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Muscular Women Fiction / Re: Your House
« Last post by GLKnight on Today at 03:52:44 pm »Binged the entire thing. Really impressive premise and great work! Though I understand it's a space horror, I keep waiting for the moment of retribution, where the tables turn. Very much like Berserk, if you're familiar with that manga. Where this character Griffith, gets so terribly tortured and then by a miracle, turns into a demon of great power at the penultimate hour.
I wait for this moment for the protagonist of this story. Where he somehow channels a huge amount of energy from the alternate dimension and just uses his dick like a laser gun and blows a hole straight through his mom. She is in shock, mid sentence, and just crumples down to the ground. Then as if a star wars ending fashion with a bad villain, all the other Neos lose their powers and revert back to normal naked girls, and the US military storms in, gunning them all down. The End
I'm a fan of Berserk, but that's not the direction the story is going.