#1st STORY: [madsoam2] Lisa's Path

[madsoam2]

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Lisa twisted within Daniel’s worshiping hands on her quads to face him and then bent over to take them into hers.  She gently pulled him upward until he was standing.  He was still strongly aroused and she enjoyed the feeling of his erection brushing against her as he stood.  She wrapped her arms around him and tilted her head up to kiss him deeply.
“I know.  I love it.  I love what this does to you.  I love the shock of the realization that you are experiencing now.”  She took his hand and led him away from the bed to the open part of the bedroom.  “I’m not done, though.  Let’s play some more.”  She smiled at him and kneeled down on the floor, “Come down here with me.”

“OK,” Daniel followed suit, “What are we doing?”

Lisa smiled at him, “Some push-ups.  Assume the position.”

They both laid on the floor, bare chests against the carpet and palms down.  They were facing each other.  Lisa tilted her chin up, “Let’s start with twenty, OK?”

Daniel agreed with a sigh, “OK.”

They started.  Lisa maintained solid form, as did Daniel.  She easily finished her twenty push-ups, barely tiring.  She knew she could complete more than fifty push-ups with relatively light effort, so this was hardly a tax on her at all.  Daniel also managed to complete the twenty, but he had fallen about four reps behind Lisa such that she could watch him finish.  She held herself in the finished position, arms extended, feeling the tight contraction of her chest, deltoids, and triceps as she held it and watched Daniel.  Despite obvious effort to mask it, she could read that the last two taxed him as they were done at about three quarters of the speed of the other reps, and she noticed the quiver in his arms as the muscles fatigued while completing the last rep.

Lisa put her knee down.  “That was a good warm-up.  I’d like you to come over here and lie on my back.”

Daniel looked surprised, “Are you serious?  You’re going to do push-ups with me on your back?  There’s no way!”

Lisa smiled at him, “Oh, there’s a way.  Let me show you.  Come here.”

Daniel continued to look at Lisa with obvious doubt in his eyes, but she could see that he was respecting the conviction that she had in her ability.  He was clearly excited at the possibility, and the recent demonstration of the considerable strength gap that her training had created between them was fresh in his mind.  Lisa admired her husband’s erection, which was once again fully formed, as he made his way around her.
 
“Umm, how do you want me to…”

“Just lie on my back.  Kind of like we’re spooning.”

She picked up her knee and placed her feet together once again, legs straight, body tensed, arms extended as she waited for him to take his place.  She felt his hands on her upper back, then felt his weight press through them as he began to take his place.  She easily managed the extra weight and enjoyed the tension that her conditioned arms, shoulders, and chest managed to sustain to meet the increased demand.  Daniel lowered his chest onto her back, and Lisa felt two simultaneous sensual benefits of this position that she had not anticipated when she played this in her mind in the days before.  First she noticed her husband’s hardness pressed into her buttocks, where it settled into the cleavage of her muscular glutes (which were clenched tight to maintain the rigid form needed to perform the push-up motion, particularly with the added weight of a full grown man added to her own).  Second, she felt Daniel’s warm breath on the back of her neck as he came in close to her.  His hands were now placed on her shoulders so he could balance, but he no longer needed them to support his own weight as his torso was supported against her back.  Her head swam momentarily from the rush of sexual stimulation that this brought to her, but she quickly regained herself.

“Are you ready?”

Daniel’s breath was again hot on her neck, “Are you?  Are you sure you can do this?  I don’t want you to get hurt.”

“Oh honey, this will not hurt me, don’t worry.  Hold on.”

Daniel’s hands pressed into her deltoids, likely primarily for balance, but Lisa could feel how his fingers were also exploring the rippled musculature as she prepared to lower herself for the first repetition.  Daniel weighed about one hundred and eighty five pounds these days, which she figured meant an addition of approximately one hundred pounds of resistance that she had to press in this exercise given how their weight was distributed.  This was certainly going to tax her, but she knew she had the strength to execute a few reps.  She slowly lowered them both to the ground, allowing her nipples to touch the carpet.  She did not delay long at the bottom for fear of misjudging the weight or her capability so she immediately exhaled and pressed through her palms to push back up.  To her delight the movement was surprisingly easy and the two of them rather quickly returned to the starting position.  Daniel responded with a voiceless gasp that non-verbally conveyed his surprise to Lisa, and she enjoyed the tickle as his breath again passed against the back of her neck.  She also felt a surge of pressure from his penis gently thrust at her backside, which she took as a clear expression of enjoyment.

