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  • #1 by Tuturu on 19 Aug 2020



  • This is my first try at writing a story, which contains unrealistic muscles, but no violence. I'd even say it's a bit romanticized
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    Jupiter gym
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    Chapter 1:

     Jade was an ordinary girl at first sight. In her 20's,she was an already respected lawyer,  with beautiful green eyes, hence the name, and dark, silky hair, which got all the way down to her shoulders. Her little nose contrasted with her gorgeous and carnatious lips, which usually displayed a cute and innocent smile.
      At only 5ft 2,  and 110 pounds, and with average B-cups, she didn't really stood up, and she went unnoticed at most places, and the gym where she was heading was no exception.

       She had been given a 2 month coupon by someone she had helped while at work, since she was a lawyer, a pretty good one, actually, as a thank you. She had already a bit of experience with gyms, so she went in without an instructor, because back in the day, she hit it almost every other day, when her college classes allowed it. She had managed to stay fit after all of those years, but she felt like now she could start to get even fitter, maybe even get a 6 pack, thing she had never have, or some butt definition, which wouldn't be a bad thing for getting a partner either. She hadn't been in a relationship for years, since she had been so busy, and deep down she craved having some one to share her feelings with... and also have sex with.

         She got in, and showed the lady at the front desk her coupon.
    'Oh, you must be that lawyer. Thanks for helping us.' She was greeted with, as well as with a gold card attached to a ribbon ' This is a pass to our premium services, you get as many protein powders or steroids, towels, massages, spa sessions, sessions with a tutor,  yadda yadda as you want in these two months. Oh, and welcome to The     Jupiter gym, where the strongest men and women come to train! I have to say that to every rookie, it's in my contract, sorry' She said with a sad smile.
       Jade was genuinely surprised of all the things that the gym offered, and was eager to start her day.


       The gym itself was huge, the size of one big apple, but she was even more surprised with the size of the people training in there. They were all huge! She let out a gasp when she saw the first group of men lifting weights. Every single one of them had biceps over 20", and shoulders the size of basketballs. But what really catched her eye was that training with them, there were women as big as them, some of them were even bigger! Some had meaty slabs of muscles as pecs, and others had watermelon sized breasts to compliment. Veins peaked all over their bodies, traveling through ripped and perfect female muscles. Their legs were amazing too, all of them would make a plastic enhanced pornstar jealous with their round butts and powerful legs. Jade started to feel aroused, trapped between that muscle orgy, and her nipples pressed hard against her sports bra and her yoga pants got wet. This was what she wanted! To have a huge, sexy and ripped body! Suddenly, she got caught by one woman, a gorgeous tall blonde, wearing an extremely loose hoodie, and pants equally loose. She started walking towards her. Jade gasped and her face quickly turned red out of shame, and before she realized, the blonde was already besides her. She had an aura of dominance that made Jade feel extremely small and weak, besides the woman towered over her at 6 ft6. Jade quickly mumbled an apology,
    ' I-I'm sorry, I-I didn't mean to disrupt, I promise it won't happen again' she said trying to hide her face from the blonde.

      'Hey, don't worry, it's fine, you have nothing to worry about. Considering most people freak out and look disgusted when they see such muscular gals, your reaction is... flattering, in a way.'  The blonde stated with a deviant smile, while pointing at Jade's chest, where her nipples stood up firmly through her sports bra. Jade felt like she wanted to die and blushed even more, hiding her face with her hands, but surprised at how soft the blonde's voice was. The blonde just laughed it off.' Don't worry, you aren't the first one to have this kind of reaction either. Sorry if I made you feel bad, I'll show you something to make you feel better.'
     After she said that, she took one step back, leaned her shoulders backwards, and took a deep breath. She closed her eyes, and put her arms to her sides. She was very wide, but then Jade noticed she was getting... wider?   Her shoulders started to slowly drift away from her back, and her chest seemed to come outwards even more. She started getting read, and veins started appearing over her forehead as she grunted ' C'mon... C'mon, I can feel it!' in an animalistic tone. It was then when Jade realized that the blonde was growing right before her eyes! Her muscles became easily distinguible from under her clothes, as well as veins as thick as fingers. Her muscles were soon too much for her clothes to contain, and they gave up with a loud ripping noise!  ' C'mon... I want more! Hnnnng ...More MUSCLES!!' as she said that, Jade witnessed what looked like a muscle explosion as the blonde's biceps surpassed the 28" mark and her breasts got as bigger than her head, if not more, her traps reached her ears, and her pecs almost reached her chin!, Her core section looked like it was made out of solid rock, sculped with an impressive 8 pack. Her thighs should have been around 40" big, and her calves weren't that far away from that mark! Her pale skin looked like it would explode at any time it even looked reddened in some areas, after that muscle explosion.
     She stood there only with a bra that struggled to contain her gigantic breasts and a pair of panties that didn't cover much either
      ' Uhhhh... Uhhhh... One moment..need... to catch my breath' as she said that, it looked like she was trying to reach her knees with her hands, but her muscles fought for space with each other. After a minute or two she said ' Oh, my bad, I forgot to introduce myself. I'm Skye.'
      Jade answered, still in shock:'I'm Jade... nice to meet you...' and offered her a handshake instinctively. Skye corresponded, and Jade felt the strongest grip of her life.
    ' Well Jade' Skye said' You'll have excellent results with us, and you have nothing to be ashamed of' as Skye winked, her bra finally gave up and her face turned completely red.

