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Female Muscle Art - Female Muscle Fiction => Muscular Women Fiction => Topic started by: taoschild on December 25, 2020, 05:25:22 pm
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Hey Everyone, I wanted to thank those of you who purchased one of the FMG books we wrote this year, many of them with 100% of the proceeds going to charity food banks. I sat down and wrote this on Xmas Eve to thank you, guys. Here is a list of books we wrote this year and the new story is below. Let me know if you think I should continue it.
Christmas Wish: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1060518
Christmas Rendezvous https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1060332
Christmas Gift: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1060288
Sinews of History: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1057457
Iron Beauties (non-fiction): https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1045392
“How?”
“Do you really want me to show you?” His eyebrow arched up as If I didn’t quite understand how consequential my assent was going to be. I must admit a ripple of fear shivered through my body and instantaneously goosebumps lined my torso like a field of wheat that had suddenly germinated.
I nodded, not exactly sure of what I was agreeing to. Jack, my husband for five years was everything I dreamed of in a man. He was loving, intelligent, supportive, hard-working, and well-off financially. He was absolutely devoted to me and had shared a secret with me that he’d never dared tell another soul.
It was the day after our engagement and we’d been sitting on the couch watching television. His fidgeting had become so pronounced I’d finally asked, “What’s wrong?”
He stammered momentarily, his voice almost a whisper he finally said, “Look, I love you more than anyone, but I have to let you know something before you commit to me. It wouldn’t be fair unless I shared my dark side with you.” For a moment I thought he was kidding, but the expression on his face quickly told me otherwise.
My skin crawled as we walked down the creaky wooden stairs into his poorly lit, cold concrete-floored basement. Under the stairs, he pointed to a stack of boxes and a purple Converse duffle bag sitting on top.
“What?” I asked, not wanting his ‘dirty secret’ revealed, but asking nonetheless.
“Open them and see how weird I am before deciding I am what you really want” I scooched past him hesitantly and reached for the bag as if it might bite. It was so quiet with him watching me and that the zipper sounded nearly piercing as I unzipped the bag. Looking in with confusion, there wasn’t a gun or something horrific as I’d been led to believe, only a number of haphazard videotapes from a bygone era. I picked a few up still trying to grasp what was going on. They were labeled with terms unfamiliar to me like WPW 34, Ms. Int 1989, or Debbie while others remained blank. “What, what are these?” I asked, still not getting the point.
“Put one in,” he responded, motioning over to a 6” old fashioned VCR/TV combo unit that screamed technology of a bygone era. The secret was killing me — his demeanor was so unlike him, unsure and mysterious. As I grabbed the one labeled Ms. Int and put the tape in the player, I heard his nervous, raspy breath reaching a feverish pitch. The once familiar hum of the VCR tape whirled into action and the screen lit up. A tanned woman raced onto the stage in a pink suit, placed her palm to her forehead, bent down, pointed one foot behind her, and froze in the position until the music commenced. Her arm swelled like I envisioned a strong man’s might, her bent leg bulged with lines carved on the side while her pointed foot revealed a calf split in two. I stared in awe. I’d heard of female bodybuilders, but never really taken notice.
Hot lights poured down on her from above as she hit pose after pose. Despite her brawny build and honed physique suggested not only an incredible level of strength but an intensity to her diet; her pert breasts strained upward seeming to defy gravity. I almost laughed when I saw her proud, taut nipples which looked as if she has teased them backstage before she’d run out.
But I couldn’t, there was something about this he wanted me to see, and the video was somehow oddly erotic. So instead I watched quietly feeling the tension from Jack. Her skin glistened under the intense lights, muscles roiling as she danced across the stage, her blonde curly locks bouncing and a permanent grin glued to her face. She just curves, muscles, and silky skin. I didn’t comment on the video, still confused by the meaning of what I’d seen.
Instead, I turned and asked, “Wha...”
“Now look in the boxes,” he’d said flatly, ignoring my question. As She Drives Me Crazy continued blaring in the background and the woman in the pink suit continued her routine I pried open the box lid. I was greeted by dozens of muscle magazines. I opened another and saw the same thing. Fingering through them I noticed that WPW must have referred to Women’s Physique World which were contained in one box neatly ordered by date. A golden tanned brunette in a skin-tight purple dress, that looked like it was sprayed on, turned sideways and proudly displayed her bulging bicep. She was bigger than the pink bikini blonde and more attractive as well.
