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Female Muscle Art - Female Muscle Fiction => Muscular Women Fiction => Topic started by: princton on March 05, 2015, 07:55:27 pm
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Stories in this collection:
#1st STORY: Girl Grows Muscular and Gets Revenge on Her Ex #WIP
Short Halloween Story #WIP
Hell Hath No Fury #WIP
Third Shift Can Be Dangerous
The Demoness #WIP
this is a story i made up (this is my first one and i don't write much ):
Girl Grows Muscular and Gets Revenge on Her Ex
by princton
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part 1: the growth
my name is mercedes, i was 18 when i first met gavin. i've always been weak but am incredibly smart. I'm 5'5" and only weigh 95 lbs. i have long black hair down to my low back but i'm too bony for anyone to find attractive and barely have b cup breasts. I met him in my chemistry class my first year of college. he was tall and sooooo handsome and muscular, a classic jock. i kept sneaking glances at him during the lecture and saw he looked so confused i had to help him. when class got out i rushed to catch up to him in the halls and convinced him to let me tutor him! we studied together every day for 5 weeks and were getting really close but i didn't want to get my hopes up. then on the 6th week he asked me to be his girlfriend i was so excited, "of course!" i told him. the rest of the semester flew by i was in heaven! but then....he changed. he started to get violent, everything i said and did would just piss him off. i was late going to his dorm one night and beat me unconscious. i went through his stuff one night when he wasn't home to see what could be causing this strange erratic behavior, the gavin i first met was so gentle but strong and now he's just a brute. i found a syringe in one of his drawers and knew instantly he was on roids. when he returned to his dorm i brought it up and he snapped. he hit me four times in the stomach and then kneed me in the face. when i fell he mounted me and slammed my head back on the ground " you say one word bitch and i'll kill you, you're nothing to me and never were anything more than a quick lay" i left that night in tears and vowed to hurt him more than he could ever hurt me.
2 years later.....
it's been 2 years since that night and i've been going to the gym every single day and my body refuses to put on an ounce of muscle. I called my best friend jess who is a major in chem just like i am to tell her about my problem. "you want to get really muscular? that's gross!" she said "but let's see what we can do" we worked for 2 weeks on a formula that would make me grow muscle and finally it was complete. "bottoms up" she said as she poured the contents of the first of 3 batches down my throat(i couldn't do it myself she chained me down because we didn't know what kind of affect it could have on my mind). we waited for 3 hours and nothing so she unchained me "looks like a failure" she said. i started crying and she came up to hug me and i hugged her back. suddenly i could feel a burning in my muscles. jess! i said "i think it's working!" my arms started to thicken slowly and corded with veins, i could feel my stomach tighten. jess gasped as my clothes started to tear, the burning intensified as I started growing taller. She started pushing against me and screaming but I didn’t even notice her efforts to get away. My shirt finally lost the battle as my growing tits tore it open. Finally every muscle in my body tensed up and the burning stopped. I let go off jess and she gasped for air I didn’t even realize I was holding her so tightly. “DAMN!” she said “you’re fucking strong I thought I was going to die for a second” I looked in the mirror and laughed. I grew over 6’ tall! And was completely naked except my panties. I flexed did a full muscular pose and they snapped off. My pecs were massive and now I had to be a size D at least. My biceps fully flexed were 23 inches and my quads looked to be 35. Even my ass grew full and round. Then the thought occurred to me that no one else should know about this but myself and what a great opportunity to test my strength. I walked over to jess and picked her up by the throat with just one hand. The terror in her eyes started to turn me and I realized I loved having such power. I threw her into the wall and she fell down dazed. I picked her up again but this time I put her in a sleeper hold, she started gasping before I even flexed my arm and I giggled. Her throat offered no resistance to my bicep when it cut into her and when I flexed she panicked and elbowed me in the stomach but I didn’t feel a thing. Then I got serious and flexed my arm as hard as a could within 3 seconds she stopped struggling and it became too much for me destroying her turned me on so much I climaxed without even touching myself. I waited 2 more minutes to make sure she couldn’t recover and let her drop to the floor. I kissed her body once on the lips and grabbed the remaining two doses. “if one dose increased my strength this much I wonder what both of these will do?” so I drank them real fast and went to pay a visit to gavin
any criticism or advice is appreciated!
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Writing wise, instead of large blocks of text, separate dialogue every so often to make it easier to read. Also you could try and extend the growth a little bit more rather than it all happening at once. That's just my two cents. It's not a bad start.
