unbelievable story, great structure, very "aware" for the readers..........you made Vida and Gunnar's story visual, great craft and talent. Would have loved to hear about the three years and recovery to build back her body, but love where you jumper to.........
Maybe another story, another time you can visualize that growth of your character with the same levels of detail and vividness.
KARMA to you for keeping us engaged. Until next time!!
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