This is the first attempt to write a story, I would like to read feedback, thanks in advance. Also this is the first time I decided to post one of this attempts on any forum, after a while reading stories on different sites.
The type of stories I like is the kind of a muscular (either muscular like real life fbb’s physique or so, also fantasy muscular) dominant woman crushing a man (or more than one) either slowly and enjoying every second or in an instant, either way it will be painful for him, either way she will enjoy it.
Astrid crushes her soon to be ex
Intro
Astrid is a gym obsessed girl 5’8 with 185 pounds of pure dense muscle well distributed in her 16 inch biceps, 18 inch calves, 28 inch quads, with a barrel chest measuring 50 inches as well as a 50 inch bowling ball butt, pretty much with dense muscles all over her body, with the face of a green eyed angel , who loves to lift heavy, fuck her guy and trash talk him while fucking him, but this only as mere role play since she really likes him and he likes that kind of role play, anyhow she always lightly made him more than clear who is in charge, and subtly reminded him what will happen if he fails her.
His guy it’s Omar, a 5’7 , 150 pound guy middle built who was lucky (or unlucky) enough to cross paths with Astrid who found him good looking, so she decided he was going to be his boyfriend, until now when she found out he was cheating on her by an innoportune message.
Story
Astrid had just finished her gym session of the evening which were regularly about 4 hours, this time she was so horny and needed to have her needs satisfied so she returned home early after just one hour of gym, since she had decided this just as she arrived the gym, the workout was short but intense plus she take double of her supplements so she was pumped and horny as fuck, her muscular body was covered in thick veins clearly visible through her tight long sleeve shirt, her supposed to be loose pants (which were a little loose before the workout ) were also tight around her quads, so she was in the urge to take of her clothes take a quick shower to have a lot of fun fucking her guy, but Omar was taking a shower when she arrived and as she was to advice him she wanted to have fun with him she heard his phone, so she decided to check and there was a text received from another woman answering that she was waiting for him on her apartment to make out while her girlfriend was in the gym, this made Astrid angry and to loose control completely so she went directly to the bathroom and tore it apart with only one jerk, Omar completely surprised that she was home already and due to the looks on her face he was fully aware that she saw his phone so he tried to play it cool but as he was about to speak she told him “how dare you fucking PIECE OF SHIT!!!!!” As she pushed him to the wall behind him take some air of his lungs and then she completed the action hitting him right in the gut with a straight punch and then pulled him out of the bath room carrying him on her shoulders back to the room and threw him to the bed.
“So you were going to meet with that bitch, didn’t I made it clear what would happen if you were stupid enough to cheat me?” She said as she was approaching him, flexing her huge dense upper body as she spoke, the mixed feelings plus the intense workout and the supplements she took made her body more pumped than usual causing tearing sounds on her tight shirt which by now was clearly ripped on her biceps and chest, adding up to this she was still so horny despite the situation so when she was only one step away of him she put her hands on the collar of her sport bra and the remains of her shirt and tore it apart with one jerk, “you wanted to fuck with that bitch huh? Well I came home early because I wanted to fuck with you, I’m horny as hell and I was about to give you the night of your life, well ohhhh surprise, now I will definitely have the night of my life, wanna know how? “ Omar at this point was pale and shaking with fear “B-b-b-but babe...” Astrid didn’t gave him any chance “WANT TO KNOW HOW I SAID! ANSWER MY FUCKING QUESTION!” She said as she made a most muscular pose, her huge upper body inflated to the max, thick veins all over her chest, abs, shoulders and arms, her nipples fully erect pointing directly at him, at this point she was so pumped up that her pecs were bigger than those of the male bodybuilders competing in Mr Olympia.