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sorry it took so long but here's the next part
part 2: revenge can be deadly
Gavin's view
"that bitch better not be late, she has one more minute to get here or she's dead" he said as he waited for his girlfriend, char, to get back. ' the door bell rings' bout fucking time she got here! i opened the door and it's my ex girlfriend and she's fucking fat and tall wth?! what the hell do you want? i asked as i pushed her just to make he fall on her fat ass....or that was the intent but i couldn't budge her...did i feel a 6-pack? she gave me a seductive smile, you like what you feel? she said, i've changed a lot. she grabbed my wrist as she said that and placed it on her arm and flexed, i gasped her bicep was hard as hell and when i pressed down she flexed harder and her sleeve tore. am i sexy enough for you now fucker? she asked as she picked me up by the throat with one hand and using the other pressed me against her chest. I realized belatedly her chest was really soft, softer than a person with no tits should be. I could kill you with just my boobs, as she said that she flexed her chest and couldn't breath i grabbed her tits but could only feel muscle that wouldn't budge, i screamed but all that did was make her laugh, she flexed harder and i heard a tearing sound as her coat and shirt ripped open, i passed out.
when i woke up i was in my bedroom and couldn't see a damn thing, when suddenly the lights turned on; when i could see again the first thing i noticed she was a damned ass right in my face. looking up i saw there were mirrors completely covering my room so i could see every angle. "o you're awake" she said. mercy was lying on top of me in the 69 position wearing just sinfully tight jean shorts that was so form fitting it left nothing to the imagination. " you have 2 choices, you can make me orgasm with your tongue and ONLY your tongue...or you can die between my thighs so what'll it be?" to punctuate her point she flexed her thighs fucking hard! or at least i thought it was hard, after 20 seconds her shorts tore open...she was wearing nothing underneath. you have 2 minutes she said every 12 seconds i'll increase how hard i squeeze by 10% you just felt 2%. start now.... luckily oral is something i'm fucking amazing at. after 10 seconds she was wet....or was it just dominating me that was causing that? after the promised 12 seconds she started squeezing and i almost passed out, jesus fuck! i yelled i thought you said you were only squeezing 10% harder!? i did she giggled, you better get going. i continued, i licked harder and more furiously than ever before after 36 seconds she was moaning and almost at orgasm. 7 more seconds and i could feel her juices flooding my thought and i sighed in relief, finally fucking done. but her legs started to flex harder and i choked, what...what are you doing!?!?!? i can't stop! she said as she crossed her ankles, this feels too good! i grabbed her ass, which was already steel and couldn't believe it was getting fuller and harder. all i could see was darkness as her thighs fully covered my head. i moved my hands to the insides of her thighs and attempts to pry her legs apart and heard a crack as my arms broke and then.....nothing
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writings tough. try finding your favorite story. then see what elements stick out. its obvious you've got a concept here, and it seems interesting. I would suggest fleshing out the characters a bit more. it causes the reader to connect.
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Dude! This is great stuff. Keep it up! Just milk the moments you like most with a bunch of sexy detail. I'll definitely keep reading.
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Short Halloween Story
by princton
it's 10 o clock and my doorbell rings "trick or treat!" i open my door to find a woman, she must have been anywhere from 19-25, in a cheerleader outfit. she was about 5'6" fairly fit, her costume showed off her firm legs and well toned abs as well as her very pert breasts. I had a shitty day so i told her to fuck off, she's way too old to be trick or treating. As she turned around to leave i thought i saw a tear roll down her cheek.
32 minutes later: i'm about to fall asleep when i hear "trick or treat!" pissed i get up to answer the door and there she is again except now she's wearing a pendant. "i already told you to get lost" i told her. she looked at me and asked, you won't give me a treat? she starts to smile...a smile i can only describe as evil and yet incredibly seductive. i guess i'll have to give you a trick then she says as her muscles start to pulse and grow larger. veins sprouted all over her biceps, abs, and legs. she grabs me by the throat with one hand and lifts me up. w...what are you doing? i barely manage to get out as her fingers tighten. i'm going to kill you tonight, i don't know exactly how this pendant work but i DO know i can get more than strong enough to crush you to death. looking down i notice her tits are about a DD cup and there's 3 inches of muscular cleavage but i can't see the rest of her body. she roughly shoves my face into her cleavage and flexes, her tits completely envelope my head. two seconds later i pass out.
i woke up and saw her flexing her ass and calves "i could kill anyone with these muscles! she saw i was awake and sexily walked towards me "dieing between my thighs is a good way to go" she sat next to me and wrapped her now 38"thighs around my waste and squeezed. i hit her stomach but she felt nothing, she grabbed by hand and placed it in her cleavage, time to punish u she said as my hand shattered. i started to cough up blood as she tightened the scissor, suddenly she moaned and her muscles grew again i felt fluids coming out of her nether regions at the same time every one of my ribs snapped....
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Good. A rather straight-forward short-story. Would you feel compromised if someone would extend this to a bigger story?
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yeah go ahead just give credit to the original please
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This is a rough draft but here we go.
Hell Hath No Fury
by princton
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1 month ago
I just wish you were more muscular, Brandon said for the 50th time this week. I flex my bicep, babe it's 17" a whole 2" bigger than it was only half a year ago, how big do you really want me to be!? The biggest, he said. Now i got to go on another business trip so I won't be back for another 3 months i hope you're bigger by then. Without another word he left; pissed i kicked a stool and sent it crashing against the wall, business trip my ass he must be fucking someone else i'm obviously not enough for him considering this is his second 3 month trip in a year and he has nothing better to say other than "i hope you're bigger by then" every time he leaves.
current time
I just finished telling my tattooist about Brandon and she gets a strange look in her eye, almost a happy look and says, i got just the tat for you! She comes back a few minutes later with a design that says strength and another that says power in spanish. I think this will make you feel more confident while working out and eventually you could become his dream girl!
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Looks promising, looking forward to the complete story.
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Great start. Please continue this idea.
Hope we will get more Infos what she's doing during the 3 month.
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A good setup for a story....promising... :woohoo:
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thanks for the support i'm trying to decide where to take the story torn between magic growth and demon possession :/
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Great start, I think you have a really good story here
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part 2:
she pulls out a bottle that says devils ink and tells me that this will help me a lot. She tells me to sit down and after i feel the first stab the intense pain makes me pass out.
i see a reflection of myself but about 5 times my size, do you desire power? it asks me. YES but i'd like to earn that kind of body for myself. It glares at me, we'll see she says.
part 3:
This will work i say, as i pick out a very tight fitting 2 piece leather outfit that shows off my abs nicely and barely contains my boobs. He'll love this i say right as i hear the front door shut. I smile because i know it's got to be brandon and run out of the bedroom and wrap him up in a hug, i missed you so much! he looks at me with no emotion and tells me you haven't even grown an inch if you really cared about us you'd have worked harder, i'm filing for divorce. He said as he back handed me across the face . I hear that voice again, do you desire power? it asked. YES i shout at it. At what cost, anything i respond.
part 4:
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Third Shift Can Be Dangerous
by princton
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It's 2:43 a.m on a Tuesday and i'm working at my cities local convenience store when a woman walks through the door. She's Hispanic from the looks of it about 5'6" with black hair in a ponytail to her upper back and wearing incredibly baggy cloths. She appears to be extremely over weight. When she gets up to the counter she tells me to put all the money from the registers into her backpack, looking her up and down i notice there's not really a good spot for her to carry a gun and since i'm a pretty fit male i tell her to fuck off since women in general are too weak to hurt me. She smiles at me then walks towards the door but instead of leaving she flips the sign to read that we're closed and locks the door. When she gets up to the counter she tells me "I was hoping you would say then" and slowly unzips the top of her sweatshirt just a enough so i can see her cleavage and inches of pec muscle....wait...pecs? as that thought finishes she grabs me behind the neck and shoves my face into her tits. This could have been so much easier on you, she says as she flexes her massive chest completely cutting off oxygen to my mouth and nose. Night night she says as my struggles grow weaker and eventually stop as i pass out.
When i come to i'm face down on the floor in the back office. I sit up and the first thing i see is a bunch of cushion in the corner along with her sweats. She comes walking into the office a few seconds later and i'm stunned she's incredibly muscular and wearing just a dominatrix looking outfit, an extremely short black leather skirt and a black leather bra, neither of which hid any of her incredibly sexy muscle . When she see's i'm awake she walks over to me and lifts me off the floor with one hand by the throat her massive bicep(about 25 inches) bulges with the effort but she doesn't seem to struggle, this could have been much easier on you but now i'm not even sure if you'll survive this, saying that she drops me onto the floor. Look up she says and as i do she steps forward so my neck is incased in her thighs and my chin is facing her crotch. grk i say. Shut up my little bitch i haven't even started squeezing then she crosses her ankles and her quads swell against my jaw. I panic and grab her thighs with my hands, they're so vascular and huge, i never thought i'd feel what 36 inch quads feel like but i did and then i passed out.
TBC
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When I woke up she was standing in the doorway holding two 16 oz. Coke cans. Good you're awake about time, she said. I don't think you're scared enough of me yet so I'm going to put on a quick show for you, don't even think of looking away. Putting one can in the crook of her arm she slowly started to flex her bicep and just as it was about to peak the can exploded. I gasped accidentally and she smiled then turned around and put the second can in between her round, incredibly muscled ass cheeks and flexed hard causing the can to burst instantly. Then she grabbed the stores small metal filing cabinet and sat down placing it in between her thighs, you don't need this do you? She asked as she crossed her ankles. Her quads seemed to double in size as she flexed and soon the sides started to cave in, as the metal screeched she started to moan sexily, damn I love I strong I am.
Getting up she looked at me, now imagine those objects were you....not that you'll have to for long. Before we continue I want you to worship my muscles.
Tbc
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:hey: WOW! THIS IS A GOOD SHORT LITTLE STORY WITH LITTLE CLIFF HANGERS TO KEEP ON CHECKING BACK FOR MORE..AGAIN :bravo:
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She snap flexed her quads and i quickly crawled to her legs, even if i wanted to i wouldn't be able to not worship her muscles. Placing my hands around her calves i could almost feel every vein and every flex of her muscle but unfortunately i couldn't fit my hands around them. I told you to worship not to cop a feel, she said as she trapped my neck in those calves. I frantically started tapping as hard as i could and she chuckled, how cute....you think you can tap out then her calves seemed to fill with muscle as they bit into my neck. As i was about to black out again she let me go, that's too quick she said. You have one more warning worship me or you will suffer the consequences.
tbc
the next part will have much more action but i can't decide if i want him to live or die or just do an alternate ending so i can do both. any suggestions? i'll also try adding more detail to the last part
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I think him dying would be a nice twist...especially if she gets off on it and stuff
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She pointed her toes forward and flexed her calf again, I quickly start to kiss and lick the massive muscle. Better she said and flexed her quad hard. The definition and size was incredible, as I was kissing her inner thigh I heard a tear and looked up in time to see her panties couldn't contain the growth and were torn in half. She flexed her abs, 6 bricks with veins going down to her pelvis. She turned around and told me to do her ass next. I was doing just that and had 3 fingers towards the crack when she said I told you that you won't have to imagine for long. Before it registered what she ment she flexed you butt hard trapping my fingers. I tried pushing against her when she doubled the pressure and my eyes started to water, I heard a crack and then felt a huge pain as she broke my fingers.
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Letting go of my hand she turned around and placed her hand on the side of my neck, hush she said as she pulled my face to hers. She kissed me deeply and despite the pain I was in I found myself deeply aroused returning the kiss. She wrapped her arms around me in a hug but then locked her wrists and the next thing I knew I was surrounded by a wall of muscle. I screamed into her mouth as I felt a rib crack and then two. I struggled as hard as I could but couldn't budge her arms an inch. O yes she hissed struggle harder, she started grinding her hips into me, I love it when they struggle it makes me so horny. She tightened her grip more and two more ribs went, I started to gasp in pain and fear. She dropped me and I fell to the ground. Lets play a game if you win I'll leave you with nothing worse than your injured ribs and broken fingers but if I win....she chuckled, well you'll see. She got on top of me in the 69 position and tore opened my pants letting my dick, which was somehow still hard, hang out. I'm going to put you in a reverse headscissor, I want you to eat me out and if I climax you win but if you pass out or climax first you lose, not that you really have a choice in the matter I'd recommend you do well. Internally I smiled, I can actually survive this crazy bitch, eating pussy is my one talent. She sensually started licking my dick and wrapped her thighs loosely around my head. I stuck my tongue in there and went to work, within a few seconds she started to moan. Her thighs started to flex and the second her interior aductors knifed into my throat I started to cough and gasp for air.. I started beating on her leg with my good hand but I don't think she could even feel it. O yes! That's what I'm talking about she shouted. I tried to continue my work and soon enough I could feel her juices starting to flow. When she finally climaxed she started squeezing incredibly hard, I heard a rushing in my ears and then a crack. Now just blackness.