She paused only momentarily at the top and again began to lower the two of them.  Daniel was still intensely exploring her shoulders on the way down, but as soon as she hit the bottom of the motion, his hands slid around to her pectorals and grasped them symmetrically, cupping the muscles and pressing against the fully flexed hardness of them as she resisted the weight of their lowered bodies.  Again, she pressed and they rose, and she enjoyed the feeling of her husband’s hands that were savoring the power in her chest as she did so.

“I’m at a loss for words.  I cannot believe how spectacular you are.  There’s just nothing I can say…”

Lisa didn’t respond, but held the position at the top, where her chest was contracted and the muscles bulged.  Daniel enthusiastically massaged her chest in as many ways as he could invent in these moments.  He raked his fingers from the central cleft between her pecs to the outer edges where they met her deltoids, he traced the defined edges with his thumbs and fingers, and he pressed his palms against the mounded muscle in a futile attempt to compress the sinuous tissue in any possible way.  Lisa enjoyed the attention, all while registering the hardness against her back and the barely perceptible thrusts against her unyielding glutes that were accompanying his actions.
 
She completed four more reps clearly beginning to feel the effects of the effort.  She perceived the glow of sweat both from the exertion and from the warmth of Daniel’s body against hers.  The last rep was most definitely a struggle and it occurred more slowly than the others, but her muscles responded dutifully and never threatened to stop the movement that was demanded from them.  Daniel had settled his hands on her chest throughout the remaining reps, exhibiting continuous statements of wonder at the demonstration of his wife’s sheer strength, all while relishing the exquisite details of the female anatomy that facilitated it.

Daniel eased off of her back and looked at her as she transitioned to kneeling in front of him, “I have no words.”

Lisa smiled, and could not resist the temptation to flex her pecs, now pumped and hot from the intense exercise.  She saw how Daniel stared at her chest and the amazement in his eyes, while she admired his erection.

“I can’t wait anymore.  I want you so badly right now.”  She stood up and Daniel did the same. 

[madsoam2]

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She placed her hands on his shoulders and guided him backward toward the bed and forced him into a seated position.  He stared at her chest and shoulders the entire time.  She moved in to kiss him which he returned enthusiastically, moving his hands to her arms and squeezing lovingly.  She moved her hand downward and gently grasped his penis, relishing his hardness that she finally felt directly for the first time tonight.  He moaned gently through the kiss and she proceeded to stroke very slowly.  Daniel’s hand moved to her arm as she did to allow him to feel the action of the muscles of her biceps and triceps as she moved her arm gently up and down. 

She broke the kiss and slowly made her way down to kneel at the edge of the bed before him without stopping the motion with her hand.  She moved in toward his lap and took his hardness into her mouth, enjoying the telegraphed sensation of his pleasure as she did so.  His hands moved to her massive shoulders as she began to work her head up and down, allowing her lips and tongue to wetly massage him.  She could read his response by the slow pulsations of his erection in her mouth, as well as the soft moaning sounds through her ears.  She brought her hand up to supplement the stimulation that she was able to invoke with her mouth and his hand quickly moved to find the biceps of her arm while she did so.  As she moved her head up and down, she placed her thumb and forefinger in a ring around his shaft just in front of her mouth and followed the motion of her head.  One of his hands played gently in her hair and the other remained clasped on her right biceps to enjoy the contractions of the arm muscles as they moved in harmony with her head.  Although she had done this act countless times before, the new experience intermingling the fetishistic sensuality of the muscle worship with the intimacy of oral sex was simply mind-blowing to her.  Despite the fact that this was most definitely an act focused on Daniel’s pleasure, she found her head swimming from arousal.

