+Notable Author: [jdm022] Stories~collected

[phil123]

simply one of the best stories ever. And we all hope for more.

Samantha ?? Jill should be the always a bit better than her. It ´s HER story.

[grimgram7]

Looks like Dave has some competition.  Hope he can keep up w a "real" girl... Jill can pick and choose the female she desires...

[tdg]

Cheating on her husband? Really?
First he gets RAPED by samantha, and now CHEATED on by his wife?
I'm disappointed.

[JerusalemTulip]

Still one of the greatest stories on here.  Everyone is busy I know, and you've already treated us to...who knows?...two hundred pages or more?  I'd still like to see where everyone ends up if you feel up to it.  I hope you haven't been too discouraged by critical feedback.  I don't personally care for pegging, but was glad to read your well argued response to that criticism.  The story turned a bit darker at points but it seems to me like you don't intend to keep it there.  Jill and Dave have both cheated on one another, but love would just be a sentimental word if it was never tested in some way, and I think you're doing so in a believable fashion.  I've lost track of time in this story.  How far along are we in story years since it began?  Anyone know?  I'd still love to see where Jill, Dave, and the rest all end up at the end.  Thanks for keeping it up and I hope you continue.

[tdg]

Still one of the greatest stories on here.  Everyone is busy I know, and you've already treated us to...who knows?...two hundred pages or more?  I'd still like to see where everyone ends up if you feel up to it.  I hope you haven't been too discouraged by critical feedback.  I don't personally care for pegging, but was glad to read your well argued response to that criticism.  The story turned a bit darker at points but it seems to me like you don't intend to keep it there.  Jill and Dave have both cheated on one another, but love would just be a sentimental word if it was never tested in some way, and I think you're doing so in a believable fashion.  I've lost track of time in this story.  How far along are we in story years since it began?  Anyone know?  I'd still love to see where Jill, Dave, and the rest all end up at the end.  Thanks for keeping it up and I hope you continue.

I wouldn't call RAPE cheating.

[JerusalemTulip]

Still one of the greatest stories on here.  Everyone is busy I know, and you've already treated us to...who knows?...two hundred pages or more?  I'd still like to see where everyone ends up if you feel up to it.  I hope you haven't been too discouraged by critical feedback.  I don't personally care for pegging, but was glad to read your well argued response to that criticism.  The story turned a bit darker at points but it seems to me like you don't intend to keep it there.  Jill and Dave have both cheated on one another, but love would just be a sentimental word if it was never tested in some way, and I think you're doing so in a believable fashion.  I've lost track of time in this story.  How far along are we in story years since it began?  Anyone know?  I'd still love to see where Jill, Dave, and the rest all end up at the end.  Thanks for keeping it up and I hope you continue.

I wouldn't call RAPE cheating.

Why do you assume that I refer to what happened between Dave and Samantha?  It has been a long time, but I seem to recall Dave sleeping with Lisa in Vegas. 

[jdm022]

Hi guys,

Fun to see there is still some interest in Dave and Jill.

Facts of the matter...I could simply say that Dave and Jill lived happily ever after...end of story.  However, I've had several requests to keep the story going past my initial planned ending.

Therefore, i have introduced some new twists that obviously start to bend the level of comfort ability for some people.

Of important note:

1) Jill was originally a lesbian or at least a little bi-sexual, so keeping in a monogamous and heterosexual relationship with Dave for a few years now has to be tough on her, especially now that she's so powerful that she can essentially do what she pleases.

2) Dave definitely cheated on Jill first, so lets not get too riled up about Jill having an intimate moment with someone else...

3) Dave fell in love with Jill because of her muscularity and in his mind her desire to be the Alpha in the relationship.  She has run with that and their bond with each other has grown as their roles have taken on that, Jill has a huge desire to take on the Alpha role while David longed to be the submissive partner.

 

 

[tdg]

"Dave definitely cheated on Jill first, so lets not get too riled up about Jill having an intimate moment with someone else..."
  Jill didn't know that. When Jill cheated it wasn't to "even things out" but she simply showed bad character.

