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Female Muscle Art - Female Muscle Fiction => Muscular Women Fiction => Topic started by: JackKovan on July 16, 2021, 06:50:23 pm
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Some of you might remember the writings of reaper0002000...
The Monster series. The Muscles of Mercy. She Wanted More. Tania
Well, there's a relatively short one that's not been posted yet.
Enjoy,
JK
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When Rian shows up at a men's gymnastics meet, the only question becomes how badly is she going to show up the males this time?
The last time, the shamelessly barechested 18 year-old she-beast bragged to the older male competitors in warmup she could double their scores in every event, arrogantly flexing her naked muscles to staggering size and shape as they stared, jaws dropping in awe and envy at the emasculating sight. As the ultimate tomboy, Rian knew they couldn't take their eyes off her -- no one ever could. Now at 18, she was effortlessly gorgeous, with big grey eyes and sun-streaked brown hair... and a musclefreak physique beyond anything ever seen. Shamelessly and almost always topless, she made "jacked" look downright puny. Unreal peaks and obscene striations burst out of every inch of Rian's insanely built young body... and that was without her even trying to flex. The beautiful 18 year-old was so outrageously, obscenely muscular, she completely humiliated statues of Greek gods. Despite the hulking threat of Rian's unearthly physique, the male gymnasts challenged her to make that score doubling a bet, which she instantly accepted. "Be careful what you wish for, " she warned, smirking.
She didn't double their scores...she more than TRIPLED them. Competing against men in men’s events, It was a mindblowing display of absolute superiority. Just her levels of difficulty alone doubled any of their combined scores--her moves were unprecedented, requiring strength, agility, and endurance far greater than what was humanly possible, strung together in ways that seemingly defied physics and light years beyond what anyone else could even imagine, let alone perform. But it was her last event, rings, that put an exclamation point on the unimaginable extent of Rian's physical dominance. Over gymnasts. Over males in general. And like the 18 year-old musclegod she was, over humanity itself...
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Wow, had not seen this one before ever and I'm a huge, huge fan of reaper0002000, have been since I read the Monster series for the first time years and years ago. But this is without a doubt, his work, as his description is readily apparent. I look forward to more! k+!
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The last piece of equipment for Rian was the rings, but there was already no doubt who was going to win the meet. Hell, there wasn’t any doubt the second Rian started on her first routine. What this amazingly pumped girl could do – and what she now did -- was simply superhuman. Watching her dominate score after score like they were toddlers compared to her, the male gymnasts muttered about in a conflicted state of emotions: a mixture of outright awe and deep resentment. Never mind the ridiculous wager that they’d gotten themselves trapped into. Just how the fuck could any GIRL develop that insanely muscular body that she so willingly exhibited? The sheer size, hardness, and cuts Rian’s muscles displayed were not just impossible considering her gender, but should have been impossible for anyone to develop by only 18 years of age. Even more disconcerting was the fact that -- inhuman physique notwithstanding -- Rian actually looked years younger than 18. It also didn’t help that she acted young, like an immature brat that needed to be set in her place. But unfortunately, a very dangerous brat loaded with more sheer brute power than anyone could handle.
On her rings dismount, Rian's muscles exerted such raw mind-boggling power on the apparatus, she actually uprooted and snapped the ring equipment like it was constructed of weak kindling. Launching herself skyward with such strength not only obliterated the apparatus, the 18 year-old girlbeast somersaulted 5 times just on her way up. While catapulting herself upwards, her young jacked body looked like a human missile launched in defiance of gravity itself. Stunned jaws dropped all over the auditorium at the unprecedented sight of the rings apparatus shattering and the hypermuscular gymnast hurtling upwards into the rafters… and then she actually reached the gym ceiling more than 5 stories above the floor.
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Damn! I love what I read here again, Jack/reaper, within a few short sentences, you got me hooked. What a superhuman beast of muscle Rian is, her power, her speed, her agility, who knows where it actually ends? Once again, I look forward to more. Also, wondering if we might get some backstory, if only a few short sentences telling about how she became so formidable. K+!
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Reaper's stories were great. Can't wait to read more!
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New work from Reaper? Is it Christmas?!?!? Thanks for posting, sir! Can't wait to read more.
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While I'm sure Reap appreciates the kind words, he is no longer a member here...I'll pass along the link to this thread so he can take a look at people's reactions!
JK
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Rian "landed" on an I-beam in the ceiling upside down in an obtuse side split, and slammed it with such immense force that her muscled-packed pubis buckled the steel beam -- unbelievably, the bulging fuckmeat of her groin was so pumped and muscley, her jacked genitalia was an unstoppable battering ram of inhuman virility. Instead of pain, the impact provoked intense pleasure, causing Rian to reflexively close her huge, sculpted thighs… thighs which were built so strong they further mangled the buckled steel girder now seized between those massive striated young muscles. As the solid metal screeched in protest, tortured and deforming like tinfoil by her immeasurably crushing leg scissors, the ubermuscled 18 year-old she-lbeast growled sordidly in arousal... in a flash, she’d freed her junk from the unitard, and then her hips blurred in a series of unbelievably powerful pelvic thrusts, viciously pounding the steel beam lustily with her now naked sex.
Rian's obscenely strong genitals were built so hard and she twerked with such unstoppable ferocious strength, a vulgar imprint of her bare, inhumanly muscled quim was hammered deep into and then through the girder, with every freakish detail of her mighty female fuckflesh -- vulval peaks of striated sex sinew, serrated pussy lips, all stamped deep into the metal! Even more extreme, actual holes were being gouged and rammed through inches of solid steel by her huge muscular clit as the yoked young gymnast ferociously pleasured herself. After the hellish, deafening cacophony of steel meeting even harder 18 year-old sex flesh filled the gym from on high, there was an abrupt silence and then a low growling moan; the sexy jacked girlbrute had fed the now exposed dense core of the brutally eroded girder to her muscle-toothed sex slit and was enjoying its girth and resistance in her inhumanly muscle packed young snatch. With no effort, Rian's unearthly jagged, protruding sex striations bit into that steel like it was soft wax, her genital fuckfangs shredding the hardened surface as it rippled with greedy pleasure. The sexy musclebeast purred, and then let loose her almighty powerpussy, allowing it to fully flex. A resounding snap echoed like a gunshot through the gym. Her supremely muscled sex was so impossibly strong, it pulverized ultra-dense metal with a single vaginal clench. One lovebite from this unimaginably muscular animal had snapped hardened steel in two -- an entire solid steel girder was severed, FUCKED apart by that almighty young beast of a sex. A shocking volume of scalding sex fluid splattered across almost the entire gym floor as the 18 year-old girlgod ejaculated with stunning force and endurance, her mighty jack far eclipsing the orgasmic capabilities of the all the males in that gym put together...!