She slowly stopped and peered up at Daniel.  Not surprisingly his eyes were closed as he savored the sensations, but he opened them in response to the cessation of her actions and looked at her.  Without a word, she placed her arms below his legs in a basket-like lift and hoisted his body to move him toward the center of the bed.  He helped by pivoting on his arms as she did so, but her copious strength meant that she was easily able to heave the bulk of his weight up and over in a single smooth motion.  She quickly slid over him to straddle his hips, carefully positioning herself such that he could not yet enter her (as she sought to prolong the encounter), then she leaned over him and kissed him deeply.  Daniel’s hands moved to her obliques while they kissed and his thumbs slid over the bumps of her abdominals before he worked up to her lats.  He cupped the large muscles symmetrically and explored them thoroughly, caressing over her back to her spine before returning to the flare of the lats.  He then moved to her arms and enjoyed the tension in her delts and triceps as she supported her upper body over him while they kissed.  He ran his fingertips down to her forearms and delicately traced the veins that swelled prominently from the effect of both gravity and muscular action.  She heard him moan as he did so and she felt the rush of euphoria pass through her from their mutual satisfaction in this moment.  Here she was providing Daniel’s deepest sexual desires with her own body, while she basked in the sumptuous feeling of complete worship that she was receiving from him.  There was no fantasy involved here, no roleplay, no pretending…they both were in the moment with each other with no façade or artifice to meet their individual needs.  She never knew that two people could achieve such pure sexual harmony as they were experiencing in this moment.

Lisa, fully controlling the proceedings, now pulled back from the kiss and watched Daniel’s eyes open from the break.  She looked at him admiringly as he did the same.  He continued to fondle the vascularity of her forearms while he dreamily gazed back into her eyes.  Without a word, she began to slide her knees upward to position herself such that she now straddled him just above his chest.  Daniel understood immediately what was being asked of him and he transitioned his focus to the prize now before him.  He moved his right hand to start slowly massaging Lisa’s clitoris with his thumb while his left hand reached up to caress her abdominals.  Lisa let out an involuntary moan at the first direct stimulation she had received that evening as the pent up arousal that had coursed through her from the many hours leading up to this moment now instantly found a focal point on which to concentrate and build.  She closed her eyes and enjoyed the intense sensations that now flooded into her from the point between her legs, enjoying the enhanced effect that she now experienced as a result of the supplements she had been taking.  After an exquisite eternity, Daniel finally moved in with his mouth, gently playing with his tongue and periodically applying gentle suction with his lips.  Due to the anatomical enlargement, Lisa could actually feel the movement of her clitoris under the command of his oral and manual ministrations.  The experience was so different from what it was even a year ago, before she had begun the steroid regimen, where the sensations were so much more muddled and generic (and inconsistent) as Daniel would fumble about as he conducted the oral stimulation.  She couldn’t establish whether this was a result of the enlargement of her anatomy that created an ability for her to differentiate the sensations more distinctly, or if it was a result of the undoubtedly simplified task now demanded of Daniel as he attempted to locate the key areas and conjure appropriate methods of stimulation.  Whatever the reason, now Daniel was masterful and at this moment, in near ecstasy, she didn’t care how it came to be.

Lisa leaned backward and placed her weight on her right arm while her left hand played in Daniel’s hair, further offering herself to her husband’s mouth.  Daniel’s free hand continued to stoke over her abdominals and picked up intensity as he felt the tension of the new position tighten the muscles.  His fingers traced the separations of the muscles from top to bottom, over and over.  After a minute, Lisa lifted her torso’s weight to once again suspend herself and she reached behind her to take her husband’s still hard erection in her hand and she gently began to stroke it while he pleasured her.  She felt a deep satisfaction that Daniel maintained his own stimulation while he focused so exclusively on her enjoyment, as this seemed to speak to the mutual enjoyment in which they were both engaged tonight.

She pulled back from him and leaned closely to him, then whispered, “I want you inside me…now!”

Daniel was silent, but his enthusiasm was clear.  He slid himself further upward as she moved back to align themselves appropriately, then Lisa proceeded to guide him into her.  She thoroughly enjoyed the initial penetration both for the pure physical sensation and the emotional oneness that she always felt at that moment.  Her husband also seemed to enjoy the moment as his eyes closed and he emitted a guttural sound.  Lisa was careful to proceed slowly as she knew both of them were very close to orgasm, and as much as she hungered for the climax she intended to climb this mountain as slowly as possible to savor the final push to the end.  She rocked on Daniel’s hips while Daniel once again groped her arms to explore the sinews of her muscles as she writhed on top of him.  She reached over to the top of the bed and grabbed a pillow.

“Sit up a bit.”

