Amazing so far! Really enjoying how you're writing it, taking the time for every chapter!

 

Your writing is very good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm currently working on the fourth chapter. If you have any tips for me, please tell me! I already know how to keep the plot going, but maybe I could change something based on your feedback!
 

I do like the writing style. The way he tries to deal with situation and the realization about his sisters absolute dominance in strength is a spice sprinkled on everything else. She dominates his thoughts and overpowers his will, even when she's not doing anything or perhaps not even present. When she's around, casually doing things, his mind is getting shattered.

Man we are waiting for new chapter  this is increadible

Great job up to now. I certainly hope you will give us Chapter 4 soon.

When will you go on sır?

Your writing is very good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm currently working on the fourth chapter. If you have any tips for me, please tell me! I already know how to keep the plot going, but maybe I could change something based on your feedback!
 

I don't think you need any tips! You're doing very well. Keep doing what you're doing! I enjoy this story and can't wait for the next part! 

I hope she breaks him in half.

Great. Carry on.

Awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter!