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Female Muscle Art - Female Muscle Fiction => Muscular Women Fiction => Topic started by: The First One on April 18, 2020, 04:01:36 am
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I kind of want to start writing again, but I’m not really sure what. Any ideas?
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Two or more ladies competing obsessively to grow larger over a period of time is always a hit with me
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I'm always fond of FMG stories.
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A mother becoming a bodybuilder with support from her family especially her son
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1. Young wife with some medical condition that causes her masculisation like muscle growth, body hair growth, clit growth, voice deepening, but in slow pace and without characters change. The couple do not like these changes, but they have to used to it and in the end they found they like it.
2. Husband gives his young wife steroids in secret that causes her masculisation like above. She do not like it, but husband keeps feeding her with steroids and tries to convince her that these changes are awsome.
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A guy is hired in a female gym to do the maintenance and he realizes that even the weaker girl is stronger than him.
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A guys best friend starts dating his dream woman and he gets to see her up close many times and hear stories. A guy and his friends all have a martial arts fetish and get together to share videos etc...It all changes when a lady opens a dojo in town and fulfills their fantasies. A single bodybuilder mom moves to town and a guy meets her and gets to experience her incredible strength as they get to know each other and date.
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One more, a married muscle mom moves in next door to a guy and his family. He struggles with his attraction to her.
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The current best female bodybuilder in the world wants to show that she can also compete against men and begins a life of hard training, posing and wrestling against male.
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Experimental muscle growth tonic accidentally gets out of lab and into the general public. Older women(late 40’s, 50’s and early 60’s get some by accident at local drug store, thinking it would help like vitamins but causes instantaneous muscle growth and wild sexual urges to the nearest man.
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1. Cute, petite girl is locked in a room with only a bed, a small but seperate bathroom with mirror and a small set of weights. Food is dropped periodically through a small elevator shaft. No windows, she can only peek thru the doorknob. Tries bangging at the wooden door a few times but no one answers. She ignores the weights at first but eventually becomes so bored that she decides to try out the weights. Does random exercises then one day sees some results at the bathroom mirror. Decides to lift more until one day she tries to bang at the door again and finds out that she can damage it slightly now. Eventually breaks the door down only to reveal a bigger set of weights now complete with suppletments and workout books. Door is now made of metal. You get the idea.
2. Girl discovers her crush has a muscle fetish. Works out for a long time until she gets a body that even guys would be envious of (solid flat pecs type). People occasionally mistake her for a hot guy when she wears tight shirts and a cap. Crush now has a girlfriend, girl decides to steal his girl by dressing up as a guy. Gets news that the couple will be going to a pool party. She even goes as far as walking topless at a party just to seduce the girlfriend.
3. Girl is a die hard cosplay fan. She can dress up as pretty boy characters but also wants to achieve characters like goku from dragon ball. Works out like crazy and eventually gets the body for the said character. Looks at the mirror and is turned on by her own body since she looks like a macho guy when in costume. Proceeds to try out different characters and does a photoshoot with her photographer friend. Posts pics on social media and becomes a star.
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Marooned on a lush jungle world with high gravity, a colony ship is at the mercy of its mission A.I. as it realises that men need to remain strong, but light enough to hunt in the trees while the women need to be strong enough to protect the colonists from wild massive predators that roam the jungle floor. Some colonists lean in, some try to back out.
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Anything resembling work by poddy90/dickarus or thesabre
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Hi there! How about LitRPG in fantasy setting, where girl gets a class that gives her perks and skills to make her muscles bigger, harder and stronger. And she fights using them and her bare fists :)
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Women who are confident and assertive of their strength are always a hit with me.
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Young woman living in cyberpunk dystopia is captured by corporate goons and used as guinea pig for new experimental nanotech weapon/serum. FMG ensues.
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How about concentrating on writing one set piece, one scene, to try and bring out a visceral reaction in the reader. It is not something that I've seen you try to do yet. Your stories still generate a fair amount of interest because you come up with an interesting concept and do a few paragraphs of an AP article/Reuters style setup, but then there isn't much of a follow through.
You can choose anything. A workout, bedroom, a fight. Don't worry about it being already done and done well. I doubt any member of this community ever feels fully sated in their particular kink.