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Man, I love this kind of muscle power, this kind of toughness, this kind of strength, while some of his past characters have been strong, I don't if even Es would be capable of doing some of the things that Rian has done so far, and I'm thinking that she is far from done. Reaper, as a long time fan, I don't know if I have ever been as turned on by reading your stuff, and that's saying something because your stuff has consistently turned me on ever since I can remember reading it! Jack, thanks again for posting, I can't hit k+! fast enough!
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Releasing the wrecked girder and swiping her unitard back on, Rian plunged down from the rafters and effortlessly swung her hypermuscular nubile body in 4 pikes and 4 more full twists before absolutely sticking the landing...in a handstand. A fucking single-handed handstand. Landing on one's legs from 5 stories up would shatter any regular human being, but Rian was so strong, she landed on a single hand. The 18 year-old girlgod pushed herself further up onto her fingertips...and then just a single finger, suspending herself for 10 seconds in a hypnotic but monstrous feat of strength, before twirling gracefully and lightly planting her feet.
Rian gave the customary judges' salute...but as she stared insolently at the judges, her seething groin outlined completely and soaked, still dripping wantonly onto her huge shredded thighs, the muscleteen's outstretched, unbelievably sculpted arms pointed out the carnage of the ring apparatus behind her, as if this supremely muscular, jacked young hulk was smugly displaying the wanton destruction she had just wreaked with her sheer strength and virile musclepower.
The 18 year-old godbeast tensed her granite chest slabs to hellish striated peaks, making sure the judges noticed by flicking her sexy nipples slowly, one after the other, in alternate pec flexes. When the entire panel paled and swallowed nervously, Rian smirked "That’s power, bitches." Then with one monstrous pec flex, her erect sex nubs tore straight through the spandex, and most of her top followed by exploding in tatters when she also deliberately flared her gigantic batwing lats. Now completely barechested, Rian grinned nastily as the panel gasped at the sight of her huge ripped muscles effortlessly shredding her top and the ensuing brutal splendor of her bare torso. Her naked muscularity was mind-boggling -- even adult male bodybuilders could only dream of muscles like hers. Completely breastless from her inhuman shreds, even beneath her big strong girl nipples, the only thing remotely feminine about Rian's physique was the impossibly angled drama of her proportions, ludicrous ratios that no man could ever match. Flaunting her almighty frame, the 18 year-old girl made her male gymnast counterparts look like underdeveloped kids.
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Really awesome again, love just how Rian shows off her body and it's strength, how even one of her fingers is strong enough to support a body that has to weigh hundreds and hundreds of pounds of pure muscle, and also the delight in which she shows off her physique, but she has every right to be proud of a body that male bodybuilders would envy for it's size and cuts. k+!
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When I read Reap's stuff, it sort of reminds me of Mr. Shhh for the muscle descriptions, and then Seldom for the gory details. Those are the two things that he's known for. I think he even posted that same comparison. So when I first got a hold of this, I wondered where the 2nd thing was. Huh. I didn't have to wait long.
JK
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As she walked off topless, the gorgeous, now barechested 18 year-old girlhulk paused in front of the quaking panel, threateningly coiled one arm into a frightening bulky mass, and used her other arm to point at the devastated ring apparatus, boasting what her ungodly young muscles had done... without even uttering a word. She looked up expectantly, and then clenching her fist, Rian actually flexed her already insanely bulging biceps. Her ungodly 18 year-old muscle didn't rise so much as explode into truly towering, freakshow peaks. Harder than rock, striated, and pulsing with veins, the unearthly mountain of muscle emanated a level of brute strength that was physically palpable across the entire event floor. On cue, part of the ceiling tumbled down, including the obliterated , fucked-apart pieces of a mangled steel beam, and slammed onto the ruined rings and catering the floor. It was as if the gym itself was surrendering, prostrate in utter submission, to the huge, young dominating muscle being proudly flexed -- a building broken and bowing in worship to her unearthly strength.
Rian chuckled and brought her fists together in front of her shredded abs. The 18 year-old godbeast again pulsed her monstrous girlpecs to a freakshow full crab flex, giving a menacing closeup view of that limitless muscular girlpower to the judges, who visibly cowered and as the sick show continued, wet themselves before fainting dead away at the overpowering sight of her otherworldly barechested 18year-old muscles rippling, bulging, dancing and then exploding in absolute and total dominance.
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Yeah, Rian is definitely a dominant, powerful being, the description that I see here, she may well be the most powerful girl that reaper ever wrote about, Es or Mercy never brought a building down, at least not to my recollection. I can't wait to see what else she is capable of! Thanks again so much for posting, Jack! K+!
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Thanks Jack.
It's great to see Reaper is still writing somewhere and is as good as ever. With a few new twists.
Please pass on the thanks for the new story. Hopefully he is inspired to write more.
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Well, I'll post what I have from Reap. He might pop in to say hi, as I've let him know that his Rian is unleashed... ha ha, so to speak.
JK
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In the women's locker rooms, the hottest topic of conversation was Rian, as it always tended to be whenever the insanely muscled tomboy made an appearance at a men's meet. The fact that the 18 year-old girlbeast didn't even compete against them (the other girls) was barely news these days, as it was now nearly 10 years ago that a shockingly young, an 8 year-old Rian had taken the women's gymnastics world by storm, winning every single meet up to the collegiate level with breathtaking ease, destroying girls more than twice her age with physically impossible skills no other gymnast could achieve.
Back then in her final women's meet, the 8 year-old child wonder dethroned the current and past women's world champions for each apparatus with ridiculous ease, punctuating each mindblowing record-breaking performance with judges' salutes that ended in an arrogant double biceps flex. Muscles that had no business being on an 8 year-old girl erupted all over the preteen as Rian smugly celebrated each unprecedented triumph. But the looks of utter contempt the jacked youngster had on her face as she glowered at both judges and competitors while she repeatedly posed eventually cost her -- the 8 year-old was indefinitely suspended for poor sportsmanship and intimidating the judges. Her otherwordly scores were disqualified. Strangely enough, Rian didn't visibly seem to care much. Her cute young face was impassive when she was timidly told the news of a lifetime ban from women's gymnastics by a group of officials. They worriedly took in the ungodly muscle this mighty 8 year-old child possessed and wondered if they should have had security escort them. The officials didn't know that an entire army of guards wouldn't have stopped her if Rian wanted to act out. Indeed, their unease started blossoming into outright fear as the extraordinarily powerful 8 year-old girl stared hard at each of them, her large grey eyes as deeply unsettling as the freakish muscles bulging visibly and ominously everywhere on her young beast body.