Daniel responded by propping himself up and she slipped the pillow beneath his shoulders to elevate his torso slightly from the flat position he had been in to this point.  With Daniel in the new position, she sat up straight and proceeded to lift her arms into a double biceps pose, while continuing to slowly and rhythmically rock her hips.  Daniel’s eyes were glued to her, and in the now propped position he was able to reach upward and easily place one hand on each of her swelled biceps just as Lisa had intended.  She began to pump her biceps while he cupped them in his hands, and she watched him intently as he once again lost himself in the worship of her physicality.  She transitioned from the biceps pose to bring her arms downward and in front of her to perform a variation on a “most-muscular” pose (which she never practiced with Debi as it was not part of the female compulsories, yet she had done it countless times in the mirror to study the development of her pectorals, deltoids, and trapezius muscles).  Daniel’s eyes widened and he immediately moved to feel the tightness of her chest in this pose.  She closed her eyes and delighted in the feeling of his hands as they brushed her nipples while exploring her muscular contours. 

She was close now.  She repeated the most muscular pose for Daniel, as she could tell that it had also begun to push him very close to the edge.  She squeezed her muscles tighter, attempting to impress him even further with the power of her body in what she recognized would be the final moments of this encounter.  As she felt the inevitability of the orgasm event horizon begin to approach, she relaxed and lowered herself to completely savor the moment.  She succumbed to complete selfishness now and forgot about trying to do anything toward Daniel’s satisfaction, but she perceived that he was in an identical state and she allowed herself to center inwardly.  Her world became the rhythmic motion of her hips as she worked them to pull-in the orgasmic release, then it was there.  Waves of pleasure began to radiate through her of a magnitude she had never experienced.  The concentrated build-up from the hour of sex and muscle worship, the long burn created from the public display all night as she paraded her magnificence for Daniel while everyone else watched, and the simmering heat that had started from the mental preparations and planning of the days and weeks before this night all culminated in a height of sexual arousal that she had never before achieved.  She was now rewarded with an orgasm of unprecedented intensity.  It seemed to last for hours as wave after wave permeated her body, moving her to complete nirvana.  She had now stopped moving to completely lose herself in the euphoric feelings before they began to slowly subside within her, but she enjoyed the familiar onset of the gentle blanket of comfort, satisfaction, and love for her husband that always followed.  Just as the orgasm was of unprecedented strength, this envelopment of fulfillment also seemed thicker and more encompassing than usual.

She stayed on top of Daniel for many long moments, enjoying the oneness she felt as he was still inside her.  His eyes were closed and he wore a pleasant smile.  They were both covered in a light sheen of sweat that she found very pleasant and satisfying.  She leaned over and gave Daniel one more long, deep kiss, which he returned.  He placed his hand behind her head as she kissed him and held her there until they both had to release simply to take a breath.  She finally relinquished to the need to separate and she rocked forward to ease off of him, enjoying that sensation as well but immediately longing affectionately for that deep oneness with her husband that came from the physical union.  She pivoted over her husband and gently laid herself next to him, enjoying the shared silence for a few moments.

“Well, that was something special,” she said finally.

Daniel laughed softly, “That, what we just did, was something that I didn’t think could be that good.  I thought I knew what ‘good sex’ was before, but I realize now that I actually had no idea.  I know I’ve said this a thousand times tonight, but you are absolutely amazing.”

“What we just did is what happens when two people who are in love have no barriers between them.  We both were there for each other, meeting each other’s deepest desires simultaneously.  That was magical.”

Daniel nodded, but said nothing as he continued to stare at the ceiling.  Eventually, he broke the silence, “You know, I don’t need you to look like you do.  I love you completely.  As good as all of this was, I’d feel awful if you felt like you needed to possess this body just to make me happy.  I don’t know how to say that.  I love it, but I don’t need it.  I love you.”

“I know, I know.  You don’t have to say that.  I realize that what I’m doing here is not something that I can achieve forever.  I never knew I wanted to build my body like this, to be a bodybuilder, until a few years ago.  I suspect this is a lifestyle choice from this point, in some respect, for a long time, but what I’m doing now is pretty extreme.  Don’t get me wrong, I absolutely love myself like this, and the fact that you love it so much just makes it that much better.  Let’s just enjoy this while it lasts and enjoy what comes of it.”

“Agreed.”

[pelourinho]

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Out of curiosity, is Lisa a blonde? For some reason I was picturing her as a brunette. Not sure if I missed a description somewhere along the way.

[pelourinho]

Love this story!

