+Notable Author: [Online1138 = smileyface] Lara's Muscles

[Online1138]

Also don't think about it too hard. I'm pretty sure I said in the first post that the story doesn't "make sense" if you really read into it.

so instead of trying to improve your writing you are just telling people to shut up and be happy with things you admit don't make sense, even though you wrote them

that is lazy

I can (and have) written better, but that's not why this was written.
It's like complaining that free verse poetry doesn't "make sense" because you were expecting to read written prose.

If you're getting hung up on the plot or character development or continuity (or lack thereof) in what I'm posting in this thread, then I'm not sure this thread is for you.

I'll quote two posts I made earlier in the thread on the first page:

Thanks! My motivation behind writing this was that I wanted to write something that was pure 100% undiluted fanservice. Stuff like "plot" or "conflict" or "other characters" just get in the way of what I *REALLY* want to read about, and that's descriptions of muscles and crazy feats involving muscles. I don't care if the sequence of events doesn't "make sense", or that tertiary characters vanish into thin air (this literally happens in later sections of the story I'll post, and I'll likely point it out). Why on earth am I going to spend valuable time explaining what happens to those characters when I can spend the same time describing Lara and her muscles?

I don't mean this as a slight against authors who spend time building their world and characters, or give them pathos and struggles and whatnot. That's great, and it's good storytelling. But I'd be lying if I said that's the real reason why I'm reading any sort of female-muscle-centric fiction. No, I'm reading it for the descriptions of female muscle, full stop.

Just being honest, I guess.

I mean I read a lot of stuff spanning a ton of genres, fiction, non-fiction, everything. But when I'm reading, I'm generally reading with a purpose. That purpose might be to learn something new, or laugh, or think about things from a different perspective, or get scared, or see how the plot gets resolved.

When I'm reading female muscle fiction, I ain't reading it for the plot and I'm rarely reading it for the characters. To be entirely blunt, it's like watching porn. I don't care about the plot or characters in porn, that's not why it was made and it's not why anyone is watching it. So if I'm going to write my own female muscle story, I'm not going to waste any time on the stuff I don't want to read about.

That "style" might not be for everyone, and that's totally okay because I wrote this story for me (and I wrote it years ago). I still tinker with it and add to it, and change stuff that doesn't "do it" for me anymore. Heck, the version of the story I keep on my harddrive completely omits the crazy feats of strength stuff that was posted in the other thread, because my tastes have changed over time and that stuff doesn't do anything for me anymore.

[iome60]

Most writers can get away with it because 99% of the readership is only 'reading' to jack off anyway. Online1138 said as much before that is what he's into. It doesn't matter what you sting together, people will trying to make the best of a bad situation as long as there is plenty of muscle and sex. This is precisely why I gave up. It simply isn't worth the time and effort because nobody cares, everybody skims through the story just to get to the good parts.

that isn't completely true, I think.
I do agree with you when you say that few people care for GOOD stories - like yours were - and even if I can put myself in the shoes of an author that does not receive the deserved amount of just recognition for his own GOOD work and feels rightful frustration, it remains true that for the poor and insignificant stories to win it is sufficient that GOOD authors - like you were - do nothing.
your works are missed, know this. you're one of the only three authors that are worth reading. I know you will not, but I wish you'd reconsider your decision: please, don't give up.

sincerely,
Stefano

[MegaMassiveMuscle]

This site is geared toward the erotic fantasies of female muscle...and this story is by far one of the best at satisfying the female muscle addict in me. Keep writing the way you want, haters gonna hate. I look forward to your next installment. :-D

[Online1138]

This site is geared toward the erotic fantasies of female muscle...and this story is by far one of the best at satisfying the female muscle addict in me. Keep writing the way you want, haters gonna hate. I look forward to your next installment. :-D

On that note, you should continue your story too!

[Online1138]

“We should invite my mom and dad over, they haven’t seen me since I started taking lots and lots of steroids. Do you think they’ll be impressed by our muscles?” Lara said with a giggle. She waddled over to the gym’s phone and set it to speaker, because her hulking biceps were too big for her to hold the phone near her ear.

“Hi, mom? I think you should come to my gym, it’s time you saw my progress! Oh, and I made some new friends I want you to meet.” Lara switched off the phone “They’ll be here any minute! I can’t wait to show them how huge we’ve gotten!”

Mary and Jim showed up at Lara’s gym a few minutes later; they could hardly believe their eyes when they saw the size of their teenage daughter.

“Oh my god, Lara!” Jim exclaimed, nearly fainting on the spot. His brain was unable to process how much hulking, gigantic muscle Lara had added to her body.

Lara giggled and flexed her triceps, the shredded muscles swelling outward from her arms and continuing to stretch her skin. “So what do you think, daddy? Am I still your widdle girl?” she chirped happily. “What do you think of my itty bitty muscles?”

“Lara, you’re HUMUNGOUS!” Mary exclaimed, rushing over to her daughter. “You look amazing! Have you been taking steroids!?”
“Yep! I’ve been overdosing on steroids every day so I could make my muscles SUPER-huge!”

“You’re huger than we could have ever imagined, Lara! Your muscles are just so thick and pumped and beefy!” Jim said happily, admiring Lara’s swollen and veiny physique.

“Can you even move anymore?” Mary inquired.