But Rian then shrugged and walked away, causing the officials to sigh their relief and hurry off. In the release of enormous tension and their haste, no one noticed the solid metal handrails that Rian had been holding onto when they'd approached. There were now two gaps in the railing, right where the 8 year-old's hands had been resting. If anyone had examined the jagged, torn edges of those gaps, they would have found inexplicable scarring and even signs of melting... as if an unimaginable amount of compression had been exerted before the overmatched steel was simply torn off. If Rian could do that to solid steel with just her fingers, what could the 8 year-old childbeast do to human flesh? To their mortal horror, they would later find out...
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AWESOME! Cannot wait for more!
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Seriously can’t wait :wow: :woohoo:
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Yes! I was hoping to see a little bit more of Rian's backstory, and this is exactly what I was hoping to see, and holy shit was it awesome! I can't tell you how much I love seeing muscle and strength in girls this young, especially super strength, making steel melt with her hand grip, jeez, can't wait to see more! k+!
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Great to see a new reaper story!
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A few drops hint at the rain...of blood... to follow.
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It's REAPER, what the hell do you think is coming? Rainbows and sunshine?
JK
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At 8 year-old Rian's forced departure from women's gymnastics, the young prodigy left a trail of disqualified record scores that were never even approached, let alone equaled, by other female gymnasts. And over the years, no one found the other trail that this supremely strong beast might have left... that of unfortunate disappearances and gruesome accidents in the ranks of gymnastics officials.
Such as the SUV carrying several judges and other administrators that never made it to its destination. Found days later, the badly crushed vehicle had somehow hurtled off the side of a mountain, every corpse brutally smashed and pulverized beyond pulp. No one in the first responders that recovered the wreckage managed to keep their lunch, as each one vomited at the most ghastly human gristle they'd ever witnessed. The investigating coroner remained mystified at the sheer extent of the carnage, as it far exceeded even the most horrific of accidental plunges -- it was as if some force of nature had systematically shattered every single body with immense strength and vicious, sadistic intent before vanishing into the wilderness.
Or perhaps that unstoppable force used incredibly muscular arms to lift an already battered SUV full of dismembered, hideously crushed, expiring bodies above a head of brown, sun streaked hair, pressing it overhead multiple times in a jubilant show of unfathomable strength before hurling the whole gory thing into the gorge like it was an inconsequential toy, thousands of pounds treated like mere ounces by a bloodstained grey-eyed symphony of young muscle... But of course, no trace of such an absurd tale was found.
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Wouldn't be a reaper story without a little bloodshed, so I'm not going to be too down on what I saw here, after all, this girl, all of 8 years old doing insane feats like busting up an SUV, then lifting up thousands of pounds and tossing it like it weighed nothing, that is really what I'm looking to read, I will sit through a little gore to get it, that's no problem. I look forward to more! My question is if she is this strong at 8, is she holding back now at 18? Also, related, taking that previous question, if she was that strong at 8, how strong was she at 6? At 4? Hope to find out! k+!
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I think Reap left the timeline open to interpretation, as he said "over the years"... So the SUV incident could involve Rian as an 8 year-old all the way up to 18 years, current day. I guess it's however we want to take it, though recently after does make sense.
JK
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Yeah, I interpreted that as this was the first of the many murders she set out to do, and that she did the first one when she was 8. But yeah, it can be anytime in between 8 and 18. Anyway, I look forward to seeing where we go from here. k+!
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But it's not like Rian herself completely vanished from the world of sports. Her inhuman physical superiority was simply impossible to hide as the jacked tomboy tried her hand at a variety of other sports... and discovered that she could, on even her first outing, routinely make the most accomplished athletes in any given sport look like underpowered novices when matched against her muscles. She was a total, unstoppable beast. Even as a teen competing against trained adults, Rian was all but a god toying with insects. Like what she did in the single triathlon she enrolled in...
Learning that her fantastic build allowed her to compete at high levels in any sport, a teenaged Rian spotted the course being laid out for the local Ironman-length triathlon, and spontaneously signed up a day before the event. Even though she was utterly untrained, the teen superjock rocketed out in front of her age class, her monstrously powerful physique propelling her at a blinding speed. It became immediately apparent that Rian's lack of specialized training and technique would be completely overshadowed by her sheer physical prowess.
As she easily overtook stragglers in the earlier classes of the race, the amazing muscleteen’s raw stamina was clearly inhuman, and matched her unimaginable strength and speed. The jacked young brute actually accelerated to the point that Rian was actually running, swimming, and biking faster than any other competitor – the adult professional triathletes included! Pumped up by the exertion, the teenaged freak's spectacular musculature flexed and bulged to an obscene degree, her incredibly sculpted, granite physique bursting out of her flimsy running gear as the race progressed. Rian’s huge pectoral slabs simply blew apart her collar, allowing everyone to gawk at an almost bare, hulking and totally shredded muscle-chest that could crush them into a bloody paste if its vicious young owner so desired. Her rocky abs were so visibly prominent that the individual bricks threatened to rupture the cloth themselves. Even the monster teen's bristling sexual parts got into the act; her nipples, erect from her dominating performance, were so hard they punctured the shirt, while her inhumanly pumped up, muscular groin drew stunned stares at the protruding, boy-shaming clit bulge that was starting to unravel seams between her Herculean legs. The onlookers gasped as they saw a shockingly muscular young hulk streak past them with her mighty pecs, lats, abs and arms exploding out of her overmatched race wear, legs churning with such hellishly built sinew that an Olympic sprinter would have envied her monstrous muscle power!
When she easily won every division of the race -- even the elite level -- Rian accepted the two biggest trophies and her big grey eyes stared out at the cheering crowd, reflecting on the experience. An entire 26-mile marathon, a 100-mile bike ride, plus swimming in the ocean for 2.5 miles... and it was nothing to her muscles. Oh, she was warmed up a little bit, but her lips curled as the teen realized she could easily do two more full Ironmans today... and every day if she wanted. In complete contempt of a sport that failed to challenge her, Rian looked at the trophies she held, and disdainfully started crumpling them with the sheer strength of her vice-shaming grip. Her fingers were so strong the metal was like mere putty to her. The muscular beast started to giggle softly, a disturbing, ominous sound considering it was paired with the agonized squeal of steel being utterly mangled, surrendering helplessly against godlike strength. Muscles visibly bursting everywhere on her ripped young body, Rian laughed aloud as she literally crushed both trophies into mangled balls of metal with her bare hands before the shocked crowd.