The whole sequence where Lisa caught him watching the bb competitions late at night cut so close to the bone, and it's idiomatic to those old enough to remember what ESPN's programming used to include. The whole encounter at the gym with the parents is one of my favorite passages on this board. The night on the town stirs the imagination when you realize at some point or another, Lisa must see, and be seen by, coworkers and parents. Plus, just imagine being a student at that elementary school and seeing a former teacher years laterinto her physical progress, knowing what she looked like earlier in her teaching career.

At one point you apologized for the vignette style, but for these characters and their story arcs, it's just perfect. 

If there are future chapters, would she prepare for/enter a competition?

[anon1234]

K+

This is hands down the best story of this category I have ever read. It is very well written, and realistic.

I love the description of Lisa's muscles and worship. I really love the character Lisa, she is huge, yet humble. Most stories make the main character (muscle woman) to be a complete ***** and humiliate the male character, which I personally don't like that much. I am more into admiration and worshipping muscle goddesses like what Lisa has become.

This is one of the best stories in Saradas. Have you considered submitting this story to sites like interwebcomics (Musclefan comics)  or LHart?

I would am very eagerly waiting for more. 

[anon1234]

This is my favourite female muscle story of all time, among all other well written stories of this genre that are out there. It is extremely well written, and has excellent character development.

It would be a shame if you were to discontinue this story now, especially when it has gotten to this climax.

Can you please provide us with an update at least?

[Nixon74]

This is probably the most realistic female muscle story I have ever read.  Absolutely everything is very believable; how she gets involved, the reaction of ordinary people to her muscles, the slow progress, the roids and how bodybuilding affects the relationship.  I partically love that the more Lisa progresses, she also gets more and more into the whole sexy side of it. The prose is excellent, I just love the muscle descriptions. 

I find this story more than a little disconcerting even how close it comes to my own feelings about this fetish of ours. I often wonder what it would be like - like many others here I suspect - if my otherwise great girlfriend/wife found out I am into worshipping very muscular women.  Yet out of her own motivation she started seriously bodybuilding and succeeding. The slightly awkward reactions from Daniel towards his fantasy becoming real, are very much how I would react, I suspect. I think this story really touches the heart and soul of having this fetish and how it could be in real life.

I have only one mayor problem with this story: there is not enough of it! Please madsoam continue!

[madsoam2]

I don't blame folks for not believing me due to the exceptionally long delay between chapters, but I do fully intend to finish this.  I have a considerable amount of the next chapter done, but I've not had time to complete it so I can post.  I also know how the story will end, but have to map my way to it (I'd guess 2 to 3 more chapters to get there...the counting down of the chapter titles should make this pretty obvious, as I'm literally running out of time in the virtual story world).

[anon1234]

bump
Really hope we can see something soon... 

[009eli]

This story was recommended in a thread on 'realistic fem muscle stories' im only about a 1/2 the way through but my god this is truly one the best stories ive ever read. The detail. The realism. I also love that im coming to it after years of it having been worked on the entire thing seems so fully formed. A lot of karma to Madsoam. I think he is on hiatus or some thing but Im excited to read whatever he does when he comes out of retirement props also to whomever recommended this. Kudos

[taoschild]

I agree with Anon.  This is by far the best realistic female muscle growth story ever (and it has an amazing and nice protagonist).  I'm hoping the delay is because you've decided to publish it and have been setting aside time for it.  If so, I'm buying it and I bet I'm not the only one.  Please let us know if you are making this into a novella to be sold. 

[madsoam2]

I have indeed been on an extended hiatus...much longer than I anticipated.  It is simply a matter of not having the time to sit and write.  There is still a chapter on my computer that is about 3/4 done that I need to just commit myself to complete and post.  Believe it or not, there is a good opportunity for me to have time to get back to this in the next couple months, so I hope to take advantage of this time to resume the story and get perhaps two or more chapters done. 

I'm happy to hear that there is still interest in seeing this continue.

[QBikk]

I have indeed been on an extended hiatus...much longer than I anticipated.  It is simply a matter of not having the time to sit and write.  There is still a chapter on my computer that is about 3/4 done that I need to just commit myself to complete and post.  Believe it or not, there is a good opportunity for me to have time to get back to this in the next couple months, so I hope to take advantage of this time to resume the story and get perhaps two or more chapters done. 

I'm happy to hear that there is still interest in seeing this continue.

I guess you don't realize the anticipation around here....
But life before everything else. Have fun!!

[phil123]

As the stoty is that good, we all will wait.

[rmpsmith]

The next instalment to this is more anticipated than the next Avengers film