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For me I am a big fan of a drawn out growth from hard work. No magic or science just gruelling hard work. I am not a fan of them getting ridiculously huge or super strength levels but reasonably big and strong. I also like the gentler softer relationships between characters more loving that aggressive. Still show off etc but loving to her partner. Any violence etc to others not her partner. Just what I like, maybe not to everyone's taste.
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1. Slow FMG is always a hit, so long as it's not a solo-character story. It's much more interesting when another character, preferably a male, is witnessing her growth. And the growth is relatively "realistic" if you know what I mean
2. Lite muscle domination never hurts (well maybe a little... or a lot)
3. The best stories have an emotional side to it, not just a description of the muscle, or the growth. How is this affecting the characters involved?
There's a lot of good ideas in this thread. But I would have to say my number 1 choice, if I'm allowed to choose one, would be from asqwert
2. Girl discovers her crush has a muscle fetish. Works out for a long time until she gets a body that even guys would be envious of (solid flat pecs type). People occasionally mistake her for a hot guy when she wears tight shirts and a cap. Crush now has a girlfriend, girl decides to steal his girl by dressing up as a guy. Gets news that the couple will be going to a pool party. She even goes as far as walking topless at a party just to seduce the girlfriend.
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Like many have mentioned before, I prefer to see a realistic growth over a long period of time that is achieved from hard work and steroids only. I love seeing women that are overweight or frail change their lifestyle for the better. I also love seeing stories of former bodybuilders that gave up the sport when they get children but get a spark to return when they see their kids interested in bodybuilding. Now some may disagree with me, but I love it when their personalities change as they grow such as more confidence, cockiness, a bit arrogant, and a stronger libido. Side effects such as deeper voice, bigger clit, larger jaw and acne are a plus as they add to the realism but are not necessary.
As for plot ideas, here are a few I have in mind:
1) Woman wants to get back into bodybuilding after she finds old pics of herself in step or biological son/daughter's bedroom (possible incest)
2) Age regression / progression (not very realistic, but still a concept that I love)
3) Doctorate student takes steroids and workouts to study the side effects of steroids as a thesis, but gets addicted to it.
4) Overweight mother and daughter get in shape together and eventually compete against each other for Ms Olympia.
5) Two friends who are into cosplay want to grown to look like the superheroes they idealize.
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3. Girl is a die hard cosplay fan. She can dress up as pretty boy characters but also wants to achieve characters like goku from dragon ball. Works out like crazy and eventually gets the body for the said character. Looks at the mirror and is turned on by her own body since she looks like a macho guy when in costume. Proceeds to try out different characters and does a photoshoot with her photographer friend. Posts pics on social media and becomes a star.
Kind of a play on this. A female cosplayer is struggling to find an idea and ends up at a strange costume store and ends up with a costume for a muscular male character on accident. She ends up trying it on anyways only to grow a massive muscular body to match the character. At first is concerned but grows to love it.
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Have always wanted a story where the girl and guy start off as weak teenagers. Best friends but seen as losers. They start training together at age 14 and get to average strength at age 17 by 18 he is 120% of average male but she is 130% of average female. Both still virgins. Experimental muscle growth drug no effect on males or females individually. When subjects have sex with another who is taking drug then effective. Drug company does not know that. Kids given left over drugs as health tonic. Over next 6 months lose virginity and both gain muscle. Him to 175% of average male. Her to 200% of average female. Over time the two gain 15cm in height and 20kg of muscle. A story of muscle growth, hard training, respect and love.
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By age 25 he is 2m and 150kg, benching 300kg, squat 500kg and 8 second 200m. She would be 1.85cm, 100kg, bench 250kg, squat 400kg and 8.5 seconds for 100m run plus 2.5m high jump, 10m long jump. Both bodies when relaxed athletic not bodybuilding competitors.
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Something that doesn't involve the ones getting big and muscular to turn into total psychos, that are hell bent on raping, humiliating, or being total asses. Also nothing with incest.
How about something with gentle domination, or playful role reversal. Where the characters actually care for each other and support each other instead of turning into monsters and villains.