Sneering "Way too easy... " Rian derisively dropped the pulverized remnants of her victory, and flexed her monster teen physique in domination, her inhumanly jacked young muscles exploding out of her already surrendering clothing before the astounded gathering, proudly displaying an almost topless teenaged godbod so supremely muscular she could surpass anyone at any sport.
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Yeah, I have no doubt that Rian is so incredibly strong, fast, agile, and overall athletically superior that she could conquer any sport she set her eyes on, I would suggest American Football would be ideal for her, as there is a lot of physical contact. Could be she'd dominate the entire opposite team by herself, never breaking a sweat in the process. And if injuring people is her thing, that is definitely the sport to do it in, some of the most gruesome injuries happened on the football field. But yeah, I look forward to seeing what else she could show off her physical prowess in! k+!
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Thank you for more, and I'm really greatful for the warning tag. Really letrs me know what I'm getting into. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you for more, and I'm really greatful for the warning tag. Really letrs me know what I'm getting into. Keep up the good work.
Reaper was very specific in how he tagged his threads -- so I followed his lead but added his name so old timers would know immediately who did the writing.
As most people familiar with the guy's previous work already know, it's not for everybody and that's why he insisted people get fair warning...
If you don't want to read GORE, just stop here.
JK
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Thank you for more, and I'm really greatful for the warning tag. Really letrs me know what I'm getting into. Keep up the good work.
Reaper was very specific in how he tagged his threads -- so I followed his lead but added his name so old timers would know immediately who did the writing.
As most people familiar with the guy's previous work already know, it's not for everybody and that's why he insisted people get fair warning...
If you don't want to read GORE, just stop here.
JK
Is there much more?
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Years passed before Rian came around to compete in gymnastics again, but she didn't try for reinstatement in women's gymnastics. Instead, the powerful teen sidestepped her history by applying to join the men's side of the competition. In so doing, Rian strategically accomplished what predictably transpired: Instead of focusing on what had previously disqualified her, the gymnastics federation reflexively fell back on the traditional, hopelessly misogynistic argument that one look at Rian's muscles would have dismissed: it challenged whether any woman -- let alone a 17 year-old girl -- was physically capable of performing men's gymnastics moves well enough to even compete. Once that objection to her application was formalized as the sole rationale, Rian arranged a closed-door exhibition.
It lasted under 10 minutes.
Then ashen-faced officials emerged, bolting from the gym without comment to the reporters gathered outside the gym. What exactly was demonstrated inside was never confirmed, but multiple sources claimed that Rian stripped to just her shorts like any male at practice, and then shamelessly barechested, the 17 year old musclegirl perfectly performed the winning routines for every men's event from the latest world championship at blazing speed and back to back, and then upped the ante by doing each routine in reverse with equal fluidity and again without pause between apparatuses. There was no denying Rian could not only compete with men, but completely slaughter them at their own game.
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The action does tend to go back and forth. but I'm not against that, it seems to be going to where we started, where Rian performed against the guys and easily showed that she was far, far superior physically to them in just about every way. Which of course, I can fully get behind, and there seems to be more, which I look forward to seeing! k+!
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Still love this story, looking forward to the next part. k+!
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Moments after the officials fled, a jubilant Rian dressed in a warmup tracksuit, strode out with signed paperwork welcoming her to men's gymnastics, her cute face split with a sly grin. When asked by a local reporting crew if she had any comments, the muscular 17 year-old girl looked over them, her grey eyes strange, and roughly shoved the reporter and her cameraman into the gym entrance, shutting the doors.
Once inside, both adults became instinctively fearful when they saw the downright nasty, hungry look Rian now had on her face. They watched, increasingly unsettled, as the gorgeous teen gymnast bit her lower lip and then lick her lips, and became aware of a heady virile musk in the small room. The jacked youngster pulled the zip down all the way on her warmup jacket, flooding the area with the overpowering scent of young arousal... But it was the sense of vision that commanded the most attention, for unzipping her warmup top exposed Rian's complete lack of any clothing beneath. Not even a sports bra covered the utterly jacked young torso now revealed. The teen enjoyed the stupefied expressions on the two slack-jawed reporters staring in wide-eyed awe and disbelief at the impossible muscularity of her naked chest and abdomen. The power of an alpha predator on display.
Two monstrous slabs of herculean granite, several inches thick and completely shredded over its entire expanse with crawling veins made a mockery of any notion of male pectoral superiority. Utterly breastless, her bared teenaged girl nipples were flushed and erect, oozing female sexuality on a chest could have been the ultimate masculine ideal for its brutal muscularity. In truth, Rian's unreal chest defied any gender and went well beyond mere humanity... as did the unprecedented blocks of freakish rock that comprised her utterly shredded midriff. The 17 year-old girlhulk was so obscenely ripped, each abdominal brick was actually segmented further into jagged ridges that rose and reformed hypnotically like an ocean of pure muscle with each breath Rian took. Even if they weren't addled by her overwhelming pheromones, the reporters wouldn't have believe their eyes to the unreality of that exposed teenaged torso. Surely nothing could possibly be that muscular. They tried to refocus their eyes, but it was like they were in a dream...or a nightmare?
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I just want to say that while I do get that you can't let the entire story out at one time, it is a little frustrating that you keep leaving us hanging on a wire, sometimes for days at a time. The story quality is still incredibly high, I totally enjoy each and every sentence, but it's still a little bit of a chore to wait to see how each scenario will pan out, but I guess that is a good thing, because it hooks you into coming back. I look forward to seeing more, hopefully very soon. k+!
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As she watched the two reporters ogling her matchless body muscles start get to drool helplessly, the teen musclebeast chuckled. In her smoky melodic rasp, Rian purred "This is what the men are up against... ' and with a mere tense of those sinews, turned the relaxed state of her already Mr. Olympia-exceeding front torso into sheer muscular insanity. As she continued tensing, more peaks jutted ever higher, sharpening ridges and individual fibers and veins forming a hellish sculpture of young brawn, her pecs and abs now truly incomprehensible. Slabs had reformed, erupting to entirely ridged, weirdly distended angular megaboulders of untold strength. Blocks were swollen to gnarly pillars, deeply striated across every craggy surface. Veins pulsed everywhere. Rian was so hard, she made diamonds look soft. Both slack-jawed adults were nearly driven to unconsciousness by the onslaught of raw, palpable power that overloaded all their senses.