I was so focused on my thoughts that his voice startled me. “The thing you need to know before you marry me... The thing you have the right to know is that I have a muscle fetish -- for women. I’m not gay.”
“I see.”
“But I’m not asking you to train or be like that… It’s, I’m sorry I’ve never told anyone before.”
“It’s okay. Tell me.” I pled, turning toward him and taking his hands in mine
“That I have a hard time shutting it off. I don’t want it to be a big awkward thing between us and I thought I needed to be honest and tell you.”
“But you don’t want me to look this way?” His pause told me everything.
“I’m not going to tell you I wouldn’t like it. That would be lying, but I don’t expect you to try and look like they do. And don’t get me wrong, you obviously turn me on.”
“It’s okay.” I cut him off. “Thank you for telling me.” I had a lot to think about. I didn’t mind working out -- It was actually invigorating, but there was some pressure put on my workouts now. We had worked through his embarrassment regarding his feelings, but it was hard on me as well because I felt the pressure to get bigger and there was nobody to talk to about how Jack felt. It was so personal for him and he’d entrusted his secret with me.
Until the night when we were laying on the bed and he demonstrated how to be dominant. How he wanted me to be dominant I hadn’t realized there was more. His fantasy wasn’t just to have sex with a muscle woman and feel them out like he did with me when we had intercourse. He wanted to be absolutely submissive toward them. Or, I should say, to me. He ached for me to be the dominant muscle woman of his dreams. I guess I should have been flattered, but instead, I felt pressure to get bigger, stronger, and perform a part. When he showed me how to behave that night as the domme it was both erotic and a little scary.
“Yes, I want you to show me.” I’d said with more confidence. Without warning, he launched into character.
“Didn’t I tell you to get stronger than me, bitch?” It was a tone I’d never heard from him and it scared me. I looked at him trying to read his face and judged it to be part of the role play so I played along.
“Yes, I’m sorry.”
“Sorry, what?”
“Very sorry.” Suddenly a thwapp resounded through the air and I felt intense pain in my glutes. He’d slapped my naked ass so hard tears welled up in my eyes. I saw a brief flinch and a look of panic flash across his face before I blinked to let him know I was alright.
“Sorry, Master.” his emphasis on the second word. “Do not forget again to end every statement by saying the name of the light of your existence, master.” I almost rolled my eyes with the silliness of his statement but stayed in character.
“Sorry, master. I will get stronger than you soon. I promise, master.”
“I expect you will. Now, get down and do twenty-five pushups and then apologize to me.” I quickly fell to the floor and started in. I felt his eyes boring through my naked body so I went deep focusing on form.
Eight reps in he called out, with disappointment ringing in his voice, “Start again. Make sure your nipples touch the floor.”
“Sorry master,” I grunted, beginning again pushing deep with each rep, focusing on my nipples as they brushed across the floor. Above me he watched me like a hawk, focusing I was sure, on his favorite body part on me, my wide, cut back. I finished and got to my knees, looking at him earnestly waiting for the next instruction.
“Get up and stand in front of me.” I found myself getting wet as I continued in the role, relishing a change from our traditional sex routine. He didn’t fail to notice.
“You will do three sets of those each day from now on until you can beat my record for sixty-three.”
“Yes, master.”
“Now tease your nipples and finger fuck yourself while I watch.” I was traditionally shy about such things, but I went right to work.
“Come closer,” he whispered. I inched closer and he began fondling my legs as I continued masturbating, intense flames of desire shooting through me. I flexed and the muscles bulged under his grip and I saw approval flash across his face. The idea that I was pleasuring him while I was pleasuring myself brought me near the edge.
Suddenly, he commanded, “stop.” Every fiber of my being wanted to continue, but I froze, actually scared and I stopped.
“Yes, Master,” I whispered, trying not to let the disappointment seep into my voice.
“You never go before I do. Pleasure my cock. His hard, red, throbbing cock stood at attention. It was something that I rarely did, lacking the confidence in the practice, but I slid atop him and began.
I cupped his balls in one hand while my tongue tickled the tip of his shaft. I hissed “yes, Master,” repeatedly kissing his tip with my full, pouty lips. Switching gears I deepened his pleasure by sucking diligently and feeling him close in on release. His pleasure boosted my confidence and I brought him deep inside my mouth. I gave him the lollipop treatment bringing him in and out of my mouth sucking hard. What part of his long shaft I couldn’t bring inside I squeezed, coaxing the juices to flow. I flexed my right arm and felt him fondle it. My mouth curled into a smile over his big cock as my tongue swirled over him and I drew him in and out faster and faster. He erupted inside me and I sucked his juices down.
