Forum Saradas


Donate today to show love to your community!
gfxgfx
 
Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length
steroidify
 
gfx gfx
parapharma Advertising
gfxgfx
 
Welcome to Forum Saradas! Female Bodybuilding, Fitness, Figure & Bikini

Do you love female bodybuilding and events like the Olympia and the Arnold Classic? Are you interested in female bodybuilding, fitness, figure & bikini?
If so check out and join our female bodybuilding forum! Saradas is the oldest and most popular female bodybuilding, fitness forum.

🔥 At Saradas you will find the most amazing and rare pictures of probably every female professional bodybuilder who has ever competed.   
🔥 You can keep up with female bodybuilding news from all over the world and hear the latest on your favorite bodybuilder.
🔥 You will find the latest updates on bodybuilding events like the Olympia and the Arnold Classic.

Saradas is your one stop female bodybuilding resource. Come and join us!

Saradas - The Internet Female Bodybuilding Database
 
gfx gfx
gfx
575354 Posts in 73145 Topics by 28867 Members - Latest Member: Firestartertg April 25, 2024, 01:10:43 am
*
gfx* Home | Help | Login | Register | gfx
gfx
Forum Saradas  |  Female Muscle Art - Female Muscle Fiction  |  Muscular Women Art  |  Peters1967 - Comics
gfx
gfxgfx
 

Author Topic: Peters1967 - Comics  (Read 58143 times)

Offline jos73

  • Gold Member VIP
  • Hero Member
  • *******
  • Posts: 1386
  • Activity:
    43.33%
  • KARMA: 11767

Forum Saradas


Offline peters1967

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 54
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 198
  • Gender: Male
  • Female Bodybuilding, Strong Women Art
Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #1 on: December 17, 2020, 01:33:04 pm »
Hello to all,

I'm not really new to saradas.org, but I had a break for a while. I don't want to publish new stories regularly, but I want to post something here every now and then if you like it.
Searching for a good story some weeks ago I found the story „Skinny Brother“, written by „assassinua“ , who started the story and wrote from chapter 1 to 10, later another writer at this forum named Aadi contiuned.
Credit to the authors of this great story. You can read the text here: https://saradas.org/index.php?topic=597915.0
OK, I did the best I can do, I adapted the story into a comic  :) and made some changes.

One more thing: Assassinua wrote that English is not his/her mother tongue and therefore not everything is written in the best English. My mother tongue is also not English, so the text does not seem correct in some places. I beg your forbearance.

Actual I'm working on the last chapter (Chapter 13), but gradually I want to start publishing it. Here are the first parts. You can write whether you like the story and my work.

Stay health
Peter




To be continued
Peter
peters1967

Offline giantgirl7foot2

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 390
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 111
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #2 on: December 17, 2020, 02:28:14 pm »
This is AMAZING! Really loved the story and to see it in comic form is downright incredible!

 :rock:
User is currently banned [View]

Offline peters1967

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 54
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 198
  • Gender: Male
  • Female Bodybuilding, Strong Women Art
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #3 on: December 17, 2020, 03:07:52 pm »
Thank you, giantgirl7foot2. That's what an artist needs  ;D
Peter
peters1967

Offline wissen

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 198
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 2
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #4 on: December 17, 2020, 07:31:39 pm »
Wow, it was one of my favourite stories! Good to see itvas comics :)

Offline john jonh

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 59
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 7
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #5 on: December 18, 2020, 12:28:47 am »
wow that was great. looking forward for more  :clap:
User is currently banned [View]

Offline jhunter

  • Full Member
  • ***
  • Posts: 722
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 181
  • Female Bodybuilding, Physique, Fitness, Figure & Bikini
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #6 on: December 18, 2020, 03:00:33 am »
Nice work, you keep it up.

Offline peters1967

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 54
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 198
  • Gender: Male
  • Female Bodybuilding, Strong Women Art
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #7 on: December 18, 2020, 08:15:08 am »
You all are great and thanks for your kind words.

@Romenjohn:I still have a few of my old stories, some of which I wrote and illustrated myself, with the others I took stories from Diana The Valkyrie or other boards and provided them with pictures. Some of you will remember these stories, so I'm not sure if republishing these stories is too boring. In addition, the quality is not that good.

And here comes the next part of Skinny Brother.

Peter
peters1967

Offline giantgirl7foot2

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 390
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 111
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #8 on: December 18, 2020, 11:01:24 am »
So great! Love your comic style! It's so great to have you back—even better to have you back in style!
 
Small note, is it possible that the second batch was not uploaded as a gallery? Had to come back to this thread to click on each image, but didn't want to get spoiled.  ::)

Thanks again for the great work!
User is currently banned [View]

Offline peters1967

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 54
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 198
  • Gender: Male
  • Female Bodybuilding, Strong Women Art
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #9 on: December 18, 2020, 11:50:41 am »

 Small note, is it possible that the second batch was not uploaded as a gallery? Had to come back to this thread to click on each image, but didn't want to get spoiled.  ::)

Thanks again for the great work!

Thanks for the hint. Maybe I did something wrong with the upload / copy and paste. I am still practicing and trying to improve myself  :sorry:
Peter
peters1967

Offline wissen

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 198
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 2
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #10 on: December 18, 2020, 05:08:18 pm »
peters1967,

great chapter. Are you planning to make plot completely the same as the story? Have you already thought about continuation of the story?

Offline peters1967

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 54
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 198
  • Gender: Male
  • Female Bodybuilding, Strong Women Art
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #11 on: December 18, 2020, 05:41:02 pm »
wissen,

thanks.  For most of the parts, I stick to the story. There are only a few parts that I leave out or replace with my own ideas.
Regarding your question about a possible sequel: I always find it difficult to continue a story indefinitely. I think at some point the point will be reached where you should put an end to it.
 I feel that the ending after the thirteenth chapter is well set here.
Peter
peters1967

Offline ravanin

  • New
  • *
  • Posts: 24
  • Activity:
    6.67%
  • KARMA: 26
  • Female Bodybuilding, Physique, Fitness, Figure & Bikini
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #12 on: December 18, 2020, 11:41:54 pm »
Are you just gonna follow the original author story? cause the continuation someone else wrote where the sister becomes a cliche bitch was pretty bad.

Offline peters1967

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 54
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 198
  • Gender: Male
  • Female Bodybuilding, Strong Women Art
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #13 on: December 19, 2020, 08:29:30 am »
And here we go on


Peter
peters1967

Offline wissen

  • Newbie
  • *
  • Posts: 198
  • Activity:
    0%
  • KARMA: 2
Re: Skinny Brother Comic-Style
« Reply #14 on: December 19, 2020, 04:38:16 pm »
Are you just gonna follow the original author story? cause the continuation someone else wrote where the sister becomes a cliche bitch was pretty bad.
I agree with you. When sister started to hurt her brother it was a bit off.

Forum Saradas  |  Female Muscle Art - Female Muscle Fiction  |  Muscular Women Art  |  Peters1967 - Comics
 

gfxgfx
Forum Saradas does not host any files on its own servers.
gfx
It only points to various links on the Internet that already exist.
It is recommended to buy Original Video, CD, DVD's and pictures only.
gfx
Mobile View