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Muscular Women Fiction / Re: Wife Training
« Last post by GLKnight on Today at 02:22:18 am »As for her relationship with Mark, I'd love to see them getting back together (I recognize I mentioned earlier that she should leave him). It is just that it is hard to picture it somehow happening, as he is never nice to her during any part of the story we have available. On the other hand, this last chapter ends with her clearly stating her love for him ("wanting to be seen again"), so maybe there is a path after all. Would be nice if there was a way to make that believable, I would enjoy it more than her leaving...
I will point out, from a narrative perspective, that the idea that they remain cordial but separate or divorce is an option. Sometimes, couples just drift apart over time. And while it may be nice for them to try and make it work, sometimes the husband or wife (specifically Sarah, in this case) goes through too much and grows into a completely different person who doesn't necessarily need or want the other in their life anymore.
Just some food for though.