Revised Female Juggernaut story

[legfan71]

The Female Juggernaut: 2019 Version
by legfan71
Finding the magic ruby gives Lucy power beyond belief

I originally wrote this back in October of 1997 and I recently re-read it and considered it cringe-worthy enough to make me want update and improve it. Hopefully anyone that reads it will find it to be a vast improvement over the original version. With all the reboots going on today I figured why the hell not. In my younger days I was more interested in the transformation, and while that still is a big part of the appeal for me, the build-up, the shift in power, and yes, the sexual interaction after the transformation are now equal or more interesting to me. Anyway, enough rambling, here is the first part of The Female Juggernaut 2019. I will add to it as time allows in my crazy busy life, but wanted to get this out there and get some feedback on it…
1.   
Lucy Wagner peered out of the window of the police station, squinting as she tried to see past the heavy rain, happy to be safely inside as the heavy winds would make standing outside and staying upright virtually impossible for her.  She was doing her best to focus on the task at hand and trying not to think about the surreal events of the past few days, which truthfully was exceedingly difficult. They certainly were the most bizarre set of circumstances in the history of the small town that she had lived in for her entire life. 
The superhero team known as the X-Men arrived to try and stop the rampage of the villain known as the Juggernaut, who had happened upon their formerly quaint town for no apparent reason.  Only after he had destroyed virtually half the town and inflicted numerous casualties, the X-Men had finally managed to stop his murderous rampage. Remarkably, they were able to completely take away his destructive powers that accompanied his impossibly over-sized physique. One of the X-Men, a woman named Rogue that had the unique ability to take powers from others with merely a touch, absorbed his powers, rendering him powerless.
Lucy had watched the footage of this repeatedly, as numerous people had recorded this event with their cell-phones. It was shown on all the news channels, even the national ones, and Lucy watched it with rapt fascination each time, from each angle they showed. As Rogue absorbed the Juggernaut’s powers, Lucy, along with everyone else, was mesmerized to see the massive muscles of the Juggernaut dwindle away while Rogue’s already athletic form inflated to unreal proportions as she took his powers, albeit temporarily, for herself. Lucy’s mind couldn’t help but wonder what it must have felt like for Rogue to gain the unlimited power that she took from the Juggernaut. 
After a short period of time, the powers wore off Rogue, seemingly disappearing into thin air.  Where would power like that go? The news reports explained that they returned to their source, something they were referring to as the Ruby of Cytorrak. It was rumored that the ruby had been thrown out of the earth’s atmosphere by the Juggernaut some time ago. The conventional wisdom was that the ruby was floating out somewhere in space, imbued with the ability to transform a normal person into an unstoppable force. The thought of this made Lucy’s head spin. 
 With a normal Marco Cain now in police custody, another member of the X-Men named Storm; Lucy couldn’t help but snicker at the simplistic names of these heroes, had stayed behind to stand guard in case the ruby reappeared. The X-Men were concerned that it would return to where the ruby’s last host was located, that it might have some sort of symbiotic relationship with Cain. However, 24 hours had gone by and with no sign of the ruby, it was time to remove Cain from the town. He was being sent to a special federal holding pen to be held accountable for his crimes. Lucy hoped she would never see the likes of the Juggernaut again, as the destructive swath he left behind was something that many of the town’s residents would never fully recover from.
