Author: [Elmanouche] Stories~collected

[GreatJustice]

I've enjoyed this so far, but I don't think you got as far into it as your previous stories (which I loved by the way). I think that part of that may simply be the setting - unfortunately with scifi the description of the setting gets far more dense than in contemporary writing... It can slow down the flow of ideas and affect how you relate to your characters.

Still, now that you've set everything up, I think it would be a shame not to hear more of Alice and our hero!

[Elmanouche]

Thanks, glad you like!

And at first it was just a one shot thing idea I had for the FemaleMuscle group theme on DA, last it was "Post-apo muscles".
But I'm so slow at writing that... Couldn't make it.

So as much as indeed I have a set up, with a short plot. There isn't much more than that in my head (well not true I have many ideas, but I prefer going step by step.)

Expect to see it posted on my DA page with minor edits according to what your guys commented on here.
Thanks again for your kind comment.

[Elmanouche]

And here's the story in PDF as published on DA.  Have a good reading.  On mediafire

[NinjaStar]

That's kind of an unsatisfying ending to be honest. I do hope you will continue.

[Elmanouche]

Yeah, I know. Like I said, it was just a one shot idea for a monthly theme on DA.
And not really ended, just leaving MUCH to the reader's imagination.

But I'd like to focus on that story I started a while back and really need some continuation Flame, a space odyssee
Then I'll consider do a follow up on that one.

Thanks for showing interest though and your previous feedback.