[jdm022]

Exit Europe
It took all of Jill's emotional strength to call me and admit to me that she had a brief indiscretion with Anja. She was crying as she told me the whole story and was begging for my forgiveness. I had remembered back to my indiscretion with Lisa and I had no choice but to feverishly forgive Jill over and over again. It was an emotional call for both of us and I had always suspected that Jill's bi-sexual relations past might someday catch up with us. It's why I had tried so hard to be the man Jill needed for her sexual satisfaction, but to also have a feminine aspect about me that i knew she also longed for and needed. We ended the conversation well with many "I Love You's" and several "I can't wait to be in your arms again." But I was a little crushed. I had an ego like everyone else and I had to keep Jill from ever wanting to be with someone besides me ever again.
　
I had sacrificed a lot to be Jill's idea husband. I had lost almost all my muscle mass, had shaved every hair on my body, kept a nice golden tan, had grown my hair out long and kept a nice six pack abs for her viewing pleasure. How could I fulfill an even more feminine role for her. Physically, I just didn't know what more I could do. Losing more weight just wasn't an option and everything else about me seemed to be perfect for her.
　
I called Lisa and "cried on her shoulder" so to speak. Lisa was best friends with Jill and I knew that she might be able to help. Lisa knew of my wife's occasional bi-sexual desires and said that She had a crazy idea, but one that might eliminate Jill ever wanting to be with another person again and it was something Jill and Lisa had even spoken about over a bottle of wine, without my knowledge. I had to know what it was and begged Lisa to tell me. After several minutes of playing hard-to-get, Lisa finally relented. "OK Davey." she said, "But you have to do exactly as I say and not question my methods." I agreed and Lisa and I headed out. Jill's flight was due back at the airport later that afternoon and I indeed going to push the envelope on meeting Jill's obviously bi-sexual desires. Samantha had become ill the last week in Germany, so she couldn't complete all of the exit interview and strength tests for the scientist's, so she would be coming back a few days later. I was heading to the airport with Lisa to pick up Jill and we would then go over to Lisa's house for a bit of a welcome home party.
　
I knew Jill loved when I wore her old pink running shorts, so I had a pair of them on with my matching running shoes and a really tight old light blue t-shirt of hers with the really short sleeves that barely covered my thin shoulders. On the way to get Jill, we left early to make a critical stop. It would be possibly the most embarrassing thing I had ever done, but possibly the most rewarding as well. "Now listen." Lisa said, "This is going to be very hard for you to go through, so just let it flow, don't freak out, and if it doesn't work, you'll never have to do it again." I was immediately scared, but decided to trust Lisa anyway.

We pulled into the Mall and walked into Nordstrom’s. Once there, I was greeted by a very attractive woman in her early 30's. She seemed to have very good taste in clothes and make-up so Lisa told her what I needed. Her name was Sarah and she was excited to help. She immediately escorted me to women's wear and chose a light blue skort for me to try on. It was like lycra underwear with an outer skirt portion to it. It was made by Under Armour and I found it to be very comfortable. She then brought me a white tank top that fit fairly tightly but had a lot longer opening down the sides under the arm pit than I was used to. On the front it read "Fierce". Lastly, she handed me a matching light blue and white pair of UA running shoes. I was satisfied that Jill would like the more feminine look with the skort, and was confident and ready to go. , Lisa couldn't stop looking at me in a very sexual way. I said to her, "You don't find this attractive do you?" Lisa smiled and said, "I would rip that skirt off you and fuck your brains out on this floor if you weren't married!" Holy Shit, I thought, how could women find this feminizing look attractive? Lisa then handed me some blue shaded Ray Ban aviator glasses and stood back. "Holy Shit." she exclaimed, "Your HOT! Don't you think Sarah?" Sarah looked me up and down and just shook her head yes, with a very sexy gleam in her eye.
　
I thought we were about to leave, but Lisa said, "no Davey, we need to hit the make-up counter for a light brush stroke or two." Here I was, a man in a skirt thinking, i can't put on make-up, that's just too damn gay! I told Lisa as much and she said, "Hey, were going at this full speed Davey, Jill's either going to love it 100% or hate it 100% so sit your pretty little ass down at the counter and let this woman improve your look a little." Reluctantly, i took a seat and the woman behind the counter spoke with Lisa and Sarah as i closed my eyes and felt the brushes and pencils touch my face. I thought it was going to be a four or five minute job, but as the girls got more and more into it, they decided to see how "pretty" they could make me. I had no facial hair and a thin face, so apparently it was a good canvas. Almost 40 minutes later, the girls took a step back and all looked at me in amazement. "Oh my God!" Lisa said, "I think we did it." "Did what?" I asked. "ummm, made you look like a damn hot chick." Sarah demanded.

The girls finally agreed and turned a mirror towards me from 4 or 5 feet away. "Oh shit!" i exclaimed, from several feet away, I looked like a fucking chick. They had given my face a soft look, with a light colored lip color, slightly highlighted cheek bones, thin eyeliner and long dark eyelashes. It freaked me out and i demanded they wash it all off immediately. Lisa grabbed me forcefully and said, "Davey, i know this crap feels weird on you, but give it one chance with Jill. Worst case scenario, you'll never do it again...OK!" I slowly nodded OK and said goodbye to Sarah as we headed out of Nordstrom’s.
　
The Airport
　
We arrived at the airport and Lisa and I began to walk towards the baggage area. We heard several cat calls and whistles so I looked at Lisa and said, "Hey Lisa", "You're getting a lot of positive attention today! I guess there are some muscle lovers around here!" She laughed and said, "No Dummy, those whistles and cat calls are for your Hot Ass, those idiots have no idea you’re a dude." I was confused for a second, but then stoked as I realized that Jill might just like my new look."

We arrived at the baggage conveyer and waited patiently for Jill. As her flight gathered around to wait for their bags I anxiously awaited Jill's arrival as well. I was becoming increasingly nervous about my look and also uneasy about all the attention from dudes that Lisa and I were attracting. No less than three guys came up to hit on us, but Lisa was great at shooing them away so I didn't have to get involved. But many minutes passed without Jill showing up. People from her same flight gathered their bags and luggage and departed the airport. After 20 plus minutes, the last passenger from her flight got his bag and left. Lisa and I double checked all of our information and knew for sure that Jill should have been here by now.
　
Just then, I received a text from Jill to meet her at the security office. I was puzzled why I should have to meet her there, but immediately texted back that we were on our way. We soon arrived at the security office and were greeted by a tall, Hispanic, muscular officer. He was probably 6’0” tall and 210 pounds and I definitely wouldn’t mess with him.  He looked very puzzled and said, "Ahhhh which one of you is the husband of Jill Walker?" I immediately realized that he was utterly confused as he thought two women showed up. In my deepest voice, I answered, "I am." Officer Bill was still confused but I showed him my I.D. and let him know that my wife preferred that I look this way. He kind of laughed and said, "That would make sense." I didn't get it, but he then escorted me back into a hallway. Lisa was left in the waiting room at this point.  Once in the hallway, I was greeted by a short slightly overweight black woman.  She said, “Follow me.“  So Bill and I walked with her approximately 30 feet, past several doors and eventually the female officer and I walked into one, while Bill entered the room next to ours.

The room we walked into was darkened and there was a large tinted glass window between our room and the one next to it.  Before I could even look next door, the female officer said, “Is that your spouse?”  I quickly peered in and saw Officer Bill speaking to a huge man with short hair, wearing a backwards baseball cap.  The man was easily 3 or 4 inches taller than Bill, had ridiculous arms that made Bill’s look thin, had a neck as large as my thigh and he was obviously a huge professional bodybuilder.  He hadn’t turned to face us yet but I quickly realized that the female officer mistook me for a woman and got me mixed up with a woman looking for her massive bodybuilding husband.  Kind of embarrassed, I looked at the officer and said, “Sorry mam, I’m actually looking for my wife, Jill Walker. Not him.  You may have mistaken me for his wife.”  “Sorry, Mr. Walker,” the officer said, “but the person in the next room is claiming to be a Mrs. Jill Walker.”