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Have always wanted a story where the girl and guy start off as weak teenagers. Best friends but seen as losers. They start training together at age 14 and get to average strength at age 17 by 18 he is 120% of average male but she is 130% of average female. Both still virgins. Experimental muscle growth drug no effect on males or females individually. When subjects have sex with another who is taking drug then effective. Drug company does not know that. Kids given left over drugs as health tonic. Over next 6 months lose virginity and both gain muscle. Him to 175% of average male. Her to 200% of average female. Over time the two gain 15cm in height and 20kg of muscle. A story of muscle growth, hard training, respect and love.
Oooooo I really like this idea!! Maybe bump up the age a bit to college age? I don't think they have to be virgins either
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I have several ideas I'm hoping to write eventually, but haven't found the motivation yet... I definitely like themes of gentle, caring muscular women who are average height but insanely muscular. Not overtly masculine either. Not a fan of gts, rape, incest, or futa
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For me I am a big fan of a drawn out growth from hard work. No magic or science just gruelling hard work. I am not a fan of them getting ridiculously huge or super strength levels but reasonably big and strong. I also like the gentler softer relationships between characters more loving that aggressive. Still show off etc but loving to her partner. Any violence etc to others not her partner. Just what I like, maybe not to everyone's taste.
Am with you. “Assisted Reality” without feminisation and subservience.
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Have always wanted a story where the girl and guy start off as weak teenagers. Best friends but seen as losers. They start training together at age 14 and get to average strength at age 17 by 18 he is 120% of average male but she is 130% of average female. Both still virgins. Experimental muscle growth drug no effect on males or females individually. When subjects have sex with another who is taking drug then effective. Drug company does not know that. Kids given left over drugs as health tonic. Over next 6 months lose virginity and both gain muscle. Him to 175% of average male. Her to 200% of average female. Over time the two gain 15cm in height and 20kg of muscle. A story of muscle growth, hard training, respect and love.
Oooooo I really like this idea!! Maybe bump up the age a bit to college age? I don't think they have to be virgins either
In my mind the relationship was a slow burn of friendship with very slow muscle growth in early stages I.e. reality such as it is.
Had always planned it in my mind that they are both virgins till 18. The trigger for their change would be The school swimming carnival where both show their ripped physiques to all for the first time.
This would cause the girl’s BFF, who was not a virgin, asking if the lead female if could take the boy on a date. So, say Yes and lose the opportunity to date him and hope her best friend does not claim. Or say No and change the nature of their relationship permanently.
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I'd love to see something with an older couple that are concerned with ageing and decide to get 'in shape'. As they get more fit, they decide to take it as far as they can and see how big they can get and explore various fetishes with a renewed sense of youth and vitality.
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Powerfully muscled white women pegging larger black men against there will.
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Something like Wonderofworld's "Changing Times", but more realistic. Not that his story should change, but I'd like to see another take on it. So money diverted to women and girls become more athletic, but much educational and promotional opportunities diverted to women and girls.
FMG is always nice, and it is central to our genre. But in the real world academics, leadership, intellectualism trump athletics. It is already 2/3 (i.e. 2 to 1) on many campuses and universities.
And slower. Maybe with 6 month jumps instead of 3 months.
OR EVEN BETTER, something nobody has thought of yet. But waiting for that idea can take forever.
In general, I'm with those who like the slow stories, the alternate realities that could realistically happen, or almost happen. Of course slow stories are long stories and they take a lot of effort and time.
One thing I liked about Wonderofworld's story is the he started at age 14. Yes, that means leaving sex totally out of it (until the characters are 18+), but starting at 14 means starting when a person is still vulnerable and developing.
It is really tough making a FMG coming of age story starting at age 18.
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I like superstrong ladies myself... and ones who like to show off their strength.
So perhaps a contest? Either one between friends (or not so friends, LOL) or an official one? Perhaps like a beauty contest but for superstrong Amazons?
Yep... That's do me!
Thanks for asking.
