Thank you for this book!
I purchased it on Amazon and it was very good read. In fact, it was one of the best female muscle stories in the terms of quality I ever met. Even though in terms of preferences it doesn't meet all of them
But you should never listen for them, I believe. Improving some general stuff, like grammar, style, characters and plot building - very good, but changing your story in the ways of what other people like is a dead end. You will never be able to satisfy everyone. So, please, continue to write the stories that make YOU happy