"...so this is what will CRUSH them. Literally. Like ants."
She pulled down the front of her warmup pants, and showed she didn't believe in underwear either. And what the 17 year-old packed between her huge hellishly shredded legs was at least the equal of the torso above it. Genitals that were so freakishly muscular Rian just wasn't human anymore. To say the that this gorgeous muscle-marvel was sexy was like saying the sun was a candle. She was the strongest sexiest thing ever.
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I just want to say that while I do get that you can't let the entire story out at one time, it is a little frustrating that you keep leaving us hanging on a wire, sometimes for days at a time. The story quality is still incredibly high, I totally enjoy each and every sentence, but it's still a little bit of a chore to wait to see how each scenario will pan out, but I guess that is a good thing, because it hooks you into coming back. I look forward to seeing more, hopefully very soon. k+!
I agree. Releasing 2 or 3 paragraphs at a time is silly. It really breaks up any continuity the story may have. Any update should be no less than the equivalent of 1.5 - 2 typed pages of content.
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It's not silly when it's all you have to work with.
When I linked him to this thread, Reaper decided to rewrite this rather short story midstream and flesh it out more. It's three times as long as it was before, and is now being handed to me piece by piece in revision of what he had originally written. If you all want to wait a week or two for more pieces to accumulate, then I could do that.
Just be aware that the man keeps rewriting his stuff over and over obsessively, and that's why I now put it out there when I get it, so he doesn't get a chance to change his mind as it's already been posted! (He hasn't made me pull posts off yet) Honestly, I don't think this will have ever been posted otherwise.
I'm saying that if you really want to wait, you could be waiting a long long time. I got permission to post Rian and ran with it. You want to wait for 2 pages of text from Reap?
Fine.
JK
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Please, keep posting. I'm delighted to get a new story from Reap, in whatever format he wants it out.
If y'all don't like reading it in short burst, just check this thread less often! ;)
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It's not silly when it's all you have to work with.
When I linked him to this thread, Reaper decided to rewrite this rather short story midstream and flesh it out more. It's three times as long as it was before, and is now being handed to me piece by piece in revision of what he had originally written. If you all want to wait a week or two for more pieces to accumulate, then I could do that.
Just be aware that the man keeps rewriting his stuff over and over obsessively, and that's why I now put it out there when I get it, so he doesn't get a chance to change his mind as it's already been posted! (He hasn't made me pull posts off yet) Honestly, I don't think this will have ever been posted otherwise.
I'm saying that if you really want to wait, you could be waiting a long long time. I got permission to post Rian and ran with it. You want to wait for 2 pages of text from Reap?
Fine.
JK
I am sure the consensus view is "we will take what we can get." It's just a shame he is making it challenging. Good idea though to put what you get from him out there so he is committed to what he has sent you so to speak.
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For better or worse, I think he's been inspired by the Olympics to revisit Rian. The original story that I started posting sat unchanged for at least a year or two. So I was surprised he added to it.
And now there's a framework for Es training in a swimming pool. "The Monster in Water" is just weird sounding, and the scenario reads like typical Reaper but it's a draft. Like I said, must be the Olympics?
JK
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There's only one thing better than a brand new Reaper story, and that's a bread new Reaper story featuring Esther!!!!! Here's hoping the inspiration holds and he lets you publish it!
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"If you don't want to read GORE, don't read on. This is your last warning."
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"And this is what they'll fucking worship. Just look at it..." she uttered, clearly lusting over her own inhuman, hulkingly powerful sex meat, "Sooo jacked... Look at all my fuck muscles. So strong. So huge. Harder than steel." she ran her fingers longingly over her monstrous young genitals, encircling her shocking clit and stroked it up once like a man's cock. The stimulation causing an explosion of precum out of her sickeningly sinewed snatch, a volume that dwarfed many men's full loads. Reaching beneath her gender-destroying monstrosity, Rian lovingly scraped her fingernails over her pussy lips, making sure that there was the sound of a distinct clink-clink-clink... The sound of her nails going over something far harder than anything in a normal human body: utterly alien serrations lining the mouth of her dripping vagina. Formed by ridges of ungodly sex muscle striations that gave her actual teeth on her snatch. Rian was so muscular everywhere, both the newswoman and the cameraman's eyes were glazed, unable to absorb any more. The musclegod snickered, "I bet my junk is stronger than both your entire bodies put together. Yeah, everyone will submit to my muscles, to my meat... Starting with you two bitches."
As if intoxicated, both adults stared at her dumbly, speechless, their wills evaporating in the glare of her terrifying muscular supremacy. Rian plucked the oversized, TV-quality video camera from the cameraman like she was taking candy from a baby, the 17 year-old balancing and supporting the 50lb apparatus with just a few fingers. His feeble protest subsided with just one look from those mesmerizing grey eyes. The jacked gymnast held the heavy camera between her two hands in front of her magnificent young torso, muscles bulging everywhere, her bared nipples hard and long, menacing. Both adults were now riveted in place, barely breathing between pants, hearts pounding, and dilated eyes glued to the monstrosity of the muscles and the bristling supersex of the beast before them. Like anyone exposed to the naked extent of Rian's godlike superiority, they were hopelessly aroused, primed for sexual detonation.
Pursing her lips, Rian glanced down at the camera she held, then looked over the flummoxed adults before her. A slight smile tugged at the side of her mouth, and she sexily rasped "Cum for me, sluts. " With a sexy little grunt, the jacked gymnast brought her hands together in a savage most muscular pose. It was as if nothing was between the 17 year-old's hands. She crumpled the entire camera so effortlessly, its heavy duty chassis could have been made of paper mache. Reduced it to splintered, deformed fragments in under a second, to the horrific sounds of glass shattering, plastic disintegrating, metal screeching as it buckled helplessly and then imploded under the unapproachable strength of a godbeast.
A godbeast whose traps now reached her ears. Whose striped pumpkin delts and shotput biceps were now visible, having torn through the sleeves of her jacket like tissue paper. Whose massive, monster pecs were not just separated or striated, but now completely made of individual steel fibers visibly covering every inch of freakish mass, so full and swollen that her sexy nipples pointed straight down to the ground. Whose thick abs were an eight pack of craggy subsegmented bricks between chiselled corrugated steel slashes. Whose jutting, brutal young sex made genders irrelevant and human bodies insignificant prey.