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In My opinion can be a story of a virus turning the women in the world in summise Amazons of 2m to 3m and hot bodies
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a nice FMG with girl on girl action and muscle worship
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In My opinion can be a story of a virus turning the women in the world in summise Amazons of 2m to 3m and hot bodies
Do you have a name? I would be interested in reading them
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Like many have mentioned before, I prefer to see a realistic growth over a long period of time that is achieved from hard work and steroids only. I love seeing women that are overweight or frail change their lifestyle for the better. I also love seeing stories of former bodybuilders that gave up the sport when they get children but get a spark to return when they see their kids interested in bodybuilding. Now some may disagree with me, but I love it when their personalities change as they grow such as more confidence, cockiness, a bit arrogant, and a stronger libido. Side effects such as deeper voice, bigger clit, larger jaw and acne are a plus as they add to the realism but are not necessary.
As for plot ideas, here are a few I have in mind:
1) Woman wants to get back into bodybuilding after she finds old pics of herself in step or biological son/daughter's bedroom (possible incest)
2) Age regression / progression (not very realistic, but still a concept that I love)
3) Doctorate student takes steroids and workouts to study the side effects of steroids as a thesis, but gets addicted to it.
4) Overweight mother and daughter get in shape together and eventually compete against each other for Ms Olympia.
5) Two friends who are into cosplay want to grown to look like the superheroes they idealize.
Hey Big Easy, I just finished a Christmas story that is nearly exactly this. Maybe I should look on here more often for idea ;) https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1060332
If you guys have ideas let me know - although it will have to be following the Submissive Domme I'm working on now (unless its a super short story).
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I think ''pure'' FMG stories are a safe bet because not everyone is a fan of humiliation/incest/virilisation/violence
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My suggestion would be for female bodybuilders with high levels of flexibility. That's all.
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lift and carry real feats of strength
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There's a story on the Valkyrie website called Rachel's Muscle Diary. It's about a young muscle girl who uses her muscles to tease a doctor until he cums in his pants. No violence or force applied, he just loses control of himself.
I've always liked that sort of story, but the author never posted again.
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There's a story on the Valkyrie website called Rachel's Muscle Diary. It's about a young muscle girl who uses her muscles to tease a doctor until he cums in his pants. No violence or force applied, he just loses control of himself.
Sounds interesting. Do you have a link?
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There's a story on the Valkyrie website called Rachel's Muscle Diary. It's about a young muscle girl who uses her muscles to tease a doctor until he cums in his pants. No violence or force applied, he just loses control of himself.
Sounds interesting. Do you have a link?
Rachel's Muscle Diary
By Bill Dwight
Rachel starts a diary to detail her new muscle related fetish
April 4th, 2005
I have decided to start a diary detailing the events of my favorite fetish:
making men cum, either voluntarily or involuntarily, by showing off my
gorgeously muscular body. Not every guy likes muscular women, but I have
discovered that the ones who do get so turned on that they can't control
themselves in my presence and the results are quite often very messy.
Sometimes, they are forced to start jerking off no matter who is there or how
badly they try not to. Sometimes they are successful in keeping their hands
off their dicks, but that doesn't stop the cum from escaping. There is no
better feeling than making a man cum in his pants.
My goal is to record some of the better occurrences as they happen, but I feel
some catch up is required.
I first discovered this type of guy when I was 16 getting a physical from my
doctor. My older brother is a bodybuilder with an extensive gym in our
basement. Since I had no older sisters to emulate, I decided to start weight
lifting to be more like my brother. I took to lifting very well, and by the
time I was 16, I had 14.5" biceps, 22" quads, 14.5" calves, and a 44" chest
(that last one was helped by the fact that I inherited my mom's gigantic
breasts). Those are pretty good measurements for a 5'5" 16 year old girl.
I was sitting in the examination room when Dr. Andrews walked in. "So Rachel,
what seems to be the problem?"
"Well doctor, I was lifting in the basement with no spotter. I know I'm not
supposed to do that, but no one was home. Anyway, I was lifting to failure,
lost control of the weight, and seemed to hurt my shoulder."
The doctor looked at me like I was a little kid. "Rachel, I think it's
admirable that you are trying to get into shape, but you really should have
someone there to show you how to do that."
"But doctor, I've been lifting for four years. I'm pretty sure I know what I'm
doing. I'm already the strongest kid in high school. I beat our star football
player in arm-wrestling."
The doctor started looking uncomfortable when I said this. "Oh yeah?" he
stammered. "He probably let you win because he has a crush on you. You are a
very attractive girl and," he looked down at my breasts, "starting to mature a
little."
