Forum Saradas
Female Muscle Art - Female Muscle Fiction => Muscular Women Fiction => Topic started by: Brfan on August 26, 2019, 11:19:46 pm
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Guys, tell if you like this kind of narrative
Part 1
"Dear Diary,
I hate myself. Today was my 14th birthday. Dad threw a pool party. Don't he get that I'm not pool material? I'm so skinny, and pale... and it's not like this thick glasses could help. And gosh, he invited our neighbors. Cindy and her perfect smile, her perfect tan, her perfect body. Jon was drooling all over her. You remember Jon, my 17 year old bully brother. I hate him too. Actually I don't hate him. Or my dad. I mean, ever since mom passed he's been doing his best to make us happy. It's hard on him.
I guess I wish I had a better body. I'm like this skinny girl, but I'm all flabby. I wish everything in me was hard, you know? Maybe for my 15th birthday I could make a promise. I mean, dad has all that gym equipment downstairs... but it's not like I could just go there and start using it. I might get hurt. And Jon won't help me. He will make fun of me. Unless.... maybe I could start learning a couple things online. And I suppose I could work out when they are not home. Dad's out a lot. And Jon spend most of his day with his jock friends chasing the cheerleaders.
I wish I were a cheerleader. Yeah, like they would let me into the squad. The geeky girl.
oh, Dear Diary... thank God I have you"
"Logbook entry 79
What a laaaaaame day. I'm too old for these family barbecues and all. Annie's birthday. If she had some hot friends... but the only beauty around was our neighbor's daughter, Cindy. And she is hot. Hot like lava. Her legs are really tight and hard. Maybe I'll ask her out.
Anyways, I gotta run. Meeting Tom and the fellas.
Jon, The Captain"
Part 2
"Dear Diary,
It's been almost a month since my plan started taking place. I've studied a lot about anatomy, kinetics, and exercise physiology. I guess it helps being smart. I also watched a lot of videos, and joined a couple of bodybuilding forums. People seem to be very kind and supportive. Yesterday I finally went downstairs while Jon and dad weren't home and started. I did benchpresses using only the bar, and now my chest hurts. From what I've learned, this is a good sign. I also did some dumbbell flys, and some biceps. I felt so lame. Even the lightest of the weights were too much for me. I got up on a scale today. I'm a whopping 105 pounds distributed in a 5'2". I look like a starving cricket. Or maybe a firefly with this big glasses. Damn, I wish I looked better. I found some pictures of some young girls online, like this Bahkar girl. I wish my legs were like hers."
"Logbook entry 85
Damn that Cory Everson looked fiiiine. Just spanked the monkey watching some videos of her. Nobody knows this, but I am really aroused by this muscular women. It's too bad none of the cheerleaders are into bodybuilding. There's this girl Kimberly, she is a bit buffer than the rest of them. Maybe I can talk her into bulking up a bit. Who knows?
Captain out"
Part 3
"Dear diary!
I'm so happy today! I was finally able to add some plates to the benchpress bar! Yeah, they were 10 pounds each, but who cares? I feel like this is working. I mean, It's not like I look in the mirror and all of a Sudden I'm Wonder Woman or anything. But hey, I suppose in a couple months I might actually see something.
Oh, and guess what? I discovered this online forum where people praise about muscular women. And they are mostly men! It's like this whole secret society of men who worship and are attracted by these big, hard girls. I wish they were attracted to me someday."
"Logbook entry 102
Today I was browsing for some new pics at this forum when I stumbled across this other user. Apparently, she is this skinny girl who is starting to workout. I asked her for some pictures, but she said no. I guess she must be really skinny. But hey, I was nice to her, maybe she gets big and strong and remember how nice I was... who knows?
Captain out"
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Hah, good start! I love the contrasting diaries, and the humor.
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Definitely keep going! This is going to be good!
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Part 4
"Dear Diary,
How I hate that Cindy girl. I mean, we're already in fall, and she's still walking around with really short skirts, showing off her legs. Alright, she does have some beautiful legs. But mine are getting better too. I've just weighted and I've already added 7 pounds. I've been noticing a few lumps on my body here and there, mostly on my abs. Today, if I flex them really hard they look like one of those aerobics instructors. I've been considering uploading a picture of them on that forum, but I'm not sure..."
