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  • #46 by taoschild on 07 Aug 2021
  • That's amazing! Been following the thread on D&D and it's fantastic so far. Was wondering whether you take commissions? Had some ideas I think you could bring to life really well

    Thank you. Yes, my wife and I accept them but we're pretty slow given we're writing books as well.  Feel free to message me here or on DA. I've been watching Olympic rowing recently and I'm thinking there may be a story there. DnD is going to be mostly fantasy with muscle thrown in as is my upcoming Victorian Woman mystery story.

    In the meantime I plan to break up the novels with some shorts to post here. Not sure if I want to go soft porn or aggressive domme for my next one.  Maybe people have some ideas.
  • #47 by taoschild on 02 Nov 2021
  • Hey KS:
    That's amazing! Been following the thread on D&D and it's fantastic so far. Was wondering whether you take commissions? Had some ideas I think you could bring to life really well - I do when I have a chance - I'm on DA

    The sequel to this book is due out soon and I'd love to give discount coupons to those of you who helped give me suggestions on this thread prior to the release of the Reluctant Domme. If my inbox is full here email me at jgmuscle12 at gmail and let me know who you are here.  Also, if you read the original and could leave a review I'd greatly appreciate it. I'll drop some segments of Submission Training here soon.  Here is the copy cover and a brief teaser:

    Tiffany Brooks is a powerful female bodybuilder accustomed to getting exactly what she wants and whats--especially in the bedroom. When she falls in love with a man who desires to hold the power in their lovemaking though, she turns to an old friend, Dani, for help. Dani and her husband have perfected the Dominatrix-Submissive relationship, but when they teach her submission 101 first hand, will it damage their own chemistry or amp it up further?
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    Short Quote from the book: The disquiet after dinner was palpable. All of us felt it. Questions tumbled through my brain. Why is so much of my life defined entirely by my fetish? What happened to my hobbies, goals, and dreams? Am I one-dimensional? If I go ahead with this, will Jack forgive me? Can I accept him having sex with her?
    But desire overwhelmed my hesitation. The idea of legs spread, two powerful bodies smashing against each other, measuring the power of each thrust, colored my mind. We’d be using that tonight, or better said I’d be using her with that tonight. “That sounds intriguing. I like the idea of that.” I said, trying unsuccessfully to keep the menacing tone from my voice.

    Anyway, I've really enjoyed playing with the character arc of Jack and Dani and now Tiffany as well.  I still think I should have explored option 4 at some point - maybe in a short story or something.  If you have a scenario or an idea let me know.

    -Richard
  • #48 by ArkhamAsylum on 02 Nov 2021
  • I think the forth option would only be enjoyable, at least for me, if the guy who gets  destroyed really deserves it and is a truly despicable human being. He could be a remorseless (serial) rapist or (serial) killer, or a crime/druglord who doesn't care tht his "business" hurts innocent people. The story could be about one (or more) of his female victims or one (or more)of the female relatives or friends of a victim becoming a musclebound amazon to take revenge. I think it would also be a good choice to let the female character interact with characters other than the antagonist and to make the interactions with those characters more benevolent. Maybe the protagonist doesn't just brutalize the antagonist, she could also save other potential victims in the process or have a wholesome interaction with someone she cares about. I think making the antagonist truly despicable and including benevolent interactions with other characters would help to balance the brutality and making the female character more likeable and three dimensional, so that she doesn't seem like a sadistic psycho who just likes to brutalize men.
  • #49 by taoschild on 06 Nov 2021
  • Might be fun to make Dani into a Dexter like character who kills misogynistic murderers who get away with it (after she dominates and abuses them) ;)
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