READERS:
Two versions of this story were posted. I am currently in the
process of trying to assemble the parts in the proper order.
Please be patient.
~Mod E15R91F
FIRST AND PROBABLY LAST STORY...
Mandy
by wilson316
Format of PART 1 re-done here: http://saradas.org/index.php?topic=188663.msg1640412#msg1640412
PART 1
MANDY WAS A SWEET YOUNG GIRL OF 16 WHEN I FIRST MET HER.
SHE HAD MOVED TO TOWN WITH HER MOTHER AFTER HER DAD HAD PAST OF CANCER ONLY MONTHS BEFORE. SHE WAS A SHY UNDERDEVELOPED GIRL, HIDING
IN COMICS AND SCIFI NOVELS. tHAT WAS WHAT MADE ME INTRODUCE MYSELF TO HER IN THE FIRST PLACES. I WAS A COMICBOOK NERD ALWAYS SKETCHING SUPERHEROES IN CLASS, AND ONE DAY I GOT UP THE NERVE TO SAY HEY.
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AS WE LAY THERE ON HER BED. I COULD STOP LOOKING AT THE BEAUTIFUL FACE OF HERS.
THATS ONE THING I COULD NEVER CHANGE MANDY IS YOUR FACE, ISAID, ITS PERFECT JUST THE WAY IT IS.
MANDY LEANS OVER ME AND KISSES ME, SAME TIME NEXT FRIDAY.
TO BE CONTINUED>>>
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Yeah, an entertaining read for sure. Just wish it wasn't all in caps... K for that and would like to see more!
Dude, I love these people-as-a-growth-canvas stories. I'd love to see more stories from you.
It has reached 1000 hits. Thank you for your awesome comments.
I will write one more.
Would like me to keep going with Mandy or branch out???
Let me know.