“Only a little,” Lara said with a giggle. “My muscles get in the way of my range of motion.” To demonstrate her point, Lara tried to bend her left arm. Her parents stared wide-eyed as their daughter’s mountainous bicep swelled with inhuman size and stretched her skin. True to her word, her ultra-thick forearm pressed against the rippling mound of steroid-pumped beef and prevented her from bending her arm “See? My muscles are so huge!”

“That’s incredible, honey! We’re so proud of you!” Lara’s parents hugged their massively muscular teenage daughter, overjoyed at the sheer size of her physique. Even together, the two adults couldn’t even begin to encompass Lara’s colossal, mutant girth.

Lara spread her lats wider, feeling her back explode with even more muscular development and force her parents farther apart. “Mfff! BIGGER!”

“Oh Lara, your back is so thick and dense!” Mary said, running her hands all over her daughter’s super-muscular back, lats, and traps, feeling the swollen ridges of muscle and throbbing, prominent veins surging everywhere.

“There’s some friends I want you to meet!” Lara said happily, stepping away from her awestruck parents. They turned around and saw Suzy and Amy, grinning widely and bulging with inhumanly overdeveloped muscle from head to toe. While not as gigantic as Lara, the two girls were obviously steroid-enhanced and were each easily more muscular than an entire Mr. Olympia lineup. The two freakishly muscular girls struggled to hit most-muscular poses, their monstrous bodies surging with even more bulk.

“This is Amy and Suzy! I’ve gotten them really addicted to steroids and helped them build up their bodies with lots and lots of sexy muscle. Don’t they look hot?!”

The two teenage muscle-monsters waddled over to Lara’s parents. “Oh my god, Jim, look at their hulking legs!” Mary exclaimed, staring at the two girls’ unbelievably muscle-bound thighs and calves.

“I know, Mary! They can barely bend their legs because their muscles are so gigantic!” Jim replied, in awe of how unnaturally muscular these two girls were.

Amy rose up on her toes and flexed her freaky quads, moaning in pleasure as her muscles bloated outward with ridiculous mass. Every single fiber of her colossal muscles was visible through her super-tight skin. Mary and Jim watched, eyes wide, as Amy was forced to spread her legs apart even more to accommodate the grotesquely swollen muscles filling every available inch on her thighs. “Do you like my big, muscley legs?” Amy chirped happily. She flexed even harder, her skin groaning loudly as her muscles exploded even thicker and freakier, her veins becoming even more pumped-up.

“Let’s go to the school and show everyone how huge we’ve gotten, especially Suzy!” Lara exclaimed.

“Good idea, Lara! I can’t wait to show everyone how big and pumped we are now!”

The three super-muscular schoolgirls waddled down the street to their highschool, giggling in anticipation of showing off their unbelievably built physiques.
As the three bodybuilders neared the school, Suzy spotted a group of boys in the parking lot. “Those boys have been teasing me all month about being weak and skinny!” she exclaimed, pointing with one immensely muscular arm. “I think it’s time to pay them a visit and show them who’s skinny now!”

The three hulking muscle-freaks waddled up to the group of boys, who were clustered around a large, brand-new SUV. The boys turned and saw the trio of massively muscular girls, their jaws dropping at the sight of so much bulging muscle.

“Hi, Billy!” Suzy chirped happily. “Remember me?”

Billy, a tall, large football player for the school, stared at the short but immensely-muscled brunette standing before him. “…Suzy? Is that you? What—how did you get so BIG?”

“Oh you mean my itty bitty muscles?” Suzy giggled. “My friends here pumped me full of steroids, and now I’m REALLY buff!”

“You look like a freak!” Billy exclaimed.

“Mmmm… I know, isn’t just soooo sexy?!” Suzy cooed, flicking out her tongue and slowly licking one of the thick, swollen veins popping out of her tremendous pecs. “I just loooove my big muscles!”
All of Billy’s friends were sprouting erections at the sight of so much pumped, veiny muscle attached to the body of a short little teenage girl, several of them having already cummed in their pants.

Suzy giggled at their unspoken compliments of her monster muscularity. “Looks like your friends like my big, freaky muscles, too!”

Suzy waddled up to Billy’s huge SUV, which looked considerably smaller when compared to her pumped-up mega-physique. “Oooh, is this your new car?” She reached down with one hand and grabbed the rear bumper, her inhumanly thick back rippling with power. “I hope you’re not too attached to it, Billy, because I’m going to teach you to never tease me or anyone else ever again!”

Suzy bent her arm as much as she could, lifting the back end of the SUV off the ground with one hand. Her veiny, split-peaked bicep exploded with size, mind-blowing striations cutting across the hulking mountain of muscle. Her skin audibly stretched as her inflated bicep surged with mass.
   “Oh yeah, look at my enormous bicep!” Suzy exclaimed lustfully as she lifted the vehicle even higher with one hand. Her veins throbbed as the superhuman mound of muscle bulged even thicker and freakier with the effort. She propped the car higher, then shifted her grip and grasped the underside of the frame with one dainty hand. She shifted her stance and promptly lifted the SUV over her head with both hands. Her monstrous lats rippled and bulged with the effort, her back flaring wider and thicker as she held the car aloft. Her freaky lats were swollen incredibly thick and beefy, expanding like wings of muscle from her sides. Her mutant biceps were pressing against the sides of her head due to their sheer size, and her swollen, overdeveloped triceps were straining her skin as she held Billy’s SUV over her head. Suzy’s mind-blowing quads rippled and flexed as she casually shifted her weight from one super-muscular leg to the other, readjusting her stance to accommodate her veiny, swelling thighs. Billy and his friends stared in awe at the ridiculously muscular girl who was holding a car above her head as if it were virtually weightless.