“That was well done, servant,” he whispered, “well done.” My whole body was crying to explode in orgasm and I needed him inside me.
“I promise to get stronger than you really soon, Master. Please can I have you? Please?”
“Make it so,” he smiled, as I climbed atop him and thrust him inside me. “Flex your tiny muscles for me.” He commanded.
“I’m sorry, I’ll make them bigger, harder, and stronger. Stronger than you ever were and I’ll punish you for being weak.” I knew I was leaving character, but he needed me to say it. I rode atop him feeling his hardness swell inside of me once again as I told him how strong I was going to be. “Bigger, stronger, harder” I repeated until I came as hard as I had in ages, throwing my head around in ecstasy as he squirted again inside me as well.
“It better be really soon, servant. I don’t think you understand how much I need that to happen.” He whispered.
“Sorry, yes very soon Master,” I moaned, still feeling the tingling transpire throughout me. I lay next to him periodically kissing him and snuggling him with my cheek. The experience had been magical and I’d already decided I needed to be the sub more often. It was a new experience and it had set me to greater heights of ecstasy.
“I don’t know if I have that in me, to be the domme” I said, in all honesty. My confidence had grown as my body blossomed with muscles, but it wasn’t in me to be ‘bossy.’
I saw him look down, trying to hide his disappointment, and knew then that this wasn’t something he wanted, but something he needed. Whether it was out of embarrassment in how he felt or protecting me from his disappointment — he’d hid his true feelings from me. Yes, he’d told me about his unabiding devotion to powerfully muscular women and hinted that he wanted to submissive, I hadn’t realized how overwhelming his need truly was.
I guess I could have read the tea leaves. In fact, it was truly a lot easier than that. It was as if the puzzle was already put together with just a few pieces remaining. I thought it had been a game. He let me know he wanted me to be stronger, but I thought it was part of our sex games. He was a 6’3 athletic male who had trained his whole life. How could a woman six inches shorter ever get stronger unless I used?
Yet his actions had matched his words. He’d stopped lifting when I hit the weight room and switched to cardio. He always wanted me to ride him cowboy style when we’d had sex and he’d whisper to me about how strong I was and how weak he was in comparison. It suddenly dawned on me, it wasn’t just play talk in bed. He desperately wanted me to be stronger in bed and outright dominate him. The weight of the revelation suddenly overwhelmed me and I knew how important my next words would be. I couldn’t dash his dreams nor make him feel belittled. “What I mean is, until I get stronger than you. It’s just hard to pretend.” We both knew that day would never arrive, but he needed to believe. It was important to him. “But I’ll get there.”
He smiled back. The words were the right ones even if they were full of B.S. Little did I know back then that I was wrong. Dead wrong.
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Interesting premise, merry x-mas to us. I wonder how things will proceed.
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A very interesting start. This is going to be a great story.
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Sounds pretty cool. I love this fantasy of this master slave thing. I always wanted to read some 50 shades of Grey with muscle growth ;) the girl lifts harder and harder to get his love and attention and pleasure him... Until she gets stronger than him.
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Interesting approach and I like it. In case you really wanted to know if we wanted to see more, hell yes. K+!
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Sounds pretty cool. I love this fantasy of this master slave thing. I always wanted to read some 50 shades of Grey with muscle growth ;) the girl lifts harder and harder to get his love and attention and pleasure him... Until she gets stronger than him.
That was my thought on this story arc as well Tapion. My problem is that I'm stuck on the method of her growth moving forward. I plan on quite a bit of hard work in the gym and a slow build - but then something else to take her over the top - with a lot of Fifty Shades slow build along the way.
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In addition to the poll, I'd be interested in what you guys would like in form of her level of domination when she gets stronger.
A.) Reluctant Domme
B.) Enjoys it but does it good natured
C.) Enjoys it too much gets aggressive and mean
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Hm... I think A mix would be best? Some doms take their time to find out what they like. Some like forced pain submission, others verbal or commands such as licking boots or toes. I suppose what I'm saying is some she enjoy, other not so much.
