Wow. Seeing all of these great and thoughtful responses is both mind-blowing and humbling. When I posted the first chapter to the forum, I didn't know what to expect. But now, I am ecstatic to see that some of you are as invested in the story as I am. I have exciting plans for this series going forward, and your guys' feedback goes a long way towards making this journey as enjoyable as possible.Glad to hear it! It's important for good authors to get good feedback, and your story is great so far! Keep up the great work!
Yeah, I am waiting to see how Michelle gets to Heather's level, but I'm also guessing that Heather isn't going to stand still and just stay the same size and strength the whole time, I wouldn't be surprised by the time that the first time Michelle thinks she's ready to challenge Heather, she will be proven wrong, because Heather is so much bigger and stronger at that time. k+!
A hundred times yes! One of my absolute favorites here.
Awesome! I've been hoping you'd continue this story eventually. Really looking forward for future updates.
My man, you're like Game of Thrones with these updates! I have no idea where this story's going to end up, but I'm really happy that you tied the compression suit back in, as in opens the door for Michelle's mom to return to the forefront. How is Michelle ever going to best Heather? Or is this one where the black hat comes away victorious??