Her POV at the end:
O wow you're good, you win. I looked back and couldn't see him, my completely ingolfed his head. I quickly released him and all I could see was a bloody mess, his skull was completely crushed. Woops I said giggling too bad. I wrapped my legs around his chest and flexed, cracking was all I could hear mmm I love the sound of mens bones breaking, I'm so sexy and powerful it feels so amazing to so completely dominate someone. I got up and got dressed, took the money from the registers flipped the sign back and left
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:woohoo:
Can't wait to read more from you!
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Thank you I'll make another short story soon 😁
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The Demoness
by princton
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I sit down at the bar, wearing the guise of a petit red head. I have a low cut mid riff top on that shows off my light six and ample c cup. 5 ft 9 inches tall with long thin legs and jean shorts that are just a bit too short, all in all the perfect frail look to attract someone who has...I should I put it?.... Impure intentions. Sure enough within 3 minutes a man approaches me, he's tall and fairly muscular. May I buy you a drink? He asks with a faintly Italian accent. I turn to him and turn on my sight allowing me to peer into his soul. Rape, murder, drug and human trafficking....perfect. He doesn't wait for me to answer, instead he walks up to the bar and comes back with a shot. Taking it I can scent a hint of ruffee, o yes! I'm going to enjoy breaking him. Putting on the sluttiest look I can I trace a line on his chest and lightly nibble his ear as I whisper I'd much rather you take me to you're place handsome.
We get to his place, it's a small house in the country, miles away from the nearest neighbor. It's not going to work I tell him nonchalantly as I close the door behind me. He looks confused so I reiterate. Your plan to rape and kill me, it won't work. His expression shifts from confused to smug. What can you do about it? You're so weak I could kill you with one hand. My stomach gets warm as I start the process of transforming. Flexing my bicep I smile, I'm a lot stronger than I look! He openly laughs at me but comes to a stunned stop as veins sprout up on my arm. I giggle, I just love that look they always get. My hair grows down to my butt. My biceps quickly grow from non existent to 12,13,17,24, then 33 inches with thick veins running along them. My shirt starts to tear as my lats thicken immensely.my abs start to pop out turning my stomach from flat to a very hard 12 pack with sexy veins running down towards my crotch. My boobs hit my chin as layers and layers of peck muscle forms, when it's done they're 4 inches thick. My shirt can no longer contain the growth and completely shreds. My bra snaps off and hits him in the face. My shorts ride up as my ass hardens and rounds. My quads four distinct muscles growing to 37,45,stopping at 54 inches . my calves formed a hard diamond shape and reached 20 inches. As the growth stopped I moaned, mmm I love that feeling. I slowly started walking towards him, swaying my hips so he could see every flex of my abs. I know what you're thinking, how is this possible? I was normal like you once, except being an evil ass hole of course, I even had a husband and child but one night one of our neighbors broke in and killed them in front of me and left me for dead. I turned him in and prayed every day he'd rot in prison but he left no evidence and he had a damn good lawyer who argued I wasn't fit to testify because of being as traumatized as I was. He didn't even get a day for his crime so I lost all faith and prayed to someone else to give me the strength to avenge my family and my prayers were answered with a few...interesting side effects I say as I reach him. I spin him around so his back is facing me and wrap my arms around him in a hug. As long as I send a steady stream of wicked people to him I get to keep this power but you see, I whisper in his ear, I feel compelled to make it, I tighten my grip, as painful as possible. In fact it's actually orgasmic I say as one of his ribs cracks.
I release my hold and wrap my arm around is neck, locking him in a classic sleeper hold and slowly start to apply pressure. Struggling he claws at my arm and gasps for breath, you know I wonder if I could pop your head clean off, maybe I'll try it I say chuckling, but no that'd be too fast and I want to enjoy this. When he is about to pass out I release the hold and he staggers forward. You.. Gasp...bitch!....gasp he says while holding his rib. I smirk as he pulls out a knife and runs towards me. When the knife is about an inch from my stomach I flex my abs hard, the veins becoming a little more pronounced and the knife breaks. Now what did you really expect to do with that I ask while flexing my biceps. I have a problem, I just can't decide how to kill you I say backing him into the wall and flexing my hips into his so he can't move away. I flex my pecs causing my blobs to bunch into his face completely covering it. He tries struggling again but can't get any air pass my boon flesh. Or should I break every bone in your body? I ask as I grab the back of his head and forcefully smash his face against my pecs crushing his nose.