This is a great story, please continue.
If you have your own ideas, please follow them. Otherwise, I have some suggestions you might want to consider:
- Maybe you can put her sports, have her join a neighbourhood team, then get promoted to a city, state or national team?
- Maybe her beauty and charisma can grow? She becomes so beautiful it is almost (but not quite) like mind control.
- Maybe her intellect grows. She surpasses one brother, then the other, then teachers, then college professors?
- If you have the time, you could have a number of episodes where her various skills slowly grow episode by episode, until she eventually ends up being a super villainess or super heroine.
Or, if you feel you've taken this story as far as you can, start another one.
You're very good at writing, Batshrir. Keep doing it. Keep writing. If not here, then someplace else.
