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Offline Ortanis

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1st STORY: A Miami Heater Part 1 [Ortanis]
« on: April 17, 2017, 07:53:13 am »
Please Note: This is my first story posted here, so please feel free to offer any constructive criticism

A Miami Heater
by Ortanis

part 1
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Aaron walked briskly through the already hazy and oppressive heat of a Miami summer as he purposefully made his way to the brand new aerospace contractor site, whose executives (very graciously) offered him a job fresh out of college at above median pay. This isn't for no reason, however. The young college graduate had one of the finest technologically oriented minds many of the seasoned engineers had ever seen, and likely would. Graduating at the top of his class at Columbia, and having a double major in aerospace engineering and materials science, one might assume that the bright young man would have had all of the pieces of his life set as pristine stepping stones before him. With wealth and power drawing to him a cadre of friends and women, all eager to have a taste of the blissfully lavish life the young man had made for himself, it would seem near impossible for one of Aaron's status to NOT lead a buzzing social life. This was not the case, however, for this young genius. The reality was that what Aaron had in mental astuteness, he completely lacked in the human companionship department. He was certainly an attractive man, at 6’1 with bronze skin telling of his time in the sunshine state, and clad in an expensive italian wool suit that many a man would have to make down payments on, he would appear to be the perfect eligible bachelor for any woman looking his way. The problem lay in his inherent shyness and overall drab personality, which sent quite a few interested women running from him. The man knew it too, and as he walked down the pier leading from his empty seaside condo to the transit station, he gazed longingly at the numerous athletic ladies sunbathing by the ocean. He longed to caress the copper abdominals of one college aged woman, seemingly that of a bronze statue of venus herself, each of her sectored 8 pack abs rippling and her obliques and serratus rising and falling like iron waves on her body as she daintily brushed the sand off of her neon green towel.
 Aaron knew he didn’t have time to waste fantasizing over women, but he figured he could spare a less ideal seat on the subway to do a spot of people watching. The fit young woman, who had settled very near to the pier offered a tantalizingly bold view of her lithe body. With amber hair bleached slightly by the sun wreathing a face that was almost childish, the woman spotted him very quickly, making note of his presence without raising attention. The woman playfully crossed and uncrossed legs that seemed to be hewn of iron cords rippling under her skin, shifting hypnotically from a smooth landscape of perfectly developed glutes, supple quads and hamstrings, to a vision of animalistic power that caused her thighs to course with power and her hamstrings to contract into near peaks on the rear of her legs below her buttocks, which twitched compulsively with desire as she stared hungrily at the young man with bright amber eyes. Aaron followed suit, holding a gaze that seemed to reciprocate the smoldering desire. She bit her bottom lip anxiously while her toned arms, though not ripped, still radiated the power one might expect from an elite gymnast.
The girls lean form moved forward from her spot in the sun up towards the spot where Aaron watched 10 feet up. She rose to her full height, making her a couple of inches shorter than the observer and quickly bounded up to the lattice of wooden beams and pillars supporting the boardwalk before effortlessly hauling herself up the structure with minimal effort. The smitten young man took note of the fact that she did this using her upper body and he couldn’t help but be amazed by the pure strength within the young woman’s muscles, which, thanks to the impromptu pump, took on a significantly more statuesque form giving her the appearance of an amazonian figure crafted of marble. The woman quickly hauled herself to eye level with the now excited yet nervous businessman, him standing on the pier overlooking the picturesque view of the water, and the attractive ingénue suspending herself using only her arms above the sand 10ft below. “Well, looks like you might need to loosen up a little bit,” she spoke with a voice that rolled mellifluously off of her tongue and carried over to the young man, who hungrily inhaled the combined aroma of the seabreeze, her hair (which smelled of strawberries, one might add), and the musky sweet smell of the light sheen of sweat coating her body, giving her already hardened and muscular physique-type body the appearance of living glass, each inch of her body, from her arms, which barely appeared to strain holding her up, to her striated and undulating pecs, that had a small rivulet of sweat running between the 2 inch cleft of pure muscle.
 “My name’s Amanda by the way. You should come on down here, and hang out. What’s taking one sick day out of work gonna do, right?” The beautiful girl had supermodel good looks with eyes that had taken on a near leonine look in her very obvious sexual hunger and she fidgeted with her ruby red and luscious lower lip, which contrasted greatly with the muscular trapezius muscles showing out behind her otherwise delicate appearance. “Let’s just get those stifling clothes off, that’s a hell of a thing to wear in mid june Miami heat” Now that she had mentioned it, the woolen suit did start to feel constricting, or maybe it was just his primal desire to unite with the hulking young woman, who appeared even larger up close, skin to skin, exploring each other’s frontier’s with ravenous hands massaging each developed muscle group.
The Amanda, reached to him to undo his shirt buttons, and in doing so vaulted with extreme quickness over the railing onto the pier, similar to the shows of strength many Olympian gold medalists perform on a  pommel horse. She didn’t wait for him to respond, they both knee that he was too dumb stricken at the current situation to show any intelligent thought. She drew her hardened arms, which had to be at least 15” in circumference, and tore apart the clasped shirt buttons like tissue paper, exposing his bare chest. “You don’t know how long, I’ve been waiting for someone like you to come around. All the other guys our age worry too much about their own ego to pay me any mind. Maybe they didn’t feel secure in their masculinity…” She accentuated the word with  a full body flex from head to toe that sent her quads protruding outward over her knees, her abs to full definition, and her arms to ripple with the rock solid power of her vascular biceps and triceps, and delts, each of which rippled from front to back like a tide of pure feminine power in each clearly visible muscle fiber. Then, she drew her body against his, and true ecstasy overtook them both, the bookish man, felt truly alive as his hands massaged her biceps which twitched and flexed as she held him tight, and offered no give whatsoever. They then traversed her enormous deltoids, which were already dripping with sweat, and indeed felt as thought he had caressed 2 living bowling balls of unfiltered feminine power. Amanda’s abdominals flexed insanely and convulsed in ways that offered Aaron’s body a feeling like heaven on earth, as she seemed to belly dance, pressing each pair of jacked abdominals against him then shifting side to side and bringing her developed obliques front and center , which formed a perfect V shape into her tiny waist and gigantic legs, which had graciously decided to carry the weight of them both, as the young man had become weak in the knees from the sheer pleasure.
His exploration continued, as his relatively small hands ran over the college girl’s massive back, with her lower back feeling as constant and rock hard as a limestone cliff, and her traps, and lats rippling and flexing like an ocean crashing against it. This was what Aaron had always dreamed of, and Amanda had no objections either of course. Still, in the middle of a pier at 8:47 am (The particular young man always kept time), he knew there was work to be done, and with nary a few words managed to pull himself away from the attractive young bodybuilder. As he bashfully attempted to hide his shredded shirt under his tailored suit jacket, he wondered if he truly made the right choice, and if he should continue focusing solely on career advancement, or partake in life’s more carnal pleasures at the expense of a perfect résumé. Though this wouldn’t be the last time the Ivy League player would be tested.