    As she continued to look out the window, she finally saw the specially modified van pull into the police station’s rear entrance. A whole squad of heavily armed special forces unit, over a dozen of them, paraded into the police station, carrying weapons that Lucy did not recognize. Even though Cain had his powers removed and had been turned into a normal human, they would not be taking any chances with him. Especially if the ruby returned, and Cain came into contact with it.
As they led him out to the van, Lucy was taken back at the difference compared to his previous size. When she saw him a couple days prior, while he was infused with the powers of the ruby, he was 10 feet tall with muscles that would even put the Hulk to shame. Now he was just a normal, powerless man. However, even without his powers he was still a lot bigger than she was, as she was just 5’3” tall and frailly built, while he was over 6 feet tall and stocky. She was relieved and felt comfort by the extreme measures that were being taken. If something got out of hand, physical restraint was certainly not one of her strong suits. She wondered what he felt like now, when he was so used to being so big, bigger than anyone else, and impossibly powerful, to being reduced to a mere mortal.
        They loaded him into the van, and the squadron leader signaled up to Storm as she would be flying overhead to escort them for the drive to the federal pen. As they pulled away Lucy sighed a breath of relief, the whole ordeal was finally coming to an end. Life would begin to return to normal as the town would pick up the pieces from the Juggernauts' wake of destruction. Unfortunately, there were the harsh realities of funerals to plan, and buildings to rebuild. The people in her town were resilient, and they would forge ahead, as communities often do in the face of a tragedy.
2.   
   The nondescript minivan waited 2 minutes after the last police escort in the caravan left before the driver started up the engine as it discreetly tried to shadow its route.
   “Make sure you stay back just enough Harvey. We don’t want to attract any unwanted attention, do we?”
   Harvey, a short, overweight, hen-pecked middle-aged man looked up at his tall, reedy wife of 27 years. Even though she barely weighed 100 pounds, and there was only a 3” difference in their height, her demanding and straightforward personality made it feel like she was 2 feet taller than him.
   “No Helen, or course we don’t. Just relax, I know what I’m doing.”
   Helen looked down at him with a piercing stare, “Don’t tell me to relax Henry. You know how long I…”, she paused a moment before she spoke again, not wanting him to feel like he wasn’t part of this plan, even though in her mind he wasn’t, “I mean how long we have been planning this.”
   Henry cleared his throat, he didn’t want to say anything to her to upset her, 27 years of marriage to her had taught him that.
   “Yes, I know dear. I won’t screw this up, I promise.”
   Helen raised her head up and stared out at the road ahead of them, the last of the police cars far ahead of them, but still in view. Her sharp angular features
   “Just imagine Henry, soon we won’t have to pretend that I have super-strength, and muscles beyond compare when we have sex. When you are worshipping my legs, imagining that they could crush you at any moment if you don’t completely satisfy me. My calves so large that both of your pudgy hands couldn’t even begin to wrap themselves around them.”
   She looked down at her rail-thin legs, made to look even thinner by her 5’10” height, disgusted by the sight of them. The impossible nature of their unusual shared sexual fetish currently only brought to life by their imagination and roleplay would soon be made real. It made her pussy moisten with anticipation at the idea of her gaining unimaginable power with muscles that would be unmatched by anyone walking the planet.
   Hearing the words being said out loud made Henry’s dick spring to life, as tiny beads of sweat formed on his forehead. It was something that both had fantasized about for a long time, and it was now within their grasp. 
3.   