"I don't think so. The only crush going on was his hand against the table. It
only took me about two seconds to pin him. And he's really muscular. His arms
are technically bigger than mine, but mine are almost completely muscle."
Dr. Andrews started looking around the room nervously. I thought maybe I was
holding him up so I decided to stop blabbing. He didn't want to hear about my
muscles.
"Ok," Dr. Andrews said a little shakily, "Why don't you take off your sweater
so that I can see your muscles...SHOULDER!" he yelled, "I mean shoulder." He
put his head down and stared at the floor.
Since up to this point, I had never had anyone react this way to my muscles, I
had no idea what was wrong with him. Guys with a muscle chic fetish are a real
small minority, and I hadn't noticed any by that point in my life. Since that
day, I did find out that even though they may be difficult to find, they react
extremely strongly to their fetish.
As I peeled off my sweatshirt I saw Dr. Andrews' eyes bulge our so far he
almost looked cartoony. It was awkward looking into those buggy eyes, so I
diverted my glaze downward. It was then that I saw the first bonor my muscles
had ever given a guy. At least the first one I noticed. Still, at 16 I was
confused and was still trying to assess the situation. I wasn't sure if it was
my muscles, my breasts (which were really developed even at 16. Thanks Mom.),
or maybe he was just weird.
In any case, the thought that I was turning on a grown man so much was turning
me on. I decided that I was going to play with him to see where I could take
this. Why not, I was sure I was stronger than him and could stomp him if he
tried anything.
"You see doctor, my shoulder is keeping me from lifting too heavy." I put my
arm up and flexed my delts so that he could see the individual heads. "I've
been gaining so much size on my arms and I don't want my shoulders to fall
behind."
Dr. Andrews was breathing very erratically at this point and I could swear I
saw his bulge bounce up and down a few times. "Uh yeah, I noticed that you
have spectacular muscle development." When he spoke, he sounded like he just
ran the Boston marathon.
"Um, could you excuse me for a second? I...uh....need to get....your file."
I knew he was lying because the file was on his desk where the nurse always
puts it. I was pretty sure he wanted to go whack off to relieve some of his
tension, but I wasn't letting him get away that easy.
"But doctor, I'm really in a rush. I'm going to the beach today, and I want to
hit the gym first so that I can look extra pumped in my bikini. There's so
many muscular guys at the beach and I like to show them that women can look
just as muscular."
Now I am positive that his bulge is bouncing up and down. Also, it seemed to
be leaking quite a bit. I had never seen a man that aroused before and I was
quite fascinated. He was breathing so heavy now that it looked like he was
hyperventilating. I started moving my arms like I was doing shoulder presses.
"It hurts when I do this," then I pretended to do lateral raises, "Not as much
now,"
"Oh god," he moaned and I saw his pants get a lot wetter. I had wondered if he
had an orgasm. At the time I wasn't aware of just how much pre-cum could
escape a penis during periods of intense arousal.
"It's even starting to affect my bicep workouts. My favorite bicep..." I
trailed off. I noticed that every time I said "bicep," his penis would do an
extra large twitch and the wet spot on his pants would get bigger. Was he even
aware that this was happening? Maybe he was in such a state of muscle lust
that he didn't notice or care that he was soaking the front of his pants with
pre-cum while looking at a 16 year old girl in her bra.
"Y-Y-You're favorite b-b-b-bicep what?" Dr. Andrews pleaded. Wow he was really
out there. Now I knew nothing existed in this man's life but my muscles and
his mind- blowing arousal.
"Oh yeah, my favorite bicep (another twitch, more wet spot) exercise is when I
take the cable cross-over machine," I put my arms out parallel to the ground,
"and pull inward toward my head."
I simulated the movement slowly and flexed my biceps as hard as I could,
stopping at what was basically a front double bicep pose. I held this pose
despite the pain because I had to see how far I could take this.
My biceps swelled up pretty good. I've always loved my biceps. The bottom of
the muscle is attached fairly high on my arm so that the bigger they get, the
higher the peak goes. I mean, all that muscle meat has to go somewhere, right?
No where to go but up.
I quickly found out that this was way too much for Dr. Andrews to handle. "Oh
fuck, shit, fuck, oooooh shiiiiiiit," he groaned and a huge amount of cum
spurted through his dress pants right where the top of his dick was. Even
though it had to go through two layers of material, it still managed to spurt
almost 6 inches away.