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For me, Definitely C. I want her to use her strength to its full potential! Thanks for the great story
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I would prefer option B. I prefer it if the woman is and enjoys being confident and dominant, but also loving and playfull. I personally don't like stories where the women are bullies or sadists or worse. I like the women to be heroic, with a personality that matches their body and strength and that is powerful, strong, confident, maybe even a little cocky,and dominant, but also loving, protective and good-hearted. A personality that is typical for (super)heroines. You could let her use her full strength not to abuse her husband, but to protect him from dangerous situations and those with bad intentions. So instead of being abusive and mean, she gets enraged because her boyfriend/husband(and maybe other people) is in danger. I also think option B is the moste balanced choice, since you have character who is dominant and enjoys it, but who is still likeable. But that's just my personal opinion. I'm looking forward to see the continuation of this story. Happy New Year and my best wishes for 2021.
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Interesting start.
Regarding main pool I chose 3rd option. It allows to make development faster, avoid common downsides of steroids and make about magic level. Like increasing muscle mass, strength and lowering fat keeping her skin perfect (or even improving it), face as beautiful as possible, maybe even bigger natural breasts and so on. There are pretty much possibilities.
And of course if she is a scientist then she should be really smart :) Strong beautiful and very smart women are my main fetish )))
Regarding domination type pool I prefer option B. I don't like violence in relationships, my type is vanilla stories. For me preferably way to show domination is a challenge. Male lead can try to win various competitions, but always loose:
* Weight lifting
* Light athletic
* Basketball and other play sports
* Wrestling and box
If she is a scientist she can show her superiority in intelligence too:
* Playing chess and other board games
* IQ test
* Other intellectual games
And as a pinnacle of dominance she can start her own business that became greatly successful in short time or she is genius trader. So she became breadwinner in thrir family.
And all of this with love and respect.
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We have enough stories of option C. Let's see more A or B
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I think with the nature of this story and your writing in general it would be a shame if you didnt go for for option C.
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You have a lot of stories falling into the B category with more gentle domination like Muscle Love and Built, I don't think you've ever truly explored a setting like this. Having said that I think a gradual transformation would be ideal and one where she isn't arbitrarily mean or excessively dominant but sensibly so. I think you can also have elements of her being loving, just in a dominant way.
Would also love to see more elements of a role reversal kind of theme in this story which I think you write unbelievably well. The scene in muscle love where she protects him from the attacker and then proceeds to have sex in the car was one that springs to mind, absolutely amazing. And domination on more fronts (at work, intellectually, etc) would also be really cool.
Extremely hyped for this story and hope you don't put a cap on what's possible for it, been waiting for one like this from you and this premise seems perfect. And loved all your other work as well, simply the best writer in this genre where domination and slow growth are involved
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You have a lot of stories falling into the B category with more gentle domination like Muscle Love and Built, I don't think you've ever truly explored a setting like this. Having said that I think a gradual transformation would be ideal and one where she isn't arbitrarily mean or excessively dominant but sensibly so. I think you can also have elements of her being loving, just in a dominant way.
Would also love to see more elements of a role reversal kind of theme in this story which I think you write unbelievably well. The scene in muscle love where she protects him from the attacker and then proceeds to have sex in the car was one that springs to mind, absolutely amazing. And domination on more fronts (at work, intellectually, etc) would also be really cool.
Extremely hyped for this story and hope you don't put a cap on what's possible for it, been waiting for one like this from you and this premise seems perfect. And loved all your other work as well, simply the best writer in this genre where domination and slow growth are involved
Thanks for your comments so far - really helpful. I plan to follow the poll results on this one for sure. So far its pretty tight between muscles growing through PEDs and researching myostatin inhibitor. I will probably put a second poll up between A-C afterwards. I think I've done B several times as you mention KS and Torture Muscle definitely became C. but never A.
So far I've been working on the character background, scene setting, and domination ideas as I wait for more results here. Happy New Year all
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Uggh, for some reason I cannot reset the poll feature, but I'd love you opinions on this question as well.
How would you like to see her level of domination go in this story as she gets stronger than him and why?
Reluctant Domme
Enjoys it but does it good natured
Enjoys it too much gets aggressive and mean
Physically destroys him, feminization
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Hey Taoschild, I like your stories very much. One of the reason is that you always tend to go for the scenario with somebody being dominating, who 'Enjoys it but does it good natured'. So I'd get in this direction too, it is very rare among FMG themed stories.