“Looks like you boys won’t be picking on me anymore for being so skinny and weak!” Suzy said with a giggle, and then she started to pull down on the frame of the SUV. Suzy’s monster muscles throbbed sexily as she slowly started to deform the frame of the SUV, her entire physique bloating outward as she exerted her inhuman strength against the vehicle. She grunted cutely as she pulled on the frame, which started to emit groaning sounds as her colossal muscles bent it. The windows cracked, and then suddenly exploded, spraying glass everywhere.

“Oh yeah! I’m WAY stronger than your car, Billy! Just look at what my thick, bulging muscles can do!”

Suzy’s gigantic biceps swelled higher as she pulled down harder, the mutant mounds of muscle pressing against her unnaturally thick, veiny forearms. The SUV’s frame groaned louder as it began to buckle and deform, Suzy’s insanely swollen muscles actually succeeding in folding the large vehicle in half! The SUV continued to groan in protest as Suzy bent her arms inward as much as her bulging, corded forearms would allow. The chassis crumpled further and the doors popped open.

“Mmmmm yeah, I’m just so big and strong now! I’m way huger than any male bodybuilder! Look at all my grotesquely huge, steroid-pumped muscles stretching my skin! I’m a hulking muscle-monster!”
Suzy repositioned her grip on the now-curved undercarriage of the SUV, so that the vehicle was draped across her dense and meaty back. She grasped the undercarriage, and then slowly started to bring her arms together in front of her swollen, vein-popping chest. The metal of the car pinged and groaned as the humungous teen bodybuilder continued to warp and deform it around her immensely muscle-bound body. Suzy moaned with pleasure as she felt the SUV molding itself around the gigantic ridges of muscle popping out of her oversized back.

“Ohhhh yeahhhh, so much mmmmmmuscle!” the hulking schoolgirl squealed happily as she felt her vascular, split-peaked, volleyball-sized biceps pressing against her unyielding pecs as she continued to pull her arms together in front of her. Car parts were raining down around her as she destroyed Billy’s SUV using only the power of her superhuman, overdeveloped muscles.
Suzy finally released her unbreakable grip on the vehicle and shrugged it off her colossal shoulders, the destroyed remnants of Billy’s SUV crashing loudly to the ground. Suzy waddled away from the wreckage and towards Billy and his awestruck group of friends, her skin creaking and groaning as her roided-out muscles stretched it with every movement.

“So what do you think, Billy? Am I still small and weak?” Suzy said with a cute giggle. Billy’s friends still had throbbing erections at the sight of Suzy’s enormously muscular physique. “I’ve got more muscle than all of you put together!” she exclaimed happily. “And I’m glad you boys like my big, hard, bulging muscles! You can feel them if you’d like,” Suzy said with a giggle.

The boys all reached out their hands to feel Suzy’s insanely swollen body, each one reaching for a different part of her massive physique. Billy ran his hands along Suzy’s freakishly huge right bicep, marveling at all the thick, visibly pulsing veins being forced against her tightly-stretched skin by her steroid-fueled muscles. Suzy clenched her small fist and flexed the monstrous mound of muscle on her arm, moaning erotically as her grotesquely huge bicep surged bigger under Billy’s hands. Billy’s eyes grew wider as he saw her mutant bicep erupt bigger and thicker, forcing her forearm back with its mind-blowing size. Billy and his friends all heard Suzy’s skin stretching as her hulking bicep filled with more size, sounding like a balloon being over-inflated with air.

“Mmmm… do you hear that, Billy?” Suzy whispered sultrily. “That’s the sound of my skin straining to hold in my big... thick... veiny bicep. Isn’t that sexy, Billy?” She giggled as she watched more of Billy’s friends cum in their pants because of her freakish muscles. Suzy stepped back and alternately bounced her enormous, striated pecs up into her smiling face, groaning happily as she felt the beefy slabs of veiny muscle bulging freakily around her head.

“Go on, boys, masturbate to my inhuman, hulking muscles,” Suzy cooed seductively, watching approvingly as Billy and his friends complied without hesitation. “Mmm… yeah, jerk off to my monster muscles… I know you boys can’t help yourselves!” Suzy slowly spread her thick lats, increasing her width. “Just look at all this vein-popping beef! I love flexing my muscles bigger and BIGGER!” Suzy felt her swollen lats forcing her massive arms away from her torso more and more by the second as she flared her immense back. “Oh yeah, I’m HUUUUUGE! I’ve got muscles on top of muscles!” One by one Billy and his friends cummed in their pants because of this mega-muscular teenage girl. “If you like muscular girls, you’ll love my friends!” Suzy chirped, and Lara and Amy waddled up alongside their newly-musclebound friend.

Billy and his friends couldn’t believe what they were seeing – these three muscle-stuffed freaks were bigger and more developed than any bodybuilders in history, and they were just high school girls! Their erections returned with a vengeance at the sight of so much swollen, striated, veiny bulk.