Christ, if he was naked, he could've put someone's eye out. And I wondered why
I thought his pre-cum was an orgasm. That was a steady stream of clear liquid
that just made the front of his khaki pants dark brown. His actual ejaculation
was pearly white and very thick despite being filtered through both pieces of
material.
I was so amazed that I made this man cum without either of us touching his
dick that I had no idea how long his orgasm lasted, however a safe estimate
was about 90 seconds. That's 90 seconds of him grunting, "Fuck, oh shit, ooh
bicep..."
When all was said and done I think there was half a cup of cum on the floor
and running down his pant leg. Jeez, the inside of his pants must look like a
bag of Jergen's lotion. When he finally finished, he seemed to come back to
reality a little. He looked at my face then at the pool of cum on the floor,
muttered something about not feeling so well, and ran out of the examination
room.
Wow! I had never felt so powerful in my life. By just flexing my muscles, I
had cause a grown man, a doctor in fact, to completely lose control over his
body and cum all over himself.
I quickly cleaned up his cum before the nurse came in and wondered what
happened. Dr. Andrews was a nice man and I didn't want to see him get into
trouble. Plus, I may want to make another appointment with him soon. I started
bodybuilding to feel powerful and the power I felt now was unlike any I had
ever experienced before. Yes, Dr. Andrews was getting another visit. But
first, I wanted to see it there were any other guys like Dr. Andrews out
there.
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1. Cute, petite girl is locked in a room with only a bed, a small but seperate bathroom with mirror and a small set of weights. Food is dropped periodically through a small elevator shaft. No windows, she can only peek thru the doorknob. Tries bangging at the wooden door a few times but no one answers. She ignores the weights at first but eventually becomes so bored that she decides to try out the weights. Does random exercises then one day sees some results at the bathroom mirror. Decides to lift more until one day she tries to bang at the door again and finds out that she can damage it slightly now. Eventually breaks the door down only to reveal a bigger set of weights now complete with suppletments and workout books. Door is now made of metal. You get the idea.
2. Girl discovers her crush has a muscle fetish. Works out for a long time until she gets a body that even guys would be envious of (solid flat pecs type). People occasionally mistake her for a hot guy when she wears tight shirts and a cap. Crush now has a girlfriend, girl decides to steal his girl by dressing up as a guy. Gets news that the couple will be going to a pool party. She even goes as far as walking topless at a party just to seduce the girlfriend.
3. Girl is a die hard cosplay fan. She can dress up as pretty boy characters but also wants to achieve characters like goku from dragon ball. Works out like crazy and eventually gets the body for the said character. Looks at the mirror and is turned on by her own body since she looks like a macho guy when in costume. Proceeds to try out different characters and does a photoshoot with her photographer friend. Posts pics on social media and becomes a star.
If you want a comic version of #1 look up ultra muscle girls by depriveddavedefense
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1. Cute, petite girl is locked in a room with only a bed, a small but seperate bathroom with mirror and a small set of weights. Food is dropped periodically through a small elevator shaft. No windows, she can only peek thru the doorknob. Tries bangging at the wooden door a few times but no one answers. She ignores the weights at first but eventually becomes so bored that she decides to try out the weights. Does random exercises then one day sees some results at the bathroom mirror. Decides to lift more until one day she tries to bang at the door again and finds out that she can damage it slightly now. Eventually breaks the door down only to reveal a bigger set of weights now complete with suppletments and workout books. Door is now made of metal. You get the idea.
2. Girl discovers her crush has a muscle fetish. Works out for a long time until she gets a body that even guys would be envious of (solid flat pecs type). People occasionally mistake her for a hot guy when she wears tight shirts and a cap. Crush now has a girlfriend, girl decides to steal his girl by dressing up as a guy. Gets news that the couple will be going to a pool party. She even goes as far as walking topless at a party just to seduce the girlfriend.
3. Girl is a die hard cosplay fan. She can dress up as pretty boy characters but also wants to achieve characters like goku from dragon ball. Works out like crazy and eventually gets the body for the said character. Looks at the mirror and is turned on by her own body since she looks like a macho guy when in costume. Proceeds to try out different characters and does a photoshoot with her photographer friend. Posts pics on social media and becomes a star.