Thanks
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Adding on to reasons mentioned in the last comments, would love to see a sort of role reversal kind of situation where she goes from reluctant done all the way to the other extreme of physically dominating him and feminization. This doesn't necessarily need to be cruel as well. I think torture muscle was quite different cause the protagonist was forced into that situation but think the character development opportunities between two loving partners would be far more interesting.
Would love to see the amazing character arc as in all your stories but maybe with more emphasis on the domination given the theme of the story. As well as her overall progress within the world (workplace, confidence etc).
As always, thanks for the amazing work. Love your writing.
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I agree with Qibikk's opinion. I would prefer the female protagonist to be dominating but good-natured as well.
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Definitely the third or fourth options. Personally I love the role-reversal idea going all the way from sub to extreme dom. Physical violence doesn't do much for me, so it's really more about the attitude, but all the way to feminization is way hotter than her staying good-natured and loving.
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I have already answeredbthis question here, but let me repeat myself after update. My favorite is option 2. Dominant but gentle and caring. I am never tired of such stories and we already have very much violence here :)
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Great story!
I would like to see a blend of options 2 and 3: Keep the domination good natured and loving, but let there be some hints of aggression without being overly mean. I like seeing the potential for darkness, even if it never fully manifests. It can make a sub even more grateful for "good natured" domination, knowing where it could go if things went badly. Alternatively, the sub could develop a curiosity for what hides in the darkness.
In any event, great start and I hope there will be more to come.
K+
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Great story!
I would like to see a blend of options 2 and 3: Keep the domination good natured and loving, but let there be some hints of aggression without being overly mean. I like seeing the potential for darkness, even if it never fully manifests. It can make a sub even more grateful for "good natured" domination, knowing where it could go if things went badly. Alternatively, the sub could develop a curiosity for what hides in the darkness.
In any event, great start and I hope there will be more to come.
Thank you Wap, Wap et al - It's great to get feedback from everyone, especially the many of you I consider fantastic authors. I think I'm going to do a gentle glide into option 3, touching on option 4 and then reverting to #2. It will be a challenge and I'll drop some sections in here as I write the novel.
Thank you.
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Great story!
I would like to see a blend of options 2 and 3: Keep the domination good natured and loving, but let there be some hints of aggression without being overly mean. I like seeing the potential for darkness, even if it never fully manifests. It can make a sub even more grateful for "good natured" domination, knowing where it could go if things went badly. Alternatively, the sub could develop a curiosity for what hides in the darkness.
In any event, great start and I hope there will be more to come.
Thank you Wap, Wap et al - It's great to get feedback from everyone, especially the many of you I consider fantastic authors. I think I'm going to do a gentle glide into option 3, touching on option 4 and then reverting to #2. It will be a challenge and I'll drop some sections in here as I write the novel.
Thank you.
Wow, it looks like amazing idea! And yeah it would really challenging. But I think that you are one of the best and most advanced writers in this theme, so I am sure that you will do awesome job! :)
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Your idea sounds great, Taoschild. This promises to be another great story.
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Personally, I'd love a little of all 4 options myself. But I'm just greedy that way :funny:
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Great story!
I would like to see a blend of options 2 and 3: Keep the domination good natured and loving, but let there be some hints of aggression without being overly mean. I like seeing the potential for darkness, even if it never fully manifests. It can make a sub even more grateful for "good natured" domination, knowing where it could go if things went badly. Alternatively, the sub could develop a curiosity for what hides in the darkness.
In any event, great start and I hope there will be more to come.
Thank you Wap, Wap et al - It's great to get feedback from everyone, especially the many of you I consider fantastic authors. I think I'm going to do a gentle glide into option 3, touching on option 4 and then reverting to #2. It will be a challenge and I'll drop some sections in here as I write the novel.
Thank you.
That sounds like a good compromise.
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Any update on this?
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Hey KS,
Thanks for your interest. I'm 10 chapters into the book and I'm going to offer some 1/2 off coupons to people who took some time to give me suggestions. Also, I plan to drop an edited first couple of chapters here as well.
In the end, I settled on her reluctantly becoming the domme after getting stronger (that takes many chapters) and after some rationalizing growing to enjoy it. She will always love him, but her expectations for his submission grow as she continues to get bigger and stronger which will involve conflict as well.
Let me know if you have any thoughts or suggestions.