Their minds transfixed by the display of Rian's immense power, her insane physique, and the animal smell of her teen arousal combined, both adults involuntarily orgasmed at the command of their god, cumming harder and longer than they would have believed possible...and would not stop. Exhausted, they started to wilt, hitting their knees before the almighty 17 year-old musclebeast looming before them as she unclasped her hands. Steel flakes fluttered to the ground from between her palms and fingers, testimonies to her immeasurable young strength.
Before they completely collapsed, Rian grasped their heads, a skull in each grip, and roughly pressed the female reporter's face into her freakishly muscled mound while the male cameraman's face was shoved into her striated ass. She slowly humped her toys, luxuriating in the muffled sounds of facial bones fracturing and the delicious vibrations of their screaming. Rian moaned throatily as more sickening wet crunches came from between her colossal sculpted legs and her ripped ass, letting her mighty meat do its wicked sexy thing, till screams lessened to weak whimpers as she inexorably overcame them. The young musclegod pulled both revoltingly shattered visages from her powerful flesh and murmured "Drink me in worship, worms." Pressing them back in, the beast came in a scalding flood of young heat, all but drowning both adults in torrents of matchless teenaged virility. Rian drew in a long breath that her mangled prey could not, and flaring her enormous lats, also flexed her monstrous pecs in dominant exultation. Her muscular splendor was indescribable. And then the girlgod began to fuck in earnest...
(to be cont'd)
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The writing here is some of the sexiest I've read, but man I hate murder and gore. What a bummer.
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Another really great chapter, I loved what I read. I am not the biggest fan of blood and gore either, but I will say that if the author has the powers of muscle and strength description like reaper has, my worries go right out the window and I enjoy the story greatly. Which I have here again. I really can't wait to see more, especially if Rian shows off her power more. k+!
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Fucking Bring It!
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Great work, and I don't mind the wait. Loving the brutal direction this is going in.
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Absolutely loving this story, the gory the better, keep it going!
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Reaper said next week would culminate in the end of this chapter of Rian.
But that's what he said last week, so I prodded him to give me something. Like, anything to keep the ball rolling.
Well, here it is!
JK
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Now 18, the first meet Rian competed on the male side was not a competition but a demonstration of absolute and total superiority. The muscular young beast redefined the limits of human potential, racking scores well above her older male counterparts. Watching from the stands, her emasculating performance was all anyone, especially the female gymnasts, could talk about was how completely dominant this incredibly jacked teen was, and how those awesome muscles overpowered the men. Even though most of the women would not consider themselves lesbians, it was as if Rian was the naturally accepted exception to their longings.
Thus, those ungodly 18 year-old muscles were not limited to overpowering just men. Although she competed against -- well, more like obliterated -- males, Rian used the women's locker room to change and shower... and also fuck the living daylights out of everyone inside.
Elite athletes, including women, were no strangers to the elevated libido associated with their superb constitution, but like her superhuman physical abilities would suggest, Rian was altogether another animal. The teen was in another league, another planet, hell, another plane of existence. She wasn't just thirsty or horny, she was insatiable. And when it came to Rian, it wasn't a surprise that the female gymnasts reciprocated; awe or even envy became a lust so powerful they couldn't get enough of her. Her carefree mane of hair, perfectly symmetric face framed an adorable nose and huge eyes that anyone could get lost in, a gray as deep as a stormy sea. And then there was her body, which made any Mr. Olympia look like a malformed runt. No girlfriend or boyfriend could ever hope to approach or let alone equal Rian's godlike level of sheer physical perfection. The muscles on every inch of her, literally everywhere...
The 18 year-old musclebeast was so sexually capable, she could take several girls to orgasm simultaneously using various parts of her incomparable, devastating young body while she herself could ascend and then plateau repeatedly -- for hours..! Utterly tireless, she fucked a dozen gymnasts into ecstatic senselessness and then would continue to rape them well after their consciousness had surrendered to relentless pleasure. Completely spent, not one of the girls would have been able to walk straight afterwards, let alone perform gymnastics. So to keep her stable in working order, Rian deliberately withheld herself despite their desperate pleadings for her touch until after each competition, using her scorching sexuality as incentive. And leaving judges and coaches bewildered as to why these gymnasts suddenly turned in fantastic performances and amazing scores across the board. After which point an orgy would usually explode at the end of the meet that would have made even the ancient Romans blush.
But there was one caveat -- Rian tolerated no dissent to her dominance. As the nude beast, muscles bulging brimming over with strength, herself said smugly to the entire locker room as it swooned for her "Submit...or die." Anyone who thought they had a chance to oppose her usually didn't last more than a bone or two casually snapped like a twig to wake them to the reality of what they were next to Rian, a toy next to a god. But a god which could give pleasure beyond their wildest imagination, as long they knew their place in the natural order of things. With her utter superiority, Rian owned the female locker room, turning it into a temple of pleasure, of worship to a god of muscle. The male locker would also worship that same god, but given the male ego, it would resemble less temple, and more butcher shop.
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Awesome stuff, once again, incredible description of muscle and strength, and a feminine virility so to speak, able to leave multiple girls and women, all of them highly elite athletes in their own right, in smiling sex comas with her sexual skills and abilities. But yeah, I would venture to guess that if she also fucked guys, she would leave their locker room much more bloody, since they wouldn't be able to give up control as easily. Maybe we'll find out next time. I look forward to it. k+!
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In an emptied gymnasium hours later, Rian waited to collect her dues from winning the bet...she'd more than doubled any male score with her enormous power. The judges had gotten off with only a mere taste of the teenager's unholy appetite for dominance; now it was time for the 18 year-old girlbeast to relish the main course! The jacked musclegirl glanced towards the male locker room impatiently but no one emerged.
So the teen strode confidently into the male locker room herself, and ignored the exclamations of surprise by the young men chatting nearby who noticed her entry. With the commotion of their outcries, soon every eye was cast on her herculean young physique. It was constrained in a simple girl's leotard, a shimmering white that left her back and all her limbs bare. What the thin cloth did cover, it didn't so much conceal as showcase everything on her magnificent 18 year old body. The gigantic, shredded chest with both nipples looking ready to burst straight out. The impossibly defined abdominal wall that ran like protruding bricks from the freakish overhang of her massive pecs all the way down to that bristling bulging beast of a groin. It seemed like every detail of her hulking sex was molded and visible, the overstretched material struggling and failing to contain the sheer virility of the almighty monster within.
