Well done

K++

You've done an amazing job of capturing a schmoe fantasy that is probably universal and making it feel real.  IF there's one thing missing, it's Lorie.  Who is she? I really have no sense of her other than the fact that she's in control.  This is a chick who took all kinds of drugs so that she could be huge...why?? What turns her on?? As a result, their date feels more like a session than a connection.

Amazing, i hope they do not drift apart this.

great story capturing a potent fantasy for many of us.  though we all want more, it's perfect as is.

Excellent piece of writing! I felt like if I was there with her. Thank you very much for this experience. 

I am 1,i had session with a woman,powerful legs,but no ehere near that kind of muscle

Hey man –

Have to say this is a brain meltingly good story.

I haven’t gotten a chance to come to these boards much lately but when I heard you have posted another story I had to come and check it out – and was not disappointed.

I have to say the level of insight you were able to bring to the experience of being enthralled by FBBs is second to none. And just the way you were able to place us in the narrators mind – at the same time keep things grounded and realistc which just serves to make the story even hotter!!

Anyway I could gush about this tale for a while but a few of my favorite points:

-   Love your ability to play with the way in which FBBs appaear in public. This is a personal favorite aspect of mine and something I play with often in my stories (and if I can get around to it is something that I plan on puttiing in my next Mrs J story.)

-   Loved the dinner convo and how you intoned everyone would be looking at someone like Lorie. So subtle but so hot.

-   Loved how you showcased how Lorie would appear – as a fan of muscles through clothes, loved this!

-   And then of course the dialogue throughout the session. So pure in some ways as we experiences his desire as well as the release he is getting by given into his fetish – JUST FANTASTIC! And as someone who once had their copes of Muscle and Fitness discovered by a GF and had to lie about them… COULD I RELATE!

Anyways just wanted to gush… Not sure if we are getting a new Lisa’ Path but if not this is an amazing addition to your canon. Great work!

This story is AMAZING!  I can't believe I missed when it first got posted. 

What a masterfully written work. As others have stated I see myself in that story and you caught exactly how I felt when I first shared my secret with a woman for whom I cared a great deal. It was such a liberating experience and feeling of relief to finally be able to put into words and bring into the open my very secret fetish. Great job! K+!

This was a great story. Very well written and captivating. I'm looking forward to reading your future works as well as "Lisa's Path".