-Richard
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That sounds like a great storyline. I'm looking forward to it.
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Awesome touch with the coupon man! Can't wait for the novel and I'm sure whatever choices you've made will play out fantastically. You've quickly become my favourite author in.this space so keep up the good work and the community engagement is very much appreciated.
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I'm editing some of the book and reading the chapters as they arrive. It's going to be neat, the feminine POV is a really nice perspective.
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Just read the previews on your new DA page and it's looking great so far! Any ideas on a release date?
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Thank you KS. I've finished the book and my wife and a friend are editing it at the moment. I also have an idea for a spinoff chapter that I'm going to write with Fonk where the Dominant Sub has a sexual experience with her trainer in order to facilitate her domme training. It doesn't really work for the book so I think I'll offer it to those of you who helped me initiate the idea here for free.
More details when I'm done with the editing and the new chapter. :)
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Hey Taoschild, any update on this?
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Hey KS,
Sorry for the delay. :'( I've finished writing The Reluctant Domme but I'm editing it with a fine toothed comb this time. My wife has edited it and I have an editor going through it as well. The book is 17 chapter and I've edited up through Chapter 16 and my editor Chapter 12 so hopefully it will be out within a month.
As I promised, I'm also writing a 4-5 chapter Novella entitled Sub Practice to go along with The Reluctant Domme and will provide a coupon for a free purchase to those of you who helped me with the initial idea (for what I think will be my best book yet). In Sub Practice, the main character from The Reluctant Domme, Dani, tries to teach the female trainer she surpassed how to be submissive in the bedroom. It's pretty much going to be all sex ;)
I put a small phone sex scene for TRD on my DA if anyone is interested *****rgreye and will post a little more of TRD here as I get closer to publishing (along with a short story I just wrote which is far tamer).
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Hey Buddy! No worries I'm sure the wait is worth it. Been super hyped about this one so wanted to check up on you and see how it's going. Loved the new story on DA and am super stoked about the novella as well :)
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Hey Buddy! No worries I'm sure the wait is worth it. Been super hyped about this one so wanted to check up on you and see how it's going. Loved the new story on DA and am super stoked about the novella as well :)
Thank you. As I get closer to publishing I'll post more of the introduction (re-edited) here. This is a start...
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“How?”
“Do you really want me to show you, Dani?” His eyebrow arched up as if I didn’t quite understand what the consequences of my assent might be. A ripple of fear shivered through me. The way his candidly observant hazel eyes reflected the brilliance of the firelight only enhanced my wariness. Goosebumps immediately lined the torso of my nude frame as if a field of wheat had miraculously germinated. One benefit of the seemingly ceaseless rain that winter was that all the extra time spent at home seemed to inevitably evolve into extracurricular activities.
Lips pressed together, tongues investigating, hands caressing, our lithe, sweaty bodies met each evening. Drowning out the thunder outside, we made love by the firelight on our bedroom floor area rug under a twisted lump of blankets. Other times we’d graduate to the bed itself, where we fondled each other’s firm bodies before we ‘did the deed.’ Recently our lovemaking had become a bit staid and predictable, but we still performed and fell asleep with our bodies intertwined.
But that night, he wanted something different. Trying to shake up the monotony, he’d asked me on more than one occasion to play the more aggressive partner when we coupled. A dominatrix, he’d called it. Try as I might, the not-so-subtle programming by society to be submissive had set in and made the task an impossible one. The subconsciously whispered refrain to wear makeup, look pretty, have good manners translated into discomfort bordering on outright anguish when it came time to take charge. Performing as a dominatrix in the bedroom only increased the discomfort tenfold. Almost every time I’d tried it previously, it had ended up with me laughing or asking for inane things which inevitably turned him off.
I nodded, not exactly sure of what I was agreeing to. Jack, my husband for five years, was everything I dreamed of in a man. He was a laundry list of ‘must haves’ for women seeking a mate; loving, intelligent, supportive, hard-working, rugged, sculpted, and well-off financially. His olive complexion, dark hair, and bright smile, which he was quick to flash, catered to my taste in men as well. He had a great family which meant I had no in-law issues.
