un-flexed that her arms swayed outwards from her sides by the amount of beef that was contained within them. Her back was a massive bumpy arc of solid muscle. Thick cables of muscle attached themselves to her spine and following them down lead to a gorgeously muscled ass. Brown, round, and pumped with firm muscle, I figured she had more muscle in one ass cheek than most men did in their entire bodies.Her immense thighs tapered outwards, with wicked looking teardrops bulging outwards over her kneecaps. Diamond hard calves were attached to the back of her legs, bigger than many men's biceps. The insane part was that she just stood there, relaxed. When she flexed, she grew outwards even more, her muscles engorging themselves with blood and power.
"Any reason you can give me for not breaking both your legs for barging on in here?" She continued to brush her golden-brown hair, the action alone generating ripples of beautiful muscle which erupted from her young tan skin.
    "I....ummm...uhhh..." I couldn't think straight, between my mother induced boner and the sight of my sister it was all I could do to not simply drop to my knees, the need for release pounding down every rational thought in my brain.
    "I thought so...you really can't control yourself very well can you?" Molly mockingly grinned at me her older brother as she placed her hairbrush down. She glanced down to the prominent bulge I had in my jeans and giggled. "I see mom's had the usual effect on you." Molly strode forward, cornering me and preventing access to the bathroom door. "Some people would find it pretty disgusting that you get turned on by mom so much...maybe even envious." I looked dumbfounded at my sister for a moment, but Molly smiled devilishly and
pressed her body up against mine.
    "I know I'm not as big as mom...yet...but I think I'm doing very well considering..don't you?" Molly asked coyly as she brought up her fantastic arms into a double-bicep flex. I swallowed hard as I saw the 30 inch guns of my "little" sister flexing proudly in front of me. I felt the pressure of her thighs and hips as she swayed ever so gently, flexing her lower torso into my crotch. "Pretty powerful aren't they? Even small like this you can feel the potential in this body..." Molly scanned her arms with admiring eyes as she brought her arm's down to her side and took a small breath. My tongue hung out as she flexed her chest muscles, causing her huge pert breasts to bunch up into my face. I looked up the narrow valley of my sister's rippling cleavage as she held me tight in the corner with her superior strength.
“Oh we both know how much superior I am to you. My muscle mass is twice yours and then some. As always my intelligence, dexterity, stamina, strength, physical beauty, resistance to disease, hearing, vision, reflexes, creativity, perception, knowledge of countless subjects and skill at countless activities is many, many times superior to your own in so many ways. I am better than you in every aspect of life. And it just turns you on doesn’t it? Knowing how much better I am at things than you. Huh?” Molly asked as she stopped flexing her chest muscles and instead grabbed my crotch in her massive hand and gave it a playful squeeze.
With an extreme speed only inherent to women, Molly ripped my clothes completely off along with my underwear. I stood before her with nothing on and my modest 7” penis sprouting out at rapt attention. My face blushed beet red as she brought herself ever closer and whispered in my ear, “How I have dreamed of this moment forever. My patience wore out and I could no longer resist the calling of your weak little body. I had to have you for myself. I had to . . . take your virginity.”
Molly reached down quickly and wrapped her soft hand around my cock. Her hand was so huge that my little cock was engulfed by her easily. She squeezed with but a fraction of her strength and brought forth a wave of pain unlike anything I had ever felt. It brought me to my knees in an instant. “No matter how far superior we become to you men, nothing can ever quench our insatiable lust for men or hunger for men. And you, you are a prize I have planned to capture for years. How I have longed to taste the sweet delicacy of your cum. Today, my wait is over as I will claim you for me and there is nothing mom can do to stop me. Prepare for a fucking the likes of which you will never felt before,” Molly squeezed my cock a little harder before shoving me to the ground.
In a haste she ripped her own clothes off and pinned my legs down with her immense body. She then moved back and took a hold of my shaft with her hand. Molly then opened her mouth wide and took my meager cock into her mouth. My eyes went wide with surprise that Molly would even do such a thing to her older brother.
Molly slowly lowered her head taking more and more of my shaft into her mouth. I could feel my dick making its way down Molly's throat and kept going until she had every last inch of my modest shaft in her mouth. I thought that my cock had to almost be shoved down her throat at this point, and I wondered how she could even breathe. However Molly seemed perfectly fine and she began bobbing her head up and down, fucking me with her mouth and throat.
The sensation of Molly's throat as it pressed against my cock, trying to force it further in as if it were a piece of food was unlike anything I had ever felt before. I quickly began to pant as I was about to cum.
Molly pulled back until just the head of my cock remained in her mouth. My dick exploded with the biggest orgasm I had ever had as I filled Molly’s mouth with what little cum my balls could muster. Molly happily and hungrily lapped every last drop up, and took my cock into her mouth and sucked on it as it were a straw to get even more. She drained my balls until they were as dry as the deserts themselves before releasing me.
Once Molly was finished draining me, she casually got up and walked out of the room as if nothing happened. “That was delicious bro, we should do this again sometime,” Molly cheerfully said before blowing me a kiss goodbye. It took me ten minutes alone to gather the strength needed to get up off the floor. Needless to say, I missed breakfast.

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Re: First story attempt. My retelling of one of my favorite stories
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2019, 01:15:11 am »
The original was good and so is this.

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Re: First story attempt. My retelling of one of my favorite stories
« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2019, 01:24:34 pm »
Would like to see more of your take on this story, was hoping for more stuff with the mother
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Re: First story attempt. My retelling of one of my favorite stories
« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2019, 01:56:59 pm »
I do have ideas for other parts and am open to suggestions

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Re: First story attempt. My retelling of one of my favorite stories
« Reply #4 on: March 11, 2019, 03:18:57 pm »
I look forward to him reaching school.

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Re: First story attempt. My retelling of one of my favorite stories
« Reply #5 on: March 23, 2019, 11:24:00 am »
Yay, writers block

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