Just a quick idea I decided to throw out, please provide input!

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Offline Trinitus

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Re: A Miami Heater, part I
« Reply #1 on: April 17, 2017, 08:41:11 am »
First welcome to Saradas secondly, Great story! If this is your first story then you have a great talent for writing. As for critic; try to divide the story into paragrafs to make it easier to read. Also Aaron needs to get his prorities straight, if a ~6 feet tall amazon wants to fuck you so badly that she ripps your clothes off, then you just go with the flow and fullfill her every wish.

But as I said, great story and can't wait for the next part.

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Re: A Miami Heater, part I
« Reply #2 on: April 17, 2017, 09:05:46 am »
I enjoyed that a great deal, for a short story, that was very well described, you definitely gave out some very nice details of her physique, which sounds like an absolute dream to me, so that guy is very lucky to get a chance to get with. Criticisms, like Trinitus said, spacing between paragraphs will make it easier to read. It seemed like also that the action moved a little quickly, but maybe there's a reason for that we'll find out in the next part, which I am looking forward to. k+!
Don't forget to K+ if you enjoy my writing.

Great stories about strong and muscular women and girls, hope you enjoy!

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Re: A Miami Heater, part I
« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2017, 07:10:16 pm »
It's off to a great start, I habe the feeling he will come over quite a few times to see her again, before having the courage to ask her out! ;-)

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