“Ohhhh…. Just look at our supercharged muscles!” Amy cooed seductively, showcasing her power-packed body filled to the limit with unnaturally overdeveloped muscle.

“Mmm, just look at what massive doses of steroids can do to a girl!” Lara exclaimed happily as all three girls crunched out mind-blowing most-muscular poses, their unstoppable muscles ballooning outward even more, their impossibly muscular bodies pumped to the max with ripped, vein-engorged mass. The three mega-muscular girls giggled as the boys cummed all over themselves once again.

[Jeremy Lightning]

OMG! That was so hot! I love how strong Suzy is, lifting and crushing an SUV against her incredibly huge muscles like it was nothing! Then making all the boys, including Billy cum hard from her huge sexy muscles! I also loved the inclusion of Lara's parents, even if the back story that you wrote before doesn't exist, it is good to see that they still have the same love for muscle that they did in that story and loved how big their little girl has grown, and were delighted to see that she made some like minded friends! I nearly came myself from all those displays of hot, sexy muscle, believe me, I was close! I cannot wait for more! k+!

[Online1138]

“Lara, isn't the Ultra-class competition in town today?” Suzy asked with a smile.

“I think it is, Suzy! I haven't been to an Ultra-class show since I got all pumped up with steroids,” Lara replied with a cute giggle.

“Let's go see how we measure up against the biggest male bodybuilders in the world!” Amy exclaimed, knowing full-well that all three girls were far more muscular than any man could ever hope to be.

The three mass-monsters waddled down the street to the bodybuilding competition, the sidewalk cracking under their feet due to the weight of their insane muscularity.  When they reached the auditorium the three bulging bodybuilders snuck in through the back entrance, squeezing their immense bulk through the building's double-doors. As they made their way down the hallway their mega-muscular shoulders brushed both sides of the corridor, a testament to their inhuman girth. The three schoolgirls snuck backstage just as the Ultra-class finalists were doing their final posedown.  These men were the biggest of the big, their shockingly huge muscles developed further than anyone else in the world.

Lara peeked out from the curtain at all the massively huge bodybuilders on stage. “Ooooh, the guys have gotten a LOT bigger since I won the Ultra-class competition,” Lara said with a giggle. “Suzy, you should go up there and show those guys what REAL muscle looks like!”

Suzy waddled out from backstage, making her way towards the competitors posing their massive muscles.

“...and it looks like we have a new competitor, and-- OH MY GOD, is that a girl?!” the announcer exclaimed, the entire auditorium going silent at the sight of Suzy's immense muscularity. “Look at her, she's so muscular she can hardly move! I've never seen anyone as muscle-bound as her, let alone a girl who looks like she's still in high school! She's even bigger than Lara Smith, who completely decimated the Ultra-class championship a few years ago with her freaky muscles!”

Suzy waddled closer to one of the bigger competitors, her veiny quads rippling with beef with every sexy step she took. Suzy slowly lowered her left arm near the man's thigh, groaning sensually as she tried to flex her overinflated bicep. Her meaty forearm was forced backward as her split-peaked bicep expanded powerfully. The awestruck audience watched as her steroid-pumped bicep flared with mind-boggling girth, her skin audibly stretching as her striations became even more chiseled and her prominent veins throbbed even thicker. Unbelievably, her immense bicep was far larger than the competitor's impressive leg.

“Tee hee! Is my bicep big enough?” Suzy squeaked cutely. She twisted her fist in and out, making her bicep peak ripple freakily under her tightly-stretched skin. She straightened her ultra-muscular arm and then pumped her mutant bicep again, giggling happily as her inhumanly swollen bicep throbbed even thicker with monster mass.

“Mmmm... I'm so HUUUUGE!” Suzy moaned as she turned around and flexed her immense back. The thick, heavy slabs of muscle on her back bloated outward as she flared her lats, and Suzy cooed happily as she felt her skin stretching to hold in her massive muscles. Her huge traps flexed even higher and obscured her head from view, and her super-muscular arms were forced away from her torso as her lats ballooned with even more mass. Suzy grunted cutely and power-flexed her glutes, making the thick muscles tighten sexily. Deep striations cut across her round, muscular butt as huge veins spiderwebbed across the powerful muscles.

“I... I can't believe what I'm seeing here,” the announcer said, dumbfounded by Suzy's extreme development, “this teenage girl is just so mind-bogglingly muscular, so thick, so pumped up, she makes the other competitors look malnourished by comparison!”

With that, Amy waddled out on stage as well, her overdeveloped legs pumped so huge that she had to roll each massive thigh around the other one in order to walk. Amy moved close to Suzy and hit an immense back-double-biceps pose, her upper body detonating with a mind-blowing amount of sheer muscle mass.

“I can't believe it, there's another muscle-bound girl up on stage now, and she's even bigger than the first girl!” exclaimed the announcer, awestruck by the thought that there could be that much muscle piled on the body of a young high-school girl. Amy turned back around to face the audience and raised her arms as much as her hulking deltoids and traps would allow, and then flexed her unbelievably ripped and vein-engorged abs. She buried her chin in her swollen pecs, chewing her bottom lip sensually as she crunched down on her inhuman 10-pack abs. The thick mounds of muscle lining her midsection bulged outward with incredible thickness and density, her obliques throbbing against her skin with unbelievable definition.

