La Vida Loca

[marasso]

That was so good! Thank you but I really hate to see it end. I loved your characters and their romance and am so glad it had the kind of ending most readers like to see. I have to tell you that in Vida's hospital room when Gunnar cried I even teared up but then I am a real sucker for that kind of storied ending. In my book you done yourself proud. K+!

Thank you for the feedback and your many comments under my story. I have to tell you that I was crying while I was writing last part and epilogue and it seems that I managed to put these emotions into the story Thank you once again!

A wonderful story. Good characters and a good ending. Bravo! 

Thank you very much!

Great story with a great ending.
Are you planning to continue writing your other story "hit me harder"?

Thank you UnholyDK1103! I'm glad that you liked this story.

Yes, I will continue Hit me harder, but I had to take a break from that story. I kind of got tired, as the story grew to gigantic size. But it will be finished one day

[marasso]

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[sgsg69]

unbelievable story, great structure, very "aware" for the readers..........you made Vida and Gunnar's story visual, great craft and talent. Would have loved to hear about the three years and recovery to build back her body, but love where you jumper to.........

Maybe another story, another time you can visualize that growth of your character with the same levels of detail and vividness.

KARMA to you for keeping us engaged. Until next time!!

k+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

[marasso]

unbelievable story, great structure, very "aware" for the readers..........you made Vida and Gunnar's story visual, great craft and talent. Would have loved to hear about the three years and recovery to build back her body, but love where you jumper to.........

Maybe another story, another time you can visualize that growth of your character with the same levels of detail and vividness.

KARMA to you for keeping us engaged. Until next time!!

k+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Hey sgsg69, thank you very much for the comment! I'm really flattered by your opinion and happy that you enjoyed the story.

Yes, until next time!