"Logbook entry 118
Hey, I might get that girl to finally post some pics. She's claiming she developed a six pack, so I challenged her to show it.
Oh, and Cindy... damn, that girl has legs. If only she worked them out harder....
Captain out"
Chapter 5
"Dear Diary,
Happy Thanksgiving,
it wasn't that fun to me. Since I began working out I decided to diet like an athlete, no excuses, no days off. It was hard to stay away from pumpkin pie, but I know the sacrifice is worth it. Dad is worried about this whole eat-right-sleep-right I've been through, and that's cause he has no idea I'm pumping some iron when he's not home.
Oh, about the weights: Today I was able to benchpress 95 for reps! It felt really heavy, but when I was done, I looked at myself... definitely some changes on my body. Now I get to flex my pecs and they actually do a little dance... and my shoulders, they are looking rounder and wider.
Hey, did I put the weights away when I was finished?"
"Logbook entry 132
Thanksgiving was nice. Dad did put up a nice dinner. It was a bit weird that Annie didn't eat. Which is even more weird is that she looks like she put on some weight.
Dad also seems to have been hitting the weights in the basement again. There was weight left on the benchpress today. I guess he's trying to get healthier. Good for him.
Captain out"
Part 6
"Dear Diary,
Merry Christmas to me! My best gift however came this morning... I've finally passed the 120 pounds on the scale! I flexed in front of the mirror and I could actually see muscles bulging! Yeah, they are still small, but I'm sure people in school would be impressed if they see them. My biceps now have a small peak on them, and they feel very hard. And my energy! I feel more up, more ready to do my stuff, it's amazing. I've been thinking about telling Jon, but he'll probably put me down, saying I look like a freak or something... That's why I like talking with this guy in the forum... he always puts me up, telling me how great my muscles must look... I'm just not ready to show them yet, but I'll be"
"Logbook 144
Hey, Christmas is here. It was nice. I just didn't get to convince that girl online to give me a present. If only she sent some pictures. Maybe she isn't really strong. Maybe she's fat. I'm bored with this
Captain out"
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I like it a lot. Please continue!
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the best writer in saradas. no doubt.
but I hope you are going to finish the old stories too...
K for you
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Certainly a different approach but I am following and liking.
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Each chapter is better than the last!
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Part 7
"Dear Journal
Happy new year! Oh my Gosh, I've made my new year's resolutions. I've decided I'm going to post a picture of my arms in the forum, see what people think about it. I'm so proud of what I've achieved! It's been six months of training, dieting... I also decided I'm going to stop working out only when nobody's home. I mean, if I'm going show someone how I look now, better if it's dad. Well, there's Jon too, he'll probably mock me for this, but you know what? I really don't care anymore. I feel happy with myself, my achievements and all of this. Besides, why should I be embarrassed? I really developed a nice, tight body, and it's only getting bigger and harder."
"Logbook entry 149
That chick finally decided she will upload some pics. Can't wait to see it
Captain out"
Part 8
"Dear diary,
I'm just back from dinner. How amazing it was! I had just finished this killer chest and biceps workout, I was so pumped, and then I put on my pink tight tank top to go down and meet dad and Jon! Gosh, you should have seen their faces! I guess they were really blindsided by this. Dad asked a lot about it, how did it happen and all. I told him the whole story. That I decided to start working out, but was too afraid of looking like a fool, so I decided to do it on my own, and that it's been half a year now, that I've put on almost 20 pounds of muscle since.... and, gosh, you should have seen their looks when dad asked me to make a muscle. I'm not sure if he had ever imagined his little girl had such peaked biceps! Their Jaws dropped!
Jon was a jerk as usual. He didn't say one single word congratulating me or anything. But I guess I saw that coming.
oh, and I've uploaded a picture of my biceps earlier today. Let's see what people in the forum say about it"
"Logbook 150
Fuck. Shit. Fuck. What the hell is happening? When did Annie got so buff? How is this possible? Is she on steroids? Damn, her arms are big, and they look so hard.... stop it. Don't even think about it.