From the start, his Mom had considered me a ‘good catch.’ She was a feminist ahead of her time, so it wasn’t because people considered me good-looking. Sure, I had blue eyes, blonde hair, long legs, a bright smile, and what guys would call ‘firm tits’ (not that his mom took stock of this). One of my college roommates affectionately called me “your basic nightmare” because my looks shamed others. God, I hate even admitting that. But it wasn’t how I looked that impressed his Mom. It was the fact that I said what I wanted, didn’t wear much makeup, and stood up to Jack when I needed to that set me apart.
Now that I think about it, that sassiness is probably why Jack was attracted to me in the first place. Even then he wanted to be told what to do. Why hadn’t I seen that before? Jack was absolutely devoted to me and showed his trust in me by sharing a secret that he’d never dared tell another soul.
It was the day after our engagement and we were relaxing on the couch watching television. If memory serves me, it was Seinfeld. Thursday nights meant the trifecta; Friends, Seinfeld, and E.R., and the evening was always topped off by pizza and beer. Yet that night his usual caustic comments and fun jibes at the shows were replaced by fidgeting so pronounced I’d finally asked “What’s wrong?” in frustration.
He stammered momentarily, then finally managed with his voice little more than a whisper, “Look, I love you more than anyone, but…” he stood up and paced back and forth behind our couch.
“But what?”
“I…” His jerky movements showed a level of agitation I hadn’t seen in him before, so I didn’t interrupt again and silently willed him the confidence to continue.
He stopped and looked at me, his hand rubbing the back of his neck. My eyes implored him to continue. “You have the most expressive eyes,” he muttered.
“I’m pretty sure that’s not what you wanted to say. Don’t worry. It’s okay. I love you.”
“I love you too. It’s just that I have... this thing.” Not the most descriptive thing, I thought. “And I… I have to let you know something before you commit to me. I’m pretty sure that ship has sailed unless you have a dead body in the basement. “It wouldn’t be fair unless I shared my dark side with you.” For a moment I thought he was kidding, but the expression on his face said otherwise.
My skin crawled as we walked down the creaky wooden stairs into his poorly lit, concrete-floored basement. The stale smell of the air and the frigid temperature only contributed to my gloomy feeling about what would come next. Under the stairs, he pointed to a stack of boxes and a purple Converse duffle bag sitting atop.
“What?” I asked, not really wanting his ‘dirty secret’ revealed, but asking nonetheless. At least it’s too small for a dead body.
“Open them and see how weird I am before deciding I’m what you really want.” My face winced in confusion. What was this dark secret he was hiding? With trepidation, I slid past him and reached for the bag as if it might bite. It was so quiet, with him watching motionless, that the zipper sounded piercing as I opened the bag. Looking inside with confusion, there wasn’t a gun or something horrific as I’d begun to fear, only a number of haphazard VHS tapes. I picked a few up, still trying to grasp what was going on. They were labeled with confusing terms like WPW 34, Ms. Int 1989, or Debbie while others remained blank. “What, what are these?” I asked, still not getting the point.
“Put one in,” he responded, motioning to a 6” old-fashioned VCR/TV combo unit that screamed technology of a bygone era. The secret was killing me — his demeanor was so unlike him, unsure and mysterious. As I grabbed the one labeled Ms. Int 1989 and put the tape in the player, I heard his nervous, raspy breath increasing to a feverish pitch. The once familiar hum of the VCR tape whirled into action and the screen lit up.
A tanned woman raced onto a brightly lit stage in a pink swimsuit, placed her palm to her forehead, bent down, pointed one foot behind her, and froze in position until some music began. Her arm swelled like I envisioned a strong man’s might, her bent leg bulging with lines carved as if in concrete, and her pointed foot revealed a calf split in two, thick with muscle. I stared in awe. I’d heard of female bodybuilders, but never really given them much notice.
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Sorry for being so late on this! I felt the need to write this as soon as I read the novel on the day of release but put it off for some reason.
For people who wont don't want to read this entire review, PLEASE BUY THIS BOOK and support this author. It is an entire novel full of just amazing female muscle growth, with amazing slow growth and descriptions. It has insanely good build up and character development similar to a high quality book outside the genre. For someone who likes dominant women, it made me even thoroughly enjoy the submissive side. That's how good this novel is. All this for less than 10 dollars is just unbelievable.
As someone who has had a passion for the fmg genre and slow growth and intelligent psychological characters, this is really as good as it gets. I am glad we have people like richard producing this kind of content and am very grateful for all his work, it truly is very intelligent and also helps me comes to terms with my own feelings about this genre and the shame I have sometimes associates with it through the interesting characters and their thoughts.