If you want a comic version of #1 look up ultra muscle girls by depriveddavedefense
Bonus if you're also a DanganRonpa fan.
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really into celeb females getting muscles and strength
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I like FMG stories about celebs as well.
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I think I much prefer gentler stories, maybe with a childhood friend, a crush or something.
I don't necessarily dislike stories with sisters in itself, but they're way too often mean and bully-ish domination, and while I suppose some sibling relationships are like that, they're also way less frequent than in those stories. Fights can happen quite frequently, but they're way tamer, siblings usually don't fight in a manner where one could get their ribcage shattered if the other had superhuman strength.
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I also prefer gentle stories.
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Love FMG, elements of steriod use, underground gyms, revenge, rival motivation. I really enjoy chronicling over a period of years as well.
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I too prefer long plot, slower growth, avoiding total fantasy, and without sadism.
Also, unique or seldom explored plot. Difficult I know. :(
College Crush by JDM is a prime example on Saradas. There are lots of gender swap and futa stories on the web and on kin dle un limited. But College Crush was the first one I've come across that combined those two with FMG -- it got its uniqueness for me by combining the three. There could easily be more that combine the three without the field getting overcrowded.
I don't expect others to write as well as JDM, but a plot and universe that does not close off future possibilities and allows the story to continue on and on. JDM has been working on that for 18 months, new chapters every couple of months. And the plot and characters just gets better and better the longer they are built.
18 months of very interesting plot and physical development and nobody has exceeded 6 feet or 250 pounds while still continually moving things along. That requires a lot of dedication, self-control and imagination by an author. Don't do anything to closes off future plot possibilities.
The story is the journey, and when the journey is over, we will all wish it was longer.
18 months is too much to ask really. Lengths like that are something to work towards long term over years of building your writing skills. But something in that direction tends to be great.
And if anyone complains that your story is not like the stories they prefer, just tell them they should go read those other stories instead. No story appeals to everyone.
https://saradas.org/index.php?topic=576105.0
Anyway, that is my opinion.
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@musclemom1234
Are you an actual muscle mum?
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I'll just mention plots of stories posted on this site I did and didn't like.
* Loved Nurse Betty and Billy (I think that's the character's name). She rehabbed him in her hospital, and then some, because I think he had broken arms or something and they became lovers. She was 30-ish, he was maybe 20? There was an age gap. There was a Nurse Betty sequel but I never saw it updated about her taking experimental drugs to get even bigger.
* This might be on this site. From England, a story of the tree surgeon / landscaper who came back home for years to take over his father's business since he couldn't do the work anymore. The guy is in his 30s now and he goes to a country home with this buff, built and gorgeous 60+ powerhouse woman... who was his gym teacher (! think) who was and turns out to still be a hard ass. And she has a strong and demanding libido. Very hot.
* Third story was set in India. A college school chum takes his friend to his family's home in the country for a week or so holiday. The chum has always been attracted to strong, muscular women. Did he go to the right place because his friend's Mom is a hulk dress in traditional sari. The friend begins to compliment the Mom; her son is short and weak; her daughter, not seen much in the story, is a bit like her Mom and her Aunts (also not mentioned in the story) and the Dad seems to be absent a lot... lazy and out of the house. There's a scene between the school chum and the Mom one night where she carries him to the barn, the chum encourages her to remove her sari, and the descriptions of her taking off the layers of her garments, the muscle and sweat adjectives as she flexes and how she makes the young man cum is highly erotic.
* Only heard about the whole futunari or futa world in the last couple of years, with women who lift so much weights and steroids their nipples, clits, muscles, height etc. are gigantic and they are horny and cumming all the time. Been a few stories on that. Very hot.
What I don't like? Stuff about muscular Moms seducing their sons, sisters seducing their brothers, aunts seducing their nephews with their hot muscles. Nah... not for me.
Anyway, just my two cents.
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I like the most a story with a very muscular wife, domestic muscle from jayder is my favourite from here. Muscular roommate like small town pharmacist from blindboy. And your family of amazons is great you could do something similar. And a world where women are the dominant role like laporte caves is a great topic