Hey, at least that girl finally showed us a little... very little, really. She just posted a picture of her bicep. I can't even see her face or anything. But man, that is one good looking bicep. I wish I could squeeze it. I bet it must be rock hard.
Captain out"
Part 9
"Dear Diary,
Amazing workout today. I'm bench pressing more than I weight now. For reps! My chest got bigger, it has a thick layer of muscle underneath my breasts. I had to buy new bras. Gosh, I love watching them in the mirror. I feel so sexy and strong these days. Oh, and I'm pretty sure I saw Jon spying on me during my routine today. I'm not sure why, though. Maybe he wanted to check out how much I'm lifting. Who knows? Maybe he's afraid I'm stronger than him.. and who knows? Maybe I am!!! I mean, in a way, I do look stronger than him. I haven't noticed this until now, but really... I'm not sure if his muscles are as hard as mine. Maybe he is still stronger, cause he's bigger and taller, but... I do look more muscular than him. Gosh! can you imagine that? How would he react if I became stronger than him? Would he finally show some respect? Oh, this is so hot! Maybe I'll challenge him someday"
"Logbook entry 177
Damn. Just saw Annie bench pressing 155 pounds. She looks strong. I'm not sure if I can do that. Why did this happen to me? Why, of all girls in the world, my sister is the one that decides to become muscular and strong? I gotta admit... she looks amazing. Like every inch of her skin is covering some hard muscle. I wonder what her abs look like.
Stop it. now.
Captain out"
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FANTASTIC!!!
your writing way is absolutely FANTASTIC!!!!
I love your ideas too...
K +
but please... GO ON!!!!!!!!!!
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I like the style here, interested to see where it goes
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This is a great story. Please continue. Karma has been given!
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What's not to love in that story?
You are such a great writer!
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Part 10
"Dear Diary,
Can you believe it's already February? Gosh, this school year is flying by us. So, I know I haven't been writing a lot lately, but it's just that... school has been taking some of my time now. Ever since I stopped using those baggy clothes and all, people are inviting me over to lunch, they want to know about my routine and how much I've changed over this last year. I'm loving this. For the first time in my life, I'm actually pop! I guess I stopped being the weird nerd to become the buff nerd. lol. Even some of Jon's friends are now saying hi to me in the hallways.
And, oh, I forgot to tell you, last week I've uploaded another pic to the forum, this time from my calf. I love that it is so hard and diamond shaped. I got a good angle, so you can even see the splits between the two muscles. Maybe I should start wearing some high heels..."
"Logbook entry 190
Damn. Now Annie decided to show her body off in school. She's wearing this tight clothes that display her muscles and all. Guys are picking on me, saying my young sister looks buff, saying she is stronger than I am. Jerks. I mean, she looks buff and all, but I'm obviously stronger. I should show them. But... what if I'm not?
PS: That mysterious girl posted another pic... she is killing me with this!
Captain out"
Part 11
"Dear Diary,
My God, I'm loving this day! It's been a rather warm Saturday, so dad decided to grill some burgers outside, just for me and Jon. I decided to put on my new bikini and tan a bit in the backyard. Now that my body is thicker and harder, I guess I should get used to pool parties and all, I mean, I know people will stare. They probably never saw a girl with so much muscle as me. The weird part, though, was asking for Jon to spread tanning lotion on my back. His hands were like, shaky, as if he had a fever or something. He volunteered to rub my abs too, but I told him I had that. Maybe he wanted to feel my six pack. Lol. Yeah, right..."
"Logbook entry 205
Shit. What an awful day. First, dad decides that he wants to cook a meal for the three of us. I had some plans with the guys and had to cancel. Then Annie shows up in a tiny bikini. God Damn. She looks hotter than lava. Every time she stepped, her quads bulged. And shit, her shoulder are really wide and large. She has that V shape thing going on. But the worst part was when she asked me to spread lotion on her back. I couldn't say no, or she might get suspicious. So I did it. Man, her back is all lumpy with muscles. Her lats are wide, and her traps are jumping out of her neck even if she is not flexing them. I wanted to feel her abs too, but...
stop it. Now.