“Mmmmm.... harder than steel...” Amy cooed as she flexed her abs even harder and felt even more veins stand out across her abdominals. Her beefy abs were pumped so huge that they were keeping her from bending her torso forward as the thick cubes of muscle pressed against each other with their unnatural size. “Ohhhh yeah, these muscles are like living body armor, and they look sooooo sexy,” muscle-bound Amy said seductively. The other competitors stared agape at the two muscle-pumped girls, unable to comprehend their overdeveloped, obviously steroid-enhanced physiques. Amy smiled cutely at one of the bigger competitors, her pretty face a stark contrast to her monstrous muscularity. “So do I look like a freak?” Amy said with a giggle. She alternately bounced her oversized pecs in a sensual rhythm, slowly swaying her muscular hips side to side, purring happily as her massive pecs lifted her head with their flexing girth.

Lara waddled out from backstage, her supercharged muscles pumped so thick and huge that she made the other Ultra-class competitors look like frail little children by comparison. He swollen muscles were pressing against each other as she tried to move, her skin squeaking and groaning like an overinflated balloon as her monstrous body rippled with infinite power.

“Oh my god, it's Lara Smith!” the announcer gasped, staring wide-eyed at Lara's mutant muscularity that was simply beyond what any human being was ever meant to develop, let alone a 19-year-old girl. “She must be injecting steroids by the gallon! Her muscles are just so shredded, massive, and pumped!”

“Oh yeah, it's time for some REAL muscle!” Lara shouted to the crowd, and then she rose up on her toes and flexed her muscle-bound legs. Lara moaned erotically as her tree-trunk thighs surged with even more bulk and forced her legs apart even more. Her superhuman quadriceps filled all the space between her thighs, forcing her to rotate her knees outward and shuffle her feet apart to accommodate the unnatural amount of surging muscle exploding from her legs. Her freaky calves flared with mind-blowing size, garden-hose veins throbbing across the extremely pumped muscles as they bulged from the backs of her shins. “Just look at how developed I am!” Lara moaned as she clenched her dainty fists and flexed her muscle-bound crotch. “Rawrrr! I'm a MONSTER!” Lara said with a giggle as her power-packed vagina throbbed with extreme muscularity, veins snaking down from her bulging abs to feed into her groin. “I am 100% muscle... everywhere!” Her pussy visibly pulsed and rippled, a testament to her unending desire for bigger, freakier muscles. Lara bucked her hips suggestively and groaned as she flexed her crotch again. “Ohhhh yeah, all these steroids and human growth hormones keep me sooooo horny,” Lara said silkily, closing her eyes and flexing her pussy again.

“My muscles are ROID-RAGEOUS!” Lara exclaimed as she hunched forward for the biggest most-muscular pose in history. Her super-thick muscles detonated with ridiculous vascularity and striations, her skin groaning loudly as her entire body inflated with jaw-dropping mass. A few of the other competitors fainted as Lara's insane muscularity continued to increase. Lara relaxed her inhuman crab flex momentarily, and then squeezed her small fists and flexed again with all her might. “Come on, pump BIGGER!” Lara screamed, flexing her monster muscles over and over. “PUMP BIGGERRRRR! I NEED TO BE HUUUUUUGE!” Her head was being squashed between her beefy pecs and her overdeveloped traps that surged higher and higher. Her skin kept groaning and creaking as her steroid-inflated muscles ballooned with unbelievable size and definition. “More muscle! MOOOOORE!” Lara shrieked as she continued to flex her hyper-muscular body over and over.  She flexed her muscle-stuffed pussy again, her vein-engorged crotch pulsing freakily between her legs. “These muscles are soooo sexy, but they're not BIG enough!”  Lara grinned widely, laughing with joy as her unstoppable muscles pumped even thicker as she held her flex. Her beefy pecs forced her smiling mouth closed while her mutant biceps pressed her forearms back with their girth. Lara shuffled her dainty feet again as her legs flexed bigger, her quads easily thicker than the biggest competitor's torso. “Mmmmmf! BIGGER!” Lara mumbled, struggling to talk as her unreal pecs pushed against her chin. Her vein-engorged lats bloated outward with further mass and lifted her immense arms higher.

“I can't believe how huge Lara is getting!” the announcer shouted as Lara pumped her muscles harder and harder. “No one has ever been this huge, this ripped, this vascular! She's bulging beyond belief, just packed with unreal muscularity from head to toe! She makes even the biggest male bodybuilder look like a Holocaust survivor compared to her completely insane muscularity!”

“Hnnnnghh! Hnnnnnnghhhhh!” Lara grunted cutely, her brow furrowing as she concentrated, trying to pump her mutant physique ever-bigger. Her puffy veins throbbed across every inch of her steroid-enhanced muscles as she squeezed, roadmaps of freaky vascularity being forced against her skin by her inhuman pump. “Mmmmmuh! Mmmmuhh! Mmmmmorrrreee!” Her skin looked ready to split open, barely able to accommodate her bloated, overinflated muscles. Lara struggled to bend her gigantic legs and hunch forward as she continued flexing her impossibly tremendous body as hard as she could, feeling her monstrous hamstrings pushing against her unbelievably swollen calves, her superhumanly thick and defined abs bulging against each other and preventing her torso from bending forward.

Her eyes were wide open, practically bugging out of her skull, as she flexed with all her insane strength. Her freakish muscles continued to surge with unnatural bulk, her limbs being forced straighter due to her insane muscle mass even as she struggled to crunch herself inward. Lara was the pinnacle of muscle development, the very definition of bodybuilding taken to the absolute mind-blowing extreme. Lara finally released her earth-shattering flex, her super-defined muscles still fighting each other for room and stretching her skin with their unnatural girth even when at rest.

Amy and Suzy waddled up alongside their muscle-bound friend, the three steroid-abusing schoolgirls showing off their cartoonishly gigantic muscles to the awestruck crowd and completely dwarfing the other Ultra-class competitors. The floor creaked under their incredible weight as they neared the undisputed bodybuilding champion. The three sexy muscle-girls stood proudly before the audience, which had been shocked into silence by their enormous muscles.

“We are just sooooo sexy, and sooo jacked!” Amy moaned, gazing lustfully at her two friends.

“Oh yeah, our muscles are hot!” Suzy exclaimed, and then she waddled up to Lara until her immense pectorals were pressing against Lara's beefy, vein-riddled left arm. Amy waddled up against Lara's right side, pressing her bloated torso against Lara's monstrous muscularity.

The two smaller muscle-freaks groaned as they began grinding their massive bodies against Lara's supremely muscle-stuffed physique, straining to bend their arms inward and caress Lara's pumped-up body.

The audience couldn't comprehend what it was witnessing, seeing these three intensely over-muscled teenage girls struggling to touch each other's hyper-muscular bodies. Several of the other competitors had already vomited all over themselves in disgust at the sight of the muscle-bloated girls.

“Mmmm... I love the extreme reactions to my hardcore, monster mmmmuscles!” Lara cooed, giggling as she watched the audience erupt into a frenzy. “I love it when people cum all over themselves because of my super-freaky muscles, or puke all over the place because my muscles are just TOO EXTREME!”

The crowd was deteriorating into equal parts orgy and riot, countless people furiously pleasuring themselves at the sight of so much vein-popping, hyper-shredded beef packed onto the body of a teenage girl, while the rest were fleeing for the exits in terror, their sanity irreparably damaged.

[Jeremy Lightning]

I seriously wish I could K+! multiple times an hour because this was just a pure pleasure to read! Really love how you had each girl shock the audience one after another, leaving the biggest and best to last, you think you may be prepared for Lara because of Susan and Amy, but you just have no idea, those girls put together couldn't equal one Lara! She is just so hyper huge, so ripped, that even her pussy has more muscle than most men have in their entire bodies! Believe me, if there is any more of this story to tell, which I dearly hope there is, I will be looking forward to it eagerly! k++++!

[Online1138]

There's good news and bad news:

There's more to tell, but only one more part and that's it.

[evreiter]

when the final?

[phil123]

There's more to tell, but only one more part and that's it.

We would like to read the final chapter.
Great work so we hope for more.

[j2001]

Excellent story, I love this kind of fast paced growth with thorough descriptions of the growing muscles.
Definitely an inspiration.

[Online1138]

“I need to get more muscular! Hook me up to the Muscle Pump!” Lara exclaimed happily.

Amy and Suzy wheeled out the Muscle Pump and hooked it up to Lara's already supremely muscle-stuffed physique. Lara's beastly body quivered with anticipation at growing even more mega-muscular.
Amy handed me a remote control with a large red button. “Every time you press that button, it'll force a massive overdose of experimental nano-steroids into Lara's body and hulk her out EVEN BIGGER!” she exclaimed happily.

“Oh yeah, pump me up! Make me COLOSSAL! Fill me with muscles until I BURST!”

I pressed the button and the Muscle Pump hummed, forcing a dose of steroids into Lara's supercharged body. “Ohh YES! I can feel it working, baby!” I pressed the button again and her prominent, grotesquely swollen veins visibly throbbed against her paper-thin skin, channeling the nano-roids to every muscle fiber. I pressed it again and watched as her plump veins puffed up even thicker, squirming under her skin as they carried roid-enhanced blood to her monstrous muscles.

I pressed the remote again and Lara moaned with arousal as her beefy muscles bulged outward from every part of her sculpted body, striations chiseling themselves ever-deeper as her skin struggled to hold in her hulking mass. “Hnnnnnggggg! Feels so gooooood! Pump me BIGGERRRRR!” I pumped another dose of steroids into the teenage girl's already disgustingly muscular body, watching in awe as her jaw-dropping, unnaturally swollen muscles surged even thicker, her skin groaning as it struggled to accommodate her freaky muscles. Another dose and her bursting muscles bulged out even more, her unflexed muscles forcing her limbs apart as they bulked up even further.

“Hnnngg! Ohh soooo much beefy, freakish mass! C'mon I know you want me even huger, dose me again!” she encouraged happily, and I forced another dose of nano-steroids into her hyper-muscular physique. “Unghhhhh! Ohhh yeah, more, MORE! Pump be BIGGER, THICKERRRR!” Her intensely shredded abs were bulging outward, getting thicker and more deeply-cut, numerous garden-hose veins snaking across the engorged muscles, even as they pressed against the underside of her inhumanly-developed pecs which were projecting further and further out in front of her, the bulked-up slabs of muscle pressing against her chin and wedging it in the deep chasm separating her mutant pecs. Her deltoids were becoming thicker and even rounder, insane striations cutting through the huge muscles as they rose higher and wider on her shoulders, even as her traps pushed higher and pressed against the back of her head. “Hnnnnggg ohyeah, so much mmmmuscle! Pump me bigger! Make me EXPLODE!”
“Lara needs more muscle fuel to GROW!” Amy exclaimed excitedly and waddled over to Lara with a massive container of oral steroids and human growth hormones.