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    To be continued


  • #2 by jhunter on 19 Aug 2020
  • Nice first start. I like that there's break in dialog. Could use a bit more detail, but since its chapter one, looking forward to more.
  • #3 by Tuturu on 20 Aug 2020
  • Nice first start. I like that there's break in dialog. Could use a bit more detail, but since its chapter one, looking forward to more.

    Thanks! There will be more details in the next part, since I wanted Jade to have more protagonism than Skye
  • #4 by sgsg69 on 20 Aug 2020
  • Thank you, fun start.............will be interesting to see what that "gold" pass gets her............look forward to more.
  • #5 by mrshhh on 20 Aug 2020
  • Really enjoyed the first part!  Jade is likeable & cute, and Skye is a real beefcake.  Thank you for sharing your work.  I hope  you'll continue it.
  • #6 by Tuturu on 21 Aug 2020
  • Thank you, fun start.............will be interesting to see what that "gold" pass gets her............look forward to more.
    Thanks! I can spoil that the gold pass gets her access to big things
  • #7 by Tuturu on 21 Aug 2020
  • Really enjoyed the first part!  Jade is likeable & cute, and Skye is a real beefcake.  Thank you for sharing your work.  I hope  you'll continue it.
    I'm glad you liked it! I'm currently working on chapter 2
  • #8 by Lupus753 on 21 Aug 2020
  • I was hooked when you said there'd be unrealistic muscles.
  • #9 by phil123 on 22 Aug 2020
  • Very good start. So I hope to read how Jade will grow and get big.
  • #10 by Tuturu on 23 Aug 2020
  • I was hooked when you said there'd be unrealistic muscles.
    :D I know that some people enjoy that kind of FMG, but it is relatively hard to find with it involving futa or gore, things that I'm not personally interested in, so I thought that perhaps other people would like muscles like that.
  • #11 by Tuturu on 23 Aug 2020
  • I was hooked when you said there'd be unrealistic muscles.
    :D I know that some people enjoy that kind of FMG, but it is relatively hard to find with it involving futa or gore, things that I'm not personally interested in, so I thought that perhaps other people would like muscles like that.
  • #12 by Tuturu on 26 Aug 2020
  • Here's the next part:
    Chapter 2

        Once that Skye had put some clothes on to cover a bit of her gigantic body, she took Jade through a tour of the gym.
       The gym was so big and had so many things in it than it took them almost two hours to go through the first floor, mainly because Skye insisted on showing what every single thing did right there and then, because "it will be less time consuming when you actually start working out", and Jade didn't really have any other choice. But then, they stopped in front of a white door, and Skye turned to her: ' this is where the real magic happens', and opened the door. Inside of it there were a bunch of scientists, many of them measuring athletes, or doing something with a bunch of powders.
    'Hello ladies. I see that you brought a friend, Skye' one of them said.
    'Her name is Jade, and I will be training with her' she replied' This is doctor Jordan, head of supplement development in here. He's the one responsible for this body' and she flexed a double biceps pose, her veins immediately rose up to the surface of her skin, pressing against it dangerously over those huge and shredded twin peaks. Her monstrous body contrasted with her smile, like someone who just discovered chocolate.
    ' The credit is not all mine, after all, but also your's Skye, even if I designed your workout plan for these six months, you trained extra hard!'
    Jade was dumbfounded: Skye had gotten that body in only six months? How was that even possible? Skye seemed to pick up on her confusion, so she quickly explained: ' Oh, I had been working out for a couple years before I got here, but when I did I started to grow... Exponentially.' To prove her point, she extended her lats, and immediately turned double the width in less than a split second. Her shoulders were so apart one from another that Jade wondered how many people would fit between them. At least three, she thought. Skye really enjoyed showing off her gigantic body.
    Dr. Jordan continued with his explanation: 'Yeah... when Skye joined, we were testing a new steroid. It was designed in a way so that athletes didn't have to be dehydrated or go through a specific diet, as well as improving the gain ratio. It was originally intended for men, but it didn't really work as it should have due to testosterone. But once it was tested with estrogen...' he smiled towards Skye' We realized we had better results with women.'
     Jade was mesmerized. She thought it was amazing how a human, let alone a woman could get that kind of body, and then she realized... She wanted that body. How would it feel to be so huge? How would it feel to be even bigger? Stronger. Better.
    But then again, Skye achieved her body in six months, and she was already a bodybuilder before the treatment. How could she get bigger than her in only two months? She couldn't afford more time of membership, and she had to work most days. That would mean to adapt her work out routine, but...
    'Hey, Dr. Jordan. I guess that after Skye's results you've been working on that specific supplement, haven't you?' Dr. Jordan nodded' I was wondering... If I could start using it too, please.'
    'Well, the product itself is not commercial yet, but it has passed tests successfully. We may have even achieved to make it more effective than its previous version, so if you take it you will end up being really big. Are you sure about that?
    Jade sure as hell was. The single thought of a gargantuan body aroused her : ' I guess I'll have to sign something'
    'Oh yeah, over here please! I will take your measurements too to determine the dose.' He started walking deeper into the room.
    ' Hey, Doctor, do you think you could help me get bigger than Skye? The problem is that she achieved it in six months, and I only have two and can't afford the rest!' Jade wondered.
    'Huh. Well, we could try to use something a bit more extreme, if you want. The supplement is usually taken in the form of powder, but I guess we could also inject it into your bloodstream, but keep in mind it is more dangerous. You'll have to come see me before and after every work out.'
    'I have no problem with that, as long as I achieve my goals' Jade was determined now. She would be the strongest and biggest human ever in record time!