When she had their attention, Rian smirked. "You made a bet, and you lost," the ubermuscled girl said flatly, "You all could have fucked me, but now I get to fuck you.” She chuckled dangerously and then snarled “Now lick every inch of me clean in fucking worship." But all the men did was... nothing. They simply stared. At their lack of action, Rian smiled in anticipation, already knowing what she would have to do to collect on the bet and savoring the thought of the impending violence. She would not afford them the mercy she'd shown to the female gymnasts.
"Okay..." she breathed sordidly and licked her lips. The teenbeast seized the frame of the heavy duty lockers closest to her and pulled, her insane muscles exploding to freakish size and definition as thick bolts and anchors snapped like trinkets. The unstoppable young hulk tore an entire section of lockers right of the wall in a screech of tortured steel, with the next section also bending out helplessly, barely clinging to the wall studs. Now scared, the few gymnasts nearby scrambled away from the imminent destruction and towards the rear of the room. Growling, Rian hoisted the section that she held overhead, her giant shoulders looking like growing veiny pumpkins, as she then pumped out rep after sexy rep of inhuman overhead presses, her immense musclepower mauling the connections to the point that they too gave up the ghost. A whole row of lockers was now separated from the wall, mangled, looking like a derailed train. The jacked 18 year-old girlfreak flung the entire massive wreck into the locker room entryway with such unimaginable strength that in a godawful shriek and clatter, the ruined pile was deeply and brutally embedded into the entrance itself. Sealing it completely...the only way in. Or out.
Standing in front of the demolished metal blockade , Rian surveyed the shock and terror on the faces of the male gymnasts, who were now huddled away from her. The 18 year-old girlgod drank in the fear like it was a fine wine, savoring it, relishing it. Wanting more. Her growing arousal made her already obscene young muscles inflate like steel balloons and even the ultra stretchy leotard couldn't keep up. The shiny material splintered at the collar, giving way to a veiny, striated hellscape of monstrous unsurpassable young brawn.
"Oh yeah..." Rian grinned at the leotard's failure to contain her. The musclefreak grabbed two handfuls of her leotard at the split over her monolithic chest and with a widening devilish grin, slowly ripped the material apart, demonstratively tearing off the top like it was made of Kleenex. The 18 year-old girlhulk again displayed her matchless hulking teenbeef proudly barechested to her defeated competition. She had destroyed them in the competition as easily as the rings. As the lockers behind her. Although powerfully muscled adult males in their own right, they were hopelessly emasculated by the sheer barechsted muscularity of the now topless 18 year-old girlgod with the godbod. Rian's awesome muscles were as large as any of these older males, but on a much smaller younger female frame, they appeared positively gigantic. Not to mention those hulking young muscles were visibly far harder with freakish shreds and more gnarly peaks...and unbeknownst to them, much denser -- to the degree that this 18 year-old girl well outweighed even the largest 25 year-old male there.
Rian went into a melodramatic back double biceps pose to arrogantly show off, which made the assembled gymnasts jaws drop in shock at the incomprehensible assembly of unreal young muscles she conceitedly displayed on that ungodly flared back. Her ass was a spectacle of striations so deeply hewn that it was completely shredded into unearthly gluteal ridges across its entire surface, from notched crack to notched haunches. Rian's ass was so obviously was harder than any of the male gymnasts' chests, they couldn't help but be envious even in their reluctance to acknowledge her absolute superiority.
She faced them again, a topless 18 year-old animal pumped up to inhuman extremes, and glowered "My nipples are waiting, pussies," flexing one monstrous pec after another, her young sex nubs erecting and hardening in anticipation as they flicked, commanding their adulation. A god expecting her due.
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I personally would've been the first in line to worship this young Goddess as she deserves, but then again, I guess I do have a special type, which Rian definitely is. But it would be less about arousal and more about the fear that not obeying this magnificent young Goddess would piss her off and she would maim or even kill me. I might die anyway, but at least I would get the chance to feel those awesome, diamond hard muscles and feel a little of her power before I do. Anyway, I look forward to more, k+!
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But when no one responded in sullen resentment, Rian rolled her eyes... then suddenly moved with blinding speed, rushing forward and seizing the heads of the nearest two gymnasts. With utterly unstoppable strength, the barechested 18 year-old musclefreak slammed their faces into her enormous granite pec slabs, easily knocking both males senseless. Rian roughly rubbed their faces into her naked, unyielding mighty chestbeef, pressing them in so brutally hard that as she flexed her pecs, the striated bulging fibers of her surging chest muscles audibly fractured facial bones and started horrifically rearranging their features...even her sexy 18year-old nipples were so hard, the erect nubs gouged bloody deep furrows into their faces as she hungrily stimulated herself to terrible effect!
"You WILL worship me," Rian glared at the stunned crowd, still brutalizing two heads with just the unreal flexes of her hulking young pecs, causing spurts and spatters of blood, "My power... My strength." She removed them from her monster chest and still gripping their heads, lifted both unconscious gymnasts clear off the ground, effortlessly suspending them overhead (in yet another casual feat of unreal strength) to show the crowd her handiwork. Shocked gasps and cries of pure horror rang out at the ghastly ruins of two butchered faces. Both men were now utterly unrecognizable, their facial features gruesomely grated off by her nipples and pectoral ridges. The sex nubs and pec striations of an 18year-old girl. But an 18 year-old girl so fucking strong, she had done that with just her bared chest muscles!! And naked NIPPLES!!! She was a god, and she wasn't done.
"Worship POWER, " Rian uttered sexily, dangerously. Vein sprawled forearms blowing up into sculpted bowling pins, her immensely strong 18year-old fingers powered into the base of each skull, causing the horrified gymnasts watching to flinch as they heard neck bones shatter audibly in her merciless grasp. Staring hard at the increasingly terrified collection of men, Rian viciously slammed both skulls into her deeply chiseled, muscled midsection. But she didn't stop there. Instead, the 18 year-old musclebeast put slow ruthless pressure on their heads against her steely gridded abdomen...with absolutely hideous, mortifying results: with a sickening wet squelches, their heads simply imploded in twin eruptions of gore. Rian slowly and fiendishly flattened two skulls against her unyielding, supremely muscled young midsection like mere eggshells, the gory contents splattering like mush onto the ground. The 18 year-old girlgod was so strong, she effortlessly made two human heads pop like pimples against the unholy blocks of her granite abs!
Barechested mankilling muscles bulging, Rian made dominating eye contact with everyone in the room, her evil smile widening as they recoiled in terror of the ungodly strength and cruelty of the monster child before them! Releasing now two headless corpses, the sexy 18 year-old monster clasped her hands behind her gorgeous head and crunched down into a truly unearthly ab pose, showing off her matchless muscular murderous midsection that was so impossibly striated, her ridged abdominal bricks looked like she had been forged out of the hardest substance imaginable.