“Fill me up 'til I burst, Amy!” Lara squealed, opening her mouth as wide as her beefed-up, ultra-thick pecs would allow, and Amy started shoveling handfuls of pills into her eager, waiting mouth. Lara gobbled them up greedily, her cute cheeks ballooning due to the volume of pills and supplements Amy was forcing into her mouth, chewing happily and swallowing them all down. Amy forced another handful of pills into Lara's mouth, her cheeks ballooning even more due to the overabundance of muscle-boosting drugs Amy was stuffing into her cute mouth.

Suzy waddled up with a massive jug of protein powder and a funnel. After Lara chewed and swallowed the latest handful of oral steroids, Suzy stuck the funnel in her mouth and started pouring raw powder down Lara's throat. Amy rubbed Lara's beefy, bulging, deeply-cut abs, massaging the thick muscles and the plump, prominent veins snaking across her muscle-packed midsection. Lara gulped down the powder, her inhumanly thick neck flexing and pumping as she inhaled the pure protein that would help boost her otherworldly muscles even bigger, thicker, and more disgustingly, sickeningly massive. The two girls alternated force-feeding the hulked-out teen female bodybuilder with an insane amount of muscle-bulking supplements.

“Mmm... tastes so goooood...” Lara groaned, her mouth full of pills and powder. “Gonna make me so mmmmmmuscular...” She swallowed the latest overdose of roids and supplements, licking her lips greedily to get every speck of powder. “BEEFCAAAAAAKE!” Lara exclaimed girlishly, her freakshow muscularity rippling and pulsing as she giggled. “C'mon, bulk me up, I need bigger muscles!”

I pressed the button on the remote and the Muscle Pump hummed, forcing another dose of steroids into Lara's cartoonishly muscular body. “Hnnnnghh! I can feel my veins popping harder, my muscles bulging BIGGER! It feels soooo gooooood!” Lara shuddered with pleasure, overwhelmed with the sensation of her muscles bulking up. “I love the feeling of my huge, sexy muscles expanding, getting denser and harder! I need MORE! Come on, pump me full of steroids!”

I dosed Lara again, and she was forced to shuffle her vein-riddled, tree-trunk thighs apart to accommodate her inhuman quadriceps. The muscle-pumped, unbelievably gorgeous redhead moaned erotically as she felt every muscle on her body surging with even more bulging, skin-stretching mass. “Hnnnhhgggg! Ohh yeah, I'm growing more muscular! I am so huuuge! More, I need more muscle!” I pressed the remote again, and Lara's arms were lifted higher as her lats bulged and her already disturbingly massive arms swelled thicker, her round biceps pumping even fuller as her triceps continued to bulk up and her meaty forearms filled with even more size, her unnaturally pumped veins visibly throbbing. “Hnnngg yessssss! Feels sooo GOOD! C'mon, make me bigger!” Lara pleaded, encouraging me to force her to grow even more grotesquely muscular. “I know my body can handle it! I wanna be OBSCENELY MUSCULAR! Pump me up to the extreme, make me ENORMOUS!”

Lara grunted cutely as I forced another dose of steroids into her freakshow physique, her skin audibly stretching as she beefed up even further. Her trapezius muscles climbed ever-higher behind her head, and her bursting pecs were beginning to force her smiling mouth closed as the inhumanly shredded slabs of muscle pressed up against her chin. “Hnnnggg so much... so much sexy muscle! Feels so gooood! Don't stop, keep pumping me up! I need to be GIGANTIC! I need to be a MUSCLE-BOUND FREAKSHOW!” I pressed the remote again and Lara shuddered and clenched her dainty fists, her steroid-fueled muscles engorging themselves even thicker and fuller, every body part swelling even more sickeningly huge. “Hnnnggghh ohhh yeah... sooo sexy...” Lara cooed approvingly, her monstrous pecs bulging against her jaw making it more difficult to talk. “Force me to get huger... I know I can take it! I wanna be sickeningly muscle-stuffed... so disgustingly PUMPED UP... so muscular that I make everybody PUKE!”

I couldn't believe that this already impossibly-muscular teenage girl wanted me to hulk her out even further – she already looked like she was going to explode, every quivering muscle straining her paper-thin skin, and her unnaturally thick veins were pumping and squirming across every shredded, super-human muscle. I pressed the remote again and Lara groaned loudly, her body expanding in all directions. She struggled to move, trying to bend her arms and legs, her range of motion drastically diminished by her colossal muscles. “Hnggngghh! I'm... sooo... pumped!  I'm... I'm such a... BIG girl! I need moooore! Unnghh... ohhhh yessss! More.... more mmmmuscle! Make me... make me B-B-B-B-BIGGERRRR!” Her absurdly overdeveloped muscles were beginning to lock up her joints, immobility fast approaching.