Captain... out"
Part 12
"Dear Diary,
weird day today. There's something happening here. I had just finished my arm workout downstairs and I was in the kitchen when Jon came. Out of nowhere, he asked me to flex a muscle for him! What? Where did this come from?
Anyways, I did it. I was feeling really pumped, and even my veins were showing a bit. So he asked me to feel it! Seriously? He never said a word about my muscles and now he wants me show it to him? At least he looked impressed. He said it was hard. Maybe he thought it was harder than his. I guess I'll invite him for a joint workout one of these days. Maybe he could spot me, now that I'm getting stronger I might need some help. We'll see"
"Logbook 212
Shit. I gave in. I saw Annie tying her hair in a ponytail today in the kitchen. God, her biceps were bulging like crazy. So I asked her to flex them. They are really big. Thank God she didn't ask me to do the same. Her biceps look better than mine. And oh, they are so hard. It's like trying to squeeze a baseball. My sister is the hottest chick in miles around here. Damn. I want to feel her muscles so badly...
quit it. Now!
I'll... I'll go to the web. See if the mysterious girl posted something new"
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the most exciting story ever...
I tried the same way with "Bianca and the social network" but yours it's a lot better
please, go on
K for you
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This is excellent stuff, friend: I am loving this story! I can’t wait to hear more about how Annie progresses...
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Wow this story is great! Love it. Keep up the good work. K2 U
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This is a great story! I love how clueless the sister is about her brother, and how conflicted the brother is about his sister.
Please keep going!
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Part 13
"Dear Diary,
Oh my Gosh! School today was soooo fun! Jon's friends were totally checking me out during lunch! How easy it is to read a boy's mind! You should have seen it! When I passed through their table they immediately shut up and tried to disguise, but they simply couldn't be more obvious! lol
Hey, maybe that David guy invites me to prom... he is really cute. How would Jon react if I go out with one of his friends?
Oh, I'm learning and practicing some bodybuilding poses now. I want to take some new pictures and upload them to the forum. I just have to make sure I blur my face and all."
"Logbook 223
Guys were being jerks today at school. Annie passed through our regular lunch table and all they could talk about were how hard and large her thighs were, how tight and round her butt looked. Idiots.
I mean, It's not like they're wrong, though. Her lower body does look astonishing. Very plump and hard. And that's cause they've never seen her biceps. Annie is really hot.
Shit. Here we go again
Captain out"
Part 14
"Dear Diary,
most weird and amazing thing happened today. I got home later, so I decided to workout in the evening. Dad was out watching some game with his buddies, and I though Jon was in his room, so I went downstairs and did my thing (by the way, awesome workout today. I have been curling 40s with each arm!).
Anyways, I had just finished and I was really pumped, when I came back from the basement Jon's friends, Mike and David, were in the kitchen. I was completely surprised by them, but I'm sure they were surprised by me too. And by how I was looking. I was in my regular workout outfit, and, as you know, it doesn't hide much from my upper body. It was so funny, how they reacted. I could tell by their faces they had no idea I looked like this. I mean, they've probably never seen a girl with this much muscle showing off in their lives. At first they were trying to look away, but Mike finally commented that I looked buff, so I said thank you. Than he said I looked really strong, and that probably I'd beat David in armwrestling. That was soooo weird! And David was like 'oh, If I say no she will think I'm a coward' but I could tell in his eyes he was afraid I might actually beat him.
What was I supposed to do? I mean, I could have laughed and called it a joke and leave, but part of me wanted to find out how strong I really was... so I placed my elbow down in the counter, inviting him. And I did it! I beat him! Gosh, as I was pushing his arm down I could tell them both were really impressed! I played a good sport and told him he was a worthy opponent, and he congratulated me and all - he is so cute and gentle! - but I could tell he was feeling bad. So I decided to challenge Mike, maybe if I beat him too David wouldn't feel so bad. But Mike gave a lame excuse and said no! I smiled at him, cause I know he chickened out!"
"Logbook 227
Guys were here to watch the game. And I saw the most sexy thing of my life. Thank God no one saw me. I was just coming back from the bathroom when I saw Annie and David armwrestling. And she beat him. God, she must be really strong. And she looks so jacked. It's like having a pro wrestler living here. Her back is really really wide. And her shoulders are so round and defined.
