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Re: Mr and Mrs Everest
« Reply #105 on: February 21, 2021, 06:57:38 am »
Yeah, I agree with that. It just felt like that came out of nowhere, even Jenna being violent enough to kill someone while in the past she even worried to pay their medical bills. But this dystopia scenario feels way too forced, and interesting characters like Amanda were just thrown under the rug. Besides, it felt like thi, a story more centered around characters' reactions to their muscle growth, being slightly more grounded ,wouldn't end up being a story as violent as it became, and personally, that was a huge turn off. It feels wrong, like if this would be a nightmare of Jason.


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Re: Mr and Mrs Everest
« Reply #106 on: February 21, 2021, 02:41:31 pm »
To clarify my last point, I mean that the last chapters feel way too disconnected from the previous story, and I feel like it's not a satisfying conclusion. However, it's your story and you get to decide what happens and what not.

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Re: Mr and Mrs Everest
« Reply #107 on: February 21, 2021, 03:09:37 pm »
Alright, cool. Thanks for the feedback everyone. They were really helpful, knowing what the flaws were and well, now i know what to work on in my future writings.

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Re: Mr and Mrs Everest
« Reply #108 on: February 22, 2021, 10:24:47 am »
wow really cool.

Are you planning to start a new storyline soon? Do you already have an idea or are you taking a break from this story for now?

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Re: Mr and Mrs Everest
« Reply #109 on: February 22, 2021, 02:42:19 pm »
No ideas yet, so probably taking a break for now. Just taking my time to enjoy the other stories in this forum

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Re: Mr and Mrs Everest
« Reply #110 on: February 22, 2021, 06:09:59 pm »
Take your time, I will be waiting for the next one!

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Re: Mr and Mrs Everest
« Reply #111 on: February 22, 2021, 07:34:08 pm »
Really enjoyed this story. Kept coming back regularly just to check for updates. The ending was a total surprise to say the least. Maybe a little out of proportion with the violence, but overall the story is solid. Really looking forward to any potential future stories from you. Karma+

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