I pumped her up again, watching in awe as her unnaturally thick back hulked up even fuller and wider, her legs were forced even further apart, and her lats lifted her arms even more, her bulging delts squeezing against her pecs and traps as they fought for space. Her girlish, pretty head was being crushed on all sides by her monstrous muscles. Her bursting, 10-pack abs were getting abnormally thick, the densely-packed muscles fighting for space on her abdomen as they chiseled themselves ever-deeper, plump veins snaking across the intensely shredded muscles as they bulged outward under her monster pecs. “I'm... I'm ROID GIRL!” Lara struggled to say, her distended, oversized pecs pressing against her chin as she struggled to open her mouth. “I can... I can take it! Ohhhhh I'm... sooooo.... rippeddddd! I... I am the.... ultimate bodybuilder! C'mon... hulk me out! Pump me BIGGER... bigger muscles... stuff me full of more muscle mass!”

I pressed the remote again and watched her already freakishly huge calves flare even thicker and more extreme from the backs of her shins, as her whole body shuddered and swelled with mutant mass. Her skin was looking dangerously tight over every muscle fiber, her striations standing out prominently and showcasing her inhuman muscularity as it continued to surpass anything a human being was ever meant to develop, let alone a teenage girl. “Skin feels so tight...! Can feel it straining...unnnghh.... muscles trying to rip through! Muscles gonna... burst through my... ohhh... skin! Feels like... I'm gonna... EXPLODE! Hnnnggghh I... I'm such a m-m-muscle-bound FREAK! I want more.... hnnnghh... I NEED more MMMMMMUSCLE!!”

Staring in disbelief, I pumped another massive dose of nano-steroids into Lara's quivering, rippling, muscle-bloated physique, her garden-hose veins plumping up alarmingly across every enormous, obscenely swollen muscle. Lara tried to groan with pleasure, but her smiling mouth was being forced closed by her monumental pecs. She could move her plump, sensual lips, but her teeth were grit tightly by her copious slabs of chest beef locking her jaw closed. Lara could only grunt and groan happily, overjoyed at how she had become literally immobile with freakishly overdeveloped, utterly excessive muscle mass.

I pumped another dose into Lara's insanely hyper-muscular body for good measure, watching as the muscle-stuffed teen shuddered orgasmically and then bloated outward even further, her arcing traps and bursting, engorged pecs literally crushing her head on all sides with sickeningly huge mounds of skin-stretching muscle beef. Lara struggled to move and flex, feeling her oversized muscles locking up her joints. Her overinflated muscles had locked her limbs in a spread-eagle pose, showcasing her grotesquely extreme muscle development as every single muscle fiber struggled to rip through her skin. Lara looked like she was flexing her brains out, countless veins of all sizes animatedly squirming and pulsing across every inch of her roided-out muscle body, even though she was completely at rest. She grunted cutely as she tried to bend her arms, feeling her monstrous biceps pressing tightly against her impossibly-thick forearms and meaty, wing-like lats. She tried to raise her arms, making her ballooning delts surge with power as her mutant traps bulged, squeezing against the back of her head even more.

Relaxing her arms, the freakishly muscle-bound teenager tried to bend forward at the waist, but her disturbingly-thick abs squeezed against each other as she tried to do so. The beefy, unnaturally-shredded blocks of muscle bulged outward from her midsection, even pressing up against the underside of her mutant pecs. She tried twisting her torso side to side and left to right, but her ultra-muscular abdominals fought against each other even more.

Lara tried to lift her right leg, only to feel her enormously swollen quads fighting against her bulging, oversized abs. Her legs were spread incredibly far apart by her colossal, hyper-developed quads, but all of the available space between her thighs was filled in with insanely hypertrophied muscles rippling and bulging as she tried to squeeze her legs together. There was so much shredded, densely-packed beef that she was forced to rotate her monumental legs outward, but even then she couldn't bend her legs as her mutant hamstrings were squeezing against her sickeningly massive calves.  Even her chiseled, vein-popping glutes were pushing against her massive hamstrings, as well as flexing up against the disturbingly massive muscles of her wide, beefy back.
Lara was grunting and cooing happily, opening and closing her dainty fists as she struggled to move, in awe of her own hyper-extreme, hormone-fed muscle development. Her eyes shone brightly with delight and accomplishment even as her bursting, vascular pecs completely swallowed her thick neck and pressed tightly against her cute, feminine jawline. I pressed the remote again and the Muscle Pump forced another massive dose of steroids into her already maxed-out, muscle-bloated body. Her eyes opened wide with surprise and then she shivered with pleasure, every intensely-defined muscle fiber bulging against her too-tight skin and straining it to the point of rupture. Every bulbous muscle surged with even more steel-hard bulk as she swelled impossibly thicker and more muscle-bound.

[Jeremy Lightning]

Nice! I absolutely loved this story, if this is the end of the story, what a great way to go out! Lara just going as far as she possibly could make every single inch of her already huge body ginormous! To the point that she couldn't move, couldn't talk, couldn't do more but whimper and moan because she was so turned on by her own growth. I would've loved to see Amy and Suzy get so turned on by the show of Lara's growing muscles that they start making out, them feeling their own huge muscles as they look over to see Lara grow larger and larger! Awesome read, my friend, I really couldn't thank you enough for not only writing this, but writing the original, which 5 years later is still one of my favorite muscle stories of all time! k+!

[j2001]

Truly a masterpiece