       Once they were in a private room with measuring equipment, Dr. Jordan started to get the job done. Once finished, it turned out Jade was pretty much average and healthy. Her chest was 35' her back was only 34'. Her biceps were only 12' around, so nothing special. Her waist was also 37', and her thighs were about 18". She was only 5ft 2, and a 110 pounds.  Doctor Jordan also measured other things, like the fat in each part of her body, and things like that that would help him dose her.
    'You know Jade, I would have usually left one of my employees take care of you, but since it looks like you really want to go to an extreme, I will personally take care of this project. I will have your dosage ready for the end of the day. Come then'
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    'Holy shit'
    Jade was panting and sweating profusely, she couldn't anything of her body anymore. She hadn't felt so tired in her life. After almost four hours of continuous exercise, she could barely stand up.
    'This is how everyone starts, at least here, so don't worry, you get used to it.You should go see Dr. Jordan now, or... perhaps you should take a shower first.'
    Jade complied. All of her clothes were soaked, and had stuck to her. 
         She stayed in the shower for a good time, enjoying the feeling of hot water fall through her skin. She imagined herself as a gigantic amazon, water falling  through her body, through every single muscle, which would be worked to the maximum and beyond. She was getting horny, so she had to stop in order to be in time for her appointment. That was disappointing, but she thought: ' Soon, I will no longer have to imagine' , with a smile to herself.
       She went to the same room as before, knocked the door and got greeted by Dr. Jordan.
    'Here is your supplement dose, Jade' He was holding a syringe.  ' Your right arm, please'
    Jade was never a huge fan of injections, and would often get very nervous when she had to get a vaccine, but this time, for some reason, she felt completely normal and complied. She didn't even had to look away as the syringe went through her skin into her vein. She only felt a little tickle. The whole thing didn't take longer than two minutes.
    ' That would be all. See you tomorrow!' They shaked hands, and Jade went on with her day.

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        When Jade finally got home, all she wanted to do was sleep, after the gym and all of her other errands. She was on her way to put on her pajama, but something stopped her. She stopped in front of her bathroom's mirror. Something was different, she could tell. She quickly rised her right arm, and flexed. A tiny peak appeared on the surface. That was unbelievable, so she quickly grabbed a measuring tape, and used it around her bicep. It was 13'. She gasped noticeably. That was just impossible. After the initial shock, she checked her stomach. There were lines of definition were her abs should be. They were not there that day's morning. She quickly took a look at her thighs, too, and oh surprise, they grew to 19'.
    'If only one dose did this to me... How effective will be two doses with a more effective work out, then?' She wondered. She needed to know. And to ask for a vacation at her job, too.

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    To be continued

    I've been thinking, and I think that I will upload a chapter every week, maybe even more than one, if my schedule allows it.

  • #13 by sgsg69 on 26 Aug 2020
  • Down the rabbit hole she goes!! Great addition........don't pressure your writing, let it flow as you need. This is quality work! Karma to you.........
  • #14 by Tuturu on 27 Aug 2020
  • Down the rabbit hole she goes!! Great addition........don't pressure your writing, let it flow as you need. This is quality work! Karma to you.........
    Thanks!
  • #15 by phil123 on 27 Aug 2020
  • Great story idea and I like your shedule.
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