7:00 P.M.  rolled around, finally it was time to go home. Lucy got her belongings together and headed out the door.
    "Hey Lucy, make sure you head right over to the gym," Pete cried out to her. He always liked to give her a hard time.
    "Only if you'll meet me there," she joked back to him.
Ever since she joined the force, she had put on a little extra weight. At 5'3", she weighed about 145 pounds. Not too bad, but it was a soft 145. Since she sat at a desk all day, she had recently begun exercising to help off-set this, but she didn’t have the energy to go tonight as she felt drained from the craziness of the last few day’s events. Unfortunately, it was not as easy to take off the weight as it was to put on, but tomorrow was another day she told herself.
        As she made the drive home she thought about her plans for the upcoming weekend. Her sister and herself were going to do Christmas shopping in Manhattan. It was always great to have a sister’s weekend, but Christmas wouldn't be the same this year without her boyfriend Jimmy in her life. Six months back he had gained strange water powers from an accident at the local water treatment facility and dubbed himself "Hydro-Man" and left her for the life and glamour of being a superhero. Consequently, Lucy had fallen in a funk and hadn’t been able to pull herself out of it since, hence the weight-gain.
        As she neared her driveway, she saw a strange red glow at the base of her house. At first, she thought that her house was on fire. But upon closer review she saw that the glow was not spreading. As she got out of her car, she ran towards the source to see what was causing the intense glow. She froze in place, not sure if her eyes were correctly seeing what was in front of her. She froze in place as her heart began to race, feeling like it was about to burst out of her chest. Could it be? Was it THE ruby! A million thoughts ran through her head; it might be dangerous, maybe even radioactive, or maybe, just maybe, all her wishes were about to become fulfilled.
        It glowed so brightly, and as she got closer and closer to it her entire body was aglow in its rays. She knelt to get a closer look and at first was careful not to touch it. The ruby was beautiful in shape and design, and it drew her nearer and nearer. Finally, she decided to pick it up. What was the worst that could happen, she thought?
        As she lifted it up a red glow washed over her body that began at her hand and instantly spread throughout her entire body. She felt her clothing tighten as an intense and powerful energy surged through her, with every inch of her physique washed over with a tingling feeling as the magnificent power of the ruby transformed her! Her small pudgy body was being re-shaped by it, and she gasped as she looked down and saw the size of her arms. Her once small, weak arms were being filled up with inches and inches, and pounds and pounds of growing muscle. Her sleeves were stretched out completely, trying to contain, but helplessly failing to do so, her now massive arms. She brought her arms up and flexed her biceps, ripping apart the remainder of her over-stretched sleeves. The rest of her police uniform stretched tight around her growing breasts and with one deep breath her uniform burst apart instantaneously exposing her beautiful, mountainous breasts to the fresh air. Her chest muscles surged forward as well, further pushing out her now immense twin globes of tit-flesh. They extended so far out in front of her she couldn’t see her feet as she glanced down.
        The front of her boots ripped apart as her toes tore through them like they didn’t even exist, the leather creaking and groaning in protest, but ultimately losing its battle as both of her entire feet burst free. Her thighs, once soft and flabby, had stretched her slacks out to ridiculous proportions as her monstrously-muscled thighs kept on growing and growing. Tears formed around the seams and got larger and larger as the fabric helplessly lost the battle against the indestructible muscles of her legs. She playfully squeezed her thighs, the sensation of doing so bringing about an orgasmic pleasure, and the remainder of her pants shredded completely. She was surprised at how aroused she had grown, almost in lock-step with her growing physique and power.  She looked down at her exposed legs and could not believe the size of the muscles in them. The outer portion of her thigh flared out so wide, she surmised that it was now wider than a grown man. She ran her hands down her thighs, as large as her hands had grown, they still looked small compared to her now massive quads. In addition to their unreal size, they had grown rock-hard as well. As she felt them, she realized “rock-hard” was probably not descriptive enough to describe the denseness that she felt in them. They probably could crush rocks between them with little to no effort. Little did she know that even boulders would present no challenge. Her calves were simply immense as well, as they each looked bigger than her waist! She stood up on her tippy-toes to see how big they flexed and was thrilled at how both portions of her calves exploded out in all directions. Imagine how big they would look wearing high heels, she thought, although she couldn’t imagine any shoes on earth big enough to fit her now enormous feet.
She was being turned into a female Juggernaut, which was arousing her to no end! An incredible feeling of strength and power filled every fiber of her being as it felt as if her strength was limitless. She grew anxious to test her new power.  First though, she let her body continue its growth as she continued to grow larger and larger. She had grown in height as well as she noticed that she was actually able to look down at the roof of her house. She must have grown to be close to 10 feet tall, she thought, and wondered where she would ever be able to find clothes that would fit her. Not that it mattered, because with her new body she would proudly walk around naked if need be!
        Suddenly, she felt some type of armor form around her immense body. As she looked down she saw a brown costume of some type, and immediately thought about redesigning it, if not getting rid of it completely. A helmet of some type appeared around her head, and her brown curly hair flowed out from underneath it. She stood there and flexed every muscle on her incredible new body. It felt as if she could lift her entire house. It was time to test her new muscles.....