I know that David is stronger than me. I wonder what Annie could do to me if she ever finds out.
captain out"
Part 15
"Dear diary,
David texted me last night, complimenting me on my results and the armwrestling match. I thanked him for being so kind and not freaking out about the whole thing. He said there was nothing to be embarrassed about, as he had just lost to a really muscular and trained girl. God, he is so cute! So I thanked him again and sent a picture of me flexing my bicep. He said it looked really hard and that he might want some tips on how to build one of those! I think I'm in love with him!
Then he said I'd probably crush Jon's arm if I ever arm wrestled him. I laughed. But why did he say that? So this morning during breakfast I decided to try something... As we were sitting eating our breakfast I brought up the conversation about last night and that I had arm wrestled and beaten David. Jon's face turned pale as a ghost. So I told him it felt really nice being able to do that, and that maybe him and me could have a match, that would be amazing. I thought he was going to pass out. I rolled up my sleeve and placed my elbow down, looking at him. He kind of tried to rip his arms off and hide them. It was really fun. For the first time I realized I might be stronger than my big brother! It's so weird! I don't know what got into me, but I was feeling so hot and strong, I flexed my biceps and asked him if he was afraid of my muscle, and asked him to flex for me too. He gulped and babbled, but in the end he did flex his arms. My biceps are stronger and harder than his! Can you believe this? I had no idea!
I didn't say a thing, but as we walked to school, for the first time I saw myself as this big, imposing, protective one, and he as the small, defenseless. It felt so... good"
"Logbook 228
It finally happened. Annie figured out she is stronger. During breakfast today she challenged me to arm wrestle. I wanted to run away from there. Then she flexed her bicep - it looks so mighty and strong - and asked for me to do it too. As I did, we both knew her arms were thicker and more defined. Then, as we walked to school, I kept looking at her. She has this posture, this way of walking, so imposing and powerful... it's so hot. She looks like she owns the place. And her torso... it's really large and powerful. Side by side, it felt like she could carry me to school if she wanted. And I bet she could. I had to fight myself to not have a hard on because of her. And her look. She looked at me like she was saying 'you're my bitch from now on' And shit, I want to be her bitch
Captain out"
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oh my... I say it again: it is the most exciting story I ever read... thank you...
but go on because we want to know more...
K for you
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Great story and like the story idea.
Would like to read when Jon gets to to basement and tries her weights.
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love this format. Need more!
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Part 16
"Dear Diary,
Nothing really fun happened today. Well, except the workout, that is. Gosh, I've been able to lift serious amounts of weight. My clothes are looking real tight on my back these days. Maybe I'll have to buy some new ones. Maybe I'll get some of those tanktops that leave your back exposed, so they don't burst. lol. Gosh, can you imagine that? If I were able to rip my shirt off? I mean, if I try on one of my button shirts from last year and flex real hard, maybe I could pop some of those buttons off. Hey, maybe I'll try that. Maybe I'll do it in front of Jon, just so that he freaks out.
Oh... David texted me today again. He is so cute. Wonder if Jon knows his friend is digging me"
"Logbook entry 230
Tried something stupid today. Annie wasn't home, so I went downstairs and tried the weights. The benchpress was loaded with a 45 and a 25 pound on each side of the bar. I tried that and the second I lowered the weight I thought I was gonna shit my pants. Damn, It took me everything and more just to get that bar back to the rack. Is Annie benchpressing all that? God, how strong is she?
Well, then I went for the dumbbells... I heard she saying last week that she was curling 40, so I grabbed it and tried myself. Yeah right. Only with two hands. God, my sister is so strong and powerful... what could she do to me? Yesterday she was flexing in front of her mirror with her door half opened, I had to peak. She looks like a bodybuilder or something. I wish she flexed for me...
No I didn't. I can't.
