You've developed some totally hot things that you rarely find in other stories. Take your time . You have a knack for bringing the facts to their head. I also love when Jennifer's boyfriend gets sweeter and puts on his apron. Perhaps the more 'feminine' behavior of the husband can be developed as Jennifer could continue to grow, eat, smell heavy sweat, grow hair and more. I don't know what manly element you haven't developed? If you are writing another feminox story, maybe you could think of a young, growing teenage girl as your hero. If not, can you give us a little preview of your next story please? Good luck and thank you very much.