[Lupus753]

Looks great so far. I can only hope it can maintain that quality and be better than the already-good original.

[IBP]

Great story, but feedback you say? Well, with as much setup as you have done so well and intricately, I would want the same thing for her growth sequence. Something at least along the lines as the Madge vs. Rhino scene. Longer and more erotic with descriptions of intermediate stages as she outgrows her house, descriptions of muscles flexing out of clothes, becoming enthralled with her own body, swelling and swelling etc.
Great start though!

[legfan71]

Thanks for the comments, I always appreciate your thoughtful input! I will look to “beef up” her transformation when I go back and add to the story.

[jumpy999]

Haven't read the original but this is a pretty good setup so far. Looking forward to what Lucy will do with her new powers and body and can't wait to see how Helen gets in on the action as well. Between this and Millicent you're a writer to watch on this site!

[legfan71]

 Thank you very much. The original version of this is over twenty years old and it’s filled with grammatical errors, a poor set-up, and was rushed. I write when time allows, and unfortunately over the years my free time has been almost non-existent. A friend had posted the original story somewhere recently and when I read it again after all these years I felt like I had to go back and improve it. I was going to wait to finish it before I posted it but I honestly don’t know when the hell that will be so I thought releasing what I’ve finished would be better than having it sitting idle on my hard drive. It also might motivate me to keep moving the story forward when time allows as well. Hopefully I will have another section done in a month or so.

[phil123]

Please keep on writing.

[ArkhamAsylum]

Are you planning to eventually revisit your other old stories as well? I read some of them some time ago and they were really great.

[legfan71]

Thanks, but as much as I would love to go back and revisit all my older stories and do some rewrites, I want to concentrate on finishing the Millicent story and the Female Juggernaut rewrite before I can even think about anything else. I think some of the older ones I wrote even before the Female Juggernaut story so they certainly can use an update though!

[ArkhamAsylum]

That's ok. I was just wondering.Your reasoning is completely understandable. It is better if you focus on your current stories. I'm already very grateful for the two fantastic stories you are writing.

[legfan71]

Thanks, look for more of the revised story to be posted in about a month or so.

[ArkhamAsylum]

I just reread the first part of your "Female Juggernaut" and "Millicent Continued" stories and I was wondering when we can expect the next chapters of these fantastic stories. I think that you mentioned in your last post that you were planning to finish the next part of 3femalde Juggernaut" in november.I don't want to rush you, so please take your time if you think that it's beneficial for the quality of the story. I am looking forward to what you are planning for the future. Also, happy holiday season.

[legfan71]

 Thanks for the compliments, I wish I had better news but I have not had a chance to write any more of the Millicent story. I have done a little bit more on the revised Juggernaut story, but not enough to make it worthwhile to post. Life has gotten in the way. Also, after giving it some thought, my original intention for the rewrite was to simply clean it up and add better descriptions for Lucy’s growth, her reaction to this, and expand the feats of strength, and have a full fledged sexual encounter for her with her new physical prowess. However, I really think the Juggernaut should be bad, and it didn’t really fit Lucy’s persona to have her become bad. That’s the reason for the introduction of the new character. She is not going to be all out evil, but she is extremely self-centered and self-absorbed with a big chip on her shoulder, gaining incredible power and the muscles to match, is fun for me to write. I love Marknew’s “Oh No” series of stories, and the general theme of many of his stories where this type of character gets empowered. She is not going to kill anyone, but she is going to let you know she is the biggest and baddest bitch around by actions and attitude. So that’s where I plan on going with the story, and I am going to try like hell to start up again in early January.

[ArkhamAsylum]

Thanks for the update. Life comes first, so take your time.