I quickly turned to look at the bodybuilder in the next room.  Again, I was staring at a massive, muscular bodybuilder, wearing a huge white tank top that exposed mounds upon mounds of muscles protruding from the shoulders.  The lat muscles were like massive wings or slabs of muscle attached to the side of the torso and the traps were larger than a small country.  Still wondering what the female officer was talking about, I looked back at her.  She picked up a microphone and said thru the intercom to the next room, “Please face the mirror and remove your cap.”  The bodybuilder slowly removed the cap and long, beautiful brown hair came cascading down, covering the shoulders and half of the muscle bound back.  As the massive person slowly turned towards us, I peered into the gorgeous, loving eyes of my wife.  I stood in shock as I realized that this massive, 6’4” 250 pounds muscle-bound bodybuilder was Jill!  I stood there, jaw agape as I was realizing that Jill was now as massive as any professional bodybuilder could hope to be….male or female!

Her eyes were soft and loving and my heart raced with excitement as I ogled her now massive physique.  The hair laid beautifully over her herculean shoulders and her chest was made up of pounds and pounds of rock hard muscle.  I waved but quickly realized that she couldn’t see me.  I ran out and over to the next room and barged in.  As I moved swiftly towards my wife, she took a slight step back, and put out her arm to stop me.  Her huge arm contacted my chest and stopped me cold.  Jill had a puzzled look on her face so I said quickly, realizing that my appearance had changed, “It’s me, Davey!” Jill quickly realized it was me and covered her mouth in shock. “Oh my God!” she exclaimed.  I realized that my plan may have backfired massively and she might be appalled by my overly feminine appearance.   Not knowing what to do, I stood there motionless, praying for a response from her.  The seconds passed like hours and Jill said softly as a tear started to well up in her eye, “You’re perfect, honey…..perfect.”  She then reached out both of her massive arms, picked me up like a feather light doll and held me close, pressing me into her massive, rock hard physique.  My frail arms were trapped by my sides in her strong grip, and she began to kiss me warmly on the head, forehead and cheek.  After several more soft, wet kissed, Jill tilted me back slightly to face her; she peered into my eyes and asked, “You did this just for me?”  I nodded my head YES as I stared into her beautiful, wet eyes.  Jill then leaned in and we began to kiss passionately on the lips for a minute more.  Feeling as warm and as loved as I had ever been in my life, I knew I was with the woman who I would spend the rest of my days with.

[toro]

K+
you are a great writer and are very creative with your description of scenes. I have always loved the story till now, you lost me a little with Dave now going in  this direction, whats next sex change?

[GreatJustice]

I quite like the tension between male and female; I think it will be fun to see where they draw their lines and how they come to view themselves in private and out and about in public. It would be nice to see them run up against their prejudices and make decisions (either way) about internalising them or getting rid of them.

Lovely story as ever

[jdm022]

You're help needed.......

not sure where to take the story from here guys.  it's gone way past my original plans and to be honest...i lost my way a bit as i continued on.

put in some requests here, if plausible, i will continue the story a bit and try to wrap it up nicely.

Thank You!!! 

[JerusalemTulip]

I suspect most input you'll receive will correspond to reader's tastes, and its hard to say how helpful that will be.  My main interest in the story was that Jill is incredible, the other women are nearly as incredible, and the story is better written than most.  If the story beyond Vegas was some sort of extended fan service for all the interest expressed by readers, you can just give a snapshot of year 8 (there is a sort of reference to this in chapter 1) and what the situation is for every one with some suggestion perhaps of the direction that things will move?

It is your story, if you think that your reasons for continuing to write it have been satisfied, that's cool, you don't have to write more.   

[grimgram7]

I think Davey needs to really struggle with what he wants to be and what he is willing to do to please Jill, while Jill needs to face what she is willing to do to please herself.

Perhaps if davey returns to college or the "old neighborhood" he'll be reminded of how he used to be a "real man", and maybe get angry, etc meanwhile he will have to face his new reality as Jill shows him exactly how wrong he is.

[fmax]

It might be time to go to a (women only?) gym for the girls to show off their new bodies to Dave. Could also be an opportunity for Dave to pit his abilities against a few novice girls who want to become just like Jill.
Would be cool of Samantha returned and blew everyone out of the water.