“No...” Omar said, “Wrong answer bitch” as she slapped him across his face almost knocking him out, “Y-yes”, “ I’m going to CRUSH FUCK the hell out of you piece of SHIT” she said as she started flexing her pecs right in front of his face suddenly she took his head with both hands and started pulling him right into her pecs repeatedly, this action broke his nose instantly, his face was quickly turning red with each blow, then she heard his cheekbones crack his eyes purple now, after ten hard blows his face was mangled, bleeding heavily from his broke nose, and mouth as some teeth were missing now due to the heavy pec blows, which were as hard as a heavyweight boxer hook, he was barely conscious at the moment “ I need to satisfy my needs and this way I will enjoy it more than I would’ve ever imagined” said Astrid as she tore off her pants and panties, “remember how I used to trash talk because you always liked that? I’ve really never imagined that some day that would turn into reality, but you decided to act stupid, if you wanted to have another girl you should have told me, I would not had any trouble, and you knew it” Astrid remembered some times they had this conversation and this made the rage to take control of her once again “I would enjoy this “ this was making her hot “mmmm I will definitely..” placing her hand on her pussy” “oooooooooh yeah I will but you” “mmmmmmm you will be in a world of pain” Omar at the point was with his face mangled, broke nose, punished mouth, purple swollen eyes, half opened, but surprisingly as the words and moans of Astrid were entering his ears, he was getting hard.
“Aaaaaaahhhhhhh ohhhhhhh aaahhh” Astrid was fingering herself furiously at the moment, almost forgetting the situation, the betrayal and the fact that Omar was right in front of her, lost in the need of pleasure, flexing her free arm, a huge hard 16 inch bicep exploding immediately, growing with each flex, reaching 17 and a half inch after 3 minutes of hard flexing “ AAAAHHHHHHHHHGGGGG” she growled loudly as she reached an intense orgasm, she came hardly squirting all over the floor and part of the bed “Time to have my fun with you” she reached him, moving backwards putting him in a reverse face sitting point, her muscular round bowling ball like ass engulfing his head completely “Let’s see if your face is still of any use” he was not able to hear anything, she now grabbed his still hard dick and started sucking as she was thrusting her pussy into his face continuing the damage that her pecs made already, she was still so horny so this wouldn’t end any time soon, she was getting more aroused in this 69 position, she started to suck with more force and he came instantly, this made her angry “ So first you cheated on me and now you are trying to spoil my fun huh? You useless bitch, I did not sucked your dick for more than one minute and you came! You know I love blowjobs and you know you need to LAST LONGER THAN THAT!! “ he was barely conscious, his face now completely purple due to the hardness of her ass and pelvic thrusting but Astrid grabbed him by his arms pulling him hardly almost tearing his arms from his shoulders, now both standing she pushed him to the nearest wall and started stroking his dick “You have less than 30 seconds to get hard again or else...” she said threatening, incredibly he was getting hard again and she forcefully inserted his dick into her tight pussy, along with this, in an incredible feat of strength she put him in a standing grapevine position, pulling his legs apart with hers, which was an obscene comparison, her legs three times his, pulling his arms with hers , grabbing him by his wrists and his dick with her vaginal muscles control, he was being completely crushed between the wall and the strong, huge, hard muscles of Astrid.
“Ahhhhhhhhhhh...mmmmmmmhhhhhhpgggg” his agony screams were forcefully silenced by her powerful pecs as she crushed his face in between her pecs and the wall “Time to pay worthless piece of shit” still crushing his dick inside her pussy, she started thrusting her pelvis into his, he was being crushed, loud bumps and tuds heard as she was crush fucking him into the wall “OHHH YEAAAAHH OHHHHH YEAAAAHHHHHH IMM GOING TO CRUUUUUUUSSSSSSSHH YOUUUUUU... DESTROOOOOOYYYYYY YOOOUUUUU, MMMMMMM YEAAAAAAAH FUCK YEAHHHHH, IMMMMM SOOO FUCKING STROOOOONG OHHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHH CRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUSHHH YOUUUUUU TO PIEEEEECEEES ” she was lustfully screaming as she was crushing him into the wall with her super strong pelvic thrusting like a battering ram, this continued for minutes until he could not take any longer and he came into her, as soon as she felt that she gave a last powerful thrust flexing her legs, ass, abs and pussy growling like a lioness “FUUUUUUUUUCKKKKKK YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.... MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMHH” and she came with and intense, powerful, shattering orgasm, as she was calming down she unflexed from him and he felt unconscious to the ground, his face dark purple, deformed by the mangling it took from her huge muscular pecs and ass, his pelvis area shattered, destroyed by her crush fucking, his dick unrecognizable due to the severe treatment it received from her pussy muscles.
She took a picture of his destroyed body and sent her to the girl on the phone “ Hope you enjoy your night with Omar, well, what it’s left of him...”