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Ks thank you so much for the amazing review. If you have a chance please review it where you purchased it too. Fonk and I are currently working on the sequel novella which will have a number of juicy sex scenes as well.
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Hope to see more soon, no rush. Its great work as always.
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Thanks JHunter. Fonk and I are having a little hiccup writing the story at the moment but we should still be on track to finish it by the end of the summer. In the meantime I'm working on developing the D&D story I wrote here into a full length novel. I appreciate your support.
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Hey Taoschild, hope you are well! Anything new you've been working on?
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Hey KS = thanks for the questions. I'm working on two different things at present.
#1 a novella addition to The Submissive Domme entitled Submission Practice and a full novel version of D&D. My wife has agreed to write some of the chapters in the work which are from the female perspective. Here is a link to the rough draft of chapter 1 that I posted here:
https://saradas.org/index.php?topic=754649.0
Take care
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That's amazing! Been following the thread on D&D and it's fantastic so far. Was wondering whether you take commissions? Had some ideas I think you could bring to life really well
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That's amazing! Been following the thread on D&D and it's fantastic so far. Was wondering whether you take commissions? Had some ideas I think you could bring to life really well
Thank you. Yes, my wife and I accept them but we're pretty slow given we're writing books as well. Feel free to message me here or on DA. I've been watching Olympic rowing recently and I'm thinking there may be a story there. DnD is going to be mostly fantasy with muscle thrown in as is my upcoming Victorian Woman mystery story.
In the meantime I plan to break up the novels with some shorts to post here. Not sure if I want to go soft porn or aggressive domme for my next one. Maybe people have some ideas.
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Hey KS:
That's amazing! Been following the thread on D&D and it's fantastic so far. Was wondering whether you take commissions? Had some ideas I think you could bring to life really well - I do when I have a chance - I'm on DA
The sequel to this book is due out soon and I'd love to give discount coupons to those of you who helped give me suggestions on this thread prior to the release of the Reluctant Domme. If my inbox is full here email me at jgmuscle12 at gmail and let me know who you are here. Also, if you read the original and could leave a review I'd greatly appreciate it. I'll drop some segments of Submission Training here soon. Here is the copy cover and a brief teaser:
Tiffany Brooks is a powerful female bodybuilder accustomed to getting exactly what she wants and whats--especially in the bedroom. When she falls in love with a man who desires to hold the power in their lovemaking though, she turns to an old friend, Dani, for help. Dani and her husband have perfected the Dominatrix-Submissive relationship, but when they teach her submission 101 first hand, will it damage their own chemistry or amp it up further?
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Short Quote from the book: The disquiet after dinner was palpable. All of us felt it. Questions tumbled through my brain. Why is so much of my life defined entirely by my fetish? What happened to my hobbies, goals, and dreams? Am I one-dimensional? If I go ahead with this, will Jack forgive me? Can I accept him having sex with her?
But desire overwhelmed my hesitation. The idea of legs spread, two powerful bodies smashing against each other, measuring the power of each thrust, colored my mind. We’d be using that tonight, or better said I’d be using her with that tonight. “That sounds intriguing. I like the idea of that.” I said, trying unsuccessfully to keep the menacing tone from my voice.
Anyway, I've really enjoyed playing with the character arc of Jack and Dani and now Tiffany as well. I still think I should have explored option 4 at some point - maybe in a short story or something. If you have a scenario or an idea let me know.
-Richard
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I think the forth option would only be enjoyable, at least for me, if the guy who gets destroyed really deserves it and is a truly despicable human being. He could be a remorseless (serial) rapist or (serial) killer, or a crime/druglord who doesn't care tht his "business" hurts innocent people. The story could be about one (or more) of his female victims or one (or more)of the female relatives or friends of a victim becoming a musclebound amazon to take revenge. I think it would also be a good choice to let the female character interact with characters other than the antagonist and to make the interactions with those characters more benevolent. Maybe the protagonist doesn't just brutalize the antagonist, she could also save other potential victims in the process or have a wholesome interaction with someone she cares about. I think making the antagonist truly despicable and including benevolent interactions with other characters would help to balance the brutality and making the female character more likeable and three dimensional, so that she doesn't seem like a sadistic psycho who just likes to brutalize men.
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Might be fun to make Dani into a Dexter like character who kills misogynistic murderers who get away with it (after she dominates and abuses them) ;)