The Dominant Sub: An Xmas Thank You

[taoschild]

Uggh, for some reason I cannot reset the poll feature, but I'd love you opinions on this question as well.
 How would you like to see her level of domination go in this story as she gets stronger than him and why?

Reluctant Domme
Enjoys it but does it good natured
Enjoys it too much gets aggressive and mean
Physically destroys him, feminization

[QBikk]

Hey Taoschild, I like your stories very much. One of the reason is that you always tend to go for the scenario with somebody being dominating, who 'Enjoys it but does it good natured'. So I'd get in this direction too, it is very rare among FMG themed stories.

Thanks

[ks10306]

Adding on to reasons mentioned in the last comments, would love to see a sort of role reversal kind of situation where she goes from reluctant done all the way to the other extreme of physically dominating him and feminization. This doesn't necessarily need to be cruel as well. I think torture muscle was quite different cause the protagonist was forced into that situation but think the character development opportunities between two loving partners would be far more interesting.

Would love to see the amazing character arc as in all your stories but maybe with more emphasis on the domination given the theme of the story. As well as her overall progress within the world (workplace, confidence etc).

As always, thanks for the amazing work. Love your writing.

[ArkhamAsylum]

I agree with Qibikk's opinion. I would prefer the female protagonist to be dominating but good-natured as well.

[Hal42]

Definitely the third or fourth options.  Personally I love the role-reversal idea going all the way from sub to extreme dom.  Physical violence doesn't do much for me, so it's really more about the attitude, but all the way to feminization is way hotter than her staying good-natured and loving.

[wissen]

I have already answeredbthis question here, but let me repeat myself after update. My favorite is option 2. Dominant but gentle and caring. I am never tired of such stories and we already have very much violence here

[WapWap]

Great story! 

I would like to see a blend of options 2 and 3:  Keep the domination good natured and loving, but let there be some hints of aggression without being overly mean.  I like seeing the potential for darkness, even if it never fully manifests.  It can make a sub even more grateful for "good natured" domination, knowing where it could go if things went badly.  Alternatively, the sub could develop a curiosity for what  hides in the darkness.

In any event, great start and I hope there will be more to come.

K+

[taoschild]

Great story! 

I would like to see a blend of options 2 and 3:  Keep the domination good natured and loving, but let there be some hints of aggression without being overly mean.  I like seeing the potential for darkness, even if it never fully manifests.  It can make a sub even more grateful for "good natured" domination, knowing where it could go if things went badly.  Alternatively, the sub could develop a curiosity for what  hides in the darkness.

In any event, great start and I hope there will be more to come.

Thank you Wap, Wap et al - It's great to get feedback from everyone, especially the many of you I consider fantastic authors. I think I'm going to do a gentle glide into option 3, touching on option 4 and then reverting to #2. It will be a challenge and I'll drop some sections in here as I write the novel.

Thank you.

[wissen]

Great story! 

I would like to see a blend of options 2 and 3:  Keep the domination good natured and loving, but let there be some hints of aggression without being overly mean.  I like seeing the potential for darkness, even if it never fully manifests.  It can make a sub even more grateful for "good natured" domination, knowing where it could go if things went badly.  Alternatively, the sub could develop a curiosity for what  hides in the darkness.

In any event, great start and I hope there will be more to come.

Thank you Wap, Wap et al - It's great to get feedback from everyone, especially the many of you I consider fantastic authors. I think I'm going to do a gentle glide into option 3, touching on option 4 and then reverting to #2. It will be a challenge and I'll drop some sections in here as I write the novel.

Thank you.

Wow, it looks like amazing idea! And yeah it would really challenging. But I think that you are one of the best and most advanced writers in this theme, so I am sure that you will do awesome job!

[ArkhamAsylum]

Your idea sounds great, Taoschild. This promises to be another great story.

[jumpy999]

Personally, I'd love a little of all 4 options myself. But I'm just greedy that way 

[Hal42]

Great story! 

I would like to see a blend of options 2 and 3:  Keep the domination good natured and loving, but let there be some hints of aggression without being overly mean.  I like seeing the potential for darkness, even if it never fully manifests.  It can make a sub even more grateful for "good natured" domination, knowing where it could go if things went badly.  Alternatively, the sub could develop a curiosity for what  hides in the darkness.

In any event, great start and I hope there will be more to come.

Thank you Wap, Wap et al - It's great to get feedback from everyone, especially the many of you I consider fantastic authors. I think I'm going to do a gentle glide into option 3, touching on option 4 and then reverting to #2. It will be a challenge and I'll drop some sections in here as I write the novel.

Thank you.

That sounds like a good compromise.

[ks10306]

Any update on this?

[taoschild]

Hey KS,

Thanks for your interest. I'm 10 chapters into the book and I'm going to offer some 1/2 off coupons to people who took some time to give me suggestions. Also, I plan to drop an edited first couple of chapters here as well.

In the end, I settled on her reluctantly becoming the domme after getting stronger (that takes many chapters) and after some rationalizing growing to enjoy it. She will  always love him, but her expectations for his submission grow as she continues to get bigger and stronger which will involve conflict as well.

Let me know if you have any thoughts or suggestions.

-Richard

[ArkhamAsylum]

That sounds like a great storyline. I'm looking forward to it.