After admiring herself, Rian exploded forward, arms outstretched, to pounce on the next two males. Wrapping up a torso in each hulking young arm, the sheer tremendous force of Rian's monster double tackle was so great, she hurtled the pile of them backwards nearly 20 feet! More gymnasts joined in, causing a massive heap of muscle as they tried to restrain the young murderous girlbeast at the bottom. But just as the the dogpile seemed to settle and the struggle appeared to be over with Rian finally overwhelmed by the sheer number of powerful men atop her....
The dogpile exploded. Male bodies flew through the air as if propelled by bombs detonating but it was simply Rian throwing nearly a thousand pounds of men off each limb like a dog would shake off water. The gorgeous musclefreak was way too strong to be subdued by any number of men! Rising to her feet, a now completely naked 18year-old girlhulk effortlessly suspended two adult males off the ground, one wrapped in each arm, as they struggled mightily to free themselves from her clutches...but the topless godbeast was so beastly strong, she easily held even these two powerful athletes as helpless as infants. The trapped men couldn't believe how hard her huge, peaked, ripped muscles were. Rian's arms were like a granite sculpture, her pumped flesh completely nonpliable and impervious to their desperate blows. Then the jacked 18 year-old girlgod started to coil her arms, and the two captive gymnasts screamed as young bulging muscles jutted outwards, surging unstoppably into their bodies.
"Worship STRENGTH," Rian intoned nastily as she viciously crushed their ribcages like straw, their entire torsos collapsing into unsurvivable inches between her wrist and deltoid, as her huge, veiny forearms and giant peaked biceps afforded no space whatsoever. By the time she had fully coiled her insanely jacked arms, the 18 year-old's horrific double biceps pose had not only largely scissored both men in half but emptied them like tubes of toothpaste, their ruptured organs forced through mouth and anus in twin fountains of steaming bloody gore. Grinning, Rian fully flexed her freak peaks to their full size, and with wet plops, the ghastly scissors was completed -- four gruesome halves of men lay strewn at her feet as she proudly displayed the pose of strength that itself had caused such unspeakable carnage -- an utterly freaky, monstrous and unmatchable double-biceps pose of ultimate and unending young dominance. Many vomited at the gory brutality, and hideous tyranny this nude muscular monster effortlessly inflicted.
Her 18 year-old biceps flexed to ungodly peaks of pure power, "Worship ME" Rian roared, and an entire roomful of strong men, terrified and quaking in fear, jumped up to frantically service the matchless godbod of this almighty 18 year-old, her fully bared young physique an anthem to muscularity beyond perfection. In unbridled terror, they humbly licked every inch of her impossible muscles and suckled her erect nipples and serviced her shockingly huge young clit in absolute subservience to Rian, an utterly brutal, unstoppable sexy 18 year-old super musclegod.
(Concluded)
Epilogue:
By the time she was done, there wasn't even a building standing. It wasn't because a gorgeous muscular godbeast had humped the supporting pillars with such lusty vigor pleasuring herself that her jacked junk crushed concrete like gypsum and shredded rebar like paper straws. No, apparently the hole in the roof had caused the entire structure to be compromised, and it had fallen onto itself, absolutely obliterating the men's locker room and the unfortunate male gymnasts inside holding a late meeting. That there wasn't a single intact body in the carnage was somewhat unexpected; the coroner's office privately discussed the opinion that it was more like a fragmentation explosive had gone off than a structural flattering. Surely it couldn't have been a gray-eyed 18 year-old musclebeast literally fucking every man to pieces because she well was beyond anything human, with muscles far too strong and a sex too horny for anyone or anything to withstand.
No, it wasn't that.
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Hmm, I wonder if she was always planning on killing these guys, or if she made that decision when they didn't immediately start worshiping her? Would she have kept alive someone like me, who would've jumped at the chance to worship her body and power immediately upon being commanded? Or would she have killed me anyway, because that's who she is? I just wonder about that. Does she keep slaves, or are men beneath her and therefore she kills anyone she meets. I guess we may never know if this is truly the end. Still, it was fun to read. k+!
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Let me quote Reap's reply when I asked him about the morals of his characters a while back.
"None of them have a moral compass. Because none of them are really fleshed out --even in my own head-- to be actual characters that could have such complexity. These are just sketches, scenes of description that are inhabited by the role of a supremely dominant antihero. The only exception might be Mercy, who I might have sufficiently mapped out to be, in my estimate, a real character in an actual story."
"Antiheroes have always been fascinating to me, because they're villains that aren't the antagonist, but protagonists oblivious or unburdened by a superego. Compelling because it's diametrically opposite of how I try to live or what I would aspire to. Maybe it's an outlet for the darkness. Who knows. "
This was before Rian, but I think it applies. By the way, that second paragraph was another conversation posted elsewhere about the antihero, but it seem to fit.
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First, great story and great character! Quite different than Mercy or Esther, yet every inch as sexy and devastating.
Quite surprised to hear Reap doesn't consider Esther fully 'mapped out' -- she sure is in my head! Hands down my favorite fictional character in the whole genre.
Please pass along my thanks and appreciation to the Reaper!
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@ffejl, a "verbatim reply" from Reap:
JK
"Thanks for the kind words and support!
Even though Esther is probably my signature character, and the one I've most written about, the Monster AS WRITTEN is not deep -- straight ahead, sheer brutal dominance. Oh, there's hints of something more to her, but I've left it up to the reader to color in the details. If you've done that, I salute your imagination and am gratified you've made her yours. (But actually don't tell her she's yours, or Es would literally rip out your spleen and shove it up your... well, you know... just to prove she belongs to no one).
Let me reiterate to anyone reading that I don't do any commissions. Writing this sort of thing takes too long and gets too stressful, even with an open deadline. Nonetheless, I'm flattered by the past offers.
By the way, I'm considering posting my past stuff on my DA page. But I'm not sure if anyone would be interested..?
Best wishes,
Reap"
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I, for one, would be interested.
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I too would be highly interested in seeing Reaper post his past works on DA or wherever else he chooses to share. I would have to believe there would be quite an audience for that.
Also please pass him my thanks for this Rain story that you've shared.
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I echo the interest.
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Yeah, this was a great, hot story, love the description as always from reaper. I wish there was more, but it certainly was a very hot read, nonetheless. k+! to JK.