Captain out"
Part 17
"Dear Diary,
Today I decided to get back to that forum thing. It's been a while since I logged in. The cute guy who always talks me up was online, so we are chatting as I write this. He is really nice. He talks about my muscles with so much admiration and desire. It's funny. It's like I really turn him on. So I sent him a couple pictures. But I asked him to send me too. He said he would take it and send to me, that's why I'm here. I'm waiting for it"
"Logbook entry 235
Thank God there is the internet. That sexy thing from the forum is back, and we are chatting as I type these words. God, she is so big and sexy. I wish I could see her in person. Hey, now she's asking for a picture of me. I'll send her a picture of my arms. They look like twigs next to hers. Maybe she'll enjoy it. It looks like she enjoys when I say how strong and big she is. I'll ask her for another picture of her arms now.
Captain out"
Part 18
"continuation...
hey, here comes his picture. Geez, his arm is really thin. Not much muscle on it. I can see why he admires mine so much. He must be really wea... wait. I know that birth mark. God. That is... Jon! I can't believe it! It can't be!
So, Jon is into... muscles? He's into... me? Ew! That's... wrong. Although...
I mean, maybe that's why he's been this defensive and avoiding me this much. It's like I've became his dream... oh... this could be fun, you know?"
"Logbook entry 236
God. It... God.
So, I was here, right? I sent my flex picture to that girl in the forum. Well, I'm waiting for her to answer for like, 5 minutes, I'm already desperate, thinking she didn't like what she saw, that she doesn't like skinny men. Then my door knocks and... it's Annie. She's wearing this really tight button shirt, really old. It didn't fit her anymore. She has gotten too big for it. Well, she didn't exactly waited for me to inviter her in. She simply pushes me to the side and close the door behind her. I get to see her back. It's so wide and lumpy, and the shirt is so tight on her she can't really move her arms. So she kind of stretches them and I swear to God, I could hear the fabric ripping apart.
Annie then turns to me, grabs the shirt by it's middle and pull them apart, making the buttons pop. She looks like the Hulk.
Without saying a word, she takes the shirt off. She's wearing only a small sports bra that shows off her torso completely. Her pecs look big. Her shoulders are so wide I can feel my dick hardening immediately just by seeing her.
She then raises both her arms and flex her biceps hard for me, asking 'so, do you wanted another flex, MrCaptainMuscles?'
That's my nickname in the forum. I'm speechless. That's when it hits me... the girl online is.... 'GrowingGrl' is all I'm able to say.
I started crying. She comes closer and picks me up like I'm a baby. 'It's alright' she says. 'I'm here to protect you, puny boy'
She puts me down and flexes her bicep on my face again. So I feel it.
Puny boy.. out"
"Dear Diary,
Oh. My. God. That was amazing.
So, I entered Jon's room, right? And there he is, not having a clue of what was happening. I'm wearing this really old shirt, that doesn't fit me anymore. I know that he notices that, cause my muscles are bursting from that shirt. So I flex and pull the shirt apart. It shred into a rag. It felt so powerful, I could tell he was shaking. Gosh! It was amazing!
So, I'm standing there, in shorts and a sports bra, my muscles are all showing. I can see in his eyes that he wants me to flex them for him. So I do it. And I call him by his nickname. Gosh, you should have seen it. He didn't know what to say. Like he had a stroke or something. I know his secret. So he starts to cry! How lame is that! I actually felt sorry for him, so I didn't know exactly what to do next. So I decided to show him how strong I am. I picked him up and carried him around the room. He felt real light. Maybe I should have done something meaner, like lifting him above my head and throwing him on the bed. Lol. That would have been fun. But I put him down and flexed my biceps again. He immediately started caressing them, like they were some treasure. It felt nice. But the best part was when I said 'enough' and he promptly removed his hands, waiting for another order. That's it. It's like I could tell him what to do, and he would obey.
Oh, this is going to be so much fun!"
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I am really really into it!!!
what a fantastic story
go on please!!!
K+
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Fantastic story and style, I'm really loving it!
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This is a great story, I'm very eager for the sister to go through a massive growth spurt and truly outgrow her older brother. She really needs to teach him who's boss in the next few installments :)
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This is so much my favorite setup where the little sister is stronger than her brother! K++
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I hope to see more, but I know: when you start a new story, the olds are ended... :'(